(FF-What If) Updt.*part b.*pg.127 - Page 7

Originally posted by: cutesam

That was chooooooooo chweeeeeeeetttttt.
Awesome part 👏

aww...Thanx a lott...!!

Originally posted by: yachna

hey wow yaar bth d concepr wre realy diff nd vryy ncely u hv writtn hatts of 2 u yaar jst lvd it how ncely rahul handle ths nd do pyar karne walo ko mila diya hayeeeeeeeeeeeeeee wonderfulllllllllll..........ridz fir bhag gayi wow too goooooooooood...........lvd it
cont soooooooooon
luv yachu

Thanx a lot yaacha..it really means a lot 2 me..Thanx..will update it soon...!!😳😳😳

awwwwwwww
dat was great if only dat hapned lool
really nce updte
aw great seein rahul playin da cupid as wel
gd job really lkin ur wrk
thx 4 da pm
n updte soooon luv niz

hey ridhima first of all let me tell u one thing arey yaar i said u before iam not a that great writer but i surely accept karan aka ram is superb great writer u take him as ur insipiration not me iam very lazy and i wont write that nicely i know that
ok dear now comming to ur part
its really awesome as i said u before i love ur concept a lot thats really awesomely written hatss off to u 👏 loved it dear really i hope this happens me too waiting for confession and rahul is the only hope for me
yaar u mixed romance also great really loved it the way u write is mind blowing jjust u made me speachless
arey ye kya phirse bhaag gayyi ridz 😆 😆
thanks for ur pm
plsssss update it supersoon

Originally posted by: sweet-niz

awwwwwwww
dat was great if only dat hapned lool
really nce updte
aw great seein rahul playin da cupid as wel
gd job really lkin ur wrk
thx 4 da pm
n updte soooon luv niz

Thanx a lott.....I really apprirtiate ur compliment...!!....will update soon...!!😳😳

Originally posted by: urmila_17

hey ridhima first of all let me tell u one thing arey yaar i said u before iam not a that great writer but i surely accept karan aka ram is superb great writer u take him as ur insipiration not me iam very lazy and i wont write that nicely i know that
ok dear now comming to ur part
its really awesome as i said u before i love ur concept a lot thats really awesomely written hatss off to u 👏 loved it dear really i hope this happens me too waiting for confession and rahul is the only hope for me
yaar u mixed romance also great really loved it the way u write is mind blowing jjust u made me speachless
arey ye kya phirse bhaag gayyi ridz 😆 😆
thanks for ur pm
plsssss update it supersoon

Di....no more debates plz....!!.....😛

Thanx a lot...U have kept my inspirations up...!!...I will definately try 2 update it soon...!!...but for that I will have 2 find new story..!!...so wish me luck...!!...hopefully I will update it by minday-tuesday coz M having xam on monday...so...letz c wen will I get time...!!😊😊

it was not good 😕

i dont lyk it 😕

but i just loved it
while reading i was so lost that i thought the actul confession seen is in front of my eyes
very well done

keep writing

and navertheless thanx for posting

hey 😊
thanks for the pm 😉
this part was chhhhoooo chweeet yaar
very nice confession simple yet sweet
loved it a lot n ya i also like that part where u included armaan's signature dialog
main aire gaire logon par dhyan nahi deta
u could have emaphasized on it like ridz retorting back n their small bickering
well nevewrtheless it was really good
👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

awesome..!!

awesome..!!


hope aal dis happens in DMG to0..!!

waitin fr nxt part..!! 😉