'Zindagi – Ek Safar'Ep:34(Above18yrs plz) - Page 17

bhoomi i am tears after reading this part every word was in place bravo 👏

Awww poor Etansh......Kaya is a useless person 😡

Originally posted by: rajeevskitu

hi bhoomi! i'm a silent reader...... i read many of ur stories... but this is the one which is very touchy and moved my heart.........
3 cheers for ur awesome skills 👏........ keep up the good work.......
take care....

Hi , so ncie to get ur comments... and it feels so special and thoguh u r silent readers u felt liek replygin this time.. thats makes me feel that the story has something ...😃So glad to know that this story has touched u..awww my skils.. i am just trygin hard to improve and all such appreciation make me really glad for my effort... take care....😃

Originally posted by: golu_1677

Oh my God poor etansh. feeling bad for him. This part made me cry felt very sad today. 😭

U have written it beautifully. i have just loved it.

Hi Golu dear... Yup these dasy hildren have more stres than elders.. as we put our headche on them as well... ayaa I made u cry.. now dotn know if that shoudl make me feel nice or not.. but the part tocuhed u and thats what i want...ur encouragmetn makes me really work harder... take care..

Originally posted by: SuhanaSafar

sorry, i can't write long reviews right now because there's too much going on in my life. But I read all the chapters, and they are wonderful! I feel so bad for Vyom, Etansh and Pari.

Hi Rabia... hey come on.. no way I am not goginto take sorry from my friends.. So sorry nahi bolneka.. Can understnad dear.. long reviews am just touched by a single line as well as the effort to reply makes me feel so glad... btu yup if certain segmetns r dicussed i get to know the effect of the part...😊 I am really happy that u liked the episodes...hmm in reality too a simple problem and we dont have an option btu to complicate it... so ya Etansh , Vyom and Pari will have to go trhoguh it..

Originally posted by: nisisanjh

Oh No .......howwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww...whyyyyyyyyyyyyyy... i m feeling so bad ....i knw love is not abt just luk into ecah othrs eyes n spnd the life happily ...reality or practically cms in between n shttrs the beautiful dream...whatever Vyom said was abslty right,there is just no othr way but dil ka kya karein?

Etansh ..oh poor kid... i m feeling like giving him awarm hug ... Beautifully written Bhoomi .. but i also knw that Parikrama too is mature...she 'll undrstand the circmtnces...lets see what happns next ... yeh pyaar itna dard kyon lata hai apne sath?

Hi Sara... dear.. hope u dogin well... u know what when i read that almost all here knew Vyom will say no.. i wanted to see if the reason Vyom gives and the way I putforward the sitaution from hsi side does brign some shock or touched feelgin..and with ur commetn i think i did my bit here... I am not trygin a differnt but a new feel to the sitaution....Vyom is right and if we see in our world around there r so many Vyom but where do we see them shown as it is.. . Dil kya karein..but when u r in love u just dont want the love to be the reason that the loveone goes throguh mor eprobelms..

Pyaar to dard dega. kyunki pyaar mey utni dard jhelney ki takkat hoti hai..isiliye pyaar ko dard lena ka haq hai.. waise what Parikrama does if she knows.. hmm.. lets se...

Originally posted by: monikaseth

just finish last 3 parts bhoomi i am speeechless you done awesome 👏 Last part make me cry i feel realy bad 😭 😭 😭 bhoomi you are awesome writer 👏

HI Monika dear... glad u liked the lst 3 parts.. spechless hogayii aww.. dont know what the parts did but I can feel it really touched everyones heart.. .. last part made u cry.... hmm dotn kow... maine rulaadiya yeh sochkey itni khushi to nahi hoti hai... but phir aisi story likhni bhi to thi..jahan I can touch the heart with intesnity.. All ur apreication makes me wonder do i deserve that much.. but i will take as compliment. and work harder.. take care dear... glad u like readin the story...

