(FF-What If) Updt.*part b.*pg.127 - Page 8

Originally posted by: hrhr

it was not good 😕

i dont lyk it 😕

but i just loved it
while reading i was so lost that i thought the actul confession seen is in front of my eyes
very well done

keep writing

and navertheless thanx for posting

OMG...!!...I was scared for a minute thinking wat was rong wid it...!!😆

wheeeww...!!....thanx a lott...!!..I really appreitiate it...!!....Thanx a tonn...!!!😊😉

Originally posted by: prernawaghray

hey 😊
thanks for the pm 😉
this part was chhhhoooo chweeet yaar
very nice confession simple yet sweet
loved it a lot n ya i also like that part where u included armaan's signature dialog
main aire gaire logon par dhyan nahi deta
u could have emaphasized on it like ridz retorting back n their small bickering
well nevewrtheless it was really good
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Thanx a lott...!!...I really apperitialte it...!!...frm mext time I will make sure that I emphasisize more on the expressions and other stuff 2...!!

M really thankful 2 u that u critisised my wrk..!!...tahnx a tonnnnnnnn...!!😳

Originally posted by: taj.antivirus

awesome..!!

awesome..!!


hope aal dis happens in DMG to0..!!

Thanx a lott...!!....

Originally posted by: nirali_shah91

awesmeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee waitin 4 d nxt thxxxxx

Thanx a lott...!!..

will definately update it soon...!!😃😃😃

awsome .. wowo ridhimaa.. this part is jus too good.. keep it up

Originally posted by: Zarwa

awsome .. wowo ridhimaa.. this part is jus too good.. keep it up

Thanx a lott di...!!...I am glad u liked it...!!

Originally posted by: ksdbstjodi

Di....no more debates plz....!!.....😛

Thanx a lot...U have kept my inspirations up...!!...I will definately try 2 update it soon...!!...but for that I will have 2 find new story..!!...so wish me luck...!!...hopefully I will update it by minday-tuesday coz M having xam on monday...so...letz c wen will I get time...!!😊😊

ok dear as u wish

ALL THE VERY BEST FOR BOTH UR EXAM AND UR FF and my wishes will allways be with u

ok dear will be waiting for ur ff and i know u will do best in ur exam again ALL THE BEST FOR UR EXAM

and inform me about ur exam after writing it