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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: kashishdabest

hey heenu jaan i didnt like it i loooved it!!!!😳..no thanx dee..and yhh dnt worry will surely wait 4 it!!!!..no thanx dee cho nice of u..aur jaan me will be waiting 4 u 2 update!!!!😳 dee i av already updated nxt part on pg 64........ av u read it?

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Posted: 16 years ago
waoh🤗 its really an awesome one⭐️ so cute❤️ superb one😳 so sujal have told to daksh and even angad listen everything cool😃😃 & saree part is awesome one😍 plz continue it soon😛 & thanks for the pm😉

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Posted: 16 years ago
hey heenu jaan first of all a big no sorry!!!! i actually read the part the day u posted it itself but weneva i sat down 2 comment my boss wud cum and i just had 2 go of IF!!! 😡but no issues i will comment now!!
jaan it was a fabulouuuuuuuuuus part!!!!simply outstanding!! i loved it sooo much once agen no riya!!! wooohoooo😆 and now angad and daksh are there with Sujal so i cnt wait for them 2 find out who is helping riya and then sab milke unka band bajaenge!!!!😆 but yeah even i felt Sujal shud have told Kashish, he has put her through a lot of pain..i knw he has suffered a lot 2 but now i just want 2 see an end put 2 all this and i want 2 see them 2gether!!!!.....loved the juice scene😆 poor Kashish, darr ke maare saara glass pee gayi😆 and then the ending was just wowww!!! i read that part twice thinking kahin parne mein galti tho nahin hogayi na😆😆😆 but it was just fantabulous!!!! aik dam amazing!! and u very beautifully described teh saree part it was just amazing!!! lagta hai yeh chah ke bhi control nahin kar paate...RA pe gaye haina😆.....do update soon jaan me waiting for another beautiful part and some mooooreee rmance!!! i wonder ab kya hoga hug ke baad...i mena party mei n😆...do update soon!!!!! luv summi😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
heyyy...edited my post on previous page.. dekh liyo...😉
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Posted: 16 years ago

a big thanxx to u all for ur comments..........sorry for late post..........

part-33

Wid d bang sound of window pane ,due to heavy air outside kashish comes out of her dream…….still holding her saree……..n sujal was sitting in d same position…….

Sujal – kashish……..where r u? I m calling ur name frm last 5 min……

Kashish(feels lil bit embarrassed).wo I m sorry(take her saree frm his hand)….btw thanx I w'l do rest of myself .u go n change otherwise we w'l get late…..

Sujal(still confused wid her behaviour)- there is no need of thanx……its my pleasure…..

Kashish looks at him wid a lil bit surprise………bt he goes away while taking his clothes frm cupboard……

Kashish goes towards her dressing……..sit in front of mirror..applies a lil make up….leaving her hairs opens wid wet curls at d end…….then she puts her mangalsutra…..she applies vermillion ……..wen she sees frm d mirror that sujal was standing at d door of d washroom…..looking at her……….

She looks at him for some secs………n then turn around…….n start looking here n there to ignore him as much as she can……..she goes towards d shelf where lots of soft toys were kept…..m starts moving fingers on soft hairs of white colour teddy………

Sujal smiles at her innocence of hiding her feeling, shyness……….

Sujal starts moving towards her…….n goes n stand xactly behind her……..kashish can feel his presence behind her bt didn't av a courage to turn around…….n look at him…..or even she didn't want to do so…….

Sujal –kashish…………

Wen suddenly some one knocks at d door……..

Kashish quickly turns around………both come face to face….both can feel each other breathe on their faces……wen kashish tries to move frm side bt sujal comes in her front. again she tries frm other side……..bt again he comes….

Wen again some one knocks……

Kashish(she tries to avaoid him by not seeing in his eyes)- sujal plsssss………

Sujal allows her to go………

Bt bf4 she opens d door…….

Sujal- kashish ur looking gorgeous today…….

Kashish turns around n passes a smile…….

Finally kashish opens d door……..

Daksh- gosh how much time u av taken to open d door…….wat were u doing(by raising his eyebrows…….)…btw ur looking stunning

Kashish- thanx bt I can't say this for u…….

