FF: Bringin’ SexyBack *pt 18: Jaane Bhi D - Page 17

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Posted: 17 years ago
great update
why soo short?
plzz continue soon!
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Posted: 17 years ago
thanx guys! it was short cuz i thought that was a good cliffhanger ending. srry. but why no more ppl comment??😭
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Posted: 17 years ago

Arre, meri Krish! this was awesome!!! Brillant!!! Awww..you have Ranbir's bad boy sexy character down to perfection for me!!! Wish they would bring bad boy sexy back in KIT, this always being sweet Ranbir isn't particulary working for me!!! Its like a overdose of sweets! ok so going back to the update, omg....I just loved the Ranbir folding his arms, and leaning very causally against the wall, and then when he bent down and wrapped his arm around her waist! oh, was that hot or what! And and the scene was so good, bodies so close together, I wish I was the one top of his chest!😳 Hai so sexy!

Perfect timing Aayan, awesome time to spoil the fun😡😆! But that was fab, to built up the akwardness.

And the last part hai marjawa!!! I love bad boy sexy, and his sexy smile!!! Love the naughtiness!
Please continue soon! I will be waiting!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
it was awesome
plz plz comtinue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: simplyinluv

This is the 200th post!🥳🤪


congtars cute writer.
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Posted: 17 years ago

Hey guys! Please please more people comment! Mujhe aisa lag raha hai ki koi mera FF padte hi nahi hai!

He looked over at Kanya, but she pointedly looked away. Kanya stalked off to take a shower. She glared as she walked off, thinking about Ranbir and how confusing he was being. But behind her, Ranbir smiled. Why? Because Kanya, in her anger had forgotten to take clothes into the bathroom with her...

Part 13: Love-Hate

As the cool water flowed down and touched Kanya's skin, it made her shiver, just like Ranbir's touch. She was so confused. Ranbir refused to recognize their relationship as husband and wife, yet, in the last couple days, the circumstances suggested otherwise. More troubled than she was when she came in, Kanya turned off the shower and stepped out. She wrapped a towel around herself and reached for the... oh no, she forgot her clothes.

K: (thinking) Oh god, ab kya karoon? Ranbir se puchhoon? Nahi! Main us stupid saand se koi madat nahi chahiye...

K: Ranbir?

R: Haan?

K: Mujhe zara kapde de doge please?

Outside the bathroom, Ranbir grinned.

R: Kyun? Main tumhara naukar hoon kya?

K: Please Ranbir, aise zid mat karo...

Ranbir was delighted. For the first time after a long time, Kanya sounded so helpless, calling him for help. He was going to have fun with this. After such a long time he was hearing her speak to him sweetly. He sauntered to a chair and flopped down casually.

R: Listen you 2 by 2. Main tumhara naukar nahi hoon aur mujhe tumhare liye kuch bhi karna zaroori nahi hai. Jo bhi kaam hai, tumhe khud karna padega.

Kanya bit back a retort and said, "Please Ranbir, samjha karo na. Main bahar kaise aaoon?"

R: Chal ke.

Kanya lost it. She angrily stomped out of the bathroom in the towel and walked up to a very surprised Ranbir.

K: Listen you saand! Tum zyaada bhaav mat kha! Yeh mat bhulo ki mere bina, tum abhi bhi us sunsaan raaste par bhatak rahe hote!

Ranbir stood up.

R: Hello? Shayad tum bhool rahi ho ki woh tum thi jo mere chune hue raaste par chalne se inkaar kiya! TUMHARI wajeh se hum wahaan pe phas gaye the! Aur uska baad bhi shayad main jaldi pahunchtha! Agar tumhe bachaane ke liye nahi rukna padtha toh!

K: Tumhe kisne kaha mujhe bachaane ko?! Main apne aap ko sambhal sakti!

R: Oh I'm sorry! Tum toh SuperKanya ho na?! Kisi ki madat ki zarurat nahi! Nahi party pe, nahi gunde se bachaane mein aur nahi khidke se chhadne ko! Toh abhi meri madat kyun chahiye kapde laane mein?!

K: At least main apne aap ko dhoka toh nahi deti hoon!

R: What does that mean?!

K: Tum banne rehna 'hate guru'! Kisi ki feelings ki qadar nahi hai tumhe, hai na?!

R: Shut up you chipkali! You don't know what you're talking about!

K: Hate guru hi banna tha toh mujhse pyaar karne ki natak kyun kiya?!

R: Woh natak nahi tha!

K: Liar!!!

Ranbir grabbed her around the waist and kissed her ferociously. Taken aback, Kanya lost all train of thought and obeyed her instinct. She slid her arms up his chest and around his neck. Ranbir's other hand found it's way around her waist as well. They kissed passionately. Ranbir was slowly backing her up against the wall. As she hit the back of the wall, they broke apart.

K: I hate you!!!

R: I hate you more!!!

He dove back to her lips, hungrily exploring her mouth. She closed her eyes, enjoying the 'hate' that they shared. As Ranbir's lips traveled from her lips to her neck, the towel slid down and hit the floor.

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Posted: 17 years ago

me first

wow i luved their fight
continue soon krish
Edited by unpredictable91 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
krishhhhhhhhhhh!!!
yaar bohod gussa hoon tujse just wen i was getting to the hot mood yaar tunne katam kardi!!
mindblowing part i luv ur ff...!
plz plz continue sooon!
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Posted: 17 years ago
1st thanks for pm me for the update secondly love love love love love love love love love love love love it
plz continue soooooooooooooooooooooooooon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
Ok, first of all I want to say Krish that whoever is not reading your ff, is missing out a lot!!!! Because you are brillant!!! And people who are silent, please stop being silent!!!!! God, people comment!!!
Krish!!!!!!!!!! omg.....this was just I don't have any words, I read this part 7 times already!!!! 7 times!!!! Yaar, your are amazing, wow the hate, naughtiness, angry, love, passion, the hidden emotions, the contrained emotions, the confusion, that hate that makes the love even stronger!!!! Omg...yaar tumhari writing ki main bahut badi fan ho!!!!
This was such a treat for us!!!! It was perfect, uff, and that last part, oh I would kill Kanya to be in her place!!! That kiss, oh baba, whoa!!!! the force, the passion!!!!!! Bad boy sexy-- you character is the most amazing character. Sachi Krish, I love this ff so much!!! You made my day!!!!!!!!
Please cont. soon. I will be waiting!!!
Edited by Multani90 - 17 years ago

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