Mohabbat:(RP ff)-imp note on pg 81.

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hi iam priti and this is my first ff on rajeev & priyanka as i have recently joined this forum.Hope u all will enjoy this ff of mine.

Yeh kahani hai mohabbat ki,uske ehsas ki,mohabbat ke is jazbe ko samajhne ki,aur use mehsus karne ki.Kyunki mera manna yeh hai ki mohabbat kahin bhi,kabhi bhi,aur kisi ko bhi kisi ke saath ho sakta hai,aur mohabbat ke is ehsas par kisi ka koi bhi zor nahin chalta hai.Kyunki mohabbat ka yeh jazba khuda ki den hai aur hamein iski ibadat karni chahiye.

MOHABBAT

Do Dilon Ko Jodne Wala Ehsas

Subah ki pehli kiran jahan sabko neend se jagati hai aur unhe taaza hone ka ehsas karati hai to unme ek naye umang ka sanchar hota hai jo unhe aage badhne aur kuch kar dikhane ki takat aur jazba deti hai......plz yaar apni yeh philosophy jhadna bandh karegi aur mujhe kuch der ke liye aur chain se sone degi......POOJA-GAZAL RAI-AKA-POOJA GHAI.

NIHARIKA CHOWDHARY-PRIYANKA BASSI........Ab maine aisa bhi kya keh diya hai jo ki tum mujh par itni bhadak rahi ho, main to sirf sobah ki thandi hawa ke saath-saath apne maan mein kuch shudh khayaalon ko lane ki koshish kar rahin hoon,par tumhe isse kya.

POOJA-Bilkul sahi kaha tumne ,jab tumhe maloom hai ki mujhe subah-subah is kism ki harkaton se chid hai to phir tum har subah apna yeh sada hua raag alaapna bandh kyun nahi kar deti ho😡 .

NIHARIKA-Tum aisa kyun bol rahi ho pooja.

POOJA-Kitni bar kaha hai tumse mujhe pooja nahi balki poo ya phir ja keh ke bulaya karo.

NIHA-Kyaaaaaaaaaaaa 😕,jaa, ab yeh kaun sa naya short cut name hai.

POO-Tum nahin samjho ki yeh naye zamane ka naya style funda hai got that 😉.

NIHA-Tumhare yeh naye zamane ki nayi soch tumhe hi mubarak ho u also got that😃.

POO-Haan haan tum to yehi kahogi u old fashioned girl😃.

NIHA-Kya kaha tumne main old fashioned hoon, haan main old fashioned hoon par kam se kam tumhari tarah besharam to nahin hoon na😡.

POO-Tumhe main besharam lagti hoon,oh god koi is ladki ko aaj ke fashion aur style ka kuch to sense do.🤪.

NIHA-Tumhari yeh sadi hui style aur fashion ka sense tum apne paas hi rakho ok, are kam se kam mere yeh old fashioned kapde mera tan to dhakte hain ,magar tumhare yeh so called fashionable kapde to woh bhi nahi karte.Kyunki mujhe to kam se kam yeh kapde ,kapde kam aur rumal zyaada lagte hain🤔.

POO-Ab apna yeh old aur new fashion ka raag aalaapna bandh karogi tum ,aur college chalne ki tyari karogi ya nahin.

NIHA-Main to kabse tyar baithi hoon,par tumhe to sone se hi fursat nahin milti hai,to tyar kya khak hogi,aur college kya khaak chalogi.Waise bhi tumhari wajah se hum lagbhag har roz hi late hote hain.

POO-Kyaaaaaaa.....😡,meri wajah se,niharika tum...........

NIHA-Ok ab zyaada gussa mat karo aur plz ek pyaari si 😊, de kar zaldi se tyar ho kar college chalo,kyunki hamari is behas ka to koi ant hai hi nahi.

POO-Magar phir hum log har roz ladte hain aisa kyun ?

NIHA-Kyunki hum ek doosre se pyaar bhi to karte hain,after all we are best of friends yaar.

POO-Sahi kaha tumne hum log ek doosre ke bilkul opposite hain but we are best buddies for life😃.

NIHA-Ok ab bahut behas ho gayi hai,baaki saari baatein hum college mein chalkar kar lenge.

POO-Thik kaha tumne parrrrrrrrrrr............

NIHA-Sssssssshhhhhhhhh ab bas baki baatein baad mein,hum log already late ho rahe hain aur waise aaj hamare college mein hamare naye proffessor bhi to aane waale hain,Tum bhul gayi kya.

POO-Agar bhul bhi gayi to kya tum to ho na mujhe yaad dilane ke liye,miss padhako😛.

NIHA-Ab chalein miss fashionable😉.

