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Posted: 15 years ago

#571

Originally posted by: varshita
Thanks for starting of post again. 😊thanx for commenting dear.......
So Rajveer and Adi r bro's and Sagar is younger one. Tab bhi kaafi jyada close bonding hai na in charon ki. 😉 I like that so much.😃haan awesooooome foursomeee....

Niha ki sis bhi theek ho gayi hai aur ab vo sab k saath normal life jee paayegi that's good too.😊haan i hope ki ab sab thik hoga........

I believe jaldi hi Adi ka mamala bhi set ho jaayega.😛

ab bund mat karna updates.😉ya i hope the same and i won't stop the ud's till the fiction ends.......

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#572

Originally posted by: esha143
very nice fic Prithi,i have just completed reading it.toh Raj ka double role hai ha,interesting.par Raj ke heroine ka kya hoga?kya Naina ka bhi double role hai kya?let's see what's going to happen now.plz jaldise ud kardona................

thanx a lot esha i am glad that u commented well tumhaare saare sawaalon ke jawaab tumhe aane waale ud's mein mil jaayegi, haan main jaldi hi ud karungi......

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PART 25.

Niha anu ko lekar hostel pahunchti hai jahan par pooja ne warden se baat karke uske rehna ka saara intezaam karawa liya hai.........

NIHA-anu yeh humaara kamra hai, aur aaj se tumhaara bhi.......

ANU-bahut khubsoorat room hai di........

POO-nahin........

anu chaunkar pooja ki taraf dekhti hai........

POO-mere kehne ka yeh matlab tha ki, yeh room humaari anu ke aa jaane ki wajah se khubsoorat lag raha hai........

NIHA-{smile karte hue}-haan pooja tumne bilkul sahi kaha......

anu pooja aur niha ki baat sunkar muskuraane lagti hai, aur dono ko gale se laga leti hai.......

Next scene.......

Aditya apne room mein baithkar ek novel padh raha hai tabhie rajveer room mein enter karta hai aur aditya ko coffee ka mug offer karta hai..........

ADI-thanx bhai.......

RAJ-ur most welcome pee ke bata kaise bani hai........?

ADI-{smile karte hue}-bhai plzzz aap yeh toh poochiye mat........

RAJ-kyun........?

ADI-kyunki world ki best coffee toh sirf aur sirf mera bhai rajveer hi banata hai........

and then hi takes a sip from the mug.......

ADI-hmmmm.........heaven.........

RAJ-really..is that so, agar tum kehte ho toh may be.........

ADI-may be..........c'mmon bhai ur the best.........

RAJ-ahaan.........we r the best...........

ADI-{smile karte hue}-right...........

RAJ-{looks at the novel}-by the way tujhe kabse novel padhne ka shauk lag gaya.........aur woh bhi love-story hmmmmm.......

ADI-nahin bhai, woh main bas aise hi.........

RAJ-hmmm..let me guess, zaroor use pasand hoga right........

ADI-kis use........?

RAJ-jise tune pasand kar liya hai.........

ADI-{shyly}-bhai plzzz........

RAJ-kya plzzz, aur yeh tu ladkiyon ki tarah kyun sharma raha hai haan..........

ADI-sharma nahin raha hoon kuch soch raha hoon........

RAJ-niharika ke baare mein right.......

ADI-haan bhai pata nahin main use kaise.........?

RAJ-c'mmon adi tu kabse itna sochne laga, u know what, jis adi ko main jaanta hoon woh tere jaisa bilkul bhi nahin hai.........

ADI-pyaar sabkuch badal deta hai.......

RAJ-bas isi wajah se mujhe yeh pyaar bilkul bhi samajh mein nahin aata hai...........

ADI-bhai pyaar ko samjha nahin jaata hai, balki mehsoos kiya jaata hai............

RAJ-pata nahin yeh kaisa pyaar hai, jismein insaan ko khud ko hi bhulana pade...........

ADI-pyaar khud ko bhula kar hi kiya jaata hai bhai...........

RAJ-haan dekh hi toh raha hoon ki, khud ko khud hi ki khabar nahin rehti.........

ADI-jab aapko pyaar hoga na tab aapse poochoonga........

