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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome n too romantic update Preeti.
Chalo Raj k aane se Adi ki himmat badh jaayegi i mean ab vo apne bhai k kehne k according Niha se apna love confess karega.
Pooja n Anu k saamne kuch keh nahi paayi na Niha ki vo kitna pasand karti hai Adi ko but mujhe lagta hai vo dono khud hi samajh jaayengi.
Dream was wonderful, continue soon.

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: vvdn

very nice update dear...so Adi is all set to get his luv......waiting for next part.

thanky namita for ur comments.........
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: suhana_dixit

Hi Preetihiii suhana.........

How r u???f9 dear and hope the same for u too.........
Update was very romantic n cute...😊thanky so much.......
Niharika ne aakhir baaton baaton mein Adi ko apna keeh hi diya...haan ab kab tak chupa paayegi apne dil ki feelings ko.........
Pooja n Anu were so shocked...Pooja ne bhi accha drama kiya but Niha to Adi ko lekar bahut hi possesive ho gayi.πŸ˜†πŸ˜‰haan akhir kaar chori pakdi gayi.....
Rajveer ne Adi ko bharosa dilaya ki Niha sirf usse hi pyaar karti hai..πŸ˜›haan isse adi ka confidence toh badh gaya.......
Raj ko kabhi pyaar nahin hua hai but Adi ki tarah mujhe bhi lag raha hai ki usko jaldi hi yeh rog lagne wala hai.πŸ˜›πŸ˜†πŸ˜‰hope so..........
Adi ne soch liya hai ki woh Niha se apne pyaar ka izhaar karke rahega.πŸ˜›haan ab use koi nahin rok sakta.........
God is always with those who loves truely...absolutely i completely agree with u........
This line was too gud..thanx sweety....
"woh main aapko kal bataunga............. ab niharika jaane ya na jaane, maane ya na maane, chaahe ya na chaahe, pyaar toh use mujhse karna hi padega..........bas ab mujhe kal ka intezaar hai......."
Niha bhi Adi ko chahne lagi hai n ab usse door hokar usse yeh ehsaas ho raha hai..haan jab koi door jaata hai tab uski ahmiyat pata chalti hai..........
"It was not so long ago
when I thought I'd never meet someone like you.
Wrong was I, thinking I'm in control
Believing I'd never fall.

All my life I thought no one would
melt a heart like mine, a heart so cold,
a heart hardened by the past,
protected by shields so vast.

Slowly I was falling
without even knowing.
Only to find out too late
I have no choice but to accept my fate.

I could dream, I suppose
forever, I could hope
there will never be any 'us', that's our destiny
so I wake up to reality.

I lied when I said
I didn't love you,
that my feelings for you
are through.

I lied
not because I wanted to
but because I love you
and I still do.

I wouldn't do a thing to hurt you
but I just have to let go.
I can't hold on much longer
'coz for us there's no forever "these lines are so awesoooooome, lovely, beautiful and touching dear.......
The dream sequence was too romantic.πŸ˜›πŸ˜›..really i am glad u liked it.......
I hope Adi Niha ko jaldi hi propose kare..πŸ˜›same here ........
Continue soonsure........
Byebyeee take care.......

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!!thanx a ton........

Pooja is so sweet aur kehti hai ke yeh kamra unki Anu ke aane ki wajah se khudsoorat lag rahi hai!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊absolutely gol-gol rasgulle ki tarah super sweet hai poo.......

Adi kehta hai ke world ki best coffee sirf aur sirf uska bhai Rajveer hi banata hai!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘How cute!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊haan raj is the best and so is adi both rock together.......

Adi toh Niharika ke pyaar mein novels padhne laga aur woh bhi love stories!!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†haan main tere pyaar mein kya-kya na bana niha ab aage ki line tum khud hi soch lena........

Adi is thinking about Niharika and and he said pyaar sab kuch badal deta hai!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳so toh hai poori duniya ulat-pulat jaati hai........

Raj ko aaj tak pyaar nahi huya hai aur woh nahi chahta ke usse kabhi pyaar ho!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊haan use pyaar samajh mein jo nahin aata........

Adi usse kehta hai ke pyaar kiya nahi jaata ho jaata hai and he is sure ke Raj ko bhi pyaar hoga!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌya hope so.........

I am sure ke jab Raj ko uski Naina milegi toh Raj ko bhi pyaar ho jaayega!!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ 😊 😊 😊 😊dekhen ki kya hota hai?

Adi kehta hai ke uski naiyaa ram ke bharose hi nazar aa rahi hai!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†haan aur jo use khud hi paar lagani hogi........

Raj ka shayarana andaaz was great aur lagta hai Adi ki mohabbat ka asar Raj par padh raha haii!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†haan achchi cheezon ka asar achcha hi hota hai...........

Adi ka dil kehta hai ke Niharika ko bhi usse beintehaan mohabbat hai!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌaur dil toh humesha sahi hota hai.........

Niharika ne akhir Pooja aur Anu ko keh hi diya ke Adi uska sabse accha dost hai!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳haan ab kab tak chupa paayegi apne dil ki baat.....

Pooja ne ish baat pe accha drama kiya and Anu smartly said she is out of this!!!!!πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣haan humaari super dramebaaz queen..........

Niharika is quite possessive about Adi and it was great to hear her address Adi as hers!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘yes i too loved her for this.........

