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Posted: 15 years ago
That was a nice part....I specially loved Sarthak's convo wid his dad.....finally he's talking wid him a bit freely.....but who's Nisha? Pehle padke laga main bhool to nahi gayi ye character.....but darwaze pe jo khara hai ya khari hai....usse bhi nahi pata....iska matlab mujhe bhi nahi pata....jald hi pata chal jayega....hehe.

It was a very gud part Vertika....pls continue soon.
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Posted: 15 years ago
To kaafi parts padh chuki hoon mai ab tak is fic k i hope mai jaldi hi is ko cover up kar loongi kyounki jis speed se madam aap update karti hain is fic ko mujhe lag raha hai ki latest tak pahuchne me jyada waqt nahi lagega. 😛
Filhaal dono jodon me pyaar to shuru ho gaya par majboori me, 😭 dono ko alag hona pada hai. 😭 Yahan to kuch aisa hai ki Sarthak ko jaana hi pada ruk nahi paaya. Yahan ab Vatsal jee jaane ki taiyaari me hain.😕
Mauli ka kya hoga? 😕 Us ki shaadi to us k dad ne fix karne ko soch li hai.
update soon.
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Lion_Priya

very nice ud...😃 😃 😃
thanks Priya dear 😊 😊 😊
yeh sarthak toh mushkaan ko chodne k mood me hi nahin hai...!!! par bichare ko apne dil k tammanayon par break laga kar mushkan ko chodna hi pada...!!!😛 😛 😛
Kya kare? Kahin bhi chaloo rehta hai aaj kal kuch to socha kare na. 😳 😳 😳
sarthak k dad ne kya plan banaya tha...!!!😛 😛 😛 bichare sarthak ki bolti bandh ho gayi thi...😆!!! achha hua us ne apne dad se maafi maang li...vaise yeh nisha koun hai aur yeh jo chup kar sun raha hai kahin voh mushkan toh nahin...???
Abhi is baare me aap jyada pareshaan mat hoiye madam, jaldi hi pata chal jaayega na. 😉 😉 😉 Yahi kaam sahi bhi tha Sarthak k liye. 😛 😛 😛
cont soon

thanks Priya aur haan chote replies bata rahe hain ki ab is fic ko jaldi hi khatam ho jaana chahiye. 😃 😃 😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
thanks 😊 😊 😊
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Originally posted by: vvdn

nice update dear....hope dono ki shadi jaldi ho jaye.
but pehle ye bata ye NISHA hai kaun???

Nisha k baare me bhi jaldi hi pata chal jaayega tum sab ko. 😉 😉 😉
Shaadi to ab hone hi hai na. Thanks Namita 😊 😊 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: arpita25

Kya baat hai yaar, kitna naughty hai Sarthak. Kitne cutely us ne Muskaan ka mind divert kiya hai na. Jis tarah se us ne Muskaan ko propose kiya i just love the way so much. Pehle vo maan hi nahi rahi thi par ab maan rahi hai kyounki us ko lagta hai ki ab agar us ne accept nahi kiya to Sarthak humesha k liye us se door chala jaayega shayad.

Obviously koi bhi ladki aisa hi sochegi na jis ko pata hai ki bus kuch palon k baad us ka pyaar alag honewaala hai us se. 😭 😭 😭
Sarthak ab lover boy ban raha hai aur sach me vo is role me bhi as usual perfect hai na. 😊 😊 😊
thanks darling 😉 😉 😉
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Part 63:-

"Bete, tumhari maa se hum utna hi pyaar karte the jitna aaj hum aap se karte hain. Ye alag baat hai ki aap ki maa ko hum kabhi keh nahi paaye ki kitna chahte hain hum unhe. Jab vo hum dono ko chod k gayi thi tab unhone hum se vaada liya tha ki hum aap ka khayal rakhenge. Hum acche se jaante the ki maa k bina ek 5 saal k bacche ko paalna kitna mushkil hota hai bus isiliye humne Jyoti se shaadi ki. Aur hum ye baat acche se samajhte the ki aap is baat se hum se khafa hain."

"Par dad massi ko kabhi aap ne apni biwi ka darja nahi diya na. Kahin na kahin is k liye mai apne aap ko zimmedaar manta hoon ki mere hi aap dono k beech hone ki vajah se maasi kabhi aap ki patni nahi ban paayi aur shayad aap bhi maan nahi paaye."

"Sach keh rahe hain aap Sarthak, par shayad aap ki kahani Vasundhara me hi hum ne padha tha kabhi ki Zindagi me pyaar sirf ek hi baar hota hai."

