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Posted: 16 years ago
Cool update.. enjoyed it.... Sujal n Daksh fighting was really cute.. plzz continue soon...
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Posted: 16 years ago
heenu that was a very sweet part.. first of all kashish imagination was very nice.. i'am sure us imagination ko sach mein badal ne mein ab zyada waqt nahii hai... yeh sujal, kashish jab kareeb ho rahe hai, tabhi yeh daksh kii wrong timing hogayi..... kaash daksh bas ek paanch minute late aatha , tho sujal kashish ko ek dusare ke saath thoda sa aur private time mil jaatha..hehe... lekin the scene between daksh, sujal & kashish was cute.. and at last kashish muskurayi tho sahii... gooddd... kashish aur daksh kii dosti is a perfect dosti... the scene in the Mandir was a also good... the story is progressing well.. keep the good work going....👏and my guess for the coming up parts would be kii joh bhi sujal, daksh aur angad ka plan hai to teach the villain party a lesson, uska hissa bohat jald kashish bhi banegi.. aur yeh chaaron milkar dushmano kii baand bajayenge..... so heenu kya mera yeh guess sahii hai.. mujhe zaroor batana... 😉 heenu dear next part jaldi se post karna.. i'am waiting for the next part eagerly...😊
Edited by sun_423 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey buhat din ky bad update kia...........................but a very cutte part..................i like a cute fight between sk.............................con't soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
woah🤗 its really an awesome one⭐️ mind blowing dear😍 so romantic one❤️😛 spl the fight of Daksh & sujal😛 plz continue it soon😛 & thanks for the pm😉

"Ye raat itni tanha kyun hoti hai,
Kismat se apni sabko shikayat kyun hoti hai,
Ajeeb khel khelti hai kismat,
Jise hum pa nahi sakte usi se mohabbat kyun hoti hai?"

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Posted: 16 years ago
thanx to u all for ur wonderful comments.......i m relli glad that u liked last part...........here is d nxt one....i hope u would like it also........
part-34

As three of them enter d outhouse…..everyone welcome sujal n kashish……

Kashish- mom this outhouse is looking relli very beautiful…….

Veena- credit for this goes to daksh n angad……

Kashish n sujal wid veena go where lalit was standing wid vasu n chetan……

Kashish n sujal take blessing frm lalit…..then frm vasu n chetan…..

Lalit- may GOD bless u both……….kashish beta ur looking very beautiful today……..

Kashish(smiles )thanx papa……

Vasu n chetan- congrats kashish…..MAY GOD bless u both wid healthy wealthy prince or princess…..

Kashish…….thanx aunty……

Wen suddenly someone frm back covers kashish"s eyes

Kashish- who is there

Daksh- guess out kashish

Kashish(wid in some sec.)- khwaish u know "daksh ka asar tum par dekhne laga hai"

Khwaish- wow kashish….nice guess……..bt how did u come to know….ok leave it….btw mam congratsssssss ……..ur going to become mom very soon…….

Kashish(smiles)- thanx……..btw where is kripa……..i want to meet her…..now she is going to become my bhabhi……

Khwaish- shw will be coming wait for some one……

Lalit…..ok u all guys carry on…..we all four(veena, lalit, chetan, n vasu)- r going to meet some guests

Veena- tc of kashish…..ok….specially u sujal……

Daksh- mom v r also here……n u know na sujal always take xtraaaaaaaaa care of kashish…….

Sujal- yes bro like u do for khwaish bhabhi…….

Veena- u both…….

Kashish- u don't worry I w'l tc of myself .n u all r here only…….

Then all four elders leave

……………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………..

Khwaish make kashish sit on a chair………n sit herself on her knees n keep her head on her lap…near to her stomach……

Kashish- wat r u doing khwaish…..

Sujal, daksh, angad all three watching her wid a confused look……

Khwaish – stop………………. I want to listen something……

Kashish- smiles at her innocence……..khwaish I m just three n half months pregnant………just wait for sometime….