Originally posted by: jyothi_cool

bhoomi i am tears after reading this part every word was in place bravo 👏

Hi Jyothi... ab no tears yaar..but i dont know how to react.. i did write to brign the intensity of the pain Vyom was gogin trhoguh.. glad u liked the story and my work... luv u ..tc😊

Originally posted by: togepe30

Awww poor Etansh......Kaya is a useless person 😡

Hi Vandu.. u feel bad for Etansh..hmmm Kaya.. hehehe yup and scuh people do exist.. what to do..😕

Episode: 30

Parikrama's parents decide she will be leaving Jalandhar and going back to Mumbai and that will help her to change her mind. She was to leave after the silver jublee celebrations of Dr. Anand's Aids care centre. Parikrama along with Vaibhav, Anurama and Inder attended the event. The event had a charity exhibition and aution for charity. Later in the evening there was orchestra and dinner to follow. Parikrama knew that Vyom would be singing in the orchestra band which Dr. Anand had told her before, she was really excited to listen to Vyom and his singing along with it to meet Etansh. She didn't knew what would happen after the event... will she return to Mumbai?.. or try and stay here..? But she wanted to enjoy this day the present itself…

Vyom came on the stage and he sang few songs as it was requested by some patients and Vaibhav looked at him and clapped .. Parikrama was surprised why Vaibhav is more excited to see and hear Vyom. Even Inder looked really glad to see Vyom singing and enjoying himself… Parikrama was confused, Etansh saw Parikrama and went and Sat next to her, they gigelled talking and Parikrama brought something for him to eat. Vyom felt like taking Etansh away from her but he couldn't and knew Etansh can get really disturbed… he also knew Parikrama will be leaving for Mumbai soon…

As the last song came… Vyom called up Etansh on stage , Etansh and Vyom both sang together…

Ek pyar ka nagma hai, maujon ki ravaani haiZindagi aur kuch bhi nahin, Teri meri kahaani hai Vyom took Etansh close and sang the next lines…with his eyes teary...Toofaan to aana hai, aakar chale jaana haiBaadal hai yeh kuch pal ka, chhaakar dhal jaana haiParchhaaniyan reh jaati, reh jaati nishaani haiZindagi aur kuch bhi nahinTeri meri kahaani hai Etansh in his cute voice sang these linesTu dhaar hai nadiya ki, main tera kinaara hoonTu mera sahaara hai, main tera sahaara hoonAankhon mein samandar hai, aashaaon ka paani haiZindagi aur kuch bhi nahinTeri meri kahaani haiEveryone clapped Parikrama had tears while all gave them a standing ovation. Etansh was so happy with the applause of everyone and as his father took him in his arms gave him a ride… Vaibhav as well as Inder went towards Vyom and congratulated him for his singing while Parikrama was glowing with happiness as they do respect him she could really sense... Soon Etansh saw Parikrama standing with tears of happiness in her eyes and he got down and ran towards her. Vyom just smiled at the love they both have Parikrama opened her arms and felt giving Etansh a tight hug.. Etansh smiling eyes made her feel, so much happiness is filled in her heart…Etansh came close to her and he kissed Parikrama's cheek and before Parikrama could hold him he fell down and was breathless…he fainted and Parikrama was shocked and she screamed "Etansh…!!! Kya ho raha hai tumhe bacchey. Get up my child..". She looked towards Vyom and screamed.. her eyes had tears and she was not able to understand what was happening… Her hands were shivering, she took Etansh in her arms and rushed towards Vyom, Vyom realised Etansh had fainted and went close and took Etansh from her arms… Parikrama looked into his eyes and was shattered with fear of what has happened to him…. While Vyom eyes made her understand.. he knows what happen... they ran into the hospital and the doctor came along behind them… Mamta ka Saayaa nahi, Pita ki chaaya haii,Umra chooti si, Gamm ka dufan uspar bhi,Ab mamta miltey miltey kya Chhinjayegi?,Kya Masum Zindagi iss dard mey dumtodd jayegi?Both gave Etansh to the Doctor .. and the doctor asked them to sit outside… Parikrama was crying and Vyom was standing still..no tears in his eyes… Anurama felt a bit unwell and Vaibhav took her home, Inder knew Parikrama wants to ask Vyom and he just went outside telling he will be waiting for her and will drop her home as she calls him. Aaj Ek darrd to baatna hoga,Aaj Ek sawaal to dena hoga,Aaj dard uspaar bhi chaya hai,Aaj Dillo mey tufaan ko uthna hai.. _____________________________________________________________________

wow bhoomi lovely part cont soon

wow bhoomi lovely part cont soon

Sorry not not com. earlier..Etansh heart ailment 😭 hope he recovers

Seriously i don't have words..this ff has really touched a cord...one gets so emotional reading yaar...just fab stuff..