Sarthak gave a surprised look to his father, "Aap meri kitabein padhte hain?"

"Haan, bikul. Yahan aaiye humare saath."

MM Sarthak ko apne library k ek aise kone me le gaye jahan shayad koi nahi jaata tha kabhi. Unhone shelf ka lock khola aur saamne Sarthak ne jo dekha us k baad us ki aakhein fati ki fati reh gayi. Us shelf me Sarthak ki first short story book Saans se le kar latest book Trishna tak rakhi hue thi. Sarthak ki aakhon me aaj khushi k ansoon the.

"Jaante hain beta jab aap apni har story book sab se pehle apne maa k liye rakha karte the na tabhi se humne aap ki saari likhi hue books samhaal k rakhi hue hain. Jab hume waqt milta hai tab hum un ko padhte hain."

Sarthak kuch bol pane ki condition me nahi tha. Us ko samajh nahi aa raha tha ki aaj us k shabd kahtam kyoun ho gaye?

"Humne jab aap ki kahani Maa padhi na tabhi hum aap k adhoorepan ko samajh gaye the. Hum ne aap ki maa k jaane k baad is ghar ki malkin ki hasiyat to de di Jyoti ko par kabhi un ko apni patni nahi maan paaye aur shayad humari bhoolon ki list me ek ye bhi bahut badi galti humare khaate me aa gayi."

Kuch kehna nahi tha, shayad ab baat bus samajhne ki hai. Aaj pehli baar Sarthak bus apne dad k dil aur un k dimaag me hone waale sawalon aur dard ko mehsoos kar raha tha.

"Aap ko nahi lagta ki humne aap ki maasi k saath jo bhi kiya us k peeche kahin humari aap ki maa se beintehaa pyaar karne ki majboori thi?"

"Pata nahi dad, shayad aap sahi hai apni jagah aaj mujhe ehsaas ho raha hai. Phir bhi is me us insaan ki kya galti jis ne aap se pyaar kiya hai?"

Mr. Malhotra sighed, "Haan bte ye hi ek baat hai jo humesha hum ko takleef deti hai jab bhi hum Jyoti ko dekhte hain . Par ek baat pooche aap se?"

Sarthak nodded.

"Aap kabhi Jyoti ko maa kyoun nahi keh paaye?"

Sarthak sochne laga aur kuch der baad us ne kaha, "Jab aap ne massi se shaadi ki to pehle mai bahut khush hua tha massi ko yahan dekh kar. Mujhe laga maa k jaane k baad shayad ab massi mere paas rahengi to mujhe aap ki kami ka ehsaas nahi hoga. Par ek 5 saal k bacche k paas jitne samajh hoti hai us ne apas k bacchon ne ye keh kar khatam kar diya ki vo ab meri sauteli maa hain aur shayad vo mujhe utna pyaar nahi dengi jitna vo apne bacchon ko dengi. Yu keh sakte hain ki mere aas paas k kuch logon ne mere dimaag me jitney tarah k sahi aur galat ehsaas dale the shayad aaj un ki hi vajah se mai massi ko maa nahi keh paya aur dad aap ne bhi to kabhi koshish nahi ki mujhe samjhane ki na?"

"Hum samajh rahe hain Sarthak ki kahin na kahin bhool hum dono se hue hai. Jis tarah hum aap ki maa ko bhool nahi paaye us tarah se aap ne bhi ye socha ki Jyoti ab aap ki massi maa hai aur kahin na kahin un ko ghar me laa k humne aap se doori bana li jab ki hum aisa kabhi nahi chahte the bte." Ab Mr. Malhotra ki aakhon me aaye aansoon ye bayaan kar rahe the ki kahin na kahin vo sach keh rahe hain.

"Yes dad, galat mai bhi tha par samajhna nahi chahta tha. Kabhi to aap ne mujhe ek pita ki haisyat se bula k daate hue ya pyaar se ye baatein samjha sakte the par yahan ye bhi nahi hua." He looked disappointed.

"To kya aap k dad se itne badi galti ho gayi hai ki ab zindagi bhar hume is ki maafi nahi mil sakti?"

Sarthak sochne laga ki kya kahe, filhaal koi jawaab nahi tha us k pass par vo kuch time leta na apna decision k liye jis ki shayad tab us ko jaroorat bhi thi.

After half an hour:-

"Kya hua beta? Tum ko bahut time lag gaya?" Jyoti jee ne poocha.

"Aap se ek baat poochon massi?"

"Haan pooch na."

"Aap mujhe bahut pyaar karti hain na?"

