FF:Back to Newton's Laws-2...part 32 - Page 104

Originally posted by: armaanaddict

i think the tagline from ddlj would fit so perfectly with ur ff.. come fall in love..
everytime i read a part, i find something new to love.. something that was ridiculously adorable!
i loved this part so much!! the melodramaticness had such a perfect effect on the tone of the ff..! i almost teared up while reading it.. because it seemed so realistic! i'm completely running short of words to describe how incredible the part was..!
the depth of emotions in this one was really what came through for me.. and even though it was kind of a sadder part than your normal ones.. i loved it to death!!
it's amazing how you write a simple emotion.. and make it seem not so simple anymore..! it's not sad for u... it's heart wrenching..!
the connection between armaan and riddhima showed the most in this part... their bond really really stood out..!!
hats off to u girl!! u rock!oh and almost done with this thread!!!

DDLJ tagline....lolzzzz thank u missy....glad u like the part...i know sad part...will make the next one peppy n happening...got some plucky ideas but this shifting AARRRGGGHHHH not getting any time....

loved it 👏 👏 👏
-it was v.sweet when ridz asked armaan why he loved her 😳
plz update soon 😳

Originally posted by: missing Vmars

hey NJ jus caught up wit ur latest part n i cant understand y on earth u thought dis part was miserable !!! i found it most poignant .. armaan's concern for riddhima it was overwhelming !!! n i cant beleive in it in da middle of her injuy she talks abt Physics ( am jus as bewildered as armaan ... i mean r all science geeks like her 😉 ) but her break down it was most sad ya ... as it is wen u r not feeling feel or r injured u r low in spirits n here adding insult 2 injury ... sandra " censored word" decides 2 pay her a visit ... damn ... am glad armaan was dere 2 take care of her !!! n dere conversation ( as 2 y dey luv each other ) it was jus perfect ... da way dey tried 2 assure each other esp armaan it was unbelievable ya .... i hope ridz feel more secure right now !!! but NJ right now am really wondering if ridz will tell armaan abt her conversation wit sandra n how da latter makes her feel uneasy ...... ridz does not want 2 sound clingy or whiny n so does not want 2 confide her fears in him but armaan deserves 2 knw as 2 wat is bothering her sooo much !!!! as usual ya part 31 over am now thinking abt part 32 ... thank god atleast dere was no cliffhangar .... will sleep easy !!!

well i meant miserable like a make u cry part....personally i dont like them n this one took me forever n i wud have liked to handled it happier but cudnt come up with any idea to do so....so here we are...but the final draft...i was kinda satisfied with so....newaz next part happier...asap of course

Originally posted by: pal_279

awwwwwwwwwwww d last scene ws so adorable...........i m fallen in luv wit armaan n ofcourse u n ur story again.....u surely are d best in xplainin d true inner feelings of a person....moreover u put dem so nicely in words dat u can actually feel dem....u r jus brilliant n marvellous 👏

poor ridzi....has 2 face so much of hardship.....n y d hell sandra had 2 come 2 see her.....chalo ek taran se achha hi hua....nw atleast she will talk 2 armaan....

thnx a ton for d pm...n pls cont soon....

yeh all happening for good.... 😊

Originally posted by: saira_1

loved it 👏 👏 👏
-it was v.sweet when ridz asked armaan why he loved her 😳
plz update soon 😳

thnx hun...i will asap!!

cool part dear.. sad but very much needed part.. loved the way you have written it... 😊 waitin for the next one 😉

Originally posted by: koolarch2001

cool part dear.. sad but very much needed part.. loved the way you have written it... 😊 waitin for the next one 😉

thnx hun!!!!!!!

Originally posted by: rihanaa

wen u yupdatin plzz sy 2day 😛

not sure yet hun...might get delayed...

Originally posted by: spln

hey missy...looks like i disappointed u with this part...i apologize....but it wud be great if u teme how u wud have prefered the track i mean it helps to know the real views from u guys for future reference though i cant change this now.....hopefully the next update will be more apt for u...i wil try my best!!!

thanx for the comments...they mean alot!!!

NJ!!

come on nt...watz wid apologizin n all?? m embarrassed...i said naa i was kinda outta ma mind last nite..
i read it again..:)!!
i koe for sure as i said yest..didnt like her behaviour or her questionin hih..i mean i agree she had insecurity n often us galz walk on different route at d same time in our mindz..bt her question him as 2 y her wen he was all classy..
i thot d whole taj confession n terafter.it was all linked..tht was d reason y he fell for her..hed said it all..ten!!
i also didnt lke d fact whole tantrumz...stubborness sumhw was repeatetive..
i cud feel hiz concern n her understand too ...bt i cudnt connect wit her reasonz...
also if it was dt big a deal of her hand..i wud hve wntd 2 read sum muskaan-ridz talkz too! armaan-rahul tlkz on wether he knew she was hurt or y was he in a hurry...wen he left dt day!
i mean..ovb wen u r tryin 2 tlk abt 1 side of d coin..u wud put aside d other...tey kinda become d obvious!..bt guess uve always dne justice 2 all scenarioz...soo it caught my attention...mybe!

