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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey guys.. plzz comment after this part.. coz i really wanna no wat u think bout it.. i hope u ppl love it as much as i loved writting it.. thankz!

Part 10
Late at night at around 1:30 Am

Ridsy's home…
Gosh.. I cant sleep… kya ho raha hai? She thought as she remembered her encounters wid armaan. The basket ball match.. and in the Library
She smiled as she remembered bumping into Atul.. Armaan had certainly done Somethin to her.. she just couldn't say wat..she didn't want to even think about it
When ever she was alone.. she thought about armaan.

"anytime" .. the one word she started LOVING!.. she blushed just thinking bout how close he was to her. Se felt her hand which armaan had held… remembering how he had pulled her in front of everyone.. in front of him. Those winks armaan gave melted her veins.
Armaan called HER teeam.. HIS favorite team.
Everytime she tried to push him out of his mind.. he would find a way back!
'uff.. mein kyo so nahi pa rahi hun?'uff.. mein kyo so nahi pa rahi hun?
She got up and switched on the laptop. She saw her clock. It read: 2 Am.
Riddhima wished tht he was online.. and finally.. when she couldn't take it any more.. she sent him an offline message
FF: oh, umm biker… Im sorry I couldn't come online… had lots of work… sorry.

Riddhiz sighed.. he wasn't online.
Suddenly…..
BB: kya hua? So nahi pa rahi ho?

Who online hai… YES…oh shit.. mein kya kar rahi hun.. ?? she thought.. but she felt soo goodand happy inside

FF: tum online ho??
Did tht sound too excited? She thought
BB: kyo nahi? I hadn't gotten a chance to chat wid you… how could I sleep.

Riddhima's heart skipped a beat. She could imagine Armaan saying tht to her. She looked down and smiled..

FF: haan haan.. shure.. sach mein batao.. aap online kyon ho?

BB: kuch nahi… bas aise hi.
Actually i was waiting fer you.. he thought
FF: hmm … so tumhara din kaise tha?

BB: oh, meine basket ball match khela.. hamare college ki gurls ki gurls ke saat.

FF: boys VS girls
Riddhima asked.. though she knew very well the truth.

BB: nahi.. me alone..

FF: oh.. *wink* flirt?

BB: me n flirt.. c'mon! lol

FF: hehe.. to kya hua?

BB: naa… I was teachin them something…

FF: teaching? Aap itni good ho? Basket ball champion?

BB: nahi… bas aise hi… kuch tricks sikha raha tha..
Wow..hes very modest afterall.. ridz thought

FF: un ladkiyon se aap kisiko chahte ho?

Armaan thought about riddhima as soon as he read the question… but armaan had mixed feeling.. flower ya rids!
Even though he felt for rids.. flower was there too! Armaan thought she was sweet and honest and very very smart. He didn't mind wat she looked like.. her personality had won her heart. But then.. rids bhi thi… During skool hours.. he couldn't stop looking at her..

He remembered lookin at her and her lookin back.. and remembered the way.. she looked back at him.. he could see right through her… the way she bumped into atul.. he smiled at himself. Who kitni ajeb hai.. yet… bahoot sachhi..

BB: pata nahi.. ab yeh chodo..

PATA NAHI?? What deos tht mean? Lekin I shouldn't ask him further… to be on a safe side

FF: oh ok.. shure.. reply karne ke liye itna time kyo lagaya??

BB: oh sorry… maine kuch giradiya tha… so I was looking fer it..
He lied..

Oh.. maine socha ki who kisi ladki ke bare mein soch raha hoga…rids thought.. very disappointed.
FF: oh shit.. time dekha? Past 3:00 !! mujhe jaana hai.. sorry biker… kal chat karenge… waise bhi.. mujhe tumhe uthana bhi hai na? Aur mummy ka phone bhi uthana hai… so I have to go.. bye

Shit… phirse chodkar ja rahi hai!!
BB : shure.. good night… aur msg zarror karna.. plzzzzzzzzzzz nahi to mein zaroor late ho jaunga!! Sweet dreams!

Tumhe msg karna kaise bhool sakti hu armaan??
Rids thought as she said good night..
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Posted: 17 years ago
#82
thats really a gud one...... are yaar kab armaan ko pata chalega yeh ridz hi FF hai...... chalo koi baath nai... isko tho dono acche lagthe hai.... wo tho eki hi hai.... 👏 really a
nice part........ continue soonnnn
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Posted: 17 years ago
#83
Heyyy!!! Thanks sooooo much for the pm!!! 😃 😃 Loooved part 10!!! It was simply great!!! Now I can't wait for Armaan to find out the truth too...Bechara...he has such a biiiig dilemma...Ridz ya flowers..What will happen when he finds out that they are the SAME??!!?? 😆 😆 Do continue soon...
Love,
Ananya
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Posted: 17 years ago
#84
👏 👏
BB n FF cooooool
just an amazing part superbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbb
awsome
do continue soon
thnx for the pm
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Posted: 17 years ago
#85
hey people im updatin again today...maybe in an hour or soemthin
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Posted: 17 years ago
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SUPERB!!!!!!!!!!
BT ARMANN SHLD CUM 2 NOE NA. KI FF IS RIDZ ONLY...........
AMAZNG PART!!!!!!!!!!!! DO CONTD WENEVER U R FREE
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Posted: 17 years ago
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im addicted to this FF super cool part update soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey great part!!!
do continue soon!! 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Awwwweieee....ur sooo gud!!
i luved da part!!
do cont. soon!!

n thanx 4 da pm!!

