*.*ONE DAY*.* FF P14 Pg 71 NEW* Note 76

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Jia

@jia..

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Posted: 17 years ago

#271

Awww first of all Asthu really so sorry for this delay. Nyways making it up now....

i simply loved this part. The way he was talking to her the first scene. Aww so very cute. 👏

Hope she forgives him now.the entire scene brilliantly described. 👏

Next the way ridz is still fiting with her dilema!! Asthu ur really doing a great job there.
And the way he was J wen he heard Karan had called to meet.Cant wait to see wat happens next.Hope u continue soon. 😳

Hope its a longer part next 😆
love 😳
Jia

Edited by jia.. - 17 years ago

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@--Princess--

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Posted: 17 years ago

#272

Brilliantly written.

AWESOME.

But why isn't Riddhima forgiving him now? He's fallen in love with her lekin phir bhi she wants a divorced..

please don't let them have a divorce..pleas 😳

and plz pm me wen u update ur FF.

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mahru

@mahi4u

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Posted: 17 years ago

#273

hey

wowwwwwwwwwwww!!!!!!!!!!!

dat was a grt prt yaar 😉 😉

ridzi ur takin time n armis diein yaar 😉 jaldi say man jao na 😳 😳

cont super sooooooooonnnnnnnnnn
luv ya n tak care
mahru

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chaiti!

@chaiti!

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Posted: 17 years ago

#274

hey awesum part!!! plz cont soon....

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kriti mehera

@Love''sAngel

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Posted: 17 years ago

#275

waiting for ur update
continue soon

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Simone

@-simi-

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Posted: 17 years ago

#276

amazing part!!! im not sure if i commented on ur last part... cuz i remember reading it in a rush..AND ITS BEEN SOO LONG 😉 but anywys.. i'll comment anywys.. 😆 but another truly brilliant part.. filled with emotions taht i can feel inside of me 😛

i feel sooo bad for armaan that she keeps rejecting him.. .but then in one way its his fault as well.. everytime he gets too emotional about her, he loses his patience and becomes almost violent with her which would scare any girl

hopefully she sees his true good side soon and accepts his chance 😳 😳

continue soon! its been forever!! lol 😛

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@yogzz

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Posted: 17 years ago

#277

astha yaar jaldhi se continue karo na aur kitna intezaar karwaoongi?

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Tas

@Tas

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Posted: 17 years ago

#278

ur fancfic is jsstt tooo good for words to describe yaar...its
addictive..awesome..its so touching..i jst love it...plsss plsss update
soon...cant w8 anymore ...plsss yaar itne din se tumhari fanfic dhoond rahi
thi...for reading this part....finally milgaya...ab plssss update kar do...i am
dying to see armaan and riddhima confession scene..