Ab yeh dono college mein pahunch gaye hain.

NIHA-Jaldi chalo pooja hum already late ho gaye hain,aaj main apna english ka lecture tumhari wajah se miss nahin karna chahti hoon.ok.

POO-Chal to rahi hoon ab kya rajdhani express ki daud lagayun.

NIHA-Aakhir tum itini lambi-lambi heals kyun pehanti ho,jab tumse thik se chala bhi nahi jaata hai.

POO-Aachcha ab bas bhi karo,lo hum log pahunch bhi gaye.

NIHA-Thank God.

POO-Thank God ko nahi balki mujhe karo samjhi🤔.

NIHA-May we come in sir.

PRINCIPAL-BC-PUNEET ISSAR-Yes.

NIHA&POO-Thanky sir.

POO-Yeh principal sir yahan kya kar rahein hain.

NIHA-Kahin aaj yeh to hamari class nahin lenge?

POO&NIHA-Oh noooooooooooo..............mar gaye.

SIR-Pardon.

NIHA&POO-😳,sorry sir nothing sir.

SIR-Aap log soch rahe honge ki aaj main yahan kya kar rahan hoon, well as u all know ki aapke naye english ke proffesor aaj se aapko join karne wale hain to main yeh anounce karne aaya hoon ki woh aaj se nahi balki kal se aapko join karenge.

POO-Sir hamare naye proffessor ka naam kya hai?

SIR-Mr.rai

POO-Mr raiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii😕.

End of part 1.

plz comment as your comments will really encourage me in continuing this ff.If u will not comment then iwill not continue this ff thanky.

PART 2

SIR-Yes mr.rai.Thanky ab main chalta hoon.Have a nice day.

Aur itna kehkar principal wahan se chale jaate hain.

POO-Ab yeh mr.rai kaun hai😕 ,mr.sharma kya kam the jo ab ek aur naye namone aa rahe hain.

NIHA-Tum aisa kaise keh sakti ho woh hamare naye proff. hain,kam se kam tum unki thodi to izzat kar sakti ho,abhi tak to woh hamare college main aaye bhi nahi hain ki tumne peeth peeche unki burayi karna shuru kar di

POO-Ab tum phir se apni ram katha lekar shuru mat ho jana ok , maine aisa to unke baare kuch bhi nahi kaha ,tum har baar meri baaton ka ulta matlab hi kyun nikalti ho .

NIHA-Kyunki tum hamesha ulta hi sochti ho.

POO-Ok baba ab bas bhi karo,is topic ko hum yahin bandh karte hain.

NIHA-Right aur ab lecture pe dhyan do ok.

Unki saari lectures khatam ho gayi hai,aur hamari pooja oops! sorry hamari poo ya phir jaa,kisi gehri soch main doobi hui hai.😍 .Aur woh log canteen ki taraf ja rahen hain.

NIHA-Halo kahan kho gayi,kahin tum...............Raaaa ke bare main to nahi soch rahi ho.

POO-Tumhe kaise pata chala😲.

NIHA-Ab mujhe nahi pata chalega to aur kise pata chalega,after all iam ur best friend,aur waise bhi 24 ghanto mese 20 ghante to tum raaaaa ke baare main hi sochti ho,aur uske baare main hi baate karti rehti ho,kyun sahi kaha na.Aur waise bhi aaj tumhara Raaaaaaa subah se kahin nazar nahin aa raha hai.

POO-Yeh ajooba kaise ho gaya😲.

NIHA-Ab kya hua?

POO-Kya hua? yeh tum pooch rahi ho.

NIHA-Kyun tumhe mere elawa yahan aur bhi koi nazar aa raha hai?

POO-nahin, balki ab to mujhe ,jo nahin hai woh bhi nazar aa raha hai.

NIHA-Yeh tum kya bol rahi ho nazar aa raha hai,nahi aa raha hai,mujhe to kuch bhi nahin samajh main aa raha hai.😕.

POO-Oh!Bhagoo.

NIHA-Ab yeh bhagoo kaun hai?i think u have gone mad🤪.

POO-Bhagoo matlab bhagwan yaar,ab isse zyada main ab tumko aur nahin samjha sakti.ok.Aur waise bhi tum meri baat ko talne ki bajaye uska jawaab do ki aakhir tum kabse mere nakshe kadam par chalne lagi,yeh to mujhe pata hi nahin chala.

NIHA-Kyaaaaaaa.....are tumhare sawaal ka jawaab to main tab doongi ,jab mujhe tumhara sawaal samjh main aayega😕.

POO-Yeh lo puri Ramayan khatam ho gayi,aur yeh poonch rahin hai ki aakhir Ram kaun the?