"Haan, is me bhi koi poochne ki baat hai kya? Tu mera baccha hai bhale hi maine tujhe janam na diya ho to kya hua maine paala hai na tujhe aur teri har dhadkan aur har ehsaas samajhti hoon mai." She smiled.

"To mujhe aaj tak aap ne tab kuch kyoun nahi kaha jab mai aap ko maa na bula k massi kehta raha?" his question made Jyoti jee think deeply. "Bataiye maassi aaj tak aap ne kabhi kyoun nahi kaha ki Sarthak beta mai tere hothon se massi ki jagah maa sun na chahti hoon."

Kuch keh nahi saki Jyoti jee, shayad aaj Sarthak jo bhi keh raha tha sahi keh raha tha. Thodi door pe khadi Mauli bahut dhyaan se sab kuch dekh rahi thi apni aakhon me ansoon bhare.

"Aap ne kabhi bhi ek baar kyoun nahi kaha maasi ki Sarthak mujhe maa kyoun nahi kehta tu? Meri har choti badi baat ka khayal rakhne vaali meri maa hi hogi na. Mujhe apni sagi beti se bhi jyada pyaar karne waali meri maa nahi hogi to kaun hogi? Mere bina kuch kahe meri aakhein dekh kar sab kuch samajh jaane vaali meri maa nahi to kaun hogi bataiye aap?" he was complaining like a kid n his eyes were giving way to his tears.

Jyoti jee's voice shook for a moment, "Beta mujhe laga ki mai shayad kahin safal nahi ho paayi teri maa ban ne me; kahin mujh se hi koi kami reh gayi jo aaj tak tu mujhe apni maa nahi samajh paaya kabhi."

"Aisa kaise ho sakta hai? Aap ko pata hai aap duniya ki the best mom hai but mai the worst son."

"Nahi beta khabardaar agar tune kabhi mere bte ko kharaab kaha to. Mujhe pata hai tu duniya ka sab se accha beta hai." She hugged him n their all the pain washed away with their tears.

After ten minutes:-

"Ok mom bus bhi kariye ab. Bhaiya ko itna kyoun rula rahi hain aap, shaadi k baad to in ko vaise bhi bahut rona hai na." she teased Sarhak.

"Aur tujhe to abhi apni vidai me bhi rona hai na." Sarthak teased her back.

Things worked n they made really a happy family afterwards. Muskaan's family informed her about the date n Sarthak too.

"To bus 20 dino baad tum Mrs. Muskaan Sarthak Malhotra ho jaaogi samjhi."

"Hmmmm,"

"Kya baat hai Muskaan tum khush nahi ho lagta hai?"

"Nahi aisa nahi hai Arth."

"Kuch to hai, kuch kehna chahti ho?"

"Nahi vo mai............"

"Is ka matlab kuch poochna chahti ho right?"

"Haan yahi samajh lo."

"batao na?" he asked.

"Ye Nisha kaun hai?"

Sarthak was surprised when she asked him about Nisha. "Tum kaise jaanti ho Nisha ko?"

"Vo maine tumhari aur papa ki baat suni thi bus tabhi se poochna chahti thi."

"Oh, to aap meri jasoosi karti hain?" he teased her.

"Nahi vo..........batao na Arth pls kaun hai Nisha?"

"Nisha meri bachpan ki sab se khoobsurat yaad hai. Vo meri sab se acchi dost thi. Hum dono kareeb 5 saal tak saath the. Phir vo achanak na jaane kahan chali gayi aur ek din mujhe pata chala ki us k yahan se chalne jaane ka reason dad the." He told sadly.

Muskaan was silent for a moment.

"Pata hai Muskaan vo din meri zindagi k sab se khoobsurat din the ?.tab tak jab tak tum mujhe nahi mile thi. Tum se milne se pehle shayad koi bhi aisa pal nahi hoga jab maine Nisha ko yaad na kiya ho par tum se milne k baad shayad maine ek pal k liye us ko yaad nahi kiya. Shayad ye tumhare pyaar ka hi kamala tha jis ne mujhe apni pichli zindagi k dard aur gamon se bahar nikal kar aaj yahan tak pahuchaya hai." Kehte kehte Sarthak ruk gaya shayad Muskaan ne mehsoos kar liya Sarthak ki baton me us k ankahe dard ko.

"Arth,"

"Tum ko pata hai Muski, tum meri zindagi ki sab se badi khushi ho aur tumhare aane k baad to meri duniya hi badal gayi hai. Aaj maine shayad sab kuch paa liya hai apne maa aur apne dad ko bhi."

"Sach Arth?" she asked a little bit excited.

