dil se(updated on pg:25)

hey guy this is for first time iam writing so plz correct me where ever iam wrong

PART 1
Ek ladki apni hi duniya mai khoyi hue kadhi hai(she is standing at the tip of the hill )
Aaj usse apni manzil milgayi hai.par phir bhi vo kush nahi hai.(u guys r right she is naina)

Naina (in her thoughts) : jab mai detention center se aayi the to mujhe laga tha ke agar mai
navin bhaya aur sir ko bekasoor sabit kar dungi to mujhe chain aayega par aaj jab maine
apni manzil pale hai par phir bhi mujhe kushi nahi hui .Aaj mere saath mere sare dost hai
maa baba hai par phir bhi mai apne app ko akela pa rahi hoon bhaya.mai aap ko aur sir ko
bahoot miss kar rahi hoon.

Aur tabhi wahaaalekh aata hai

aa :mai jaanta hoon naina tu yahi sooch rahi hai na jinke liye tune ye sab kiya vo aaj bhi tere
saath nahi hai yahi na.....

naina is still silent

aa :par aaj vo desh bhakt kehlayege ye unke liye sabse kushi ki baat hai.

tabhi waha saare cadets aate hai( i mean ud ali....)

ud :hey guys tumne party ke bareme kuch socha hai.

pooja :mere battery to kabse charge honeke liye tayyar hai.

huda :to bata phoolen party ke liye kaha chale.

naina :tum log jao.

Tabhi pechese aavaz aati hai
party ke hostke bina party kaise hogi...
naina mudke dekhti hai to vo abhi ko apne peche pati hai

abhi :hann naina ye tumhari jeet hai tumhare vishwas ki jeet hai.

naina :par aap logoke siva mai ye sab nahi kar pati.

huda :to theek hai isska matlab tum party mai aavogi

pooja :aur party kaha hogi????

naina :kma ke mess me

tabhi suriji aur shalini vaha aate hai

suriji :to partyki saari zimmedari hamari.

naina :sherry kaha hai(sherry is daughter of lala and she helped naina to prove raj and
navin innocent)

aa :vo lalase mili aur apne kamare mai chali gaye(lala and major were sent to jail)
naina : mai usse milke aati hoon

huda :par 8 baje mess me aa jana.

naina just noods and leaves

aa :sir naina aaj bhi apna gum bhula nahi payi.

abhi :jante hai par usse sab kuch bhulana he hoga.

aa :(slowly says) jo shayad kabhi mumkin nahi

kyon ki aalekh janta hai ke naina raj se bahoot pyar karti hai.
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There was a knock on the door and sherry opens the door.

sherry :naina

n :vo actually mai tumhe trhanks kehna chahti the aur ..

s :aur..

n :aur sorry bhi

s :vo kyon

n :meri vajehse tum apne papa se door hogaye

s :mai apne papa ke saath kabhi the he nahi jo unse ho jau...
vaise naina party kab hai.

n :vo actually aaj raat 8 baje..

s : i vll be there

n :ok bye mai chalti hoon.
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............................................................ ............................................................ ......At some place 2 person were talking on phone

1 :vo dono jail chale gaye.

2 : mai janta tha naina jo chate hai vo haasil karke rahti hai.

1 :to theak hai vaha sab ko bata dena aub mai rakti hoon.

2 :aaj jo letter tumhe diya gaya hai usse apni manzil par pahocha dena.

1 : ok..
the y hag up.
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............................................................ ............................................................ ......Its 8 o clock and they all r in mess every one was enjoying the party.
n :aalekh ajj mat pe plz
aa : jas din tu kush hogina uss dinse apun daru pena chod dega.
naina just leaves from there
all r enjoying the party and naina is standing at window someone throws a stone wrapped in a
paper tat hits naina.she opens it and reads the message.

n :" jo kuch bhi tumne kiya usske liye thanks..
thanks a lot...gudiya"
and naina was shell shocked.
and she goes out but finds no one.aalekh follows her.

aa :kya hua to aise partyse bhaag ke kyon aaye

n :vo actually mai vaha pe kadhi the aur kisine ye pheka.
she shows the paper he reads the message

aa : haan tu ne kma ko band honese bachya aur lala uar uss nair ko under kar vaya isseliye kisene ye kiya hoga.

n :tu samaj nahi raha hai aalekh ye sirki hand writing hai aur sirf bhaya he mujhe gudiya keh kar bulate the.
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tats it friends
plz tell me how was tat if u really liked this one then i will continue.
and plz do comment so tat i can rectify myself
love
ashu

Originally posted by: quietrajpri1623

hey sweety,please continue....its faaaaaaaaaaabulous...thanks for starting this new RN ff....i love the whole part....continue soon

thank u sooooooooooooo much

i vll soon update

tc

bye

awesome too good very nice waiting for next asap.