Khwaish(make a puppy like sad face)- ur right I think………bt I m so happy that I m gonna become chachi soon

Every one laughs…….

Daksh- for becoming chahci u need to become my wife first……..bt look ur taking so long time…..

Sujal- bhabhi u still av time think once again…….isse phele bahut der ho jaye….

Khwaish keeps on sujal's shoulder…….btw ur rite sujal…I also think so……

Daksh- he pulls khwaish towards himself…….itni himat hai….

Sujal –(whistl) –wow bro….

Khwaish- daksh let me go…….leave me…….

daksh- y ur my wife….

Khwaish- not now I m ur would be wife……

Daksh- wow "abhi to tum chachi ban gayi thi )….. if ur chahci to chachu to main hi hon na

Isn't it guys……..

Angad- he is right khwaish…….

Khwaish –angad let kripa come back…..then I w'l tel u……..

Wen some hugs kashish frm back……..

Kripa- hey would be mother……..how r u……..

Kashish – ok I m fine my would be bhabahi…….

Kripa- plss dee don't say bhabhi…….(she shys)

Kashish- u av learnt………how to shy also kripa……..wow……..wats a magic bro……….

Angad- same which sujal n u r aving……..do u want to see again

Kashish- wat……….

Angad goes on stage…….

Ladies n gentlemen may I m aving ur attention a please………as u all know this party is thrown for d most sweetest, cutest n in luv couple sujal n kashish……..who r going to become mom n dad very soon……..so I would to call them on stage for a beautiful dance performance……..

Kashish n sujal look at each other wid surprise………..

Sujal brings his hand in front of kashish…….

Kashish for some time keep looking at him…….

Then daksh keeps her hand on sujals'''''n both proceeds towards d dance floor…….

A soft track was played………

Sujal keeps his hand on kashish's waist……brings her close to him…..she once looks into his eyes.n then keep her hand on one of his shoulder n another on his hand…….

Kuchh Khaas Hai Kuchh Paas Hai, Kuchh Ajanabi Ehsaas Hai Kuchh Duriyaan Najdikiyaan, Kuchh Hans Padi Tanhaayiyaan Kya Yeh Khumaar Hai, Kya Aitbaar Hai Shaayad Yeh Pyaar Hai, Pyaar Hai Shaayad Kya Yeh Bahaar Hai, Kya Intjaar Hai Shaayad Yeh Pyaar Hai, Pyaar Hai Shaayad) - 2 Kashish keeps her eyes on ground coz she knew that sujal's eyes were on her …….sujal tighten his grips on his waist…….which force her too see into his eyes…….once she looks into his eyes……both lost somewhere into each others eyes……far way frm their surrounding…….moving slowly step by step according to d beats……….. [ Kuchh Khaas Hai Kuchh Paas Hai Kuchh Saanz Hai.., Jaage Se Jo Kal Soye Alfaaz Hai.., Chup Se Nashe Mein Khoye Nazar Hi Samjhaaye, Yeh Guftgu Saari.. Koyi Aarju Mein Hai, Angadaayi Pyaari.. Kya Yeh Khumaar Hai, Kya Aitbaar Hai Shaayad Yeh Py aar Hai, Pyaar Hai Shaayad Na Inkaar Hai, Na Ikraar Hai Shaayad Yeh Pyaar Hai, Pyaar Hai Shaayad Kashish breaks her eyes contacts…n rests her head on his shoulder………both were moving in coordination……….. Kehna Hi Kya.., Tera Dakhal Na Koyi Dil Ko Dikha.., Dil Ki Shakal Ka Koyi Dil Se Bhi Meri, Ik Shart Yeh Aisi.. Laage Jeet Si Mujhako, Yeh Haar Hai Kaisi.. Kyun Yeh Pukaar Hai, Kyun Bekaraar Hai Shaayad Yeh Pyaar Hai, Pyaar Hai Shaayad Jaadu Sawaar Hai, Na Ikhtiyaar Hai Shaayad Yeh Pyaar Hai, Pyaar Hai Shaayad Pyaar Hai Shaayad Kuchh Khaas Hai Kuchh Paas Hai, Kuchh Ajanabi Ehsaas Hai.. Pyaar Hai Shaayad, Pyaar Hai Shaayad, Yahi

Both r still lost somewhere………wen due to voice of clappings….both comes out of their dream……

Kashish moves away slowly..n then goes towards veena……..

