FF:Back to Newton's Laws-2...part 32 - Page 103

Originally posted by: mahi4u

hey

awwwwwwwwwwwww............

dat was indeed a BEAUTIFULL prt not miserable 😉 😉 😉

rellllllyyyyyyyyyyy sweeeeeeeeeeeetttttttttttt 😳

cont super sooooooooonnnnnnnnnnn
luv ya n tak care
mahru

thnx mahru!!!!

Im lost of words NJ...u make me speechless after every single part of urs....hw do u do this everytime...?? hw is it possible for u to...make each one of u ask this Q everytime to u....that hw do u actually do it??....OMG ure just super brilliant....i loved every single part of urs....the whole acident scenario...was just so perfectly written...i loved the scene....whr ammy sudeenly realises shashank's words...n goes to her....a heart to heart connection i call it....n then all ths care takin bussiness....um lovin it...totally....n finally aftre many hesitations ridzi finally spoke up...n ammy....his expressions...can totally imagine each of them described in this perfect way by you....

n the best thing i love in ure fic is he calin her princes...makes me feel soooo gooood.. 😳 great going cont soon 👏

Originally posted by: jia..

😲 U want u to be the lead in my ff??? first replace Ridz in ur ff with me......have been asking u since ages to do that. 😆 Promise no Sandra-Pandra can make me feel insecure!!! 😆 😆 😆


but u have to get insecure hun or how will i manage a twist in the goody goody all out for armaan with blind faith jia???!!!!btw....leme think abt it!!!


Ok cutting out the lame joke.....the part!!! 😍 its was the most adorable masterpiece yet again i ever read!!!

I seriously dunno wat to quote and wat not as each line is perfect
and brilliant!!! Be it the way he cared for her in the hospital or back
home.....perfect. Wen will u make me mrs Benz NSM???? 😆 😆 😆


haha....i wish i cud be her....dint i mention how jealous i get of her character....sometimes its like i want her to do bad things so ppl dont like her....but alas....the writer in me objects hard to come by ur conscious!!!


<span>"when i
saw mum in the ICU...it was like....n today, i felt that same despair n
helplessness.....i'v been into sports long enough to know how simple
injuries can prove fatal...n u scared me so bad tonight....u have no
clue what i went through the past couple of hours thinking of why i let
u go to the lab....what if i had not reached in time....n had i really
reached in time????.....n all ur thinking about is ur work????is that
all that matters???" ridhima looked at him through the tears which
filled her eyes again....then she lowered her eyes...she was only
trying to evade the obvious question...in fact...that was the reason
she had gone to the lab that night...was she escaping an issue at hand
which had to be dealt with???she sighed....then looking back at him she
said "um sorry....i did not mean it that way armaan....n....the cut was
an absolute accident....n...ur right....it would....i mean if u had not
come.."
</span><br>
again some brilliant lines penned down effortlessly
andbeautifully!! Such a beautiful description is just too hard to
praise for the lack of words.
👏
<span> "smiling at her softly he said "dont worry um a hard nut to crack....i think i can safely handle ur tantrums!!!"
</span>
aww another sweet one??? How do u manage this??

"<span>she had been reading books, he was surprised to see how fast she was, for she had already finished 3 bestsellers...."


</span>Hmm made her of our clan have we??? 😉


hehe yeh couldnt help getting that line in...um an injury queen....n books are my only respite for those long injured weeks or even months....aint a bone in my bpdy that hasnt cracked once....gues um going to be in a mess once i turn 40 n all my pranks come haunting me back as joint pains lolzzzz


"<span>she
usually was the last person to feel such trivial insecurities...but
this wasnt just about looks...it was about armaan...and she couldnt
think of life without him anymore....what if....does he still love me
the same way????even when i look like a mess, even when i throw all
those tantrums...even when all um doing is being a liability on
him....was he ashamed when his friends came in n saw her in such a
sorry state....is all of this his love for me???or just pity???and
realizing that he had been hugging her for a couple of minutes now, she
pulled back with a sudden jerk, which caused another throbbing shot of
pain in her wrist...and she broke into helpless sobs....feeling
miserable, about being an unwanted responsibility, and perhaps not the
girl he had expected she would be....armaan was now alarmed....he could
just not understand what had come over her all of a sudden to lead to
this outburst....something told him it had nothing to do with neither
the physical pain nor his refusal to her sudden demand..."</span>

Ok that was so far the VERY best!!! i mean i dunno wat i loved so
much abt this but seriously the way u hav described her thoughts!!! A
HUGE round of applause i must stress 👏

Ok next the way he comfortingly held was again superfantubously penned. AND........its like from the line she asked him "<span>why do u love me?</span>" i feel like quoting it all here and giving u a standing ovationwhich also will seem less for you for it!!

