FF: Sau Dard (new) prt19 pg27 5/12

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Posted: 17 years ago
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hi guys...it's me...Jaz...again...lol...

this is a ff that i had written for the KS forum a while back. I thought that maybe you guys would like to read it. I am posting the first part, it is only 19 parts and is finished so i will post the parts quickly. I hope you do like it. It is different form all the masti filled ff's that are on the forum...love those too. If you dont like it, please let me know. And i ask for one thing, please keep an open mind...😃😃

Links to my other FF's: 😃
1. Ek Paal - http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=944496&T PN
2. Kanya's Loss - http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=938063&T PN
3. RanKan Holi Special - http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=914516&T PN

prt 1-pg 1; prt 2-pg 2; prt 3-pg 3; prt 4-pg 4; prt 5-pg 4; prt 6-pg 7; prt 7-pg 8; prt 8-pg 10; prt 9-pg 11; prt 10-pg 12; prt 11-pg 14; prt 12-pg 15; prt 13-pg 16; prt 14-pg 18; prt 15-pg 20; prt 16-pg 21; prt 17-pg 23; prt 18-pg 25; prt 19-pg 27 (end)

Part 1

Sau dard hainSau rahatein.

Sab mila dilnashin

Ek tuhi nahin.



Rukhi ukhi si yeh hawa,

Aur sukhe patte ki tarah

Shehar ki sadko pe main

Lawaris udta hua

Sau raste

Par teri rah nahin.



Sau dard hain
Sau rahatein.

Sab mila dilnashin

Ek tuhi nahin.



Behta hain paani, behne de

Waqt ko yuhi, rehne de

Dariya ne karwat li hai toh

Saahilon ko sehne de

Sau hasratein

Par tera ghum nahi.eeeee



Sau dard hain
Sau rahatein.

Sab mila dilnashin

Ek tuhi nahin.

The Great Ranbir Nanda...had everything...he was the epitome of success and happiness. Every one envied him. The men wanted to BE Ranbir Nanda, the women wanted to BE WITH Ranbir Nanda. In the eyes of the world Ranbir Nanda was at the top, he had it made. He had managed to achieve the perfect life. They say they eyes cannot deceive anyone...your eyes cannot lie...whoever said that was dead wrong. The All-Mighty Ranbir Nanda didn't have everything, he had NOTHING. His life was empty, not full as others thought. His life had been washed away with tears and blood, not colored by happiness and joy. On his 6th wedding anniversary here he was; sitting in a darkened room...dark just like his life...with a full bottle of Vodka, drowning in self pity. If anyone had told him that his is how he would be celebrating the happiest day of his life, he would have looked them in the eye and said, 'No Way!'.

It hadn't always been like this. There was point in his life that Ranbir Nanda truly did have it all. He was exactly as the world saw him. He was a highly successful business man worth hundreds of millions of dollars. He was happy, or so he thought, with his success. Had finally become what people said the son of a drunk could never become. He had money, respect, fame, and a great family. He was only missing the company of someone by his side. He was missing one person that was supposed to stay with him through think and thin. He was missing his life...only he didn't know it 7 yrs ago.

Seven yrs ago, on this night, his life and changed. It had changed in an instant, in a way he had never expected it to. It was the sole luckiest day of his life...it was the day that God and smiled down at him. It was that Ranbir had discovered what true happiness was, what love was, what life was. He remembered that day like it was yesterday...not 7 yrs ago. It was the day he had discovered that even "Steel Hearted Business Tycoon" Ranbir Nanda wasn't steel hearted after all...and that had all changed because of one person.


JAZ

ps: looking forward to comments 😳
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suganain thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Omg! jnawaz! I love it!! Continue Soon!! U made me speechless already!👏👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Jazzzyyyy that is awesome.. i love it... its very different.. looking forward to the next update =] 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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that was soo good..really interesting intro
plzz update soon 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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i am looking forward to reading your ff.. it has promising start so plz do continue.....
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Posted: 17 years ago
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very intresting intro plz continue on with it soon 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wow..great 👏 ............such an amazing one 😃 .....wat r u man this is an awesome 1 u shud cont soon 😛 ........nd ur wording is so great 😊 😊 .......will b waitin 2 read........ 😊 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Jazzy cont please!! 😭 Cold Rannu makes me sad. You did a awesome job. I felt like jumping in the story and give him a warm hug.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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That was awesome
Plzzzzzzzzzz continue soooooooooon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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jazzy yaar ye kya... itna short update... but i have to say it was mind blowing.... i loved it... pls continue sooon

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