NIHA-Dekho tumhe jo bhi poochna hai woh saaf-saaf pucho ok.

POO-Ok as u say,tum kabse naamo ko short karne lagi?

NIHA-Naamo ko short😕.

POO-Yes dear,tum kabse RS ko raaaaaaaa bulane lagi,ab yeh to meri hi sangat ka asar hua na.

NIHA-Oh!God tum bhi na,kabhi bhi kahin bhi shuru ho jaati ho.Woh to galti se muh se nikal gaya tha, aur tumne itni choti baat ko kahan se kahan pahuncha diya.

POO-Achcha ab thik hai zyada bahane mat banayo,aur ab hum hostel chalte hain.

Ab dono hostel pahunch gayen hain,aur raat ho chuki hai dono apne bed par let kar baatein kar rahein hain.Tabhi pooja ka mobile bajta hai.

NIHA-Lo RS aur iska phir se shuru ho gaya.

POO-RS tum kahan ho ?kaise ho?tum aaj aaye kyun nahin?tum thik to ho na?kahin tumhe kuch ho to nahin gaya ?tum kuch bolate kyun nahin?HALO...HALO...

NIHA-Tum use kuch bolane dogi tab to woh bolega na.

POO-Oh!plz tum chup raho niha mujhe uski awaaz nahin aa rahi hai.😡.

NIHA-Ok baba main chup hi ho jaati hoon aur waise bhi tumhe to nahin ,par mujhe kal jaldi uthna hai,good🥱 night.

POO- Goodnight.

Aur pooja ka phone cut ho jaata hai,par phir bhi woh 5 minute tak halo.....halo....karke irritate😡 ,ho kar so jaati hai.🥱.

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Posted: 17 years ago
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nice start i think this mr rai is raj am i right any ways niced part 👏 👏
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should i continue or either close this topic plz guys comment yaar.
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hii priti...

dekho maine kaha tha k raat ko read karugi par maine sirf tumhaare liye abhi hi read kar liya😳 ok ab main tumhe FF padhkar yeh bolana chahti hoo ki tum yeh FF aage zarur conti karo bahot accha hai 😊 😊 aur naina aur pooja ki friendship bahot acche se batai hai tumne,naina ka pooja ko kahena tumhaare kapade mujhe rumaal lagate hai 😆 😆 aur mujhe lagata hai mr.rai rajveer hoga hai na,😉accha hai,😛mujhe FF accha laga tumhaara,tum zarur conti karana i m sure tumhe aur bhi acche comments milege 😊 😊 ok to UD soon.n this is 4 u 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏


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Edited by sanabmw - 17 years ago
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HEY GUYS MAINE PART2 KO PART 1 KE NEECHE HI UPDATE KAR DIYA HAI.PLZ ISSE PADH KAR MUJHE COMMENTS ZAROOR BHEJNA AUR NEXT UD MAIN AAPKE LIYE EK PYAARA SA SURPRISE HOGA.PAR TAB JAB AAP LOG MUJHE APNE PYAARE PYAARE COMMENTS BHEJENGE.THANKS.PRITI.
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hey priti...

tumne 2 part UD kiya hai par yaar 1 part k neache mat karo,b/c kisi ko pata nahin chalega k UD hui hai,jaise main karati hoo waise kiya karo tum bhi ok 😊 😊 aur ha ud bahot acchi thi i think RA raj hai aur sayad woh pooja ka F hai. 😳 😳 😳 chalo accha hai story kuch alag hai,aur ha ek aur baat tum mujhe jo bolana ho woh PM main bola karo mere FF par nahin ,ya to phir yahi apne FF par ok,waise tumhe PM karana aata hai ya nahin 😕 😕 agar nahin to main batati hoo,dekho jisako bhi PM karana ho usaki post k neache PM likha hua hoga bas waha click karana aur ek page open hoga us main subject aur msg type kar dena ,ok n this is 4 u 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Too good!!!!

Par yaar tune Niharika ko bilkul behenji type kyun banaya!!!Thoda modern banati!!!! 😭 😭 😭

Haan yeh RS Pooja ka boyfriend hai!!!!Par who is playing that role!!!!

Aur yeh Raj kab entry marega??Or is Mr.Rai Raj??



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Posted: 17 years ago
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very very nice start.......also liked d convo of pn......liked der charachters too.....

cont soon
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hey dear...its aweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeesum and a great ff.....woooooow....can't wait now to read further...dialogues my god..from where have u got these beautiful and funny dialogues...its really faabulous....update soon and post the next part in the other page not on page 1...and thanku sooooooooo much for starting this new ff....braaaavo...this is for u 👏
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too good 👏 .awesome.plz cont soon..........

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