Daksh- that's y I m here

Sujal( ur timing r quite wrong bro )—bro I think this is our room……

Daksh – yes I know I hope I m not disturing u guys……while entering in d room

Sujal wen u already did then y ur asking…….

Daksh- just for formality…….

Kashish- u both stop……..

Daksh- kashish he has started…….

Sujal—wow "ulta chor kotwal ko dante"

Kashish -either of u both stop fighting or I m going

Daksh-ok……sujal can I borrow my frnd frm for sometime…….na actually for today's party.coz some one beautiful like her…….shouldd be wid someone handsome like me……so u know na…….

Sujal(make a weired face n starts coughing….)bro r u dreaming……..who said that ur handsome…n I feel petty on khwaish bhabhi……n sometimes I even think that what she has found in u…….

Daksh keeps her hands on kashish shoulder……

Daksh- even u know I feel that kashish n me make a good pair….

Sujal- oh relli……bt I don't think so……btw now its too late.she is already married

Daksh- so wat …who cares……

Sujal(wid a angry look)- stop it bro….

Im mean time kashish was trying to control herself frm not laughing at both of them……..bt in d end she brust out laughing……..

Sujal n daksh look at her………a smile appear on their faces…….coz its like ages they aven't seen her smiling like this…….

Sujal says thanx to daksh just thorugh his eyes…….

Daksh passes a smile to him……..

Daksh- kashish that's not fair.u should help us……..bt ur laughing at us…….ok now u tel wid whom do u want to get paired wid me or sujal……

Kashish- let me think……….

Daksh –jaldi karo..obivioulsy its me……

Kashish- na its not u……

Daksh- I can't believe u kashish………..u av broken my heart(by making different kind of puppy like faces……)

Kashish- ohhhhh……. stop it daksh ……ur heart is already wid someone……isn't it…..

Sujal- it means u would like to pair wid me

Kashish- who said

Now sujal n daksh both get confused……..

Together- then who is d luckiest one

Kashish while smiling broadly.keeps her hand on her stomach…….my partner is always wid me……..

Daksh n sujal both look at her .n smile……

Kashish- u know he is always wid me………..whether anyone or not…..(looking towards sujal)

Sujal understands her meaning…n daksh too…….

Daksh(to lighten d atmosphere)- hamari to koi kadar hi nahi hai…….btw kashish how can u say that our new small guest is prince……why not princess……..

Kashish- coz I want a boy…….a cute lil boy…..

Daksh- bt as far as I know sujal wants a princess…….rite bro……

Sujal- hmmmmm……..a princess

Kashish- mon decides that whether they want a girl or boy………so I want a boy……n that's final……n u know becominga mom is very special either of a boy or girl…….so now u tel me y did u come here………

Daksh- ok mam……actually I want ur help in selcting my dress……so pls help me……..he bring his hand in front of kashish….

Kashish while smiling……. keeps her hand in his- lets go

Daksh shows his tonuge to sujal………

Kashish- dakshhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh………..

Daksh- ok ok I m sorryyyyyyyy

Sujal smiles……….

…………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………….

Daksh n kashish enters in his room…….

Kashish- wat d heck this is daksh..is't a room…….u know a kid room is much better than urs….i think ur whole cupboard is lying on ur bed………I can't believe ur going to marry wid in one month….n look at ur condition……..

Daksh- kashish plssssssssssssss.help me out……n stop giving me lectures….pls select one suit for me…….so atleast I could also get ready….

Kashish- ok.she starts selecting .n finally she selects one………this one is best…….this colour also suits a a lot…..

Daksh- I know .ur choice is best……..n always perfect…………….

Kashish- yes I know……now go n change……..

Daksh goes inside …….in mean time kashish arranges his clothes in his cupboard…..

Daksh comes out of washroom…….

Daksh- hey kashish how am I looking……

Kashish goes towards him…..arrnages his tie properly.now ur looking perfect………

Daksh- ok mam……

Kashish- hey daksh I forgot to ask.. how did u all come to know abt my pregnanacy…….

Daksh- first u set comfortably here(he make her sit on bed……….actually I was working on a case of heart surgery three months bf4……..so I called dr hath at sunshine hospital………

Kashish- ok …….dr hath…….

