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Posted: 17 years ago
#51
Thanks for a quick update. but we are all waiting for a long one......the conversation between shalini and raj was very cute. 😉

Waiting for the next update.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#52
tooooooooooo good
update soon long asap
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Posted: 17 years ago
#53
so friends here i am with next part
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raj kma ke bahar khada hai aur naina ka wait kar raha hai

r :navin tere behen hospital janeke liye tayar hone mai itna waqt

laga rahi hai to vo date pe jane keliye kitna waqt lagayegi

tabhi uske peche se kisi ke aaneki aavaz aati hai and he turns and

is stunned to see naina who is wearing long skirt and looking very

beautiful

naina :sir hum jayenge kaise...i mean ur injured and..

r :hum iss car me jayenge..and i hope u can drive

n :haan me chala lungi...
per sir ye car kiska hai...aur isspe to kma ka logo bhi hai

r :ye bc ka car hai so plz handle this with care...

r :vaise aaj tum bahot acchi log rahi ho iss dress mai...

n :thanx...aub chale..

r :haan chalo

they r in car naina is driving and raj usse he dekh raha

hai......naina bhi janti hai ke raj usse dekh raha hai aur issi liye vo

sharma rahe hai
and after some time they reach hospital so they get down and

naina goes to a nearby medical shop and raj is standing alone near

car when naina sees a girl talking with raj
n ko ye bilkul accha nahi lag raha to vo gusseme rajke pas aati hai

aur usse ladki ki taraf dekh ti hai

g :bye raj i think i must leave now

r :bye..
and girl leaves
raj naina ko dekhta hai jo bahot gusse me hai and he knows tat

she is feeling jealous and raj is enjoying the situation

r :arre naina tum kab aayi(raj ye jaan buch kar pooch raha tha)

n :tabhi jab aap uss ladki se baat kar rahe the....vaise koun the

vo....

r :vo actully mai abhi mila usse...vo kma join karna chati thi...to

humari gadi pe logo tha to mujhse puchne aagayi..

n :mujhe to vo badi ajeeb lagi...pehli bar mili aur abhi se raj.....

raj has raha hai

n :aap hasna band kijiye..... andar chale ya kisi aur ladki ke aane

ka intazar hai.

r :tumhe kyon gussa aa raha hai.....kya mai kissi ladki se baat bhi

nahi kar sakta....

n :baat kijiye na maine kab mana kiya hai..

and naina leaves from there.....and raj is laughing......and follows

naina
raj naina ke peche peche ja raha hai aur usse mananeki koshish kar

raha hai..

r :naina tum gusse mai bhi bahot acchi lagti hoon..

naina is still angry...

r :arre baba sorry....lo kan pakad ta hoon aub maf bhi kardo..
plzzzzzzz
naina raj ki taraf mudke smile karti hai aur

n :thek hai aub chale...

they were standing infront of door aur uss door pe lekha

hai"Dr.Tina"
raj knocks the door..

dr :come in

dr :arre hi raj..

r :hello tina

dr naina ko notice nahi karti and she comes and hugs raj......raj

can see naina face jo gusse se aag babula ho raha hai

r :how r u tina?

t :mai acchi hu tum kaise ho....

r :yahi to janne aaya hoon...

tina now sees naina

t :aur ye koun hai...

r ;ye naina hai....mere cadet..

t :hi.... naina...tumhare bareme raj aur navin se bahot kuch suna

hai...

n :hello...

raj ka checkup chal raha hai and by the time check up ends it

already 8 o clock...

r :naina i think humme aaj yahe rukna padega kyon ki reports kal

milenge aur abhi kafi der hogayi hai..

n :ok sir mai kma phone karke dr.s ko batadeti hoon..

t :usski koi jarurat nahi hai maine dr.s ko inform kar diya hai..aur

aaj aap mere ghar me reh sakte ho

r :thanx tina par tumne to kaha tha ke aaj tumhari night duty

hai...

t :haan to kya hua...

t :pehle hum kahi bahar khana khayenge aur phir mai tum logoko

ghar drop kar ke hospital chali jaungi.....

r :aur sahil kaha hai...

t :vo humme hotel me join karega..

n :ye sahil koun hai

t :mere pati...

naina muskurake raj ki taraf dekhti hai...

t :waise sahil ke bhi aaj night duty hai issi liye plz tum log adjust

kar lena....

n :dr.. thanks aap ne jo kuch bhi mere liye kiya hai usske lea...

t :dont be formal mai tumhari teacher nahi hoon so u can call me

tina... and tum thanks kehne ki koi zaryrat nahi...ye sab to mai

apne dostoke liye kia hai rt raj..

raj just smiles back..

t :to aub hum chale sahil wait kar raha hoga..

and they all leave for hotel .................................................
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so friends plz do comment and
tell me if u want me to continue or not..
bye
take care
love
ashu


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Posted: 17 years ago
#54
HEY TOO GOOD YAAR 👏 .. AND ESPECIALLY WEN NAINA WAS JEALOUS SEEING TINA HUGGING RAJ AUR WOH MAAFI WALA SCENE I JUS LOVED IT... 😛 SO PLS PLS CONTINUE 😉 😉




RANU 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
#55
it was a beautiful part..... 👏 RN convo was soooo sweet....too good yaar...thanku soo much for this superb part...this is for u 🤗
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Posted: 17 years ago
#56
caught up with your ff just today.. very nice.. pls do update soon... 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
#57
so frds here i am with next part
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All are in hotel and there is an announcement made by manager

m :ladies and gentelmen aaj humare liye ek khas din hai aaj

hamare hotel ko suru hue 25 saal ho gaye hai aur issi liye humne

yaha aap sabke liye kuch party organise kia hai aur kuch

compitations bhi aur ye compitations sirf couples ke liye hai..so

frds plz participate and make this function a grand success

t :sahil chalo hum apna naam register karvate hai...

