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Posted: 16 years ago
wow heenu gr8 part but whi is tat man who scared kashish i think is tushar
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hey heenu......chalo is bar maff kiya teri bhul ko kyunki tune itna achcha part likha hai to lekin agli bar se dair mat karna samji tu.,,,,,,,,,,ab is part ki shuruaat to bahot achche se hoti hai........sujal kahsish ka kitna khayal rakhta hai aur dance ka kya kahoon........one of my favorite song so..........it was so good but than i feel like killing riya.........phir se kabab me hadi banne aa gayi woh..............tere ko main bad me dekhti hoon pehle us mask man ko muje thikane lagana hai.........bahot pareshan karta hai kashish ko woh bhi is halat me...........yeh bhi riya ka hi plan hoga i swear about it...........lekin is hadse se kashish ke muh se sachchi bahar aa gayi ki woh sujal aur bache me se kiis ke bina nahi reh sakti.....aur sujal ne bhi kitne pyaar se kashish ko sambhala..........yeh dono ek dusre se alag reh hi nahi sakte........and i m sure ki neend me bhi kashish ne us kiss ko mehsus kiya hoga tabhi woh sujal ko chod nahi rahi thi lekin ab aage kya hoga ......i m so glad but i want them to have a happy family............heenu jaldi se continue karo aur is mystry ko khatam karo warna main riya aur us aadmi ki supari de dungi...........thanks for this wonderful update............

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Edited by goodkashish - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
great. cont soon and expose riya soon so that sujal and kash are back together n happy
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Posted: 16 years ago
Ughh.........Crappy ria is back to her tricks....Churail aurat...haha !!
Who was that monkey -masked man !!
Maaro maaro!!!
Continue soooooooooooooon !!
Luv,
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Posted: 16 years ago
woah dear🤗 its really an awesome one⭐️ superb😊😊 so Riya came again😡 but who is trying to kill Kashish😭 and whats that Angad said he will arrange detective but why he don't arrange till now😡 plz continue it soon😛 & thanks for the pm😉

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Posted: 16 years ago

hey guys thanx a lot for ur precious comments...n guys i m very sorry that i m posting this part after a long time bt guys i was damn wid my studies......n guys i av tried my best to write this as good as i can bt pls forgive me 4 my mistakes ..........


part-35


Now it was 2 a.m in d morning……….wen sujal open his eyes……..n finds kashish is sleeping peacefully…….he slowly takes his hand frm kashish's hand…n moves towards d side table where jug of water was placed…….n drinks some water…..n he turns to take his place on bed …….wen he sees two person standing in d garden.he moves towards window…….n try to figure out bt not properly due to dark outside

Sujal(himself) – at this time what r these two doing in garden n who r they..i should check out……..n he quietly goes down……bt bf4 going he comes to kashish n covers blanket over her properly……….n moves his hand over her head……

He goes down n put on lights of d room……wen he finds riya is coming inside….frm d door….

Both r shocked looking at each other……

Sujal- wat r u doing outside at this time,…….

Riya( stumbling wid words.)- that I mean .i m ….i was…..

Sujal- y ur stumbling wid words…….like u av caught

Riya- no..i mean…nothing like this……I was just strolling outside coz I was not feeling sleepy…..

Sujal- at 2a.m in d morning………quite strange……..i hope ur not lying n moreover y ur sweating

Riya- no I m not…….actually there is quite hot outside…….

Sujal- riya I think u need a doc….coz temperature is quite cool outside………

Riya- no I think I m feeling sleepy………I m going.she quickly moves towards her room

Sujal remain standing there aving suspicious look at his face…….n he also goes in his room……

He goes n takes other bed n sits their quietly looking at kashish……..n he keeps his hand on her forehead……..

