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hmm jaz i luv dis ff i tink kanya has suffered enuf now
2. RanKan reconciliation asap


plz updaet soon!

i go with #1 but don't extend it too much and make it boring lol

i wud go wit #2 plzzz make thm together!! ASAP

i want her to win him over but there shud be cute moments inbetween...

Originally posted by: suganain

Agree, With Fatima!!

Kanya should win over Ranbir! She is lucky to have him!😃

I agree with this sitution, Kanya has to "understand" Ranbir.. and win him😊

Don't make Kanya suffer.Rannu is such a sweetheart.He can't stand tears in her eyes.Don't wake him up so soon.Postpone it to 3 parts later.Make Kanya remember each and every moment they were together and make her fall in love with him over and over again,with each and every flash from the past,make her love for him increase to the point of bursting and finding it hard to handle.Give more of Kanya's point of view.In KIT we get to look at things only from Ranbir's point of view.So make up for it in your ff.Take us through the cute scenes like Ranbir blasting the oven to get her milk,wiping her tears away,saving her from drowning,etc.,from Kanya's viewpoint.Add your own scenes too.Create some misunderstanding in between that lasts only for two parts and then give a very emotional,cute union.
This is the first time i'm posting here in this thread.I was a silent reader and admirer of all your FFs and SS Jaz.You are a good writer.My best wishes.

I just ranbir to wake up in the next update

when is Ranbir gonna have some dialogues yaar?...by this i hope you understand that i want him to wake up now!!...as for Kanya suffering i think it could happen (nothing comes easy!..lol)..but i dont want her to suffer so much that Ranbir is the bad guy again.
Great update!

hey guys...here is part 12...hope you like it...tried to make it longer...i would have posted on sunday but someone...GULI...stopped me from doing so...😉😉😉 so pls...feel free to attack her...you have full permission 😆😆😆

looking forward to comments 😉

That day had been a turning point for Kanya, it took her life in a new direction; a direction that she was more than looking forward to going. Kanya remembered Pammi, Adita and other women always gushing over their husbands, they would say that as long as their husbands were ok then they would be ok as well; if their husbands were happy then they too would be happy. For those women their husbands were their everything, their lives began and ended with their husbands. Kanya never understood why women would feel that way. How could they make everything about their husbands? Didn't they have their own lives that they had the right to live? Why were they so eager to fulfill their husband's dreams while squashing their own? She never understood why once women were married they were defined as someone's wife and not as a person themselves. That was…until recently.

Now Kanya finally understood why the women gave so much importance to their husbands. She now saw that it was more than just importance, it was also love, respect and faith that they showed. They didn't crush their dreams so their husbands dreams could come true, they changed or put their dreams aside for their family, it was a sacrifice they made knowing full well what they were doing. She now understood that their husband were truly their everything because that was the one person that was going to stand by them for the rest of their lives; through thick and thin, through happiness and sadness…through everything.

Kanya walked into the Ranbir's room with determination, love and pride. Ranbir was going to be just fine, she knew it.

Aditya- Kanya tum aagaye, good. (he was surprised at her transformation) (Kanya you are here, good.)

K- Sorry Aditya Bhaia, thodi dehr hogayi, woh…main mandir gayi thi. (Sorry Aditya Bhaia, I'm late, I…I had gone to the temple.)

Kanya put her things down and then took out the Prasad she had and handed it to Aditya and Aayan; it was from the pooja that she had done for Ranbir this morning. Both Aditya and Aayan took the Prasad but had an odd look on their faces, especially Aditya, was it Kanya that was actually doing all this? He was sure that he was in some sort of alternate reality.

K- Woh kaal raath ke liyeh, I'm sorry. Meri aank lag gayi thi aur Mamma ne mujhe nahin uthaiya. Aap log Ranbir ke paas ruke the, issi liyeh…Thank you. (I am sorry about last night. I fell asleep and Mamma didn't wake me up. You guys were here with Ranbir, for that…Thank you.)

Aayan- Come on Kanya, iss mein 'thank you' ki kya baath hai. Ranbir toh mera cachu hai, we didn't mind at all. (Come on Kanya, there is nothing to thank us for. Ranbir is my uncle, we didn't mind at all.)

Aditya- Aayan sahi keh raha hai, it was no problem. Vaise, tumhe bhi toh thodi aram ki zarurat thi, jaab se Ranbir ka accident hua hai, tum toh yahin, hospital mein ho. (Aayan is right, it was no problem. Besides, you need some rest too, you have been at the hospital since Ranbir's accident.)

