FF: Bringin’ SexyBack *pt 18: Jaane Bhi D - Page 21

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Posted: 17 years ago

Sorry for the delay, I am in India for the week, and I am coming back wednesday night!😃

Awesome update! 👏I really love the way you add a different flavor everytime you update, your concepts are awesome! I love it! I love the whole whisper in the ear convo they were having! oOo then Kanya's angry glare! Oh my favorite part when he Ranbir pulls her in tight ☺️! I wish I was in her place! 😍 And I absolutely love the part where he suddenly lets her go, and she's staggering!😆 Wow, her glare, and his sexy smirk! Hai, mein marjawan!😳 Uff, Krish yaar you the best! love the way you have the hate guru alive for us in your writing! Oh, god bad boy sexy!☺️
And also I want to add, I loved the way you incorporated Big D's bindaas estyle! and Pooja's reporting galore!
What you waiting for Krish, put the next update up! I am getting anxious!!!😃😳 I can't wait to see what happens next!!! hurry!😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
I loved the last part- plz update soon!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago

Recap: As cameras flashed, Kanya put her small hand on Ranbir's large shoulder and smiled at the cameras.

"I hate you." She said, through her smiling teeth.

"Same here, babe." Ranbir growled back.

Part 17: Intezaar

~*RanKan Bedroom*~

Kanya comes out of the bathroom drying her hair with a towel. Ranbir, who is working on his laptop, turns around and sees Kanya, with her back turned to him, rifling through the closet. He gets up and quietly goes up behind her.

He gets close enough that he is right behind her and he can smell her fresh, fragrant hair.

R: So,

Kanya jumps in surprise, but doesn't turn around.

R: Miss I-love-you-I-hate-you,

Ranbir can feel Kanya's anxiety in her heavy breaths. She turns around slowly to face Ranbir.

R: So which is it? Kabhi bolti ho, I love you, kabhi I hate you. Badi confused lagti ho.

Kanya blushed and avoided his gaze.

R: Oh, toh tumhe abhi sharam aa rahi hai? Tab toh tum bahut himmat dikha rahi thi. Kya hua? ( he leaned even closer to her) Akele mein aisi badi badi baat kehne se darti ho?

Kanya looked up at him angrily.

K: (quietly) Shut up.

Ranbir tilted his head to the side and adopted a mockingly confused expression.

R: Kyun? Main tumhari tarah gussa nahi kar sakta? Bura bhala bolne ka haq sirf tumhe hai kya? Hamesha bahut chillati ho, yaar. Suhaag raat mein, party mein, press conference mein...

K: Ranbir, main tumhe aakhri baar bol rahi hoon.

R: Oh! Toh tum mujhe aakhri baar bol rahi ho? Oh I'm scared! Ab main kya karunga? Arre tumse shaadi kar ke –

K: BAS!

Ranbir stopped mid-sentence. He realized he had gone too far. He flinched, waiting for the explosion, closing his eyes...

He opened them again, to see Kanya standing there, not in an angry fit, but...with a single tear drifting down her cheek.

K: Javab chahte ho? Bolo Ranbir. Tumhe javab chahiye?

R: Kanya, I –

K: Main tumse pyaar karti hoon. Bahut zyaada pyaar. Haan Ranbir, I love you.

Ranbir sat in silence, staring at Kanya, numb with pain, realizing that he had made her cry.

K: Aur mujhe laga ke tum bhi mujhse pyaar karte the. Us raat, jab main issi bed pe beht kar tumhara besabri se intezaar kar rahi thi, main pal pal ginti thi, jab tum aake mujhe apna bana loge....Kaash woh lamha aata. Jab tum aa kar mujhe woh teen shabd batate jo main sunne ko taras rahi thi. Us raat, mera sabse atoot vishwas tut gaya.

Ranbir was silent. He had barely even heard what Kanya was saying. All he knew was that there was a tear on Kanya's cheek and he had caused it.

K: Meri zindagi ussi point pe atak gayi hai, Ranbir. Main abhi bhi us bed pe, dulhan ke jodhe mein behti hoon.

He looked into her eyes and saw the sadness.

K: Main abhi bhi tumhare intezaar mein behti hoon, Ranbir. Aa ke mujhe apna bana lo.

With that, Kanya walked out of the room, leaving Ranbir alone sitting on a bed with two pillows.

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Posted: 17 years ago
That was awesome and plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz make it longer continue soon...i got so interesting that it ended so quick. so plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon and make it longer
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Posted: 17 years ago
that was brill pls continue soon
i loved it
very interesting
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Posted: 17 years ago
Thanks for updating.😃 Please continue soon.
Shreya
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Posted: 17 years ago
awesom part
but it was short
continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
that was brill! continue soon! excellente!
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Posted: 17 years ago
Karishma dear,this line
"Ranbir was silent. He had barely even heard what Kanya was saying. All he knew was that there was a tear on Kanya's cheek and he had caused it."

This is the loveliest line I have read ever.
What are you--Karishma-u are really.

Brilliant girl
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Posted: 17 years ago
krish brilliant ..i loved the whole scene each and everyword it was beautiful..
actually felt for kanya!!**you go girl**
ha! im desperate for the next part! please if possible i want it longer:P!!!
ranbir is so mean..
i loved it when kanya said she is still dressed as a bride on the bed waiting for him sooo sweet !!
please continue soooon!!!

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