"Haan Muskaan, aaj maine dad se apne galat behavior k liye maafi maang li aur hum dono k beech sab theek ho gaya. Dad ne hi mujhe ehsaas dilaya ki maine aaj tak kabhi massi ko apni maa na maan kar kitna dard diya hai un ko." His eyes moistened.

"Arth, mai bata nahi sakti ki ye baat sun kar mai kitna accha feel kar rahi hoon." She was so much happy.

"Thanks Muski, u know ye sab tumhare hi meri zindagi me aane ka kamala hai. Na tum aaj meri zindagi me aati na aaj mai aur dad aur maa itne karee baa jaate."

"Maine kuch nahi kiya hai Sarthak, tum ho hi itne acche ki tum kisi ko dard do aisa ho hi nahi sakta hai. Maine to tum ko bus ek maa aur pita ki najron se dekhne k liye kaha tha aur shayad tum ne meri baat suni aur sab kuch humare favor me bhi hua jis se aaj tum ne sab kuch vapas paa liya hai." She said smiling.

"Nahi. Is ka credit bus tum ko jaata hai. Pata hai aaj jab maine massi ko maa keh k gale lagaya to un ki aakhon me jitney khushi k ansoon the shayad aaj tak maine nahi dekha kabhi un ko itna khush. Shayad meri apne maa se bhi badh kar unhone mujhe pyaar kiya hai aur apnaya hai. Itna koi nahi kar sakta hai kisi k liye."

"Maine kaha na ki sach me tum itne acche ho ki sab apne aap hota gaya."

"I love u Muskaan for every thing."

"I love u too Arth."

Next day all went back to Solan for preparation of wedding n here the whole Malhotra family was busy in Sarthak's wedding preparations.

"Maa bhaiya ki dresses leni hai aur un ka koi pata hi nahi hai. Batao aise kaise chalega?" Mauli complained.

"Oho to apne bhaiya se hi pooch na."

"Mujhe mile tab na pooch."

"Kahan chala gaya Arth?"

"Dekh lo maa abhi se bhaiya ka ye haal hai na to shaadi k baad to mujhe lagta hai ki wanted k posters lagwaane padenge un k liye." She said smiling tabhi Sarthak aata hai andar.

"Kis k liye posters lagwaa rahi hai tu wanted k?" Sarthak ne aate hi poocha.

"Aap k liye bhaiya." She said.

"Kyoun?"

"Are din bhar aap bhabhi se baat karte rehte ho. Koi aur kaam nahi hai aaj kal aap k paas aur hume bhi nahi karne dete ho koi kaam." She complained.

"Oho madam , kaun sa aap ka aisa kaam hai jo meri vajah se ruka hua hai?" he asked .

"Sarthak beta tum log jaa k shaadi ki shopping kyoun nahi kar lete ho?" Jyoti jee suggested.

"Maa vahi abhi baat kar raha tha mai Muskaan se, maine us ko bola ki vo log yahin aa k shopping kyoun nahi kar lete hain."

"To bhabhi k aane k baad shopping hogi aap ki?" Mauli asked.

"Haan kyoun?"

"Tab ho chuki aap ki shopping."

"Kyoun?"

"Nahi mai acche se jaanti hoon, aap shopping se jyada bhabhi k saath romance me busy rahoge aur hum logon ki koi baat to sun bhi chuke aap tab." She teased to which Sarthak embarrassed.

"Are yaar aise koi baat nahi hai. Maa samjhaiye na is ko." Sarthak ne Jyoti jee ko dekh k bacchon jaise muh banate hue kaha.

"Kyoun pareshaan karti hai us ko jaane de na. Vaise bhi ab vo us ki honewaali biwi hai to us ko nahi to kis ko poochega."

"Maa kya aap bhi?"

All laughed at this n Sarthak still embarrassed.

Edited by Mahak Sinha - 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid

That was a nice part....

thanks 😃 😃 😃
I specially loved Sarthak's convo wid his dad.....finally he's talking wid him a bit freely.....
ye jaroori tha na, kuch baatein jitne jaldi nikal jaaye andar se utna hi accha hai.
but who's Nisha? Pehle padke laga main bhool to nahi gayi ye character.....
nahi abhi tak maine us ko enter hi nahi kiya hai story me ab entry hogi. 😊 😊 😊
but darwaze pe jo khara hai ya khari hai....usse bhi nahi pata....iska matlab mujhe bhi nahi pata....jald hi pata chal jayega....hehe.
vaah kya solid logic diya hai aap ne madam. 😆 😆 😆


It was a very gud part Vertika....pls continue soon.

Thanks Sumi a lot 😳 😳 😳
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