FF:Back to Newton's Laws-2...part 32 - Page 106

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Posted: 17 years ago
hey..
plzzz continue soon...
cant wait..
- sonal

ps. hope u r done ur packing n den updating.. 😳 ..we dont wanna get u messed up 2morrow..wen u moving...
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Posted: 17 years ago
oooooo brilliantly written NJ...each emotion each thought is emitted sooo well, it was a lil sad but yea like u said it probably is necessary for the storyline...awesome job sweetie 😃 cantw ait for the next part...hows the moving going???
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Posted: 17 years ago
that ws just awesome...im speechless...i..cant tell u...its ur actually as good as my fav writer -chetan bhagat...
😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
wow yaar....wat a part....finally she confessed her emotions....and thank u so much for not leaving us with a cliffhanger.. 😆

loved it all....hope it gets all the more better in nxt part....

waiting for the update...

thanx for the pm..

luv,
shivani
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Posted: 17 years ago
part 32 folks....awfully delayed but with a genuine reason....packing n moving can so so tragic i just figured over the past 72 hours....gosh it was an unbelievable pain....n ive done this update in so many interrupted shifts....i just couldnt delay any more to work on polishing it off...but its a cheerful part so hopefully ul overlook any incoherent kinks lolzzz!!! missed being here even for the short time which seemed too long....waiting for all ur comments as always!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago

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I don't know what to say

You might have got this type of a reaction from too many people and probably are used to it

But that is exactly how u make us feel,

NJ hun,I really am falling short of words,this is just so beautiful

The dreams of having kids was just too cute ahem ahem

that weak moment,the trust,the vulnerability,the emotions

they are all saying a story i wanted to read,

I must have told u before,i'm no good at giving comments

just hope i've expressed my joy (atleast some of it)

Love you for thinking about us and giving us an update despite of the shifing and all

too good a part,

"I've had enuff" ,thats still echoing in my ears after years 😆

Amazing!

Love u NJ

Edited by hinanaziri - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
omg im speechless
really dnt kno wot to say it
was just aamzing
WOOOOOW n luved hw ridz was bissing ever1 bout lol
it was great well dne

loool soz to hear bout al da packing sounds great lol
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Posted: 17 years ago

hey NJ, part 32 was out of this world!! i can not express how good it was, even with the many interuptions you had, and the delay, you didnt disappoint, and i loved it!!

the dream about having kids was so beautifully described, it was so cute Ridz wants boys, Armaan only girls, loved it though when she said if she has to bear with the pain and all

i couldnt get enough of Ridz ordering Muski in the kitchen i thought that was hilarious!!

the weak moment you described was so sweet, and innocent - loved how you showed the trust, vulnerability of the two, and the love between both of them, aww just couldnt stop smiling at Armaan feeling guilty poor thing is so ashamed!!

i was in shock when i read Armaan's "ive had enough" cant wait now can he?? lol

so glad to have seen an update by u NJ, and that too which was brilliant

looking forward to the next update whenever you are able to make it

thanks for the PM, and an amazing part

Sania 😳

Edited by ArmiandRidz4eva - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
pheww!!
i was kinda studyin wen i saw yur PM n i soo cudnt resist!!
4m d sec i started readin..till i finished i cud see myself as a transparent ghostly figure movin arnd tem..seein ter every move..every direction..wit silence gestures..i felt like i was holdin my breath unknowinly!!

it was beautiful..every bit of it!

THANK YOU!
id did clear all my doubts..vry positive response..ridz confidence boosted 2 levelz tht brought her jolly self bck!ohhhh...tht wwas such a gud feelin!my my!!!
muskaan-ridz talkz!!glad u put dt..true meanin of frdship..😊 cuz i koe personally if my BFF wud hide smg 4m me..i wud die out of curiousity...it wud be in ma mind..hinderin me..jusss y is it tht i dunno abt it!!!

awesome!
Muskaan-Rahul scenes wer too gud..hehe rahulz awe struck look...lol poor thing..must hve had 2 hold on2 hiz own self 2 nt get carried away wit dt beauty!!

mesmerizin..!!
ARz chemisty..deepens my smile..it always touches d sky..(luk out u mite c it in d clouds!)
ter moment..was soooooo simple..bt so romantic..i cud feel d blood risin in ma body..lol!!
d last bit..wer Az guilt gt d better of him for lil while tht it did..tht was gud..d best part..i wud say!!

i luved it NJ!!it cudnt hve been ne better or apt thn this! 😛

I feel content. 👏 i feel lke sayin..ILU NJ!!

P.S 3 of ma fav linez..
- if a change of attitude was needed she would do it for him, hadnt she done it years ago???
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"cause u are worth it...."
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..the combination of her damp hair and warm breath against his skin...

Edited by missypatel - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
i am soo happy after reading this part,as promised this part was a happy one i really enjoyed reading it 👏
i was soo badly missing ur part's,i am happy that ur back with a great part.....their understanding is soo good not only between armaan and ridhima but between all 4 of them
i understand this packing and unpacking thing is soo irritating anyways enjoy unpacking ur stuff,hope to read the next part soon...i will be waiting,continue soon

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