K- Phir bhi, I really appreciate it. (Still, I really appreciate it.)

Aayan- Aab tum aa gayi ho toh hum chalte hai, hume ghaar jaana hai aur office bhi. (Well now that you are here, we should go, we have to go home and then to work.)

K- Haan, of course. (Yes, of course.)

Aditya- Aayan, tu gaadi mein jaa, main aata hoon. (Aayan, you go to the car, I'm coming.)

Aayan- Ok, bye Kanya.

K- Bye

Kanya began to straighten some things out in Ranbir's room that were out of place and somewhat messy. After a silence of a few seconds Aditya spoke.

Aditya- Kanya…tumse ek baath poochu, bura nahin manogi? (Kanya..can I ask you something, you wont mind will you?)

K- Nahin, kya baath hai? (No, what is it?)

Aditya- (after a bit of hesitation) Yeh…yeh saab kya hai? Tum aur… (This…what is all this? You and…)

K- (she understood what he meant) Mujhe aaise dekh kaar aap hairan hai, main samaj sakti hoon. Aap baas itna jaan lijiyeh ke main joh kuch bhi kaar rahi hoon, aapni dil se kaar rahi hoon. Iss waqt mere liyeh Ranbir se baad kaar kuch nahin hai. Main dil se dua karti hoon ke woh utt jaye aur jaldi tik hojaye. Ranbir mera paati hai aur uska dekh bhaal kaar naa mera faarz banta hai. (I know that you are shocked to see me like this, I can understand. Just understand that whatever I am doing, I am doing if from the heart. I truly pray from my heart that he wakes up and get better quickly. Ranbir is my husband and looking after him is my obligation.)

Aditya gave Kanya a appreciative smile and then took one last look at Ranbir before he left. As soon as he was gone Kanya began straightening out the room once again, she had just folded a blanket up that was on the recliner when her eyes fell on Ranbir for the first time since she entered the room. He looked like he was sleeping; he looked so calm and serene, like he was dreaming about relaxing under the sun at some tropical island. Putting the blanket down on the recliner, Kanya slowly made her way towards Ranbir's bed.

When she got to his bed side she hesitated for a minute and just looked at him. Then slowly and with a shaky hand she caressed his head, running her hand across his forehead and down the side of his face. She remembered how the doctor had said that patients who were in coma's could still hear the outside world, they just couldn't respond, so Kanya leaned in close to his ear, so close that air could barely pass between them.

K- Good morning (she whispered)

Tracing her hand over one of the cuts on his face, right above his eyebrow, Kanya turned to walk away. She had just take a step or two when she was stopped by something. She turned around because a part of her thought it was Ranbir what was stopping her and she wasn't completely wrong. It may not have been Ranbir physically holding her back, but it was the pallu of her sari that had gotten stuck to his arm band. A sweet smile came on her face because Kanya didn't think this was just some random coincidence, she believed that it was truly Ranbir, his spirit and his presence any way. She one again leaned over to speak into his ear.

K- Daaro maat, main kahin nahin jaa rahi hoon. Aaj se, main tumhare paas hi rahungi. Phirse tumhe chodke nahin jaungi…promise. (Don't worry, I'm not going anywhere. Starting today, I will stay with you. I won't leave you again…promise.)

This time, Kanya did something that she didn't expect herself to do. Before walking away from him again, she leaned in but this time it wasn't to talk to him. Kanya gently and tenderly placed a soft kiss on his forehead; she ran her hand through his hair one more time before getting back to what she had been doing.

Later that evening the doctor had come in to check on Ranbir while Kanya stood by his side holding onto her mangulsutra. The doctor did his check up and made notes into Ranbir's chart. As he was leaving he told the nurse to do something, but Kanya wasn't paying attention. Her attention was now focused on Ranbir, she was getting him settled again, making sure he was comfortable.

Dr- Mrs. Nanda, mujeh aap se kuch baatein karna hai, aap please bahar aaiyeh. (Mrs. Nanda I need to talk to you, can you please step outside.)

K- Ji…abhi aayi. (Sure…I'll be right there.)

Kanya made sure that Ranbir was covered properly and that his pillows were perfect before she stepped out to join the doctor.

K- Kya baath hai doctor? (What is it doctor?)

