FF: Bringin’ SexyBack *pt 18: Jaane Bhi D

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Nisha

@desaigirl101

Voyager

Posted: 17 years ago

#211

really really really really really brilliant!

it was just perfect but seriously yaar make it extra longer.....

other than that it was awesome

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Karishma

@simplyinluv

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#212

kya karoon nisha? jab perfect cut-off point aata hai, toh kaatna padtha hai

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Jas

@Jaslove

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+ 3

Posted: 17 years ago

#213

Originally posted by: simplyinluv
pt 14 is missing. when I find it, I will post it here.

yaar I finally catch up to the fanfic to find part 14 missing....pls post it soon I really want to know what ranbir said to kanya...which ticked her off😡

part 17 was 👏 nice line u wrote there touchy😳

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maham

@...Maham...

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 17 years ago

#214

awesome update.... i just started reading ur FF n its awesome!

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unpredictable91

@unpredictable91

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#215

loved iy

but it was so short😔

but i agree wid riit di that line was just too good

continue ASAP

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Karishma

@simplyinluv

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#216

Originally posted by: Jaslove

yaar I finally catch up to the fanfic to find part 14 missing....pls post it soon I really want to know what ranbir said to kanya...which ticked her off😡

part 17 was 👏 nice line u wrote there touchy😳

Oh, I forgot about that! I'll check back and see if I can find it.

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sweet cherry

@sweet cherry

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#217

THANKS BUT WEN R U UPDATE THE NXT PART

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Karishma

@simplyinluv

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#218

i updated yesterday, i'll update soon

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Sandeep

@Multani90

Dazzler

Posted: 17 years ago

#219

Awesome! brillant! magificent, amazing, mindblowing! I love it!👏😳😍

I don't know where to start it was so good! Yaar, tumhari details, or style of writing is just over the top. There were so many emotions just flowing through. Ranbir confusion, his mixed feelings, the silence, the pain. I absolutely loved when he could not understand what she was saying because he is numb after realizing that the tear on Kanya's cheek was because of him. Kanya's anxiety, the love,the sadness, the questions, the anger, the overall passion! I have to say she was the ultimate star of this update! It was amazing! I could just close my eyes and imagine it, that hows beautifully you wrote it! whoa! you surely know how to captivate your readers. Omg...so beautiful "with a single tear drifting down her cheek".

Haila, it was so good!!!! I don't know what is my favorite part! I loved everything. I loved the way, Kanya went through what she was feeling during her first night, and how she feels them now!!! wow, Krish you are just amazing!!!! And when she said " Meri zindagi ussi point pe atak gayi hai, Ranbir. Main abhi bhi us bed pe, dulhan ke jodhe mein behti hoon."

I can go on and on seriously! this was amazing, its a bit overwhelming!!!!

Please continue soon! I am waiting!

Edited by Multani90 - 17 years ago

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Jas

@Jaslove

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 17 years ago

#220

Originally posted by: simplyinluv

Oh, I forgot about that! I'll check back and see if I can find it.

thanks yaar for posting the missing part 14...ranbir really did use her I mean poor kanya....not to be mean but guys like that really annoy me, feel like riping their heads off😡 afterall this is a fanfic...lolz so chalta hai👏.....