Sujal(himself)- tumhe to kah diya sab theek ho jayega………par khud hi nahi janta ye sab kab theek hoga…….aur tum jaanti ho main kitna dar gaya tha tumhe waise halat medekh kar….tumhe kho dina ka dar hi meri jaan nikal deta hai……pata hai kashish mujhe apni beti ka kitni besabri s intezar hai….he touches his stomach……kunki wo hum dono ko pura kar degi……aur tum dekhna hamara bura waqt bahi jald khatam ho jayega…….

Now its 6 a.m in morning wen kashish opens her eyes……..n finds sujal sleeping nxt to her n his one hand very carefully lying on her waist

Kashish feels so protective n her lips folds into smile…..she sees him who was in a deep sleep…..she carefully moves his hand frm her waist…..n tries to get up…..wen she feels that her head is spinning…….she sits there for sometime……..

Kahish(herself)- this morning sickness …..its relli giving me hard time…..kashish finally gets up frm d bed.n starts moving towards washroom…..bt her legs were not supporting her……she was feeling so weak…..she holds d corner of d bed….she again tries to move bt she just takes few steps….n holds her head which is spinning n is abt to fall wen suddenly she finds a tight grip around her waist n shoulder…..

Sujal takes her to d bed n makes her sit there properly

Sujal- r u ok……

Kashish- yes bt I m feeling quite weak. thats it

Sujal- kashish u r not taking proper care of urself…..y u r so careless towards ur health…..u urself a doctor bt doesn't know how to take care of urself….how can u forget this that ur pregnant…….n being so irresponsible towards our child…….u didn't av ur meal at nite also..y….wat ever d reason u can't skip ur meals…not a single one….do u get that…..n today I w'l take an appointment frm doctor for ur check up….

Kashish was just continuously listening to him carefully…….

Kashish- sujal……main tumhe samjh nahi pa rahi hoon……pls tel me onething….as far as I know we r just trying to be together infront of family….bt reality is something else I n u both r aware of it….than y u r so worried abt me n my child……..

Sujal- I don't feel like to answer ur question……

Kashish- no u av to give…

Sujal- coz wat so ever circumstances n differences b/w us…..this child is innocent n that's y I m worried abt him…..n till we r here u n this child is my responsibility…….i hope ur getting my point(he turns around facing otherside while saying this)

Wen he again turn around to see her n he finds that she has already leave for d washroom…….

He closes his eyes n a tear slip frm his eyes…….

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He goes down n comes back after sometime…….n finds kashish standing near d window pane……

Kashish turns around n sees sujal for once n again start looking outside d window……whilst sujal takes his clothes frm closet n goes to washroom……..

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Kashish was still standing near d window wen some one knocks at d door……..n she goes n open d door

Servant- mam aapka breakfast…….

Kashish- par itni jaldi abhi to koi utha bhi nahi hoga…..

Servant- mam wo actually sujal sir ne kaha tha ki aapke liye abhi break fast banaya jaye……isliye

Kashish- theek hai…she takes breakfast frm him………till then sujal also comes out frm washroom……

Kashish place d breakfast on d table…..

Sujal- maine ye table pe rekhne ke liye nahi mangwaya…..just av it now…….

Kashish without saying anything takes d plate n sits on d bed…….bt still not start eating

Sujal comes there n sits infront of her…….n gives her boiled eggs wid cereals….n a glass of milk. n takes his coffee……

Kashish just eat a bit …….n starts getting up

Sujal- holds her hand……sits here n finish it…..n this milk also…….

Kashish sits again.n start eating ……..bt again she eats lil bit more n starts going

Sujal again makes her sit again………

Kashish- sujal plssss iska taste bahut ganda hai…….aur phir yr dood(milk)…I can't handle all these things…….plsssss I m not a patient…….

Sujal- bt ur pregnant..so its good for ur health….so just finish it……n I m taking appointment frm doctor ……..

Kashish- sujal plss I w'l manage……n I m ok now…….plsssss.. if I relli need I w'l go to doctor. i promise……plsss …n don't u t need to av worried abt us……she looks into his eyes for a sec…..n then she just leave d breakfast n goes down….

Sujal sits their for some minutes……he also comes down where kashish was sitting wid veena

Sujal- gd morning mom . n where is bro?