RAJ-i wish ki mujhe kabhie pyaar na ho..........

ADI-and i wish ki aapko zaroor pyaar ho, tabhie aap pyaar ko samajh paayenge..........

RAJ-main kabhie pyaar karne hi nahin waala.......

ADI-{smilingly}-bhai pyaar kiya nahin jaata ho jaata hai.......

RAJ-aur mujhe kabhie nahin hoga.......

ADI-hoga bhai zaroor hoga..........

RAJ-thik hai jab hoga tab hoga, lekin philhaal yahan par meri nahin tumhaare pyaar ki baat chal rahi hai.........

ADI-haan aur jiski naiyya mujhe ram ke bharose hi nazar aa rahi hai...........

RAJ-kyun abhi tum mujhe pyaar par bahut gyaan de rahe the, ab khud ki baari aayi toh ram bharose ho liye........

ADI-nahin bhai woh main........

RAJ-woh main kya haan, jab pyaar karne ki himmat hai, toh use paane ki bhi chahat honi chahiye.........

ADI-aap sahi keh rahein hain bhai, lekin........

RAJ-pyaar mein lekin ki koi gunjaaish nahin hoti hai.......

ADI-aur yeh aapko kaise pata....?

RAJ-kya humdono ke beech mein lekin ki koi gunjaaish hai.......?

ADI-main samajh gaya bhai ki aap kya kehna chahte hain......magar main yeh janna chahta hoon ki, niharika bhi mujhse pyaar karti hai ya nahin........?

RAJ-{holding adi's shoulders}-mere adi ka dil ka kya kehta hai....?

ADI-{smile karte hue}-yahi ki mohabbat hai, beintehaan mohabbat hai...........

RAJ-jab mohabbat ko mohabbat pe itna yakeen hai toh phir kisliye teri duniya itni gamgeen hai........?

ADI-waah kya baat hai bhai, mohabbat mujhe hui hai, aur shayari aap farma rahein hain........

RAJ-really is that so, yeh toh ulta hi ho raha hai, teri mohabbat ka asar mujhpar pad raha hai.........

ADI-lo ab meri mohabbat ka asar aap par bhi padne laga, magar jispar padna chahiye use toh kuch khabar hi nahin hai.......

Cut to the Hostel...........

Jahan par anu-niha aur pooja milkar kashmir ke trip ke baare mein baatein kar rahein hain..........aur baaton hi baaton mein niha adi ka zikra karti hai........

NIHA-aur wahan par mujhe aditya mila..........

ANU-aur aditya bhi aapka achcha dost hoga jaise ki sagar aur nihal...........

NIHA-nahin........

ANU-{chaunkar}-nahin, matlab ki aditya aapka achcha dost nahin hai...........

NIHA-achcha nahin, aditya toh mera sabse achcha dost hai.........

POO-{shocked}-what toh phir main kaun hoon.........?

NIHA-tu bhi meri achchi dost hai..........

POO-main bhi..........mujhe toh lagta tha ki sirf main hi teri sabse achchi dost hoon.........

NIHA-pooja...........

POO-ab kuch nahin bacha........

NIHA-poojaaa.........

POO-haan-haan poo-jaa hi rahi hai yahan se........

NIHA-maine tujhe jaane ko kab kaha........

POO-kyun abhi-abhi toh tune kaha na poo-jaa........

NIHA-ab agar tera naam hi aisa hai toh ismein main kya karoon....?

POO-haan-haan ab toh tujhe mera naam hi kya, main bhi achchi nahin lag rahi hongi...........

NIHA-maine aisa kab kaha........

POO-tere kehne ka toh yahi matlab tha, main yeh achchi tarah se jaanti hoon........

NIHA-tu baat ka batangad kyun bana rahi hai.........?

POO-anu tu bata ki kaun galat hai aur kaun sahi hai.......?

ANU-hey-hey i am out of this........

NIHA-anu ko beech mein laanen ki koi zaroorat nahin hai.......

POO-sahi kaha tumne beech mein toh woh aditya aaya hai, bas ek baar mil jaaye chodungi nahin use.........

NIHA-kya karegi tu uske saath........?

POO-maar daalungi use, i will kill him........

NIHA-khabardaar agar mere adi ki taraf aankh uthakar bhi dekha toh main tumhe........

