zindagi rocks-rn (ud on page 35)

hi guys i'm new to this forum. and this is my first attempt to write a fic so koi mistake ho to plzz bura mat mana or plzz mujhe comment karna.

story

we see a man surrounded by many people confused, scared and wanted to say something but bol nahin pa raha hai

one of the person -raj kuch to kaho itne confused si look kyon de rahe ho? kya hua ab batao ge bhi😕

raj-vo abhi vo bat ye hai ki ki

navin-what? dekho tum bohot pakka rahe ho hame or bhi kam hain jaldi bolo jo bolna hai

raj-bolraha hoon na meri yahan phat rahi hai pr tu hai ki chilae ja raha hai vo yaar pehele tum log mujhse promise karo tum mujhe maro ge nahin plzz..

shalini-vo hum baad me decide karenge pehele tum bat batao

raj-vo baat ye hai ki(vo deep breath karke bolta hai) I AM MARRIED

every body together- what?

abhi tum jante bhi ho tum kya kehe rahe ho

suriji-ki kareya hai puttar pagal to nahin ho gaya

raj- nahin mai pagal nahin hoon vo yahi sach hai

meri shaadi 2 saal pehele hi ho gai thi jab me naya naya officer ban ke ghar gaya tha na

abhi-2 saal pehele or tum hame ab bata rahe ho

shalini - or agar tumhari shadi ho gayi hai to tumhari biwi kahan hai>?

raj-vo aj hi kma aa rahi hai

suriji- kya? raj puttar tune aj mujhe paraya bana diya tenu ai vi nahi laga ki apne suriji nu apni shadi ke bare me das de

raj-suriji i am sorry plz mujhe maaf kar dejieme ap sab logon ko puri sachai batao ga but abhi mujhe naina ko lene jana hai

abhi-oh to naina naam hai hamari bhabhi ji ka

raj-abhi plz naina k samne use bhabhi mat bulaeo varna vo mujhe chore gi nahin

abhi-thik hai thikhai nahin bolunga vaise vo ane kab vali hain

raj- uski flight bas 12 bahe karegi

shalani- so ge going it's already 11:30 jao

(raj jaldi se vahan se bhagta hai airport jane ke lie)

raste me raj ko ek lower shop milti hai vo vahan se naina ke lie flowers lita hai )

reaches airport

raj airport ke bahar khara hai or arrival gate ki taraf dekh raha hai vo thora nervous hai thora happy thora exited

usko nahan se ek ladki ati dekhti hai in tis kind of saree😍

he was just looking at her and was admiring her beuty

guys plzz.. comment karana agar acha na lage to bhi

a great storyline
update long asap

awesome too god update more plzzzzzzzz asap.

Originally posted by: rituka7

a great storyline
update long asap

thanx for replying and liking my fic's storyline and i will update d next part tonight

Originally posted by: sweta2005

awesome too god update more plzzzzzzzz asap.

thanx for replying and liking my fic and i will give d next update tonight

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

Accha haan bahut jyada accha hai.
To is baar Naina Naveen ki sis nahi bani hai.
Married hain Mr.Rajveer already .
Par Raj ne Abhi se y kyoun kaha ki Naina ko bhabhi na bole.
G8 start update soon.

thanx for d reply and for liking my fic or raj ne abhi ko naina ko bhabhi bulane ke lie islie mana kiya kyonki naina ko pasand nahin ki raj se frends use bhabhi bulae.it made her feel that she is very old

too good and very interesting storyline 😊
plz update soon asap long part plzzzzzzzz............. 😉

Originally posted by: *Rajeevian*

nice ud 👏.cont soon........

thanx dear i'm just writing d part it will be updated very soon

Originally posted by: prerna1

too good and very interesting storyline 😊
plz update soon asap long part plzzzzzzzz............. 😉

thanx dear

i'll try to make it long