(FF-What If) Updt.*part b.*pg.127 - Page 6

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Posted: 17 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: nirali_shah91

awwwwwwww love it Riddhima...!!! nice wrk hun...!!! ofcourse i remember u hun...!!! nway tht was awesme do continue soon...!!! glad it concenteates alot on AR cuz i miss them... 😭 😭 😭 but this WAS BEYON AWESME LOVE IT THX A MILLION!!! 😃

OMG...!!....Thanx a lott di....!!....

I am really happy 2 c dat u liked it soo much...!!...will definately continue soon...!!

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Posted: 17 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: teenb12

🤗 wow riddhima!!!i never knew that u were gud at both sigs and ff...this is awsesome...u rocked it..totally 👏 i really really really wish that something along the lines of this would happen in reall..lol..but ur ff says it all..from the beginning of the trip to the end..so wonderful job..and hey u should write ffs more often 👏 ..luv ya 😳

Aw...Thanx a lot tanya...!!..I am really really really glad u liked it...!!...even i wish sumting like dis happens...

I wuld definately try 2 rite more often..Thanx a lott...!!

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Posted: 17 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: *Cutiepie*

aww this is cho sweet!!! 😳

i really like it,& im looking forward for more from u :)

Thanx a lott...!!...Will update it soon...!!😊

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Posted: 17 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: redi50

cho cho cho sweet
cute and intresting
and you are repeting the jungle part
but still cute
plz do continue

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Thanx a toonnn...!!

I wuld definatly try not 2 repeat anything in the other parts....!!

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Posted: 17 years ago
#55

Hello Friendz....!!

I am really glad and thankful 2 u for liking and appriciating my wrk soo much...!!

Well I am new 2 it and frankly was not expecting it 2 b gud at all...but I was feeling really happy after reciving all ur compliments for my wrk...!!

2 dy....I am gonno update it again...!!

But 2dy it will b a diffrent story..!!...as I have alredy written in the begining of my ff that every story wuld start frm the begining and wuld not at all be linmked with previous 1...

It is a new concept in ff's [I think]...and culd also help ppl who did not read my previos part...as it is not in continuty they dnt need 2 read d previos part...!!

M gonno update it as soon as possible and wil try 2 PM every person..!!...But I am really sorry in advanced if I miss sum1...

Thanx a lott again guys....!!😳

Edited by ksdbstjodi - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#56

Hy freindz...!!

UPDATE TIME....!!

before i start through it I wuld like 2 thank sum ppl...1stly urmila di and ram bhaiya...because the have been my biggest inspiration...!!and secondly saaniya di and redi50 who critisised my wrk and made me rite better...THANX A LOT GUYS..I OWE U..!!

WHAT IF RAHUL MAKES RIDDHIMA AND ARMAAN MEET??

INTRODUCTION :

As we all saw in yesterday's episode [15th may'08] that rahul knows everything about armaan and riddhima...so I thought that what wuld happen if rahul is on the kission 2 make dem meet....lets c does he achives his goals or not??

HERE I GO...!!

Suppose the plan of boys 2 scrare of girls is accomplished and they are succed....and the girls are called 2 sanjeevni by Dr.Shashank and even the 1 week suspension period of boys is also over....and the boys finally meet their lady loves...

>>In the locker room

Every1 is present except Armaan....

He enters...

Muskaan {M}..Anjali{An}..Atul{At}...rahul{Ra}...all wish him good morning....

Ra:Kya baat hian ridhdima....hum sab ne armaan ko morning wish kiya lkin aapne nahi...

Armaan luks 2wards rahul in a very anoyed manner and makes a really dirty face

Riddhima{R} : Hi armaan...!!

Armaan did not reply...[he was in a very mischivious mood..though rahul's reaction spoiled a bit of it...but he still wanted 2 tease ridz.....]

An:kya hua armaan??..sab thik to hain na

A{Armaan}:kuch nahi aanji....y??

An:Den y arent u repling 2 riddz?

A:maine aaire gairein logo ki baat pe dhyan nahi deta...

>>Suddenly, the operator calls : saarein interns nurse staion pe report karein...

All of them leave excepr Rahul and Riddhima...

Ra:Riddhima mujhe aapse kuch baat karni hhain...

Suddenly Armaan cums : arre rahoooolll...nurse station nahi aana hian kya??

Ra:Maine aa jaunga..tu ja na...

A:Aise kaise chale jaau..U are my friend na....& he pulls rahul out of the locker room

He was aware of wat was going on wid rahul...and he didnt want rahul 2 start of the topic again..as he waas already very hurt...!!

>>At the nurse station...

Dr.K : Dr.riddhima...rahul..armaan...general ward

Dr.anjali....muskaan..and atul...OPD..

all othe interns go 2 their duties...

>>In OPD...

Rahul is trying 2 find a way 2 start of a conversation wid riddhima but is always stopped by some or the other problems....

After ther duties are over....Ra:Ridhdima aap bahut thaki hui lag rah hian....wanna go out for a walk..

R:sure...