awwwwwwww that was such a great start pleaseeeee continue soon and the title is so cute dil se hmmmmmm so let me guess navin and raj are alive yipee!!! once again great part 👏 👏

take care 😃
yasmin

Originally posted by: iqbal-pallavi

awwwwwwww that was such a great start pleaseeeee continue soon and the title is so cute dil se hmmmmmm so let me guess navin and raj are alive yipee!!! once again great part 👏 👏

take care 😃
yasmin

thanks yasmin

and i vll update today.

tc dear

bye

interesting ud 👏 .plz cont soon.........

part 2
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aalekh and naina are in room
aa :par yeh kaise ho sakta hai....
naina saying nothing
aa :isske bareme sabko bolna hai ya nahi.
n :abhi nahi.....par aalekh tu to sir ki handwriting pehchanta hai na.
aa :haan par mujhe lagta apun logoko isse ek bar expert se check karvana chaheye
naina just nods
aa :to mai abhi jata hoon vaise bhi party chal rahe hai apun aasani se bahar jasakta hai.
a :theak hai tu abhi ja.
and this conversation is heard by someone standing near door.
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In party
abhi :ali aap ne nainako kahi dekha hai.

ali :nahi sir aur yaha aalekh bhi bhi nahi hai.

pooja and sherry comes there.

pooja :sir maine unko bahar jate hue dekha tha.

abhi : thek hai i think its too late we must wrap up the party ..
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next day morning
huda :phoolan tune kaidi ko kahi dekha hai vo kal se kahi nazar nahi aaya.

n :haan vo kisi kam se acadamyse bahar gaya hai vo kal raat ko he chalagaya abhi tak to usse aa jana chaheye tha.

h :aajayega tu kyon itna pareshaan ho rahi hai.lagta hai neelu milgaye hogi raaste mai issiliye late hogaya hoga.

n :plz huda tu ja yahase.

tabhi waha ud neelu ke saath aati hai.

ud :neelu hum logoko congratulate karneke liye yahaaayi hai.

n :haan naina mai tumsub ke liye bahoot kush hoon.

h :aare chori tu to yahi hai to ye aalekh kaha to aalekh bahar kyon gaya hai.

n :vo actually mere kam se gaya hai.

tabhi vaha aalekh aata hai

aa :naina

n :ek min (she excuses to every one and goes to aalekh)

h :tera aashiq aaj tujhe dekhe bagar meri naina ke saath chalagaya.

neelu :huda tu apni bakwas band kar

ud :n aur aalekh aise kyon chale gaye...........

neelu :bro u dont act like huda now ok.aur tu janta hai na aalekh bina vajh aise behave nahi karta.zaroor koi serious baat hagi.

ud :whatever...........and iknow huda sirf bakwas he karta hai.

huda :chal neelu jab tak tera romeo nahi aata tab tak teri kuch khatir karta hoon.

neelu :no thanks mai abhi ja rahi hoon.bye bro.
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n :hhan aalekh boltujhe kya pata chela

aa :kal raat hume jo book raj sir ke kamre se mila tha usske hand writing aur iss letter ki hand writing same hai.

tears were flooding from naina's eyes, usse pata nahi chal raha hai ke veo kya kahe vo muskura bhi rahi thi aur ro bhi rahi thiand she just sunk in the place where she was standing.

aa :naina sambhal apne aap ko.

n :aa sir zinda hai aur shayad bhaya bhi.

aa :par vo samne kyon nahi aa rahe jab ke va aub bekasoor sabit ho gaye hai.

n :vo mai nahi janti....par mujhe unhe doondna hoga tu meri madat karegana...

aa :mai har pal tere saath hoon.par hum karenge kya .tune kuch socha hai.

n :par ek bar aur mai raj sir ke kamreme jana chati hoon.

aa :uska intazam kardega par isske kiye apunko hudaki zarurat hogi.

n :par mai abhi sabko ye batana nahi chati.

aa :thek hai pehle hum officially enter karne ki koshish karenge agar vo nahi ho saka to hum humara rasta apnayege.

n :to thek hia mai abhi bc se baat karti hoon.

this is also heard by the same person.
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on phone
1 :naina ne hw expertse vo letter check karvaya.aur vo apni talash suru karne jarahe hai rajke kamrese.

2:smart move

1:to aub aage ka plan kya hai.

2:to tum jake usse pir a chotasa clue dehi do aur plz aasan sa clue dena jyada satana mat

1 :ok agar itna he khayal hai to phir usko itna sata kyon rahe ho.

2 :kma ki student hai uski capabilities check karna chate hai

1:ok bye.
and they hang up and we see tat the person 1is none other than dr.shalini witha broad smile on her face.
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ok plz do comment
love
ashu

amazing...loved it...its very different 😛 😛