POO-toh tum mujhe kya........?

ANU-haan di toh tum kya karogi............?

NIHA-toh main.........toh main kya karungi, kuch nahin.........

POO-haan-haan kuch nahin bas mujhe jaan se maar daalegi apne adi ke liye hai na..........

NIHA-mere kehne ka woh matlab nahin tha tum galat samajh rahi ho...........

POO-toh phir batao na ki tumhaara kya matlab tha.........?

ANU-haan di plzzz samjhaayiye na.........

NIHA-mujhe kisi ko kuch bhi batana ya samjhana nahin hai.........

Aur itna kehkar niha wahan se chali jaati hai.........

Cut to Rajveer........

RAJ-toh khabar bhi tumhe hi pahunchaani hogi........kab-kahan-kaise, yeh bhi tumhe hi sochna padega.........pyaar karte waqt toh socha nahin, phir izhaar karne mein itna kyun soch rahe ho....?

ADI-aap sahi keh rahein hain bhai,jab pyar kiya toh darna kya? and everything is fair in love & war right?

RAJ-right...magar tum kehna kya chahate ho..........?

ADI-main ye kehna chahata hoon bhai,ki bhale hi niharika mujhse pyaar kare ya na kare bhale hi woh izhaar kare ya na kare.........

RAJ-magar adi toh niharika se pyaar karta hai aur woh izhaar bhi karega right.........

ADI-(smilingly)-right..........

RAJ-toh ab bata do ki tumhare dimaag mein kya plan chal raha hain.............

ADI-plan toh hai bhai aur woh bhi bahut hi dhaasu......bas aap......

RAJ-bas main tyayaar rahu right.........

ADI-right.......

RAJ-toh batao ki tumhara plan kya hain? jismein tum mujhe phasaane waale ho?

Aditya Raj ke kaano mein apna plan batata hain........

RAJ-great aur is poore plan mein mera kya role hain........?

ADI-woh main aapko kal bataunga............. ab niharika jaane ya na jaane, maane ya na maane, chaahe ya na chaahe, pyaar toh use mujhse karna hi padega..........bas ab mujhe kal ka intezaar hai.......

Cut to niharika............

Jo ki hostel ke terrace par tehal rahi hai aur aditya ke baare mein soch rahi hai..................

NIHA-maine aditya ke baare mein aisa kyun kaha? woh itna apna kabse lagne laga? aur kyun?

yahi sab sochte-sochte niharika terrace ke railing ke paas pahunch jaati hai..............aur apni aankhen bandh kar leti hai, bahut tez hawa beh rahi hai, jo ki niha ke baalon ko uske chehre par bikhra rahi hai............ki tabhie uske kaano mein ek awaaz gunjti hai........"NIHARIKA".........yeh sunkar woh jhat se apni aankhen kholkar peeche mud kar dekhti hai magar use koi nazar nahin aata hai........aur woh bechain ho uthti hai, aur dobara apni aankhen bandh kar leti hai, phir se uske kaano mein wahi awaaz gunjti hai........"TUM BAHUT KHUBSOORAT LAG RAHI HO"..........niha phir bechain ho uthti hai aur idhar-udhar dekhne lagti hai........

NIHA-kaun hai.........?

VOICE-kyun tum nahin jaanti..............

NIHA-nahin........

VOICE-nahin ya phir tum janna nahin chahti.......

NIHA-aakhir tum ho kaun........? aur mere saamne kyun nahin aa rahe ho..........?

VOI-main toh kabse tumhaare saamne khada hoon, magar tum mujhe dekhna hi nahin chahti ho.......

NIHA-aakhir tum ho kaun........?

VOI-"wahi jo tumhaare dil mein chupa hai,
wahi jo tumhaari saanson mein basa hai,
wahi jo tumhaari aankhon mein saja hai"........

NIHA-{holding her breath}-kaun..........?

VOI-{echoes}-"MOHABBAT-MOHABBAT-MOHABBAT".......

aur yeh sunkar niharika dheere-dheere apni aankhen kholti hai.......

NIHA-"ADITYA"..........

ADI-{smilingly}-aur kaun.........

NIHA-adi tum yahan........

