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Posted: 17 years ago
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tat was sooooo niceee...pls cont sooon..
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aww that was the cutest part ever<3
great update 👏
please continue soon!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#93
wobly sonny, toothless smile,!!
chona mona bacha!!!
continue!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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jazzy i just have to say it....
ur a brilliant writer... u catch the emotion...
i loved the update...
pls pls continue sooon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#95
ahh ur scareing the heck out of me lol i just love everything but then the questions u put at the end it just kills comeon sayit alrweay wht up with rannus and kanya's life and whts gooona heppen lol n oo ya i can't wait for the next part =)
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey guys...i wasnt able to update yesterday as i was studying for midterms and had bhaia bhabi over at the house...but here is the next installment 😃😃

Part 11

Even since Ranbir and Kanya had adopted Suraj they couldn't be happier. The Nanda House was no longer the spotless, perfectly designed mansion that it had a reputation of being. It had turned into a complete mad house. Before in the corridors and halls all you saw were expensive art work and beautiful floral decorations...they were now replaced with Lego's and toy trucks. Where one stood a magnificent statue was replaced with a enclosed area for Suraj and Aryan to play in. The floor was an exquisite ivory colored marble, was now a sea of neon colors...all of the boys toys thrown all about. Kanya and Pooja Bhabi had had enough of the toys. They had tried relentlessly to keep the house tidy and in order. They hap put everything away in the play rooms and nurseries for the boys. However, it didn't stay that way for long. As soon and Ranbir and Aditya Bhaia got home all hell broke loose. They played with their boys every evening no matter what. They no longer took late meetings of long trips because they didn't want to leave their families back. It seemed that the two grown men enjoyed playing with the toy cars and other toys more than the little boys.

With two little boys running around in the house the couples rarely found time to themselves. Whenever Ranbir and Kanya would get a little bit romantic you could hear the wail of baby Sonny through his baby monitor. Ranbir remembers one time....

*flash back*
Ranbir was in his room looking over a file for the next meeting at Nanda Group of Ind. Kanya had finally managed to get Sonny to sleep in his crib in the nursery. They two boys shared the nursery since they were still small, Ayran was almost over 2 and Sonny was about one and a half. Kanya came into the room and a gust of wind came through the window, blowing her hair all over the place. Ranbir got up and helped settle her hair. Kanya moved and closed the window. When she turned back Ranbir was standing right there, only a mere inches from her. The moon light was hitting her and the sparkle in her eyes, they just made Ranbir's heart melt. Kanya was telling how there was lots of work that needed to be done in the house and what not...Ranbir not paying attention...Kanya had every intention of leaving Ranbir to study his file, so she placed a quick kiss on his lips. It was soft and innocent and quick. She was about to step away when Ranbir grabbed her. He placed a kiss on her lips too, but nothing like Kanya's. Ranbir's kiss was filled with hunger and raw passion. Kanya was caught off guard but deepened the kiss herself in a matter of moments. Her arms went up around his neck while Ranbir's hands snaked around Kanya's waist pulling her closer to him. He finally came up for air and looked at Kanya. She had a smile on her face that broke into laughter.

R- What..what r u laughing at?
K- What...don't you mean who...
R- Who...what do u mean....
K- My darling...i am laughing at you!
R- Me ..why?
K- My deep blood red lipstick is all over your mouth, just take a look..you look like a complete joker.
R- What joker...ooohhh that is going to cost you...

Ranbir swiftly turns around and lock the door to their room. Kanya now teasing Ranbir, runs from him. Ranbir grabs a hold of her and has a gleam of mischief in his eyes. He takes her in his arms and kisses her almost senseless. Kanya is gasping for air when Ranbir finally stops.

R- You just wait and see what I do to you.

Ranbir lifted Kanya up into his arms, her arms going around his neck pulling him in for a kiss. Kanya was wearing a saree but her achal was no longer spread across her body like it should be, it was dragging on the floor as Ranbir was walking to the bed. He placed her in a sitting position, so that he had clear access to her back. The blouse she was wearing was only attached by measly doris...Ranbir got to work right a way. With every dori that he took apart he kissed the skin that lay below it. He gave his full attention to what he was doing. By the time Ranbir had removed her blouse completely Kanya was squirming. She turned to face him and pulled him into a passionate kiss...Ranbir softly and delicately laid Kanya on the bed...not once did their lips part from each other....Kanya was nearly melting into the matters because Ranbir's weight was on top of her...Kanya's hands working on Ranbir's shirt buttons with fury. She nearly popped all the buttons in her haste. Finally with all the buttons done her hands roamed freely over Ranbir's bare chest and abdomen (picture 6 pack)....Ranbir broke the kiss for a second and looked into Kanya's eyes..they could see the love and passion that they felt for one another...Ranbir bent his head to kiss Kanya and....."WAAAAAAAAAAAAH"...

They sprang apart at the sound of their beloved son. Sonny had apparently chosen that exact moment to cry out. Kanya and Ranbir looked at each other. Kanya laughed her head off and Ranbir looked like he was going to kill someone. Kanya quickly got up and fixed herself up.

R- This boy. Its like he has a radar that senses when his mamma and papa are about to enjoy themselves.
K- He is your son, what can u say.

Kanya left to go check on Sonny while Ranbir got himself fixed up. He was buttoning he shirt, well what ever buttons were left after Kanya nearly ripped them all out.

R- This boy I tell you. One of these days when he is all grown and im and old grandpa ill torture him just like he is torturing me. Ill get even my boy...ill get even.

Ranbir was so frustrated and angry, not rationally but still angry none the less. Kanya walked in with Sonny in her arms. Seeing Ranbir Sonny was quiet, but had a cheeky smile on his face.

R- Of course you are happy, spoiled all of your daddy's fun but got yourself to mamma didn't you.

Just then Sonny held out his hands and said "papa" to go to Ranbir. At that moment all of Ranbir's pent up frustration and anger evaporated. He couldn't be mad at that baby...it was his boy. He took Sonny into his arms and had soon forgotten what had just happened minutes b4. He went from being in the world of raw passion and hunger, and was pulled into the world of Lego's, toy cars and spit bubbles...only too happily...

*back to present*


Thinking about Sonny and Kanya and that day made Ranbir chuckle out loud. He sure did love that boy with his whole heart and soul. One cheeky smile from Suraj and Ranbir was a goner. That smile had gotten him through some very dark days in the past few years. But now that smile was gone just like Kanya. Ranbir would give his life and the drop of a hat to see those smiles again, to see their eyes light up, to seem them happy and full of life just once more...would he ever see his precious family again?

JAZ
PS: only a few more parts...this ff ends at part 19...so bare with me 😉...looking forward to comments
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Posted: 17 years ago
#97
me 1st
gr8 update
keep updating like this
and im 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
#98

I CANT BARE IT!!

WHAT HAPPENED!!!!!!!?????????????!!!!!!!!

oh! cute update btw!

Edited by tanyadas_leo - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#99
dt ws really good cant wait to see how everyfink turns out 2 be
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Posted: 17 years ago
great update!
please continue soon..i really wanna know why ranbir is so sad now 😭

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