Marisha
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part 11
Next day… near the locker.

"Muskaan .. aap rahuk se baat kyo nahi karti? Rids said as she saw her starin at rahul.
Widout lifting her gaze off of rahul
"Rahul.. nahi yaar… woh mujhe nahi chahta hai… kisi short skirt wali ladki ko chahta hoga" she said frowning at the gurl he was talkni to.

"tum kaise keh sakti ho muskaan? Who tumhe hug karta hai… hes nice to you.. aur aapko kisses bhi deta hai" rids said.. putting her hand on his shoulder.

"haan.. but rids.. mujhe usse baat karne ki himat nahi hai yaar.. aur tum yeh sab kab se bolne lagi ho?" muskaan said.. suddenly looking at her.. after all.. RIDS was giving her boyfriend advice!

"nahi.. bas.. umm…. u know.. chodo…….. I mean.. c'mon tum to usse bahoot chati ho.. skool ki dino se!.." changing the topic" aur wh k accha ladka hai…"

"biker…. Ne yeh sab kiya na?" muskaan said winking at her and smiling..

"nahi … aise koi baat nahi hai…' Rids said goin red. "u know.. wat.. ill talk to rahul… how bout tht?" rids said..

"really?? Mere liye karogi?? Shit .. thankz.. tum kitni sweet ho… " muskaan said jumping into riddhimas arms.

"dost kiske liye hote hai??


BELL rings
"arre hame class jaana hai.. chal.."Rids said pulling out of the hug.

"Nahi.. aaj shubhankar college ke liye nahi aaya hai.. " muskaan said in a half sing song voice.

"really? Good.. hum basket ball practice karte hai phir!! Awesome opputunity!"

"good idea.. ill tell all the gurls.. any way they are all in shub sirs class only na?

Haan.. aur armaan bhi! She thought
"haan aur rahul bhi" giving muskaan a squeeze "theek hai.. mein aaj hi karlungi!!"

Rids said as she winked to muskaan.

Muskaan blushed.. she had never seen her sooo happy…

In the auditorium…

The girls were practicing their basket ball shots.. just then rahul armaan and atul walked in..

"Rahul.. riddhima aapse kyon milna chahti hai?" armaan asked.. a bit jealous..

"pata nahi yaar.. Atul.. tumhe kya lagta hai??

"mujhe kaise pata?? Mein ek mind reader thodi hu.." atul asked..

"aise hi puch raha tha… Atul.." rahul said as riddhima came up to them

"hey guys…" avoiding eye contact wid armaan.. aakhir who armaan ko kaise dekh sakti thi?

"can I talk to you alone?"
Armaan and Atul got the hint and sat in the bleachers (basket ball audience area.. in the auditorium..)

As armaan and Atul took a seat Atul watched the girls play their game…
While Armaan was watchin riddhimas every move.. completely jealouse and very angry

(back to riddhima)
"lets sit here.."
"kya baat hai? Anything serious?"

"nahi.. actually yes… pehle batao.. aap kisi ko chahte ho? Rids asked..

Rahul looked at her completely taken a back.. RIDS mujhse pyar karti hai kya??
Riddhima realized wat he was probably thinking…

"oh nahi… not me.. actually… some one else.. its Muskaan" rids said quickly..

"muskaan?? She..she likes me?? Me?? Rahul asked completely shocked.

"haan… from some months now…" rids said.. obviously lying.. but she didn't want muskaan to see desperate..

"really.?? Mujhe pata nahi tha….!!! He said..

Shit mujhe aise itni jaldi batana nahi chahiye tha!! Shit !! she saw muskaan playin.. but her eyes wer on her n rahul…

"Rahul… before u say anything… I just want you to no tht shes very nice.. and sweet.. mujhe pata hai ki who bahoot crazy hai.. lekin…" riddhima continued

"aur who bahoot cute bhi hai!!" cutting her off.. rahul added

"kya?? Rids said.. she did not expect him to say tht…

"haan.. I think I like her too.." rahul said as he smiled..

"sach??... shit im soo…. Happy.." and she gve him a big hug!

(Meanwhile back at the leachers…)

"rahul.. ke sat.. wat deos Riddhima want?? Atul??" Armaan asked not liftin his gaze from her.

"pata nahi yaar.. wow.. u saw tht shot??Atul said watchin the girls play

"Atul.. who uske saath itni pass kyo beth rahi hai??

Atul looked at rids and Rahul.

"armaan who itni close bhi nahi hai.."
And he got back to watching the match

Riddhima kya kar rahi hai?? Why did she want to talk to him ALONE… deos she like him… naaaaa…. Ive seen her look at me… who usse thodi chahti hai!! Par who tense kyo hai?? Rahul shocked kyo hai?? Kya ho raha hai.. i don't like this!! … rahul ab khush kyo hai??
Suddenly.. he saw rids and rahul hug!

"ATUL!! Shes hugging him… !!" armaan said getting up!

"to? Jal raha hai kya? .." Atul said surprised at his behavior..

"nahi…. Uh..nahi… bas.. who.. meri dost ko gale laga rahi hai… usse rabies ka shots ab lene hoga.. islie..." he said… sittin back down.. controlling his anger and jealousy..

Atul saw his fists close up.. and armaan was not happy.

That's it.. Riddhima Gupta.. ab dekh lena.. mera dil ko chot bahchai.. Armaan malik ko koi aise nahi kar sakta!

Aage dekh lena!

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