Veena- u both danced very well……..

Kahish(smiles n shy)-………

Angad – comes there look kashish I prove my point……

Kashish .bhai…….

Wen sujal calls daksh n khwaish n angad n kripa on stage…..for d dance……

Both couple come on d dnace floor……..

Sujal- now u guys carry on……..

Daksh- don't worry hum to phele se hi ready hain…….

Sujal smiles n leaves d stage…….n goes towards kashish n veena……

Veena- kashish I think u should av some food……

Kashish- no mom……plssss

Veena- kashish plssss av some…..

Kashish- mom bt

Wen a voice comes frm behind…wen aunty is saying so sweetly u should av kashish

Wen three of them turns around n see riya there……….

Riya comes n hugs veena------namaste aunty……(sujal n kashish look at each other n kashish smile fades away )

Veena- where were u?

Riya- I m sorry aunty………….actually I was at my frnd's house n she was not allowing me to come that's y I got late……bt don't worry now I m not going anywhere…….(she looks towards kashish) coz I luvvvvvvv this place………

Veena- ur most welcome beta

Kashish- mom can I go back to home …….i m not feeling good here…….

Veena- r u ok…….wat happen

Kashish- mom don't worry……I m just feeling lil bit tired……

Veena – ok then sujal will take u to home…….n I w'l send ur dinner there only

Kashish- bt mom I can go myself……don't worry……

Veena- no…….sujal take her to home…..ok …n be careful……..

Sujal –ok mom……

Riya looks at sujal………

Sujal n kashish leave frm outhouse………

Kashish(she keeps her eyes down)- sujal if u wnt to go back.u can……i can manage myself

Sujal doesn't reply just looks at her n keep moving

Kashish also doesn't say anything again……..they move quietly ……..

As they enter d house………..

Sujal phones start ringing…….

He picks d call….

Sujal- hello………..

Other side- no response……

Sujal –hello……

Other side- still no response……

Sujal finally cuts d call…….

Kashish – sujal I want to sit for some time…..coz I m feeling lil bit drozzy………

Sujal( wid a worried look)- she makes her sit on d sofa comfortably…….gives her a glass of water………r u ok……now…I think I should call a doctor……..

Kashish- sujal I m ok now…….its very common…….don't worry…..

Sujal- bt

Again her cell start ringing……..

Sujal – hello……

Other side – no response…….

Sujal- hello-

Kashish- I think u go outside…….n attend this call…..may b there is some problem wid signals…….

Sujal- bt

Kashish- I m ok now…..u go……

Sujal doesn't want to go bt finally he does…….

N he waits for sometime outside so that this time he can talk to d person who is on d other side………

Meanwhile kashish who was sitting on d sofa…….hears sounds of someone foot steps…….

Kashish thinks sujal is back…….

Bt suddenly light goes off …….n darkness spread all around……kashish quickly stands n turns around……coz she is afraid of dark…….bt she sees a figure of some one in dark

Kashish- sujal…......

No response………

Kashish- sujal I think we need to find out a candle………taking few steps towards him very carefully

No response bt d person coming towards her…….

Kashish- sujal………….

No response…….now she was relli very scared

Wen person comes n stands in front of her n he lighten his lighter n she sees d person is wearing black mask…….n holding a big knife in his hand………

Kashish shoutssssssssssssssssssssssssss ………..ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

Sujal who was waiting for d call…….now relli get furious his cell didn't ring for once frm last minutes……..finally he decides to come inside…….while coming inside he knocks wid some one bt before his any reaction d person moves quickly…(already there was loud music sounds were outside that couldn't hear kashish's voice)………………………….

he enters d house….n find a darkness eveyrwhere…….

