Zindagi Bus Yu Hi updated pg. 150/ 22.12.09 - Page 111

Originally posted by: Deepanwita

HI VERTIKA HOW R U?
OKAY THE UD WAS MINDBLOWING
SUPERB
TOOOOOOO GOOOD
I LOVED IT
ROCKING
OKAY WAITING FOR THE NEXT PART EAGARLY

LOVE
DEEPA

Originally posted by: suhana_dixit

Hi Vertika

How r u ???

Update was really gud...

Hello, thanks for liking 😃 😃 😃

I really liked the conversation between Sarthak n his dad..Shayad dono hi apni apni jagah sahi the but circumstances unke favour mein nahin the...

Aisa aksar hota hai jab hum kisi rishte ko mauka nahi dete hain aur kahin na kahin kami reh jaati hai. 😃 😃 😃

Mr.Malhotra bhi Sarthak ki maa ko kabhi bhool nahin paye n kahin na kahin unhone Jyoti ji ke sath accha nahin kiya..yahi haal Sarthak ka bhi tha..Woh bhi man se kabhi Unhe maa nahin maan paaya..Sarthak kitna emotional ho gaya jab usko pata chala ki uske dad uski stories padte hain😊Chalo end mein sab confusions door ho gaye...

Is ka reason ye hai ki us ne kabhi expect nahi kiya tha ki us k dad ka ye bhi ek side us ko nahi dikha. Jaane anjaane me Jyoti jee k saath bahut kuch accha nahi hua aur is ka pachtava ab dono ko hai.😭 😭 😭

Muskaan n Sarthak ek doodre ke sahi maayne mein soul mates hain..😛Nisha ki bhi mystery solve ho gayi..

Jaldi hi Nisha saamne hogi tum sab k. 😛 😛 😛

Mauli is teasing Sarthak n he is blushing hard...😉😆😳

Abhi to in janaab ke blush karne ke din shuru hue hain..😆😆

Ab aage aage kya ho sakta hai ye dekhna hai. 😳 😳 😳

Continue soon

Bye

I really loved the convo between sartak n jyotijee....mauli kitna tease kar rahi hain sartak ko n its good tune nisha ki bhi mystery solve kardi

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

superb part.I loved it.Nice conversation between sarthak and his father.I loved the conversation between Muskan and Sarthak.

Continue soon dear.thanks for the pm dear.

Originally posted by: rituka7

damn cool
awesome
superb
update soon long asap

Originally posted by: mayadika11

hiiii.........
the ud was........
awesooooome..........
superb......
excellent......
do cont.soon..........

Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid

Yippie.....Sarthak ne sab kuch thik kar liya....he apologised to his Dad.....they had a wonderful scene wid each other.....I specially luved it when MM said he had read al of Sarthak's books.....how nice is that!!! And then Sarthak went to his Maasi....well now Maa....he was complaining like a kid....how cute!!!!
Thanks a lot Sumi mujhe vo scenes likhte hue pata nahi kyoun aisa laga tha ki kuch logon ko bahut pasand aane waala hai bus vahi hua 😊 😊 😊. Maa papa ki kami kisi ki life me koi poori nahi kar sakta aur ab Sarthak ki life se ye kami nikal gayi na. 😃 😃 😃

Sarthak n Muskaan had a nice convo....Nisha k bare me thoda bahut to pata chala.....and in the last scene....every1 was teasing the poor wud-be groom....hehe.
Nisha bhi jaldi hi aayegi is fic me but kaise ye mai abhi nahi bata sakti 😉 😉 😉. Sarthak ka to aaj kal sab k sab mazak hi bana rahe hain na. 😆 😆 😆

A very beautiful part Vertika....I had been w8ing as to when things will be f9 btwn Sarthak n his parents.....and now I'm sooooo happy.
Chalo kisi ki umeedein maine poori ki.......... 😛 😛 😛

Pls continue soon.

Originally posted by: desaiprachi07

Again maine thoda bahut padh liya i mean jyada padhne ka abhi time nahi mila hai. 😃 Muski kaafi dukhi thi na Sarthak k vapas jaane se 😭 par jis tarah se Sakshi ne ek acche dost hona ka farz nibahaya hai aur us ne jaise samhaala hai i just loved that so much.👏 Muskaan n Sarthak k beech ka scene bahut cute tha in jungle me mangal.😳 Kitna cche se jaanta tha na Sarthak ki Muskaan dukhi hogi to us ne jaate hi sab se pehle us ko call kiya, how nice. 😊

Originally posted by: arpita25

Tum pehle ye batao ki mere comments ka reply kyoun nahi deti ho kabhi-2.
sorry yaar aage se time pe kar diya karoongi. 😕 😕 😕

Accha chalo koi baat nahi ab aate hain fic par.

Nice parts (are jo maine padhe hain un k baare me keh rahi hoon) .
Vahi maine socha ki itne jaldi tu yahan kaise pahuch gayi? 😆 😆 😆

Badi masti ho rahi hai madam Muskaan ki Sarthak k saath aur janab bhi lage hue hain. Ab to dil ka haal bura hai janab ka. Shayad yahi hai pyaar.
Dono bechain hain ek doosre k bina par kar bhi kya skate hain dono hi.

Mujhe vo scene bahut cute laga jahan Muskaan ne Sarthak k dil par haath rakh kar us ki dhadkano ko feel kiya aur us k baad khud hi sharmaa k bhaag gayi.

Originally posted by: varshita

Good part, 👏

Badi masti ho rahi thi last part me fic k,😉 sab k sab bechare Sarthak ki leg pulling me lage hue hain.😛 Mauli ka to kaam ho gaya hai har pal apne bhai ko bhabhi ka naam le kar tease karna.😆

Ab to Jyoti jee bhi saath de rahi hain.😆 Sach me Sarthak bhi kamaal hai ki Muskaan k aane k baad hi shopping karenge janaab akele to kuch kar hi nahi sakte na ab.😛

Par poore update ka sab se well written part tha first segment jab Sarthak ne apne dad k saath saari missunderstandings baith k clear kar li aur vo sari ankahi baatein bhi ho gayi jo ab tak kabhi nahi kahi gayi thi.😃

That were the most beautiful moment of the fic.👏

Lastely congrats for completing 150 pages 👏

and soon start a new topic again.😊