*.*ONE DAY*.* FF P14 Pg 71 NEW* Note 76

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prerna

@prernawaghray

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 17 years ago

#261

hey asthu 😊
thanks for the pm sweety 😉
sorry for late comments 😭 😭 😭
well this part was superb n im glad that armaan's back to normal 😉
n well plz dont separate them yaar 😭 😭
finally armaan accepted that hes fallen for her 😳 😳 😳
wow that gets so exciting 😳 😳
n he getting dreams also 😳 😆
well update fast coz cant get over all this soon so a fast update will keep the effect going
👏

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kriti mehera

@Love''sAngel

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#262

just read ur fick...
its gr8...
AR r really a cute couple...
hope ridz is able to forgive Arman
continue soon

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Harpreet

@gidha

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#263

Wow pink great update
And soooooo romantic
Plz update soon 😃

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sonia

@dmg_sonia

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 17 years ago

#264

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Ekdam speechless!!

Yaar I have tears!!

Aur kya likha tha...pt 7 n 8 were just 2 good

in pt 7 the way u wrote their dance sequence...2 the way u wrote their other interaction in rest of the scenes were jus BRILLANT...but yea it was sad 2 see they r still separate...but i know sooner or later they r going 2 be 2geher...

i must say ur a wonderful writter 👏 👏 👏

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VIDUSHI

@vidu93

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#265

hi astha
im soooo sorry for commenting so late.i got busy
i read the last two parts.im speechless.they r so beautiful written that i have no words to describe
continue soon

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Anita Malik

@anitamalik

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 17 years ago

#266

your ff is really really good..couldn't stop reading it..please continue soon!

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Jodubai

@Jodubai

Voyager

Posted: 17 years ago

#267

Hi Astha, really a mindblowing part, no words to describe it at all 👏

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Natasha

@Ladoo645

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 17 years ago

#268

Hey Pinky, 😆 I still dono whts ur name.

Must say, it was a really heart warming part 8 wrote, it was short, but satisfyin.

PPLLLLLLLEEASSSEE dun't leave us waiting long for part 9 plzz!

-Natasha