ADI-kyun main yahan nahin aa sakta........

NIHA-nahin aa sakte ho, magar tum yahan aaye kaise........?

ADI-{walking towards niha slowly-slowly}-ud ke aur kaise........

NIHA-magar mere paas hi kyun........?

ADI-{softly}-kyunki main aana chahta tha tumhaare paas, bahut paas..........

itna kehkar aditya niharika ke ek dum kareeb pahunch jaata hai.....aur niha ke dil ki dhadkanei tez ho jaati hain, uski saanson ki raftaar bhadne lagti hai.........

ADI-{passionetly}-tumhe pata hai niharika, jab tumhaare dil ki dhadkanei tez hone lagti hai, aur tumhaari saanson ki raftaar bhadne lagti hai toh mujhe bahut achcha lagta hai............

NIHA-{takes a deep breath}-kyun............?

ADI-{softly}-kyunki yeh mujhe tumhaare aur kareeb hone ka ehsaas karata hai............

niharika sharmakar apni palki jhukha leti hai..........

ADI-{romantically}-aur jab tum yun sharama ke apni palkein jhukha leti ho..........

NIHA-{chaunkar aditya ki taraf dekhti hai}-toh.........

ADI-aur phir yuhin chaunkar apni palkein uthakar mujhe dekhti ho toh............

NIHA-{lost in his eyes}-toh kya hota hai..........?

ADI-{takes a sigh}-toh mera dil bechain ho uthta hai.........

NIHA-{mesmerized}-kyun............?

ADI-{softly and romantically}-kyunki tumhaari aankhon mein mujhe apna aks nazar aata hai........

Aditya ki baat sunkar niharika bade hi pyaar se uski taraf dekhti hai.........aditya niharika ke peeche jaakar use apni baahon mein bhar leta hai, aur niharika ki zulfein uske chehre par padti hain, aditya uski zulfon ko hatakar uske kaano mein kehta hai..........

ADI-{romantically}-aur tumhe pata hai, jab tumhaari yeh resham si julfein mere chehre par padti hai, toh mujhe kaisa lagta hai......?

NIHA-{completely lost}-kaisa...........?

ADI-{passionetly}-mujhe aisa lagta hai jaise..........

NIHA-{shyly}-jaise...........

ADI-{softly}-jaise ki sooraj ki pehli kiran mere chehre par pad rahi ho, aur mujhe neend se jaga rahi ho........

NIHA-{shyly}-sach............

ADI-{touches her nose with his finger and says very cutely}-muuch..............

tabhie achanak se niharika ki neend tut jaati hai, aur woh uth jaati hai.........

NIHA-yeh khwaab tha ya haqeeqat..........?

cut to aditya.........

ADI-jo aaj tak mere liye khwaab tha, kal woh haqeeqat mein tabdeel hone waala hai............

END OF PART 25.PLZZZ DO COMMENT....AND SILENT READERS DON'T FORGET TO PRESS THE LIKE BUTTON............

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Preet

@RadhaKrishan

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Posted: 15 years ago

#574

sorry 4 being so late
but the update was superb
enjoyed it alot
please continue soon
thanks 4 the pm

Edited by preet09 - 15 years ago

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vvdn

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Posted: 15 years ago

#575

very nice update dear...so Adi is all set to get his luv......waiting for next part.

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KrishnaSourav

@KrishnaRukmini

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Posted: 15 years ago

#576

lovely update.too good.

loved it.

continue soon dear.

thanks for the pm dear.

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Suhana

@suhana.dixit

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#577

Hi Preeti

How r u???

Update was very romantic n cute...😊

Niharika ne aakhir baaton baaton mein Adi ko apna keeh hi diya...

Pooja n Anu were so shocked...Pooja ne bhi accha drama kiya but Niha to Adi ko lekar bahut hi possesive ho gayi.😆😉

Rajveer ne Adi ko bharosa dilaya ki Niha sirf usse hi pyaar karti hai..😛

Raj ko kabhi pyaar nahin hua hai but Adi ki tarah mujhe bhi lag raha hai ki usko jaldi hi yeh rog lagne wala hai.😛😆😉

Adi ne soch liya hai ki woh Niha se apne pyaar ka izhaar karke rahega.😛

God is always with those who loves truely...