He get confused coz outside d house there were beautiful lightining everywhere………n inside…….n moreover wen he went outside everything was ok……..

Sujal- kashish………..

No response……

Sujal switch on d light……..n turns around to see kashish n relli get scared at d scenario

Sujal – kashishhhhhhh.he runs towards her……..

She was sitting on d floor……..folding her knees to d chest ……tears were falling frm her eyes…n she was sweating badly…….n breathing very heavily

Sujal runs towards her n sits near by her……hold her softly frm her hand

Sujal- kashish…..kashish……….kashish..wat happened……

She is still crying .not saying anything……….

Sujal-kashish khuch to bolo

Suddenly kashish speaks………..don't kill me.pls don't plssssss.

Sujal hugs him. Tightly-…….kashish no body kills you………look I m here wid u…….stop crying……..pls kashish……..

Kashish(while crying )- sujal pls save me..otherwise he w'l kill me n my baby…….plssss

Sujal- kashish look at me……..i promise u nothing will to u n our baby….i promise……chalo ….

He makes her stand……. Take her to d room………kashish was holding sujal hands very tightly…….n sujal feels that she was shevering very badly due to fear…….

Both enter in room.n he makes sit on bed comfortably..she keeps holding her hand tightly…….

He make her to drink some water……..bt still she was breathing heavily….

Sujal- kashish everything is fine now….calm down……..look I m here wid u……..

Kashish looks at sujal wid those teary eyes……..then y u left me wen I need u most……n today also……u left me there…….sujal I don't want to lose my baby……..i will die if I I w'l lose any of u …….i can't live widout u n our baby sujal………..i can't ……..she hugs him very tightly………

Sujal feeling guilty for her condition………….

He was trying his best to comfort her…….

After some time……

Sujal- kashish

Bt he finds kashish falls asleep in his arms only……….

He makes her sleep comfortably on d bed……covers her wid blanket……bt still fear which she has gone through was clearly visible on her face……..he bends n softly place his lips on her n quickly leave a small pick……..n his eyes get teary looking at her face……….sujal tries to get up frm there………..bt he finds that kashish was still holding her hand tightly……he sits there o on d floor……..keeps his head on d side of d bed……n falls asleep after sometime…….

Edited by angel 16 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
nice part...huh riya is back now...loved the dance sequence...who's that mystery person...poor kashish she is already scared of darkness and more to it that person had knife....but atleast sujal was there to comfort her...plz update soon....
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Posted: 16 years ago
OMG tht bitch Riya is back.. jus hope tht da mystery person is not Tushar... Poor Kashish she is so scared...Enjoyed the update... PLzz continue soon...
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Posted: 16 years ago
superb part..........................buhat he achi entry thi sujal kashish ki......................and khawish aur kripa ki bhi.......................the dance was so cute and passion of love.....................riya bhi iss party mein ana tha...................kun tha jo kashish ko marna chata hai..........................con't soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
heena har bar ki tarha superb part.............. lakinn yeh kashish ko kaun marna chahta thaaaa......:
plzz conti soonn
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey heeenu superb part!!!! simply amazing!!!! loved it completely!!!!!! the beginning was just beautiful wen they had gone 2 the outhouse and that was cute hw khwaish was trying 2 hear the baby...n daksh getting naughty sabke saamne haan😆....then loved the dance of Sujal and Kashish, beautifully described jaan....aur Riya is back!!!!😡i wish i cud kill her!!! poor Kashish was feeling so uneasy but am glad veena sent Sujal with her!!! and OMG i cant believe wot happened!! u knw 4 a moment i felt sooo scared wen Sujal had gone out n Kashish saw that man...thankgod he didnt harm her bcoz mujhe lagga kuch galath hoga....poor Kashish was soo scared...but gud job Sujal was there 2 support her...the ending was soo beautiful!! hw she slept holding his hand and how he slept next 2 her!! loved i jaan!!!...keep up the gr88 work!! its 2 interesting!! n cnt wait 4 SK 2 reunite!!!!...awesome job!!!👏

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