FF:Back to Newton's Laws-2...part 32 - Page 105

hey plz yaar! next part post karo na! i am so dying to read it!
😛

Originally posted by: ami_princess

hey plz yaar! next part post karo na! i am so dying to read it!
😛

hey hun it would be a wile before i do that....friday nite n um still in the lab...n my frends already calling with nite plans n then the packing.....aaarrrrggghhh

Originally posted by: spln

oki me already done with half of next part...wont mention wat...but some things u mentioned here i luckily covered in the next...i just write so much in one part its hard to fit too many scenes....

next ridz insecurity...oki my POV was that when she was in india she felt that way coz of him as a celebrity like he cud never be serious...n just had his way with girls n all....but that was still her domain her zone...in standford...she suddenly feels insecure not abt him as much but abt herself...she feels overshadowed....n i tried putting it there but perhaps wasnt clear enough...he proved he loved her at agra...but she thinks he fell for her as an attraction at that time n didnt know the hard parts of her...which is quite true its hard to know all good n bad in less than a month...so she just feeling that knowing her better now, n having options like sandra why wud he not just leave her n walk away...not justifying her lack of faith in the least...thats the whole point she insecure n shudnt be...but they have to overcome it!!!plus....hes being too perfect for noe...course no one is perfect so we are still to see him!!!!

thanx a ton for ur opinions missy i appreciate u letting me know...n i wrote all this as it appeared to me...if any of this hits a point il be glad...if it doesnt...hopefully the upcoming track will be some solace!!!hehe...

the update though will take sometime...caught up in the lab for now....


n tantrums n all...well i dint wana defy her character from the sinus scene...u know how she was fussy abt the kada....well i...lets say that part of her is like me...i hit the bed too often n i can really be a pain....so i got it that way....

ps: basically i think um putting too much thot to make it realistic....n it just seems that a couple like them...so unbalanced wud have to go thru certain things straightening out before they actually got together if they did....u know wat i mean????initially i was gona wrap up the fic in india...but it was just this point...i mean it was unrealistic for them to just get together like that n everyone to just say yes n then all to work out for the good...or so i thot....do i make sense????

hmmmmmmmm!!watever u said...almost all went in2 my tiny head..bt i guess yur nxt part wud erase all standin doubtz...
yehh i was thinkin abt dt tht too...y is he bein sooooo overly nice n all..he mzt hve sum bad side!!

no moreover..i really do gt wat u said abt ridz insecurity..i only had an issue abt her nt sharin it wit ammy..thtz d vry 1st reason y marriagez fail..n tey r nt even together get!!
i think ter togetherness gt d better of me...n i dnt wanna c it go dwn d drain!!:D

well!!its still much interestin..n i wud hve sent u spam mail if ud mde an end 2 it!!lol ..totally agree on tht 1...d idea of tem "lived happily after" fairy tale story is 2 much 2 handle!we live in harsh world..tey cnt hide frm d worries n loss tht we all suffer in real life!!cnt even imagine!

k!rite up d other half after ur dne wit yur lab wrk..bt mind u ..tis is equally imp...dnt let it slip yur mind..huh!!

HEY....U R AWESOME...PLZZZZ CONTINUE SOON...!
plzzz do
__________
AR FOREVER!
KaSH 4EVER!
MISSING KaSH CHEMISTRY!

Originally posted by: spln

well i meant miserable like a make u cry part....personally i dont like them n this one took me forever n i wud have liked to handled it happier but cudnt come up with any idea to do so....so here we are...but the final draft...i was kinda satisfied with so....newaz next part happier...asap of course

yeah da senti bit was dere but it was really needed at dis point in da story !!! neways wen u updating da next part ???

Originally posted by: missing Vmars

yeah da senti bit was dere but it was really needed at dis point in da story !!! neways wen u updating da next part ???

pata ni yaar..me screwed....i start packing but all um thinking is the next update stuff...n so within minutes um back at the system....n then all i think is that i shud be packing...can stick to one thing n we have to move out tom ...one the guys in our house...my best buddy has already popped in like 5 times to remind me its tom we are moving not next month...n that i shud pack....dont ask me whats going on...cant concentrate coz i just cant decide what i want in the next update...in the 2nd half of it i mean...um half done....perhaps by late evening today...its still morning here....

really a nice one NJ i love ur ff sorry for late comment really its very sweet one please update it soon and thanks for the pm

"we Cannot Be Together,
but We'll Never Be Apart,
for No Matter What Life Brings Us,
you?re Always In My Heart."

"Life Is Short But It's Very Difficult To Spend Alone,
We Need Someone With Whom We Can Share Our Feelings,
And That's Why We Make Friends,
I'm Thankful To God Becoz He Has Give Me A Friend Like U."

"Mahak Se Mohabbat Ki Kam Nahi Hoti,
Mohabbat Se Zindagi Kam Nahi Hoti,
Sath Zindagi Mein Ho Agar Pyaar,
To Zindagi Zannat Se Kaam Nahi Hoti."

Originally posted by: spln

pata ni yaar..me screwed....i start packing but all um thinking is the next update stuff...n so within minutes um back at the system....n then all i think is that i shud be packing...can stick to one thing n we have to move out tom ...one the guys in our house...my best buddy has already popped in like 5 times to remind me its tom we are moving not next month...n that i shud pack....dont ask me whats going on...cant concentrate coz i just cant decide what i want in the next update...in the 2nd half of it i mean...um half done....perhaps by late evening today...its still morning here....

it happens ya but dont get soo stressed out ... my advice 2 u ... get done wit ur packing first ..... after its over u will b more relaxed n wont have 2 worry abt moving out tomorrow .... v all can wait for da update !!!! i suck at packing .... usually my mom or my friends have 2 pack for me so all my sympathies r wit u !! neways take care n dont worry 2 much abt da update

Hey NJ,

Yet another brilliant part..ridz- ammy convo tatally rocked..they did a heart to heart talk..and i dont think its satisfactory..its just perfect..loved the bit where ammy says that everything abt was right and is perfec and that they together are best..too good

Cheers

hey NJ, hows your packing going?? dont worry about the update - u know we readers dont mind, as and when you are able to do it

hope your not stressing yourself out too much, just do one thing 1st (in this case your packing lol) then the other.

Sania 😳