A:arre rahul..chal na cooffee pene chaltein hian....

Ra:nahi...abhi nahi...m not in a mood...

Then he tries 2 stop ridhdima:tum is rahul ke ssath mein mat jana....pata chal kuch bhi kar dega...

Rahul was not at all in a mood 2 argue wid armaan at that time..and neither riddhima was...she said : wo mera dost hian....and walked wid rahul..

>>On the terrace...

Rahul suggested 2 walk on the terrace so that no1 culd disturb them b/w therir conversation...

Ra:riddhima muje aapke ayr armaan ke baarien mein sab kuch pata hian....

R trying 2 act as normal as she culd:ye tum kya kehe rahe ho rahul??

Ra:wahi jo sach hain...aap aur armaan ek doosre se pyar karte ho na....??

R[in tears..trying her best 2 control them]:Nahi tumse kisne kaha??

Ra:Ridhdima...jhut mat boliye...meri bhi aakein hian..maine anndha nahi hun jo kuch nahi dekh sakta....

R:tum kehe kya chahatein ho??

Ra:achha riddhima....aap aise nahi manegi..rukiye..mein aapko bata hun ki mein kehena kya chahata hun...Jab Armaan kasauli gaya tha tab aap itni khoyi khoyi aur uddas kyun reheti thi....jab mein armaan ko kasauli se waapas nahi la paya tab aap gaye use mamane...kyun??

R:Because mein uski dost hun...

Ra:Dost to hun sab hi hian na.....mein bhi uska dost hu...to phir mo mere ssath kyun nahi aaya??...leking jab aap gaye to wo aane to taiyyar ho gaya??

R:wo...wo....woo....

Ra:Maine bata hun kyun.....coz he loves u and u love him...agar aap usese pyar nahi karti to ssaaari chits pe apna naam nahi likhti riddhima....

R[trying really hard 2 control her emotions but cant]:haan meian armaan se pyar karti thi...thi..[emphasising on thi]

Ra:Thi??.....aap abhi bhi usese utna hi pyar karti hian....

R:Nahi.... maine usese pyar nahi karti...mein us armaan se pyar karti thi jo sanjeevni ki jaan tha...jo sabko hassata reheta tha.....

Ra:aur isleye aapne use purana wala armaan bana chaha...

R[bursted into tears]:lekin ab hamare beech kuch nahi hian...

Ra:hain riddhima..abhi abhi hian....agar kuch nahi hota to aap abhi roti nahi....are haan....agar aap armaan se pyar nahi karti to aap uske liye canteen mein sabke ssamne dance bhi nahi karti.....

R:Haan...mein armaan se abhi bhi utna hi pyar karti hun..lekin kya fayeda..meine uska itna dil dukhaya hain....wo to ab mujhse kabhi pyar nahi karega....

Ra:Riddhima pyar koi fool [flower] nahi hian..jo ek baar murjh gaya to waapas nahi ugega....he still loves u...

R[really shoked and happy]:tum sach kehe ahe ho rahul...

Ra:Haan...jaiye..aur manaiye apke pyar ko..isse pehe zayada der ho jaye...!!

Riddhima runs towards the stairs and is shocked 2 c armaan their...he was listening 2 all the conversation b/w her and rahul..and even he was crying....

On seeing him ridz culd not control herself and hugged him tightly...ans said : mujhe maaf kardo armaan....muhe laga tha ki hum ek doosre ke liye nahi bane hian....coz jab bhi hum milte judaa ho jate.....but no matter wat I still wanna say u sumthin "I LOVE U"....

On listening 2 this armaan was full of hapiniess and hugged her even more tightly....!!

R:Chalo ab mein jata hun...mera kaam ho gaya..

A:Ruko rahol.....ye sab tumhari vagaha se hi hua hian..thanx...!!....

Rahul leaves...

A:I luve u 2..now promise me that u wont leave me agian like this.......plz promise me...!!

R:I promise u....

Armaaan gets hold of her...and den kissies him on his forhead...den cheeks...den neck..and was going 2 kiss her on her lips..but reiddhima got rid of her hold and ran downstairs...

HOPE U WULD HAVE LIKED IT...

PLZ DO COMMENT/CRTITISIZE....😳😳

Edited by ksdbstjodi - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#57
both the parts were interesting, cute, and the concept was also different
hats off yaar for wrtitng these ff
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Posted: 17 years ago
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That was chooooooooo chweeeeeeeetttttt.
Awesome part 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
#59
hey wow yaar bth d concepr wre realy diff nd vryy ncely u hv writtn hatts of 2 u yaar jst lvd it how ncely rahul handle ths nd do pyar karne walo ko mila diya hayeeeeeeeeeeeeeee wonderfulllllllllll..........ridz fir bhag gayi wow too goooooooooood...........lvd it
cont soooooooooon
luv yachu
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: raika_dec

both the parts were interesting, cute, and the concept was also different
hats off yaar for wrtitng these ff

OMG..!!..Thanx a lot radhika...!!

That was soo sweet of u..I am gald u commented...!!

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