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Posted: 17 years ago
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HI ASHU..
THE UPDATE WAS TOO GOOD.. I REALLY ENJOYED IT 😃 CARRY ON YAAR..



WITH LOVE
RANU
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Posted: 17 years ago
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thanks a lot for the comment.
love
ashu 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
#13
part 3
naina goes to bc but she dont get permission so they have planned to enter room unofficially and huda and aalekh are helping her to do tat.
its 9 o clock and lights are off and naina enters rai's room and starts searching the room and she opens the room and when she opens the cupboard draw she sees her pictures and starts crying and after some time she controls her emotions and statrs searching again and she gets a photo its a bit odd it was chobe's photo (chobe standing infront of kma with raj) and someone has written a msg on chobe's shirt with pen.and this time its navins hand writing.naina just picks tat photo and leaves.
shalini comes there as naina leaves and smiles.

naina : thanks huda for helping me

h :its ok phoolan.aub mai chalta hoon varna humme yaha koi dekh lega.
h :aare kaidi tu bhi chal na.

aa :tu ja mai abhi aata hoon.

and huda leaves

aalekh and naina are in class room

aa :tujhe kuch mila vaha se.

n :haan ye photo mila hai.

and she passes the photo.

aa :ye kya likha he iss par "Catch Me If You Can"...ye kisi ne pense likha hai vo bhi chobe ke shirt par.isska matlab hai ...

naina completes the sentence

n :vo jante hai hum unhe dood rahe hai.aur tujhe pata hai aalekh ye hand writing bhaya ki hai aalekh bhaya zinda hai aalekh............. bhaya zinda hai............

aa :to hum sabse pehle chobe ko dhoodna hoga..par kaise.............

n :bc ka computer.................. vaha se pata chal sakta hai ke chobe ke posting kaha hue hai.........................par hum bc ke kamre me jayenge kaise aur agar chale bhi gaye to computer ka password aur kaise dhoodte hai ye kaise pata chalega.

aa :ud issme hamare madat kar sakta hai.tujhe kal subhe tak sari info mil jayegi aur aur hum chobeke pass jayenge.

n :nahi aalekh yaha do logoko cover up nahi kar sakte. mai chali jaungi aur tum log mere absence ko cover up kar dena
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dr.s :hello....aap ki naina to bahot tez hai,kal sham tak vo chobe ke pass pahoch jayegi.

2 :sister kiski hai and he smiles.

dr s :raj ki tabiyat aub kaisi hai

navin :vo aub thek hai usse discharge kar diya gaya hai.aur aap fikar mat kejiye hum bhi kal sham tak pahoch jayenge

dr s :mai kyon fikar karu fikarto chobe ko honi chahiye ,aap log agar late hogaye to naina to uski band baja degi

they both laugh....

navin :thanks shalini tumne hamare liye jo kuch bhi kikya vo koi aur nahi kar sakta.

dr s :haan vo to hai.
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next morning in girls room
pooja is sleeping and naina is restless.usse(naina ko) dekh ke koi bhi ye keh sakta hai ke vo kaye raatose nahi soyi.and aalekh comes there by climbing window (no one has seen him as its still dark)

n :mai tere pass he aa rahi thi

aa :vo apna kam ho gaya.aur ye le uss chobe ki kundali aur vo dehli me hai .aur tu abhi 7 baje ki bus se nikal ja tu sham tak vaha pahoch jayegi.

n :tune ud ko kya bataya...

aa :vo shana neend me tha aur usse sooneki jaldi the issi uss ne apunse kuch nahi pucha

naina just nods and smiles

naina packs her bag and aa is still there.

n :tu yaha sab sambhal lega na

aa :tu jyada tension mat le.hum tujhe cover up kar lenge.aur vaise bhi abhi humlogo ko uss lala ki vajehse 1 hafte ki chutti mili hai to hamara kam aur bhi aasan ho jayega.

and by tat time pooja wakes up (its 6:30am)and says

p :kise cover up karoge(in her sleepy tone and her eyes r closed).

when she opens her eyes she was shocked to see aalekh there as he had never entered girls room and naina was standing infront of her with some bags packed.
before pooja says something

n :vo actually pooji mujhe kuch kam se bahar jana hai to abhi mujhe kuch mat puchmai aate he tujhe sab kuch batadundgi aur plz tum log yaha samhal lena plz (she kisses on pooja's forehead )

and naina and aalekh leaves

pooja is still in her bed thing tat its all her dream or its fact...

after some time all boys r in mess and abhi is with them and pooja enters the canteen

abhi :aap akeli aayi hai naina kyon nahi aayi.

p :vo actually uss ki battery full the to uss ne aanese mana kardiya(she say this looking at aalekh).

h :asse kaise bhukh nahi hai kal raatko bhi ussne kuch nahi khaya.tu rukh mai usse leke aata hoon.
and huda leaves from there..aalekh follows him.when they come out of building aalekh shouts
aa :huda rukja
h :kya hai kaidi..
aa :naina apne kamreme nahi hai
h :to kaha hai
aa :vo kisi kam se kmase bahar gayi hai aur usske aane tak hume usske absence ko cover karna hoga.
h :pooja ko pata hai ye sab.
aa :haan par ud aur ali ko nahi pata isse pehle vo kuch gdbad kare tu unhe jake samhal le.
h :tujhe pata hai vo kaha gayi hai.
aa :nahi ussne kaha hai vo aate he sabko batayegi
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Its 8 pm naina reaches chobes house and knocks the door.chobe opens the door.
c :aagai aap mai aaphi ka rah dekh raha the...
naina was puzzled to hear this.
n :aapko kaise pata ke mai yaha aane wali hoon
c :hamara network aapke networkse accha hai( he smiles)
n :aap bhaya aur sirke bareme kya jante hai.
c :pehle aap andar to aayiye hum usske bareme bhi baat karenge.
naina gets in
c :aap fresh ho jayiye mai khane ke liye kuch leke aata hoon(and he shows her way to room)
n :nahi mujhe bhukh nahi hai.
c :kalse aapne kuch nahi khaya aur aap kehrahe hai ke aapko bhukh nahi hai
naina was just seeing chobe's face and naina gussese kamremai chalijati hai.
and when she enter the room she was shocked by seeing her parents and gunny there.
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ok frds this is end if part 3
i hope u like it
i am waiting for ur comment.
bye
ashu
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Posted: 17 years ago
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awesome too good very nice waiting for next asap.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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woop woop! part 2 and 3 were brilliant so raj and naveen aur testing naina's capability, hmmmmmmmm bad boys itna sataa raha hain, they are gonna get beatings from naina when she finds out and shalini is helping them šŸ˜† by leaving her clues..... that was really a good part šŸ‘ šŸ‘ šŸ‘ now i can't wait to see them i mean read them enter šŸ˜†
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Posted: 17 years ago
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HEY PART-3 IS TOO GOOD 😊 I JUS LOVED IT 😃 😃 😃 NAVIN IS VERY BAD.. BECHARI NAINA.. ANYWAYS WAITING FOR THE NEXT PART..




WITH LOVE
RANU
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hi
frds thanks for comments..and i vll update part 4
today.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz do it now if possible with long part asap.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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gudd goin....lukin forward to next partt..
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it was amaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaazing.......i m at cloud 9 after reading today update...... šŸ˜› šŸ˜› šŸ˜› u deserve this... šŸ‘

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