Daksh-hmmmmmmm……… frm there I came to know………I thought u both w'l tel us bt u didn't

Kashish- that was actually…….

Daksh- its ok…….bt u know u av doubled our happiness……..

Kashish smiles………(atleast someone is happy n tear falls down frm her eye)

Daksh- hey wat happen

Kashish- nothingggg

Daksh- ek baat kahon…..

Kashish-hmmm

Daksh- hame hamesha jo dekhta wo sach ho ye jarori nahi……………..kahin bar aankhein bhi dokha kha jati hain……..

Kashish- daksh tum…….

Anagd- bro if u av finished wid ur dressing can we go to downstairs……mom is waitng for sujal n kashish……..

Wen sujal also comes there……..

N all four comes down where veena was waiting for them

Veena- where were u all three xcept angad…..

Daksh- mom u know this sujal ……….how much time he takes to get ready…….

Sujal- main…mom bro is lieing…….i m ready frm last half an hour…….bt bro…..

Veena- ok ok ..i know who is lieing..right daksh.so u both sto fighting………n daksh n angad u go to outhouse……..guests has already started arriving.ur dad is already there…u also go……attend guests…….n khanna family is also coming so go n check wether they av reached or not…….

Sujal- go bro……may b someone waiting for u….(he winks at daksh)_

Veena- sujalllllll………..

Sujal- ok mom……

Veena- waise kashish ur looking simply beautiful in this saree……..tumhe kisi ki nazar na lage……

Kashish(smiles)- thanx mom…..

Daksh(wid a sad face)wats abt three of us……

Veena- (aww creases his cheeks)- all three of my sons r looking very handsome today…….

Then daksh n angad leav for d outhouse……..n veena take sujal n kashish to d temple

All three fold their hands in front of GOD……n then veena gives a black thread to sujal……

Sujal- mom this…..

Veena- I want u tie this at kashish arm …….it will protect her n her child frm evils……

Kashish n sujal smiles n sujal ties it at her arm……..

N then both take blessing of veena

Veena – may GOD bless u both ….na actually three of u……………………….n

All three leave for outhouse……………….

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Posted: 16 years ago
awwwww heeenu was waiting 4 u 2 update and finally u did!!1 wot can i say it was an awesome part!!!! so Kashish was dreaming at the beginning!!!! i thought it actually happened!!!! but it was still a beautiful imagination....and then loved hw he couldnt get his eyes of her and was staring at her from the washroom door...soo cute!!! and hw she was playing with the teddies just 2 avoid him....then Sujal coming infront of her and not letting her go!!!! yaar yeh daksh ki timing aik dam galath hai!!! kuch der baad aana chahiye tha usse....but that was a lovely moment...loved the convo between sujal kashish and daksh...sujal was getting angry!! but finally Kashish laughed...now cnt wait 2 see if they do have a prince or princess in their life....so daksh found out from the doctor!!! well am glad he did.....then the last part in the mandir was really sweet hw he tied the black thread on her arm... cnt wait 2 see wot happens next jaan!!! do update sooooon!!!!! luv summi xxx
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Posted: 16 years ago
wow henu me super happy tat u updated amazing part cont soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
Haila....!
Super chota part tha ye toh !!
Aur last part ka scene sapna tha kashish ka??
Dil ke Armaan aasuo me beh gaye...Boo-Hoo !!
Continue Soon !!
Luv,
Vandu
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey heenu...nice part....small part but still nice....loved the convo between sujal and daksh....and finally kashish laughin wit open heart...cont soon dear wit a big part....
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Posted: 16 years ago

Hey heenu.......first of let me tell u i m so angry on u bcoz u updated so late and u tell me to update everyday .........but anyway for the love of this ff, i can forgive you.....omg i love sujal n kashish's relation....they r super cute........i mean i love their cutie cutie talk..........kashish is feeling she is gonna have son and he is her partner.....how sweet mother n son............i like daksh n sujal's planning to make kashish happy.........so lage raho sujal.......kyunki kashish aise haath nahi manegi.........i love kashish n daksh friendship n again so happy ki tumne us wamp ka naam nahi liya........i m so happyyyyy.........ple ple ple ple ple continue soon.....thanks............

love
Kashish
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