kuch humein hua-sk fanfic (last part) - Page 27

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k ko elbow sw pakad ke garden se bahar nikaal deta hai


k ko nikaal ke comes back to his place

s-phew!

his eye balls dilate suddenly

s-sh*t! she knows ! it was to be a surprised !

achanak se mudta hai

to saamne k ko pata hai, smiling at him cutely with her arms crossed

s is completely baffled now, kya kare kya bole

complete bhondu expresion

s-it..it was supposed to..be a surprise

k hass padti hai

k-tumhe nahi lagta , tumhe mujhse kuch kehna chahie?

s-emm..han..main..wo...

confusion mein baalon pe haath pherta hai

she smiles more

k-uff bhondu! itna bhi nahi keh sakte ! chalo repeat after me. say 'I'

s-I

k-'love'

s-love

k-'you'

s-you

k-bass kehdia naa

s-[gives a bhondu wali smile] keh dia [sar hilake]

he looks into her eyes

looks down , blushes a bit khushi ke maare ki usne keh dia , apno balon pe haath ferta hai

achanak upar dekhta hai

suddenly alarmed

s-tum nahi kahogi?

she smiles sweetly

k-kahungi naa, i love you too!

s khushi ke maare khil khila jaata hai

samaj nahi paa raha kya kare

he goes to hug her

k-wait

he stops

k-pehle mujhe promise karo, sharab peena chodne ki koshish karoge

s-koshish ????? arre chod dii ! tumhe pasand nahi naa ! ussi din se chod di , jab dil ne ye kaha ki ye dil bass tumhare lie dhadakta hai

k smiles

looks down, tuckin her tresses behind her ears

their eyes meet each other

he comes closer to her & takes her in his arms

she slowly closses his eyes

their closesness turn into a beutiful kiss

nice ud sweet end tha per bohat chota tha na any ways gud ff

hey dear................that was really nice............thank god u updated it...................sujal was so silly but everything went out fine....................twas nice ending...........................congrats on completing the sweet story dear..............do start another one..............

hi dear....sabse pehle bahot hi achchi aur sweet story thi....i really love it...it was so diffrent n so cool....aur kehte ha na ki pyaar woh insaan hai jo insaan ko devadas to kabhi insaan ko janwar se insaan banata hai....aur yhi hua....aakhir kar apne pyaar ke liye Sujal ne sharab chod hi di...kyunki aaj tak sharab se sari zindagi bigadi hi hai...lekin muje khushi hai ki kashish ke pyaar me itni takat thi ki sujal ne itni buri aadat chod di woh bhi kashish ke kehne se pehle.....i really love it....aur jis tarah se usne kashish ko prapose kiya it was so cool...bahot hi achcha tarika hai....i just wish ki woh dono aage aise hi khushi ke saath rahe aur koi muskeli na aaye....aur ghar me bhi sharab na aaye...i just love it....ple start ff with SK soon......u r a very good writer n creator...keep it up

thanku very much all my readers. pehle to aapne iss story ko itne dino ke baad bhi yaad rakha , aur itna sarahaa. luch readers ko to maine pm bhi nahi kia phir bhi wo itne pyaare hain ki mere lie stry padi, comment bhi kiya.

bohot hi pyaara comment tha kashish, jaanti ho kitna miss karti hoon ye comment tumhare. ye comment hi hain jo stry ko speciel banate hain. aur nisha ur too cool i loved ur emoticons, ur a sweetie, aur saumya ji to hai hamari sp reader, aur sheela ur so witty i love u, thanxs to spvd too,aur baaki saare readers jo jude the iss stry se i wanna give them my heartiest thanxs.

aur agar aisa hai ki meri stry aur padni hai, dont worry main chutti par hoon 25 tak tab tak jitna chhe update le lo. waise abhi ek stry chal rahi hai.

its called vampire & angel.

kisi ne nahi padi ho, ya naa pata ho to plz padna zarur, buri nahi hai.

ye lo link

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1176178

heyyyy nice part........................n cute ending................................buhat dinno ky baad post kia......................v were waiting for sooo long....................but nice way sujal proposed..........................kitna sharma raha tha..........................soooooooooo cutee...............................

grt ending