This line was too gud..

"woh main aapko kal bataunga............. ab niharika jaane ya na jaane, maane ya na maane, chaahe ya na chaahe, pyaar toh use mujhse karna hi padega..........bas ab mujhe kal ka intezaar hai......."

Niha bhi Adi ko chahne lagi hai n ab usse door hokar usse yeh ehsaas ho raha hai..

"It was not so long ago
when I thought I'd never meet someone like you.
Wrong was I, thinking I'm in control
Believing I'd never fall.

All my life I thought no one would
melt a heart like mine, a heart so cold,
a heart hardened by the past,
protected by shields so vast.

Slowly I was falling
without even knowing.
Only to find out too late
I have no choice but to accept my fate.

I could dream, I suppose
forever, I could hope
there will never be any 'us', that's our destiny
so I wake up to reality.

I lied when I said
I didn't love you,
that my feelings for you
are through.

I lied
not because I wanted to
but because I love you
and I still do.

I wouldn't do a thing to hurt you
but I just have to let go.
I can't hold on much longer
'coz for us there's no forever "

The dream sequence was too romantic.😛😛..

I hope Adi Niha ko jaldi hi propose kare..😛

Continue soon

Bye

Edited by suhana_dixit - 15 years ago

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Rituka

@rituka7

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Posted: 15 years ago

#578

damn cool

awesome

superb

update was great

waiting for next part

update soon

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Shaina_b

@Shaina_b

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Posted: 15 years ago

#579

Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!!

Pooja is so sweet aur kehti hai ke yeh kamra unki Anu ke aane ki wajah se khudsoorat lag rahi hai!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Adi kehta hai ke world ki best coffee sirf aur sirf uska bhai Rajveer hi banata hai!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏How cute!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Adi toh Niharika ke pyaar mein novels padhne laga aur woh bhi love stories!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Adi is thinking about Niharika and and he said pyaar sab kuch badal deta hai!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Raj ko aaj tak pyaar nahi huya hai aur woh nahi chahta ke usse kabhi pyaar ho!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Adi usse kehta hai ke pyaar kiya nahi jaata ho jaata hai and he is sure ke Raj ko bhi pyaar hoga!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

I am sure ke jab Raj ko uski Naina milegi toh Raj ko bhi pyaar ho jaayega!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊

Adi kehta hai ke uski naiyaa ram ke bharose hi nazar aa rahi hai!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Raj ka shayarana andaaz was great aur lagta hai Adi ki mohabbat ka asar Raj par padh raha haii!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Adi ka dil kehta hai ke Niharika ko bhi usse beintehaan mohabbat hai!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

Niharika ne akhir Pooja aur Anu ko keh hi diya ke Adi uska sabse accha dost hai!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Pooja ne ish baat pe accha drama kiya and Anu smartly said she is out of this!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

Niharika is quite possessive about Adi and it was great to hear her address Adi as hers!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Adi is now ready to confess his love to Niharika aur usne ek plan bhi banaya hai!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

Adi mein Raj ke aane se ab confidence badh gayi hai and he said ab Niharika ko ussi se pyaar karna hoga!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Niharika is thinking about Adi on the terrace and keeps hearing his voice!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😍 😍 😍 😍

Adi praises Niharika and goes close to her making her heart beat faster!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

But Niharika wakes up and it turns out to be a dream!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Niharika is wondering ke yeh khwaab tha ya haqeeqat!!!!!!😕 😕 😕 😕Indeed it was a beautiful dream!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

I am sure Adi jaldi hi Niharika ko propose karega and hopefully yeh khwaab haqeeqat mein badal jaayega!!!!

Edited by Shaina_b - 15 years ago

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Sumi_162710

@Sumi_162710

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Posted: 15 years ago

#580

Awe.....that was sooooooooo cute!! I loved the convo btwn Adi n Raj....and Niha ka achanak aise react karna n Anu n Pooja ki teasing it was just awesum!! And wo khwab....kitna dhasoo khwab tha wo....isse behtar koi khwab hai hi nahi....and I hope Adi ka plan kamyab ho jaye....w8ing to knw uske pyare se dil ne kya socha hai apne pyar k liye.....pls continue soon.

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