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Posted: 17 years ago
#61
awesome ff 👏 !
love the concept 😳 (reminds me of the film 'a cinderella story')
plz update soon 😳 !
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Posted: 17 years ago
#62
awesome update
plzzzzzzzz continue soon
thanks for d pm
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Posted: 17 years ago
#63

Part 9
After the basket ball practice.. Armaan goes to the auditorium where the girls were practicing.
As Armaan walked in, the girls lost concentration.
"Hey Armaan… Whats up? Yahan kya kar rahe ho?" kajal asked really excitedly.

"kuch nahi, bas meri sabse favorite team ko dekhne aaya hu" Armaan said as he winked to kajol. The girls giggled.

Riddhima got annoyed.. the girls were getting distracted."Hame koi audience nahi chahiye."

"cmon yaar.. so sad" karishma said "Armaan do you wanna play wid us?"

"KYA???" riddhima said.

"look armaan ek bahoot accha player hai and we can learn soemthin."

Muskaan also reassured her.

"fine khelo…
"hmm I donno…. Riddhima bahoot rude hai… " giving her a naughty smile.
"shut up and play armaan!" riddhima said.. He is soo full of himself!

Armaan and riddhima were in opposite teams. Riddhima looked up to the way Armaan played . He really was a good player..

"Armaan.. teach some of those tricks na?" Tina said as she watched him shoot a basket.

"Kya?? yeh fakes?" armaan asked.

"yeah, match 6th Aprl ko hai aur hame kuch tips ke zaroorat hai. " muskaan added

"theek hai.. yaha aajao.. dekho.. pheli fake hai yeh" armaan sad as all the guurls stood around him. He acted as if he was about to jump.. but instead went around to take a lay up.

"Riddhima u remember this shot ryte? Armaan said giving her a sly smile.

"Aur yeh hai dusri fake…. Riddhima come here." he said taking riddhimas hand and placing her in front of him… "bounce the ball.. and .. arre riddhima tackle me na!" as he was riddhima just standing there "... haan.. and then bounce the ball under her legs like this.. and take a lay up.. easy as tht.." He said looking at riddhima give him a Not-So-impressed look.

Armaan managed to teach them a few more tricks. They played a match to practice those shots.....Wow Yeh To seriously hame teach kar raha hai.. she thought

As Riddhima was trying a fake, Armaan was tackling her..she tried to confuse him.. but instead Armaan took it from her so easily.. as though he were takin candy from a baby.
"Rule No.1.. don't wait… dusri team ko pata chalega ki aap koi fake karne wal hai" he said .. giving her the ball back "alright?"
Rids nodded.

After the match was over.. Riddhima was keeping the basket balls back..
"hey.." Riddhima quickly turned around to see armaan standin behind her.

"meri home work…" armaan started…
Rids remembered how much work she had.. and how much she had to do for him.

"haan.. mujhe pata hai.. biophysics ke project.. cariology questions.. physiology ke notes.. aur…." riddhima continued

"nahi karma hai…." He stood smiling at her.

"Kya? Tum theek ho?" Riddhima said completely shocked..

"too much homework today.. tumhe to apni home work bhi karni hai na?dont worry mein apna kar doonga…" he said taking a step closer to her

"oh th-thank y-you.. " Riddhima said… a bit confused…

Surprised to hear the 'T-Word' from her…
He walked closer to her.. Riddhima caught the shelf behind her…he smiled.. he could feel her breath. And he whispered..

"anytime…" and walked away leaving her speechless and completely weak in the knees.


Edited by muzic_chick247 - 17 years ago
Arteclectic thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
#64
👏
just awsomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
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Posted: 17 years ago
#65
👏
nice update
plzzzzz continue soon and thanks for the pm
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Posted: 17 years ago
#66
awesome mindblowing fatastic amazin
no more words to describe how good it was
👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
#67
its rocking....yaara jaldi update to karooooooooo..........im singing this and feeling very excited........

cant wait to read more on this vini,,,,,,plzzzzzzzzzzz update ASAP,

loved it,liked it,,,,,,,,,,,
😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
#68
yeah.. shure.. i try to update atleast 3 a day..
oh and thankz!!!
should i like post longer parts??
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Posted: 17 years ago
#69
mindblowinggggggggggggggg
no wrdz 2 expres................. superb!!!!!!!!!!!
if u can den try 2 update 3 in a day. only if u r free n stuff
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Posted: 17 years ago
#70
fantastic part yaar
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thanx for pm

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