Veena- gd morning sujal ….n daksh has left for hospital actually there was some emergency…

Wen angad comes there……

Angad- chale sujal..we r getting late……

Veena- where u both r going..firstly take ur breakfast…….

Sujal- mom pls we r getting late .there is an imporatnat…I promise we w'l av something later on..now bye v r going

He looks at kashish for once…..n quickly says…….take care of urself…….

Sujal n angad leave for their meeting wid detective………

In d way sujal tells angad abt d last nite incident……..n than abt riya n that other person also…..n feel that there is some connection b/w riya n that killer……

Finally they reach at detective office……..

Angad- hi aryan…….

aryan- hi angad

angad – met my frnd sujal garewal……..

Aryan- hi sujal……u both make urself comfortable here..i order something for u……

Sujal-pls there is no need of all these…….just start wid our work….plss……

Aryan- I can understand sujal…….angad has already told me abt ur case….bt now I want to know each n very thing frm very starting…….don't hide anything…….only than I can help u……n I promise I w'l find out d that person asap…..

Sujal- thanx…….n he starts telling him d whole things…..frm very starting wen he met riya…n tills tomorrow's incident

Aryan- ok now I w'l try to join pieces of this unsolved puzzle just give some time……n one thing I want to ask……that wats d xactly time differnce wen u knocked wid that person..n wen u enterd back in d house…….

Sujal tells him d near abt difference

Aryan- sujal one thing is very clear……that person didn't come to kill ur wife….he just wanted to make her threaten ....nothing else. otherwise he was aving sufficient time to kill her bt he didn't…….n if I m not I m going on a right path……..just give me pics of riya n tushar both………

Sujal- yes I av brought it wid me………

Sujal gives pics to him……n says thanx

Aryan- plsss sujal don't say thanx its my job n I promise I w'l find that person very soon….don't worry nothing will happen to ur wife……n congrats that ur going to become a father soon

Sujal- thanx

Sujal n angad both leave frm aryan's office……..angad goes to office n sujal goes to daksh…….

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Veena- kashish I n ur dad av to go….to invite some frnds of ur dad's for daksh's marriage……so would u like to go wid us…..coz its urgent otherwise they r going out of station for nxt week……n after that we w'l not get time to go…….

Kashish- no mom u ppl go I would like to stay at house……

Veena- bt no one is here….n I don't want u to live alone…..

Kashish- mom don't worry I w'l manage……n even I was planning to go hospital……

Veena- hospital bt y…….

Kashish- don't worry mom…actually I was thinking to meet dr kirti n take an appointment also for my regular check up…….

Veena- ok then I m also coming wid u n will go there later…..

Kashish- mom pls don't worry……I promise I w'l take proper care of myself.i w'l not drive at my own….., I w'l take my food at proper time……..nything else mom…….

Veena smiles at kashish…..n creases her cheeks………….can u plssss inform sujal abt all this……..

Kashih – yes mom….

Kashish leaves for d hospital after some time n do veena n lalit too ………………

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Sujal reaches at hospital n enters in daksh's cabin……

Daksh- I was waiting for u sujal…..sorry I couldn't come wid u actually ……..

Sujal- its ok bro.i can understand…….u r wid me that's enough for me…..n angad was wid me there na. so pls there is no need of sorry…….

Daksh- then tel me wat Aryan said to u……..

Sujal- bro I also want to tel abt d incident happened at nite…….

Daksh- wat…?

Sujal tells him each n every thing…….d conversation b/w him n Aryan also……..

Daksh- this riya……I w'l not leave her……

I think sujal u should take kashish somewhere ………it will be good for her. she feel good n different

Sujal- bt I don't think so she will go wid me……u know

Daksh- ok I w'l call her.then we 4 w'l go I , u kashish n khwaish.ok…….

Sujal- ok…

Daksh- dials her no……..bt no response frm d other side…….

Sujal- wat happens bro

Daksh- she is not picking up d phone……

Sujal- try again

Daksh dails her no thrice bt no response……..