u koe wat...i still d 1 gud reason y i didnt like it so much..mybe i was upset at ridz 4 nt tellin hm wat was troublin her..cuz by keepin it 2 herself...ovb her behavior n her face betrayin her decision..he ought 2 hve kwn smg was ron...n him nt bein involved n nt knowin abt it ..wud upset him neway!!
tey love each other dearly..she koes him inside-out..she shd hve sm confidence in her love..again keepin in mind d taj scene..cuz even ten shed thot it was untrue..it cud nt happen...he was too fancy 2 be wit her...bt hed proved her rong ten...
y mke him do it again n again?? if she really does trust him...ten let out d sharp tlkz!shez tryna sve herself frm bein ashamed...bt unkwingly shez creatin a wall btn her trust n hiz love!

does tis mke sense? i m juss 2 attached 2 yur FF in a way..i read it feelin its all real..i was jus nt convinced wit ridz attitude..n ammyz helplessness!

:D chalo yaar...nw send us d new part!m soooo confused!

n again..ur doin a grt job...!

Originally posted by: missypatel

NJ!!come on nt...watz wid apologizin n all?? m embarrassed...i said naa i was kinda outta ma mind last nite..i read it again..:)!! i koe for sure as i said yest..didnt like her behaviour or her questionin hih..i mean i agree she had insecurity n often us galz walk on different route at d same time in our mindz..bt her question him as 2 y her wen he was all classy..i thot d whole taj confession n terafter.it was all linked..tht was d reason y he fell for her..hed said it all..ten!!i also didnt lke d fact whole tantrumz...stubborness sumhw was repeatetive..i cud feel hiz concern n her understand too ...bt i cudnt connect wit her reasonz...also if it was dt big a deal of her hand..i wud hve wntd 2 read sum muskaan-ridz talkz too! armaan-rahul tlkz on wether he knew she was hurt or y was he in a hurry...wen he left dt day! i mean..ovb wen u r tryin 2 tlk abt 1 side of d coin..u wud put aside d other...tey kinda become d obvious!..bt guess uve always dne justice 2 all scenarioz...soo it caught my attention...mybe!u koe wat...i still d 1 gud reason y i didnt like it so much..mybe i was upset at ridz 4 nt tellin hm wat was troublin her..cuz by keepin it 2 herself...ovb her behavior n her face betrayin her decision..he ought 2 hve kwn smg was ron...n him nt bein involved n nt knowin abt it ..wud upset him neway!! tey love each other dearly..she koes him inside-out..she shd hve sm confidence in her love..again keepin in mind d taj scene..cuz even ten shed thot it was untrue..it cud nt happen...he was too fancy 2 be wit her...bt hed proved her rong ten...y mke him do it again n again?? if she really does trust him...ten let out d sharp tlkz!shez tryna sve herself frm bein ashamed...bt unkwingly shez creatin a wall btn her trust n hiz love! does tis mke sense? i m juss 2 attached 2 yur FF in a way..i read it feelin its all real..i was jus nt convinced wit ridz attitude..n ammyz helplessness! :D chalo yaar...nw send us d new part!m soooo confused!n again..ur doin a grt job...!

oki me already done with half of next part...wont mention wat...but some things u mentioned here i luckily covered in the next...i just write so much in one part its hard to fit too many scenes....

next ridz insecurity...oki my POV was that when she was in india she felt that way coz of him as a celebrity like he cud never be serious...n just had his way with girls n all....but that was still her domain her zone...in standford...she suddenly feels insecure not abt him as much but abt herself...she feels overshadowed....n i tried putting it there but perhaps wasnt clear enough...he proved he loved her at agra...but she thinks he fell for her as an attraction at that time n didnt know the hard parts of her...which is quite true its hard to know all good n bad in less than a month...so she just feeling that knowing her better now, n having options like sandra why wud he not just leave her n walk away...not justifying her lack of faith in the least...thats the whole point she insecure n shudnt be...but they have to overcome it!!!plus....hes being too perfect for noe...course no one is perfect so we are still to see him!!!!

thanx a ton for ur opinions missy i appreciate u letting me know...n i wrote all this as it appeared to me...if any of this hits a point il be glad...if it doesnt...hopefully the upcoming track will be some solace!!!hehe...

the update though will take sometime...caught up in the lab for now....


n tantrums n all...well i dint wana defy her character from the sinus scene...u know how she was fussy abt the kada....well i...lets say that part of her is like me...i hit the bed too often n i can really be a pain....so i got it that way....

ps: basically i think um putting too much thot to make it realistic....n it just seems that a couple like them...so unbalanced wud have to go thru certain things straightening out before they actually got together if they did....u know wat i mean????initially i was gona wrap up the fic in india...but it was just this point...i mean it was unrealistic for them to just get together like that n everyone to just say yes n then all to work out for the good...or so i thot....do i make sense????