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Posted: 17 years ago
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update plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz now only asap with long part.
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update plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz now only asap with long part.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey frds thanks for u lovely comments
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Posted: 17 years ago
#44
Awesome!!!Too good!!!!

But yaar Navin ki toh body mili thi phir woh zinda kaise?? šŸ˜•

Waise I loved the clues....sata rahe thhe Naina ko Navin aur Raj milke...very bad!!!!

Party was too good!!!And I loved Naina's sari!!!

But yaar Raj and Naina know they love each other.......at the last hug it was a silent confession!!!Phir aise behave karna???

I just loved Naina taking care of Raj.Uska room saaf karna aur usse medicine khilana.She behaves like his wife already 😳 !!!!!

Par yaar did Aalekh have a double meaning when he said to Raj ki der na kare???Did he also mean in confession of love???

Haan jaldi I hope they confess!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey

amazing.....suoerb...too good....the fanfic is very interesting.

Please do keep up the story and update as soon as you can.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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update plzzzzzzzzzzzz now only asap with long part now only.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hiiiiiiiii friends here is update....
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Next day morning raj is in his bed and naina comes in his room as the room was not locked she sees him............wo maasumiyat,aur usska cute smile......haiiiiiiii........to naina usse dekhte baithi hai...
he wakes up and sees naina
r :naina tum yaha kya kar rahi ho..
n :vo sir aapoki davayi ka time ho gaya tha to issi liye mai yaha aayi aur dekha aapke kamreka lock khula hua tha issi liye
r :aap andar aa gayi rt.........
naina just shakes her head..
r:aur vo bhi bina permission ke( raj was pretending that he is serious)
n :(made a sad face and said)sorry sir...
r :arre naina mai to mazak kar raha tha
r :vo chauhan aur gunny yahe the abhi uthke gaye hai issi liye shayad darvaza khula tha...
n :sir aub aap kaise hai..
before raj could answer dr.s enters room and..
dr.s :yeah batana to mera kaam hai cadet..
r :arre aap itni subh subh kya baat hai s..
dr s:mai aapko ye yaad dilane aayi hoon ke aaj apko shehar jana hai apne cheakup ke liye..
r :zaruri hai kya.....
dr.s : haan aap itne careless kaise ho sakte hai aur aaj mai aapke saath nahia aa sakti to aap....naina ke saath chale jayeye kyon ki abhi aur gunny busy hai vo naye cadets aane wale hai na issi liye (she said this with a naughty smile seeing raj ) .......waise naina tum free to hona varna mai kise aur cadet se pooch lungi?????????
n :mai free hoon mam me chali jaungi..sir aap davayi le lijiye ga mai abhi chalti hoon
and naina leaves
r :shalini ye aap mujhe asse kyon dekh rahe the....aur aub hass kyon rahi hai
dr.s :captain aap sharmate hue bahot acche lagte hai aur hume aap party kab de rahe hai
r : party kyon........
dr.s: arre hume aap ko nainake saath akele rehne ka itna accha mauka diya hai humme iss baat ke liye ek party bhi nahi milege...
r was serious
dr.s:kya hua raj...tum pareshan kyon ho..
r :kya ye sahi hai...
dr.s :kya
r :mai aur naina...u know what...aur navin vo kya kahe ga.......vo mujhe galat na samaj baithe.....
dr.s :jitna mai navin ko janti hoon usse ye yakeen ke saath keh sakti hoon ke vo iss rishtey se bahot kush hoga aur..... mai ye bhi yakeen ke saath keh sakti hoon ke naina bhi tumse pyar karti hai...............par vo ye kabhi apne feeling express nahi karegi kyonki vo khudko tumhare iss halatki zimmedar manti hai
r :par ye sahi nahi hai...
dr.s :yehi to tumhe usse samjha na hai..aur issi liye maine aap logoko akele panki zarurat hai.........
r :thanks shalini...
dr.s :apko kya lagta hai..hum aapko he chod denge vo bhi party diye bagair..
r smiles:aate he party de dunga..
and dr.s leaves from there.... ............................................................ ..........................................
sorry for short ud..
love
ashu
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Posted: 17 years ago
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awesome too good very nice waitin for next asap with long part
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Posted: 17 years ago
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oo it was too short but the update was soo cute...convo was suuuuuuuperb...beautiful part dear...thanku soo much for this marvelous update...
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Too good!!!

Raj sleeping and Naina watching him was soooo cute 😳 😳!!!

I hope he proposes to her now!!!!But in style!!!!

Waise she has passed out by now I suppose .....or not??

Edited by Shaina_b - 17 years ago

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