Sujal also tries……bt again no response……damn y she is not picking up d cell

Daksh- sujal don't worry may be she left her phone somewhere …..main mom ko phone karta hoon…..tum ghar karo…….

Daksh calls veena

Daksh- mom where r u?

Veena- I n ur dad is going to mr mittal house for inviting him…..y kashish aven't told u na

Daksh- bt y kahish told me…..she is not here

Veena- bt she left wid me for d hospital….she was saying that she want to met dr kirti n she is going to take appointment also for her routine check up…..y don't u try her cell

Daksh- mom actually we want to give her a surprise……that's y I called u up……so that I come to know where she is……..

Veena- ok…bt beta tc of her……

Daksh- ok mom….

hE cuts d call

sujal- bro y did u lie to mom…….

Daksh= coz mom was saying kashish is here only…..mom n dad r going somewhere

Sujal- n that's y servant were saying that no one is at home.then y she is not picking up d cell

Daksh-lets go..i think we should ask dr kirti….

Sujal n daksh……first go at reception for knowing abt dr kirti's duty…..

Reception

Daksh- sister…where is dr kirti…

Sister- actually she is busy in a surgery frm last two hours..dr kashish was also asking for her

Daksh- kashish…she came here……bt when..

Sister- actually she came half an hour ago.n she asked frm me abt dr. kirti.bt she was not free.so she left for ur cabin…bt then just after 15 min she left frm here .n d most strange thing she didn't sign d visiting book……

Suddenly sujal cell start ringing…..

Sujal picks d call……talks to someone…..

Sujal- bro kashish is at home…..

Daksh- bt how do u know

Sujal- kaka ka phone tha……kashish abhi ghar aayi hai…..

Daksh- so y she is not picking up d call……I dunno bro ye to ghar jakar hi pata chala ga

Suddenly a sister comes there

Sister- dr daksh dr mehra is calling u.its urgent…..

Daksh- ok I m coming

Daksh- sujal I m sorry.tu ja main abhi aata hoon….aur ghar pohanchte hi mujhe call kar dena.i will try to come back asap

Sujal leaves frm d hospital…..n he drives as fast as he can to reach his destination…

Nearly after 20 min, he reaches d house……

Sujal directly enters in his room, bt no one was in his room

Sujal- kaka where is kashish…….

Kaka- wo upar terrace PAR HI

SUJAL RUNS TOWARDS TERRACE

Kashish was sitting on d swing…n its going to n fro slowly…..n it almost going to be rained…..

Sujal was already very angry….he goes n stand at her side……bt still she doesn't respond…she was just sitting n lost somewhere in her thoughts n not facing him……..

Sujal- kashish…..ye sab kya hi.main kab se tumhe phone try kar raha hon…..can't u pick up ur cell…….pata hai main kitna dar gaya tha……agar tumhe khuch ho jata to.how u can b so careless……n aur tum janti ho na

Kashish suddenly turns face….n stands in front of him her eyes r totally red

Kashish- kya janti ho main sujal……ye ki riya mujhe marna chahti. ya ye ki tumne mujhse dor jane ka natak kiya…..ya ye ki tumne mujhse itni badi baat chupaayi……..bolo sujal kya nahi jaanti main……tumhi bata do….she again sits on swing n covers her face wid her plams .n start crying……..

Sujal keeps standing there…..n in complete shock(now he is getting y she left frm hospital suddenly coz she had heard d conversation b/w daksh n sujal)

He goes down on his knees n sits in front of her…….n takes her hand in his……bt till her eyes r down……

Sujal- kashish meri baat suno……main tumhe bata na chahta tha……..par…main dar gaya tha…..kunki agar riya ko iss baat ka pata chal jata to wo……

Kashish- to wo kya…..wo mujhe mar dalti…..sujal is tarah jine se to bahut acha hota ki main mar jaati…..coz I can' live widout u…..