Dr- Dekhiyeh, Mr. Nanda ki condition mein koi change nahin hai, woh abhi bhi stable hai, which is a good thing. (Look Mr. Nanda's condition hasn't changed, he is still stable, which is a good thing.)

K- Phir? (Then?)

Dr- Hume aab unhe ICU mein rakhne ki koi zarurat nahin hai, issi liyeh hum Mr. Nanda ko general ward mein shift kaar rahe hai. (We have no need to keep him in the ICU, that is why we will move him to the general ward.)

K- Lekin…yeh saab machines, treatment… (But…these machines, the treatment…)

Dr- Joh treatment unhe yahaan milta hai woh vahaan bhi milega, don't worry about that. Haan baas ek hi taraf se change hoga aur woh hai machines. Aab unhe itne saare machines ki zarurat nahin hai aur yeh aachi baath hai. (Don't worry, he will receive the same treatment that he was getting in here. He just doesn't need all of these machines, which is a good thing.)

K- Ranbir ko private room toh milega naa? (Will Ranbir get a private room?)

Dr- Of course, he is Mr. Ranbir Nanda…lekin ek baath hai… (Of course, he is Mr. Ranbir Nanda…but there is one thing…)

K- Kya? (What?)

Dr- General ward mein hum kissi ko raath bhaar rukhne nahin dete. (In the general ward we do not allow anyone to stay over night.)

K- Magar main kaise… (But how can I…)

Dr- Main aapki pareshani samaj sakti hoon lekin kya karoon, policy is policy. Main jaanta hoon ke yeh Ranbir Nanda hai, lekin aagar aap ko humne ijazat deh di toh phir dusri families bhi yehi chahenge, aur hum aaise nahin kaar sakte. (I can understand your apprehension, but what can I do, policy is policy. I know he is Ranbir Nanda but if we give you permission, other families will as for them as well and we cannot do that.)

K- I understand…lekin…main kab tak uske paas reh sakti hoon? (I understand…but…how long can I stay with him?)

Dr- Subha ki 10 baje se raath ki 11 baje, humare regular visiting hours. (From 10 in the morning til 11 at night, our regular visiting hours.)

K- Tik hai, thank you doctor. (Ok, thank you doctor.)

Dr- You're welcome…once again, I'm sorry.

K- Nahin koi baath nahin. (No, it's no problem)

Kanya was heart broken that she wouldn't be able to stay with Ranbir on a regular basis. She was really hoping to look after him all the time. Sure, she knew that the doctors and nurses would look in on him and take care of him, but they weren't Ranbir's wife, she was. She could take better care of him as his wife then any highly trained nurse or highly skilled doctor. Going back into Ranbir's room she saw that it was already 7pm. She knew that the Nanda's would want to know what was going on with Ranbir so she called Malika. Malika was also upset that no one could stay with Ranbir, but she also understood. Within thirty minutes Malika, Aditya and Aayan had all shown up to spend some time with Ranbir. They knew that they couldn't do anything but just being in Ranbir's presence helped them deal with the situation. An hour and a half later the Godbole's also came to see Ranbir, all of them except for Adita and Suhaas because Adita was not feeling too good. Before they knew it the time had flown by at it was already 11pm. A nurse came in to remind them that visiting hours were over and that they need to get going. Everyone walked out, only Kanya and Malika were left in the room. Malika said her good bye and was about to leave when she stopped and turned to Kanya.

M- Kanya beta, chalo. (Kanya honey, let's go.)

K- Mummy ji aap jaiyeh, main thodi dehr mein aati hoon, baas doh minute. (Mummy-ji you go ahead, I will be there soon, just two minutes.)

M- Tik hai, hum gaadi mein intezaar karte hai. (Ok, we will wait in the car.)

K- Nahin aap ghaar jaiyeh…main Mamma aur Papa ke saath chali jaungi. (No Mummy-ji you go home…I will go with Mamma and Papa.)

M- Kyun Kanya, tumhe Nanda House nahin jaana? Bohot din hogaye, aab tum ghaar vapas aajao. (Why Kanya, don't you want to go to Nanda House? It had been days since you have bee there, come back home now.)

K- Nahin Mummy ji, main vahaan vaapas nahin jaa sakti. (No Mummy-ji, I can't go back there.)

M- Magar kyun? (But why?)

