kuch humein hua-sk fanfic (last part) - Page 25

bahot hi achcha part tha..........sujal ke jooth se jyada sach achcha laga.........aur sabse jyada jab woh kashish se kehta hai ki uski galti ki waje se aaj yeh din dekhne ko mila.........yaar muje kashish pe bahot gussa ata hai......i mean how can she let go of him..........kitni muskil ke bad koi aisa chahnewala milta hai.....aur sujal samne se haath badha raha hai aur yeh hai ki............sujal ne use akele nahi chodna chahiye tha..........aaj woh rona chahti hai lekin use rone ke liye ek kandhe ki zaroorat hai........haa hum sab jante hai ki kashish kitni ziddi hai lekin phir bhi sab se jyada komal ek aurat ka dil hota hai............pata nahi kashish apne ghar aayi khushiyon ko tokar mar rahi hai........pata nahi inki zindagi me aage kya likha hai.........kya kabhi sujal ko apne pyaar ka jawab nahi milega............ple is sawwal ke liye jaldi se update karo.......thanks

To abb, s is little disheartened,sad,morise ki k ne uske pyaar ko razamandi nahi di

He is broken frm inside, abb to ummeed bhi tithti jaa rahi hai

Islie faisla kia hai ki abb yahan uska kuch nahi

Wo apni kashsish ko RK se bachana chahta ,uski asliyat k ke saamne laana chahta tha

Wo maksad to kamyab ho gaya, wahan to wo bhale hi jeet gaya

Par pyaar mein haar gaya

To islie usne socha ki yahan uska kuch nahi, he shld leave frm here

Islie s is packin bags,

Subah ki flight book karvai hai

Shaam dhal rahi hai raat hone ko aai hai

There is knock on sujal?s door

S is a bit astonished ki kaun ho sakta hai,he didn?t order anything

s-come in

s is doin his packin & all

a sweet voice-packin kar rahe ho?

S is is alarmed hearin tht voice, bilkul jhatke se peeche mudta hai

Aur saamne uski jaaneman, dil-e-gulzar kashish khadi hai

Usse dekhkar to pehle itna stunned aur khush hai ki samaj nahi paa raha kya bole

s-emm..haan..haan..kal jaa raha hun

k-oh, mujhe bhi to jaana hai,par mere tickets ka bandobast hi nahi hua

s-wo, main apne travel agaent se baat karke kya?

k-[small smile] thanku so much . wo..ticket ek saath ho jaegi naa

s-haan chinta mat karo . karva dunga

thr is certain awkwardness

s to samaj hi nahi paa raha kya kahe

k-emm..wo..emm..bohot raat ho gai hai naa..

s-emm..err..haan..

k-emm..wo..tumne to kapde bhi badal lie..

k-emm..dinner?

s looks at her full surprised

k-chalein?

K walks out of the room

hey wow 2 kool parts re
i just hope by next part they get more closer & love blossoms again😳
keep up the gr8 gud wrk & luv ya loads 4 writing in such big parts

hey very nice part.........aisa lagta hai jaise kashish apni galti sudharna chahti hai.........kyun woh yeh kehna chahti hai lekin labz kuch aur dhundh rahi hai........yun to woh sujal ke saath zindagi bitana chahti hai lekin filhal is safar me jane ko keh rahi hai..............kash kabhi kabhi hum sidhi baat kar sakte....bechare sujal ko lagti thi ki sab kuch khatam ho gaya lekin phir se umeed ki ek kiran dekhne ko mili............phir se jine ki tamnna dikhai dii..........i hope ki wapas mumbai jake sab kuch thik ho jaye aur kashish RK ki office chod ke sujal ke saath kaam karne lage aur unke beech ka pyaar badhta hi jaye.......ab jaldi se continue karo...........loved this part.......thanks

k-chalein?

K walks out of the room

S strts walkin behind her

They reach the beach

s-kya khaogi?

k-sea food [with a excited smile]

s-sea food? [makes a face]..emm..ok fine

they go to a sea food restraint, k makes the order

the food comes

s is all confused aft seein the food

k-kya hua? Aise kya dekh rahe ho? Tumne kabhi sea food nahi khaya? Wo crab hai

s-haan..wo nahi

tabhi the waiter comes & places hammer,nail & various tools aur rakhke chala jaata hai

s is more confused

k-use these to break the shield of the crab

s-oh I get it

s strts his trials & failures of breakin the cover of crab,pura zor laga raha hai ,almost stabbing the crab again & again & messin his plate more & more

k looks at him

k-ruko , tumse nahi hoga main kar deti hun

s takes his plate aur bade araam se aur sahi tarike se crab ki shield nikalke uske pieces karke places the plate in front of s again

k-ye lo eat now

& she strts eating

s is jst looking at the plate blankly

k-kya hua? Abb to kha lo,abb to sab nikal dia naa

s-hmm..haan

abb s also strts eating

s has jst taken 2 or 3 portions ki he strts coughing

he is coughin unceasingly

k-arre arre kya hua? Paani piyo

she gives him glass of water

he drinks it frm her hands

phir bhi koi fark nahi pad raha he is coughin non stop

she strts pattin on his head

k-kya hua,gale mein phas gaya kya?

Dheere dheere his coughin lessens & then stps

k-oh thank god,khaasi to ruki

par kehte hi he strts sneezing

sneezing bhi ek nahi ,full non stop

chik pe chik,chik pe chik

chike hi jaa raha hai

his face has become red

k-arre sujal ,kya..kya hua hai tumko..[worries] chalo..chalo yahan se..

they go outside , on the beach

s jaise taise karke controls his sneezing now

s-ye..yah..i..am fine now..kuch nahi

k-ye achanak kya?

s-wo mujhe actually , I am allergic to sea food

k-oooooooooh , tumne mujhe pehle kyun nahi bataya. Hum nahi order karte . kuch aur khaa lete

s-nahi, its ok..tumhe pasand tha to…-HIC-

k-abb kya hua?

s-kuch..-HIC-..nahi..-HIC-

k-ur ok naa? Sujal [worried]

s-haan..-hic- I sm –hic-..fine..-hic-

they r walkin on the beach

sab ekant hai shaant hai,bass wo samundar ki gadhgadahat hai aur unn dono ki sansein aur haan not to forget sujal ki hiccuppin

they r walkin on the sand,kabhi kabhi ungliyan ek dusre ko chutti,kabhi zara juda hoti,kabhi phir chutti

slowly s with his fingers,gebtly holds her finger

she blushes a bit

k-mausam kitna achcha hai naa

s-h..-HIC-

k looks at him

aur hassi rok nahi pati

she strts giglin ,muh chuupake

s is lookin at her admiring her smile

wo hasse hi jaa rahi hai

k-oh my..oh my god..u were so cute…[pet pakadke hass rahi hai]

suddenly ro sujal's utter surprise

she tip toes & wraps her arms arnd his neck

& plants a bigggggggg juicy muaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah kiss on his cheek

👏👏
ur just 2 gud again & thnxu🤗 4 posting the next cute part asap
wil b w8ing 4 the next 1 & keep up the gr8 parts dear

excellent part just loved the cuteness in kashish gr8 job cont soon