Sujal stands n sit by her side.n hugs her tightly……kashish kabhardar agar dubara aisa khuch bhi kaha….maine ye sab tumhare liye kiya…aur tum…agar tumhe khuch ho jayega .tu main bhi nahi ji paunga…….i luv u more than my life…..tum meri zindagi ho….

Kashish cries out of her heart… bt d tears which were falling frm her eyes this times surely taking away her pain frm her heart…..which was stored there frm last many months…….n she was felling so safe in his embrace ……like.she wanted to be there forever…….

Kashish- I m sorry sujal……I hurt u a lot…….i m relli very sorry….

Sujal separates her frm him….n make her to face him……I m sorry kashish…...muje tumhe sab khuch bata dena chahiye tha……meri wajah se tumhe kitna khuch sehna para…aur jab tumhe meri sabse jayada zarorat thi…..i left u…..i m relli very sorry……..par ab aise nahi hoga………I luv u kashish……

Kashish- I luv u too n goes in his arms again…..

Wen suddenly drops of rain start falling on their faces……n it was like GOD was blessing both of them……n it was like an end of their miseries n bad time……

Kashish remains in his arms for some time

Wen Rain starts falling heavily…….

Kashish separates herself frm him n stands frm there n open her both arms slowly moving her face towards heaven….n starts feeling those rain drops …….bt this time these rain drops creating some magic…..she closes his eyes…….. her

Sujal(smiles) while looking at her innocent face….on which her smile has return back…..n drops of rainfall making her way on her face frm her forehead to nose than going through her rose petals like lips finally entering into d curve of her necks…..giving her sensuous look…bt still pure like an angel

Sujal gets up frm his place.n takes his steps towards her…..……

Finally he goes n stands behind her n places his palms over her…..tightly filling d gaps b/w her fingers wid his…n places his lips on her bare shoulder ……… kashish feels a sensation through her body …n she closes her eyes more tightly

Sujal slowly bring his hands on her wist n turns her around face to face..…

Kashish slowly opens her eyes…her lips were shivering n droplets of water on her lips were looking like dew over petals of rose……sujal cups her face…..n this time kashish doesn't say anything……….. she quietly closes her eyes like she is ready to melt down ……n his lips captured her lips…….n this time d this kiss was just full of love….aving lots of passion….n craving ……..

Edited by angel 16 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

hi heenu.........is bar tuje maff kiya kyunki ise padhke mera dil khush ho gaya aur mera mann kar raha hai main nachu aur gau..........lekin nahi kar sakti mama jo hai......anyway the part was so so so good...........it was worth it to wait.......pehle to sujal and kashish ........wow it was so good........sujal made her to eat and tell her to visit doc..........was good.......angad n sujal detactive work was well done..........sujal n daksh r truly brothers............poor kashish gets to know from others........i wished sujal had told her bcoz it felts like ur own husband doesnt trust her............but that their way....the last scene.......kya kahoon main kuch samaj me nahi aa rahaa.............choti si choti detail bhi.........wow too good........i luv it......it ended perfectly with perfect kiss with perfect rain........i just luv it........is comment me riya ka zikar karke mood nahi bigadna chahti.........but too good.........ple ple ple continue..........thanks

love

Kashish

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hey heenu dear very cool part............loved the way sujal takes care of kashish makin her to hav proper meals......had sujal got down a few secs before then he could hav got a glimpse of the stranger but alas atleast he found out riya red handed that she is the other person of the 2...jus hopin the stranger to be found sooner....now kashish has come to know abt the truth and am happy that now there wil be no more misunderstandin between them and the rain scene was so superb....no romance in the rain that too for sk impossible..........keep cont dear soon..........
Edited by spvd - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hey Heena thanx a ton for the wonderful update... oh finally the misunderstandings r over..Sujal n Kashish r together.. luv u for this... hope tht Riya gets caught soon.. Plzz continue soon...
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Posted: 16 years ago
wow heenu awesome part really loved it me so happy tat the misunderstandings are finally over gr8 part cont soon

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