K- Main uss ghaar mein thabi vaapas jaungi jaab Ranbir mere saath hoga. Uske bina main nahin jaaungi…uske bina main…main nahin jaa paungi.(Kanya's voice cracked and tears welled up in her eyes) Ranbir ke bina main uss ghaar main nahin reh sakti, uske bina main… (I will go back to that house when Ranbir is with me. Without him I won't go…with out him…I won't be able to go. I can't live in that house without him, without him I…)

Kanya stopped talking and put her hand over her mouth as the tears that had welled up in her eyes, spilled over the edge. Malika understood Kanya's feelings and didn't hesitate for a second before she took Kanya into her arms. They stayed like that for a little while as Kanya gathered herself together. Once she was calm, Malika had her hand over Kanya's head and left. Kanya heard Malika requesting the night shift nurse to give Kanya some time as she said bye to her husband.

Kanya wiped her tears with back of her hand, she straightened her sari out and ran her fingers through her hair; she wanted to make herself somewhat presentable, even if no one really saw her. She walked over to Ranbir's bed side and sat down on the stool that was there; she had a weak smile on her face.

K- Main jaanti hoon ke tum kya sooch rahe ho. Yehi sooch rahe ho naa ke tumhari biwi kitni rohti hai? Joh Kanya khabi kissi ke saamne nahin rohte, woh hi aaj baat baat paar rohti hai, woh bhi puri duniyah ke saamne. Kya karoon, tum mujeh itna satate joh ho. Main jaanti hoon ke tum saab mard ko humari asoon paasand nahin hai. Lekin aagar tum mujhe rohne se rokhna chate ho, toh tumhe kya kaarna hai, woh toh tumhe paata hai. (I know what you must be thinking. You are thinking that you wife cries a lot, right? The Kanya who never cried in front of people, today she cries at everything and that too in front of the whole world. What can I do, you bug me so much. I know that men don't like tears in our eyes. But, if you want to stop me from crying, you know what you have to do.)

Kanya fell silent for a while. Then her shoulders slumped down and the tears returned as she heard some music coming in through the crack in the door; it was coming from a radio or stereo from the nurse's station.

Toh phir aao mujhko sataao

Toh phir aao mujhko rulaao

Dil badal bane aankhein behne lagi

Aahein aise uthein jaise aandhi chalein

Toh phir aao mujhko sataao

Toh phir aao mujhko rulaao

Aa bhi jaao

Ghum le ja tere, joh bhi tune diye

Ya phir mujhko bata, inko kaise sahein

Toh phir aao mujhko sataao

Toh phir aao mujhko rulaao

Aa bhi jaao

Abb toh iss manjar se, mujhko chale jana hai

Jin raahon pe mera yaar hai

Unn raahon ko mujhse paana hai

Toh phir aao mujhko sataao

Toh phir aao mujhko rulaao

Aa bhi jaao

The tears were falling once again. Kanya put her hand under Ranbir's and held on to it like it was her life line.

K- I'm sorry, mujhe maaf kaar dena. Maine tumse aaj hi vaada kiya tha ke main aab tumhare paas hi rahungi aur aaj hi main woh vaada tod rahi hoon. I'm so sorry, lekin main kya karti? Doctor ne kahaa hai ke aab tumhe ICU mein rehne ki koi zarurat nahin hai issi liyeh toh humne tumhe general ward mein shift kiya hai. Jaab main tumhare saath nahin rehna chati thi taab tum hamesha mere paas the, aur aab…aab main chake bhi tumhare paas nahin reh sakti. Main kaal subha aaj jaungi aur din bhaar tumhare saath rahungi. Yeh vaada main nahin todungi…promise. (I'm sorry, please forgive me. I promised you today that I would be at your side and I am breaking that promise today too. I'm so sorry, but what can I do? The doctor said that you don't need to be in the ICU anymore, which is why they moved you to the general ward. When I didn't was to be with you, you were always in my face, and now I want to stay with you but I can't. I will be back tomorrow morning and be with you all day. I wont break this promise…I swear.)

Kanya released Ranbir's hand and then ran her hand across his head for the hundredth time that day. She leaned in close and whispered into his ear.

K- Good night Ranbir…sweet dreams.

She then pulled back for only a second as she moved lower and then placed a kiss on his right cheek.

K- I love you…

The tears began falling once again so that was the last thing she had said before she exited the room. Since Kanya was so emotional and upset that she hadn't noticed her tears fall onto Ranbir's face when she had kissed him, she also didn't notice the small jump in Ranbir's heart beat when her lips had touched his rough skin.

JAZ