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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: quietrajpri1623

it was amaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaazing.......i m at cloud 9 after reading today update...... šŸ˜› šŸ˜› šŸ˜› u deserve this... šŸ‘

thanks dear....

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Posted: 17 years ago
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update plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz now only asap with long part.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey Ashu...u had said that we will get our update tonight itself...then where is the update dear...please update
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Posted: 17 years ago
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part 4
n :aap sab yaha kya kar rahe hai

gunny :aap ka intazar..

maa :ha naina tujhe aane mai der kyon hua

n :vo bus kharab ho gaya tha

maa :tu fresh ho ja phir baat karenge ...tujhe bahot kuch bata hai...
after some time they all are sitting on dinning table naina has completed her food ..

n :koi mujhe bataye ga ye sab kya ho raha hai.

maa :tu jab detention center mai the to hame ye pata chala ke raj aur navin zinda hai.

g :par uss waqt undono ki halat theak nahi the aur unki jaan ko khatra tha,agar ye sach hum tumhe bata dete to tumhe jaan ko bhi khatra ho sakta tha issi liye humne tumse ye baat chupayi.

c :raj sir apne cadets ko me akele chodna nahi chate the to issi liye unhone gunny sir ko vaha bheja.

n :mujhe unse milna hai kaha hai vo..

g :vo aane wali the par unka flight ka kuch problem hogaya hai issi liye unhone kaha hai ke vo kal tumhe hotel pearl mai milne aaye ge.aur unho ne kaha hai ke baki cadets ko bhi vaha bulane ke liye kaha hai.

n :vo sab thek hai mai kar lungi par navin bhaya aur sirke bareme kuch batayege

c :sirne aap ke bhaya ke haath pe goli chalaye the taki baki sab log jo door the vo sir ko goli chalate hue dekh sake.

g :aur chobe navin ko vahase lekar mere pass aagaya.aur hum usse treatment ke liye us le gaye.

c :unhe slow posion kiya gaya tha issi ke vajeh se vo comma me chale gaye the..pure 3 saal lage unhe comma se bahar aane ke liye .

g :haan jab navin ne raj ke accident ka news tv me dekha to uss shock ki wajehse vo comma se bahar aa gaya aur aub vo bilkul theak hai.

n :aur raj sir vo kaise hai

g :vo uss accidentse bach to gaya..par vo bahot zakhmi tha uss ke haath poe aur parme goli lagi the aur vo hume jungle me behoosh mila kaafi khoon bhi beh gaya tha aur tab humne dr s ko contact kiya.par aub vo theak hai par usse puri tarah thek hone mai waqt lagega

phone rings and gunny speaks and gives it to naina
n :hello

navin :gudiya kaisi hai tu.

n :mujhe aap se baat nahi karni......aap mujhse itne din door rahe aapko ek bar bhi mere yaad nahi aayi....

navin :har pal humne kaise kata hai ye srif raj aur mai he jante hai...chaho to tum maa se puch lo jab vo hamare saath ek mahine the...

n :bhaya sir kaise hai

na :vo thek hai abhi so raha hai......aub mai phone rakh ta hoon.kal hotel me milenge aur waha humne party ke liye jagha book karvaya hai to apne frds ko aur abhi ko wahan leke aao ok

n :ok bhaya
and they hang up
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in kma aalekh is restless aur wo apni room ke chakkar kat raha tha kyon ki naina ka koi phone nahi aaya tha..

ud :kya dude raat ke 2 baje hai aur aap abhi bhi light off kyon nahi kar rahe hai hume sona hai.

aa :to tu soja maine tujhe mana kiya hai kya????????

ali :par aap itne pareshan ho kar kyon ghom rahe hai.kya baat hai

aa :pehle ye bata tu yahaan kya kar rah hai...

ali :hume aapke kamreme lights dekha to...par aap pareshan kyon hai

aa :vo naina ne kaha tha kam pura hote he vo phone karegi par usska phone nahi aaya.

ali :ye aapko kaise pata kyon ki aap ke pass to koi mobile nahi hai.

aa :tere moblie ki dukan hai na vo dekh apni kidaki mai baithe hai...
tabhi pooja show some light and aa goes out of boys hostel aur vo pooja ki khidakike neche khada hai aur pooja ek bucket me mobile rakhti hai aur neche ropese band kar neche pass karti hai

n :aa vo zinda hai maine unse phone pe baatki...aa vo zinda hai..

aa :haan..tu abhi kaha hai aur kiske saath hai.

n :tu mere fikar mat kar mai abhi chobejike gharpe hoon aur maa baba bhi yaha hai...unhe ye sab pehlese he pata tha..

aa :sir kaise hai unse tere baat hue..

n : nahi par vo aub thek hai

aa :tu yaha akub aa rahe hai aur yaha pe sab ko bhi batana hai ya nahi..

n :mai kal sham tak pahoch jaungi aur mere fikar mat karo mai gunny ki saath aa rahi hoon.

aa :aub ye ustad wahape kya kar raha hai...

n :vo mai aake sab batati hoon par tu sun sabse kehde ke kal mai party de rahe hoon hotel pearl me mere aate he hum vaha jayege aur neelu aur abhi sir ko bhi bata dena partyke bareme

aa: par vo bc hume kmase bahar janeki permission dega

n :gunny bcse baat kar lega..aub mai phone rakhti hoon...
bye
and she hangs up..
aa is still there...usse kuch samajme nahi aa raha hai ye sab ek sapna lag raha hai usse pata nahi chal raha hai ke vo kya kare.
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next morning in mess
aa informs all about party and all are very excited about party
pooja sherry and dr shalini went to shopping with ali huda and ud
aalekh went to neelu's place to inform her about party.
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so frds
i have done my job hope u like it
and i am waiting for ur comments
tc bye
love
ashu
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey Ashu,that was a great update dear....kaas old lrl mein bhi aisa hua hota...feeling very happy as RN r now gonna meet...extremely brilliant update...thanku soo much for this interesting update
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Posted: 17 years ago
#26
its aesome too good waiting for da next part asap.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#27
just caught up wid ur fic........

it realy awesome n different......
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keep it up n cont soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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HEY THE UPDATE WAS TOO GOOD šŸ‘ šŸ‘ šŸ‘ .. I JUS CANT WAIT ANYMORE 😃 SO JALDI UD KARDO PLS...
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Posted: 17 years ago
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update plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz asap with long part.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey dear....where r u...please update

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