s :ok...arre raj tu bhi chal na register karva ne

r :mai kiske saath comp me participate karu yaar.....

s :medona ke saath ha haa haa...arre yaar obviously naina ke

saath
naina was about to say something..

t :aub plz naina mana mat karna dont be a spoil sport ok.

s :tina raj ko puch ne do naina ke vo usske saath jana chati bhi

hai ya nahi

s :aur raj plz do it in a formal way.....

r :arre yaar ye sab kya hai.....

t :haan raj naina ko pucho na plz...
aur sahil raj ko keh rahe ho par kya tumne mujhe pucha hai....

s :ok...tina will u be my partner..

t :yes ......aur vo bhi agle saat janmoke liye...

tina goes with sahil leaving naina and raj...
raj sees naina who is blushing.....

r :will u be my partner.....(mann me...for life time)...i mean aaj ke

comp ke liye

n :just nodds...

r :to mai humara naam register karva ke aata hoon...

aur raj waha se registeration counter par jata hai..aur usse phir

wahi ladki milti hai jo medical shopke bahar mili the raj usse baat

kar raha hai..aur naina ko gussa aa raha hai..
raj comes back to naina....

n :aub vo yaha kya kaar rahi hai...

r :pata nahi....par vo mere saath comp me participate karna chati

thi...

n :to jayiye na ussi ke saath participate kijiye maine mana thodehi

kiya hai...

r :naina tumhe ho kya gaya hai....mujhse aise zagda kyon kar rahi

ho..
naina kuch nahi keh ti.....aur tabhi ek announcement hota hai....

manager :friends aub hamare pass sare couples ke naam aa gaye

hai to hum apna pehla round suru karte hai...humara pehla round

hai musical chair...agar couples me se kisi ek ne bhi chair paa liya

to vo humare agle segment me chale jayenge

r :to chale naina..

naina moves from there in the row where all others womens are

standing...and the music starts naina and sahil gets chair and

they enter into next segment

m :so hamara agle game mai aap ko apni partner ke bareme kuch

personal sawal puche jayege aur aap ko unke jawab dene

honge...aur jiss coupleke jyada jawab match honge vo couple jeetegi
so friends here we go...

r :naina kya hua tum mujhse baat kyon nahi kar rahi..

naina doesnot even respond to him....aur vo chupchap khadi hai..

aur compitation suru hota hai

m :humare pehle couple hai mr &miss sinha
and he asks some question...and they answer him... par undono ne

pacnh mese sirf 2 sawalo ka jawab sahi diya hai..
after some couples its turn of dr tina and sahil..
four of there answer match among 5.
and at last its turn of naina and raj...

m :naina.... raj ka sabse karibi dost koun hai

n:navin

m :rt answer

m :raj......... naina ka favourate color kounsa hai

r :red

m :rt answer

m :naina......... raj ko kis baat se jayada gussa aata hai..

n :unhe jhoot bolna pasand nahi..

m :again right answer

m :raj........naina aap ke ilava kindo logo par sabse jyada bharosa

karti hai...

r :navin aur aalekh...

m :ok aap ka jawab bilkul sahi hai

m :so last question koun answer karna chahega raj ya naina....

raj sees naina and says

r :mai answer karunga...

m :raj tell me which is the happiest moment of naina's life

r :jab ussne navin aur mujse mili the...i mean kuch dino pehle...

m :so aap ke saare answer match hogaye hai issi liye aap final

round pahoch jate hai..

m :final roundme aap ko iss bowl me se ek chit uthana hai aur

isharese apne saati ko batana hai ke uss chit mai kya likha hua

hai..

there are only 5 couples in final...and now it is naina and raj's

turn

raj says tat naina will act and he will guess
naina picks the chit aur usspe likha hua hai "dil se"
so she have to act and tell him...

m :aap ka time shuru hota hai aub
naina acts perfectly and he understands it in seconds....
and they win the comp..
naina is very happy aur vo ye bhi bhol gayi hai ke vo raj se naraz

thi...she just comes to him and hugs him...he dont understand how

to respond but he holds her ...... and they are lost in there own

world
after some time tina and sahil comes there

t :(coughs auh auh..)

raj aur naina abhi hosh me aate hai

r :aap vo actually...(raj is blushing too hard)

naina says :ek minute mai abhi aayi......and she leaves from there

t :raj aaj plz usse batadena ke tum usse kitna chate ho..

s :haan raj....

after some time naina is back

t : aub humme chalna chahiye...sahil

s :ok hum pehle raj aur naina ko ghar chodenge phir hum hospital

jayenge..

r :ok
naina is silent aur vo sirf raj ki taraf dekh rahi hai...raj sees har

aur usse kuch samaj nahi aata ke naina usse aise kyon dekh rahi hai.....
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so friends kaisa laga aapko
plz post ur comments i am waiting for them
love
ashu
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Posted: 17 years ago
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awesome too good very nice waiting for next asap.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#59
Too good!!!Awesome!!!

I loved it when Naina got jealous seing Raj talking to that girl and then hugging Tina 😳 😆 😆 !!!!

Aur Raj ka maafi maangna was so cute 😳 😳 😳 !!!!!

Aur jab Naina ko pata chala that Tina is married uske toh jaan mein jaan aayi 😆 😆 !!!!!

Waise I realy hope Raj ab propose kar de but in style 😳 😳 😳 !!!!

And yes continue!!!!

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey

Thanks for the two very quick updates. 👏 👏

The teasing between raj and naina is very sweet.

Please don't mind....but could you also just say a bit on raj's health....mayu be it is just a suggestiong.

But you can ignore this if you want...no sweat....

Waiting for the next update.

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