kuch humein hua-sk fanfic (last part)

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Posted: 17 years ago
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in this fic-

kashsih is in doin her MBA.her family has 4 ppl herdelf,her litttle sis mehek mom & dad,her dad is a manager in a very good hotel,but then also there financial condition is not much sound. her dad has responsibility 2 run the family & the 2 daughter's studies & savin 4 thiere marriage also. k wana do a par time hob 2 help her family ,paar prob is she cant work in day as she has classes & studies. so she decides 2 do a job as a bartender/waiter in her dad's hotel's bar,so tht wo dad ke nigraani mein bhi reh paae while workin in night also

aur iss taraf hai Mr sujal gareal wohi,mr business tycoon the arrogant angry young man the frudtrated sadu hot shot dude,jiska almost wo bar hi ghar hai

maanlo inke hotel ka bar chal hi sujal ki dua se raha hai,sujal naa aae to bechare kadke ho jae

sujal ko iss bar mein aate hue kaafi saal ho chuke hain,he comes daily there

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Posted: 17 years ago
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aaj k ka 1st day hai-

s enters the bar

kaam ki tension se thakaa -haara,tie loosened,kandhe mein coat lataka hua

comes & sits on a bar stool

he doesnt give order & all 2 any waiter,as he is so frequent saare waiters knw his taste no1 asks him,jat provides

paar idhar k to nayi hai,k ko to iss baare mein kuch bhi pata nahi hai

she sees ki ek naya cutomer aaya hai,so goes 2 him

k-gud evenin sir!may i help u? 😊

s sar uthata hai,surprised hearin a female voice

aur uske saamne khadi hai, ek behad khubsurat aur cute si paro,jiski smile har brand ki cheeni se zyada sweet hai

she is wearin a bartender uniform white shirt,black waiist coat,black skirt,aur ek bohot hi cute si high ponytail on top of her head

k-sir!!!!!!! ur order sir!!!!!!!

s-tum?..tum kaun ho??????

k-em..sir?????...emm..this is my 1st day!


s-go! i want some1 experienced!

k-emm..sorry sir!....baaki sab busy hai!..emm..but i can do equally well,atleast giv me a chance!

s-i am not here 2 give chances!..where is tht guy who usually serves me!

k-he is on leave sir!..emm..sir can i tak ur order..plz!

s-[s sighs]..hmm...stone whisky ...on the rocks..!

k-sure sir!..i'll jst get u! 😊

k goes,paar comes back aft a sec without a drink

k-excuse me sir!..emm..u want ur drink with ice without ice?

s-without! [suppresin irritation]

k-ok sir! thanku sir! i'll jst get u! thanku 4 ur patience!

s-go!

she goes,aft a second again comes

k-excuse me plz sir! emm.. u want salt in ur drink?

s-no! i dont want anythin! jst get me wht i said! fast!

she is a bit taken aback,but calms herself

k-emm..yes sir!sure sir!

she runs 2 get the drink

s ko hadd darje ka gussa aa raha hai,pehle to relax hone aao,aur yahan aake sau sawaalon ka jawab do

paar kuch keh nahi paa raha,ladki hai to!

atlast she brings his drink

k-sir! ur drink! hope u like it! enjoy!

she smiles & goes



Edited by belanila - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey great intro.......reminds me of u me or hum.........ple ple continue with it.......thanks
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Posted: 17 years ago
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she smiles & goes

wo bas 2 kadam chali hi hogi ki-

s-waiter!

she turns in surprise

& sees he has finished the drink

she is amazed ki koi 2 pal mein drink kaise khatam kar sakta hai

s-drink!

k walks 2 him

k-emm..er..but!

s-serve!

k-err..ok..sir waht will u hav?

s-same!

k pours him the same drink,mann mein soch rahi hai kaisa ajeeb insaan hai baap re!

k-sir ur drink!

s-wht is this?

k-err..ur drink sir!

s-i said same!

k-yes sir,it is the same drink i served u jst now,stone whisky on the rocks!

s-i meant the same drink i daily hav aft my 1st 1!

k-but sir,how on the earth wld i knw which drink u usually hav,i joined 2day only!

s-thts not my prob ur supposed 2 knw! 😡

k ko bhi gussa aa raha hai,

but she is keepin a calm atitude in front of him

k-ok sir! plz tell me wht do u want!

s-y shld i tell u i am not suppused 2 tell ,i am supposed 2 get my drinks & relax,go & send some1 experienced!

k-i told u sir no1 is free,kindly give ur order 2 me!

s-then ask them & bring my drink fast,u hav wasted my time enuf!

k ko gussa aa raha hai,ye sidhe tarike se bata nahi sakta,mann to kar raha hai ek tamaachaa maare isko!



Edited by belanila - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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👏 👏 👏 awesome start...sujal is surely irritating 😡 😡 😡 continue sooon 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Nice fiction wah wah kya dhamaky dar entry mari hai hero sahab ne atay he ghusa karring lol awesum story w8ing 4 the nxt prt conti.Asap plz
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Posted: 17 years ago
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s-then ask them & bring my drink fast,u hav wasted my time enuf!

k ko gussa aa raha hai,ye sidhe tarike se bata nahi sakta,mann to kar raha hai ek tamaachaa maare isko!

k goes 2 some other waiter

k-shyam suno!

sh-haan?

k-ye jo wahan baithe hain,kaun hain? jaanaab ke nakhre to dekho,mann to karta hai ki..

sh-arre ye to sujal gareal hai,bohot bade industrialist hain,aur yahan ke sabse regular cutomer,maano bar inhi ke lie chalta ho

k-hmm,paar mein ye kaise jaanu ki ye apni 2nd drink hamesha kya lete hain?

sh-arre tum inhe kya ek ek drink banake serve kar rahi ho?

k-haan!

sh-arre aise to tum yehi karti reh jaogi.aise mat karo

k-to phir?

sh-bass jitni bhi drinks hain,whisky,scotch,rum ,vodka,gin,bacardi,beer,taquila ; sabki ek ek bottle saamne rakhdo,khud jo mann karega pee lenge.wo aise hi har roz aate hain,chup chap peeke chale jaate hain,kisi se ek bhi baat nahi,kisi se koi lena dena nahi

k-oh,thik hai

k goes 2 whre s is sittin

s is smokin a ciggy

k ke aate hi he looks at her

k in a business lik manner,saare drink ki bottles nikalke s ke saamne rakh deti hai
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Posted: 17 years ago
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😆 are yaar why is sujal always a drunkard in your stories
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Posted: 17 years ago
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👏 👏 👏 wah kya chal hai sujal ki k ne sach kaha bohot nakhre hai lol 😆 awesome part continue soon 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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jyoti lagta hai tumhe bohot badi galat fehmi hui hai,yaa to tumne meri saari fics nahi padi,mujhe nahi kakta kismat se hum mile mein s was drunkard ya milke bhi hum milte nahi mein he is a drunkard. aur as such yahan bhi aur hamari adhuri kahani mein bhi he is not a 'drunkard'. of a person drinks tht doesnt mean he is a drunkard or has a drinkin prob,hai naa! every guy [almost] of his society of lik s,& a damn workoholic,indulges full fledgedly in sex,booze & drugs,to vent out the excess tension & stress.but tht doesnt mean he is a devdas

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