Seriously am blown away by your part!!

"<span>everything
about it IS perfect i mean.....u say ur not the best???alright lets
have it ur way then...u may not be the best n neither am i...but we are
best together n thats all that matters to me.</span>.."

woahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh can this get any better NSM?? Seriously
buttercups u seem to be using all ur special powers to permanently cast
a spell on me!!!

its like u write from the most simplest of the emotions to the most
complex ones with such ease that ur part just looks like a one by a
genius!! Ur one no doubt.

will be waiting for u to use ur powers again!!
😳
Jia

thnx hun....this part did come hard....coz i didnt want it to sound melodramatic n things were just not sounding right for ages....but i have to admit i was kinda satisfied with the final draft so here it is before u all!!!will try to post asap....by the way now that um buttercups i need to find u a name....hopefully before the next part il have thot of one!!!(any preference???....george perhaps!!!)

Originally posted by: komalsirwani

Im lost of words NJ...u make me speechless after every single part of urs....hw do u do this everytime...?? hw is it possible for u to...make each one of u ask this Q everytime to u....that hw do u actually do it??....OMG ure just super brilliant....i loved every single part of urs....the whole acident scenario...was just so perfectly written...i loved the scene....whr ammy sudeenly realises shashank's words...n goes to her....a heart to heart connection i call it....n then all ths care takin bussiness....um lovin it...totally....n finally aftre many hesitations ridzi finally spoke up...n ammy....his expressions...can totally imagine each of them described in this perfect way by you....

n the best thing i love in ure fic is he calin her princes...makes me feel soooo gooood.. 😳 great going cont soon 👏

thnx dear...princess...hehe...yeh i kinda like that too!!!

i've begun to grow so fond of this story...with every part, i find myself falling in love with the characters, n the way u jot it all down..nothing else to say..m speechless!
continue soon..
a die hard fan of urs..
anu. 😊

Originally posted by: lookwhoshere

i've begun to grow so fond of this story...with every part, i find myself falling in love with the characters, n the way u jot it all down..nothing else to say..m speechless!
continue soon..
a die hard fan of urs..
anu. 😊

thnx a bunch anu...ur lovely comments make it worth the while!!!!!!!

i think the tagline from ddlj would fit so perfectly with ur ff.. come fall in love..
everytime i read a part, i find something new to love.. something that was ridiculously adorable!
i loved this part so much!! the melodramaticness had such a perfect effect on the tone of the ff..! i almost teared up while reading it.. because it seemed so realistic! i'm completely running short of words to describe how incredible the part was..!
the depth of emotions in this one was really what came through for me.. and even though it was kind of a sadder part than your normal ones.. i loved it to death!!
it's amazing how you write a simple emotion.. and make it seem not so simple anymore..! it's not sad for u... it's heart wrenching..!
the connection between armaan and riddhima showed the most in this part... their bond really really stood out..!!
hats off to u girl!! u rock!

oh and almost done with this thread!!!

hey NJ jus caught up wit ur latest part n i cant understand y on earth u thought dis part was miserable !!! i found it most poignant .. armaan's concern for riddhima it was overwhelming !!! n i cant beleive in it in da middle of her injuy she talks abt Physics ( am jus as bewildered as armaan ... i mean r all science geeks like her 😉 ) but her break down it was most sad ya ... as it is wen u r not feeling feel or r injured u r low in spirits n here adding insult 2 injury ... sandra " censored word" decides 2 pay her a visit ... damn ... am glad armaan was dere 2 take care of her !!! n dere conversation ( as 2 y dey luv each other ) it was jus perfect ... da way dey tried 2 assure each other esp armaan it was unbelievable ya .... i hope ridz feel more secure right now !!! but NJ right now am really wondering if ridz will tell armaan abt her conversation wit sandra n how da latter makes her feel uneasy ...... ridz does not want 2 sound clingy or whiny n so does not want 2 confide her fears in him but armaan deserves 2 knw as 2 wat is bothering her sooo much !!!! as usual ya part 31 over am now thinking abt part 32 ... thank god atleast dere was no cliffhangar .... will sleep easy !!!

awwwwwwwwwwww d last scene ws so adorable...........i m fallen in luv wit armaan n ofcourse u n ur story again.....u surely are d best in xplainin d true inner feelings of a person....moreover u put dem so nicely in words dat u can actually feel dem....u r jus brilliant n marvellous 👏

poor ridzi....has 2 face so much of hardship.....n y d hell sandra had 2 come 2 see her.....chalo ek taran se achha hi hua....nw atleast she will talk 2 armaan....

thnx a ton for d pm...n pls cont soon....