Adi is now ready to confess his love to Niharika aur usne ek plan bhi banaya hai!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌhaan ab aur zyaada der achchi baat nahin hai.........

Adi mein Raj ke aane se ab confidence badh gayi hai and he said ab Niharika ko ussi se pyaar karna hoga!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳haan achche insaan ka positive asar pada hai uspar..........

Niharika is thinking about Adi on the terrace and keeps hearing his voice!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😍 😍 😍 😍kuch kuch nahin balki bahut kuch ho raha hai..........

Adi praises Niharika and goes close to her making her heart beat faster!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️so romantic na pata nahin ki real mein kya hoga?

But Niharika wakes up and it turns out to be a dream!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊ya par kya khubsoorat sapna tha.............

Niharika is wondering ke yeh khwaab tha ya haqeeqat!!!!!!πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜•Indeed it was a beautiful dream!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳haan.......absolutely...

I am sure Adi jaldi hi Niharika ko propose karega and hopefully yeh khwaab haqeeqat mein badal jaayega!!!!agree with u.........


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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid

Awe.....that was sooooooooo cute!! I loved the convo btwn Adi n Raj....and Niha ka achanak aise react karna n Anu n Pooja ki teasing it was just awesum!! And wo khwab....kitna dhasoo khwab tha wo....isse behtar koi khwab hai hi nahi....and I hope Adi ka plan kamyab ho jaye....w8ing to knw uske pyare se dil ne kya socha hai apne pyar k liye.....pls continue soon.

hii sumaiya thanx a lot sweety for ur such lovely comments i am really glad and touched, u loved adi-raj convo that's so sweet of u both of them just rock together what say......haan niha ka reaction was obvious ab pyaar ko aakhir kab tak chupa paayegi and u liked the teasing part too, even i loved it while writing, sachchi tumhe khwaab pasand aaya mujhe bhi bahut pasand hai woh part, hope so dear ki uska plan kamyaab ho jaaye, haan plzzz do wait for it , ya sure i will ud asap.......byee.......take care........
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Posted: 15 years ago
THANX A LOT FOR LIKING THE UD..........



Edited by mayadika11 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
HIIIIIIIIIII PRITI HOW R U ?
SORRY IS BAAR MAINE ITNA
LATE KIYA ACTUALLY MAIN OUT OF STATION THI
BUT MAINE TUMHARA UD PAD LIYA HAIN
BAHUT HI KHUSOOORAT LIKHA HAIN TUMNE
MUJE SAARE SCENES BAHUT PASAND AAYE
FINALLY ADI IS BACK AUR VO NIHA KO PAANE KE
LIYE TAIYAAR BHI HAIN I M SO EXCITED
NIHA NE KASHMIR KE TRIP KE BAARE MEIN BATAYA
AUR VO ADI KA HI NAAM JAB RAHI THI THAT WAS SOOOOO
SWEET I LOVE THE DIALOG OF NIHA
"MERE ADI VO HAATH BHI LAGAYA TOH"HAHAHA MUJE BAHUT AACHA
LAGA PAR NIHA YE NAHI SAMAJ PAAYI KI USNE AAKIR AASA KYUN KAHA
CHALO SAPNE MEIN USKO APNA JAWAB MIL GAYA PHIR BHI VO CONFUSE HAIN HMMMM
LEKIN SAPNA BAHUT HI ROMANTIC THA I LOVE THE WHOLE SCENE.........ITS BEAUTIFUL AND MAGICAL ADI KE DIALOGS BAHUT KHUSOORAT THE AUR NIHA KA SARMANA I JUST LOVE IT
ADI KO KAL KA INTEZAR HAIN AUR MUJE BHI
ISLIYE JALDI SE UD KARO SAMJI
WARNA MERA KYA HOGA

LOVE U
DEEPA


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Posted: 15 years ago
Accha lag raha hai ki tu is fic ko continue kar rahi hai. 😊
Nice part.πŸ˜ƒ
Adi ne acchi help li hai Niha k liye Raj ki.πŸ˜‰ Yahan Niha ka hi haal kuch alag nahi hai. 😳 Vo bhi apne aas pass har pal feel kar rahi hai Adi ko.πŸ˜› Vo us ki imagination bahut acchi thi.😳
kahin aisa na ho ki Niha Adi aur Raj me confuse ho jaaye aur baad me is ki vajah se koi problem ho jaaye.πŸ˜• Raj k liye kisi ko rakha hai ya nahi?
Niha apni sis ko le kar aa gayi nice.😊
ab aage jaldi badhao.
Edited by varshita - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
nice part Priti.

beautiful dream sequenceπŸ‘.jab tak tumne nahi toda aisa lagaa hi nahi ki yeh koi sapna thaπŸ˜‰par tha badaa haseen😳

ab jaake Niha ji ko ehsaas ho raha hai ki woh Adi se pyaar karne lagi hai,good for her.and good for Aadi too.😊

but Raj ka part abhki bhi clear nahi hai.πŸ˜•.i just hope tum kuch filmi-twists add nahi karogi iss mein(i mean Adi ki maut,Raj ka uski jagah lena etc.etc.) pls yaar aisa kuch mat karna.

chalo ab dekhte hai ki aahir Adi ki plan hai kya aur Rajveer Niha ke saamne kaise aayega.waiting 4 the next ud.......................................
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Posted: 15 years ago
thanx a lot sweety....i am glad..........

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