Sweet Love : ) Part 9 p.17 . N0TE p.19 - Page 2

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Sure Payal..I'm actually done with the next Part : )😃

Part 2:

The guys start playing soccer , Divya who also is a soccer freak joins them while Sunaina , Anjali and Riddhima are sorting out everybody's food items.

Riddhima shouts : " Tum larkey aur oye Divya tum bhi! Baadmey khelein gey abhi barbeque shuru karte hain"

Sunaina : "Haan , chalo aa bhi jao!"

Amey : "Oh haan , hum toh bhool hee gaye , sorry Sunaina!"

Armaan : With a confused look " Umm..Amey itna sorry ek rishtey ke liyey acha nahin hota!"

Sunaina : "Shut up Armaan!" and gives a quiet laugh.

*[Amey and Sunaina are a couple , David and Divya too enjoy each other's company]*

Armaan turns the heat for the barbq on , it turns a little too high and gives fumes which disturbs Armaan.

Armaan : *coughs*

Riddhima : "Heater bhi sahi sey on karna nahin aata?Dehan sey , yeh lo paani piyo..Mein on karti hoon."

Armaan : Smiles and moves back.

David and Amey : "Ridz , tum jao idher ka kaam hum larkey dekhtey hain"

Riddhima sees Armaan as he is laughing with the guys. Suddenly Armaan looks at Riddhima watching him and then acts as if he is coughing.

Riddhima : "Ufff..jiggles her head"

Armaan : Gives a quiet laugh.

Amey: "Larkiyon , ye dekho Aaj tak ka best tikka! Tan tanaa!" and shows a fully burned tikka to the gals!

Anjali : "Tum larkon se toh kuch bhi nahin hota!"

Amey : "Angie yeh sab hamarey David sahab ka kamaal hai!"

Divya : Toh tum log uss kee madad nahin kar saktey!Konsa who har roz barbeque karta hai!

David : Exactly! Pehle ek acha dost toh ban!

Everyone starts laughing

Riddhima : "Tum log karlo gey naa , humey bohat bhook lag rahi hai!"

Armaan : Oh really! , hum toh aloo ke parathe kha kar ayein haina!..Aisey order mat chalayey rani jee!

Riddhima : Gives an angry look : "Armaaan!"

Armaan gives a quiet laugh yet again.

*All the tikkas and kebabs are done cooking.Everyone settles down for lunch.Everybody offer each other food and joke about their college.*

Riddhima : "Coke, Fanta ya Mountain Dew?!"

Everyone say their choice , Armaan keeps quiet.

Riddhima : "Yeh lo Mountain Dew" gives it to Armaan.

Armaan : "Tumhe kaisey pata mujhey yehee chahiyey?"

Riddhima : "Itna toh jaanti hoon ke tumhey Mountain dew pasand hai!"

Armaan : "Ahaan!"

After lunch and all their jokes , the group decides to play soccer on Armaan's request.

While playing Amey , instead of kicking the ball he mistakely kicks on Armaan's leg which makes him to trip , and since Riddhima was beside him , she falls too.

Armaan: "Oyeeeee!"

Riddhima: "Aaaaah Ouchh!"

Armaan manages to hold Riddhima so that she doesn't fall straight on the ground.

Armaan stares at Riddhima , while she cannot stop saying "Ouch!"

Armaan : "Oh ! Im sorry , tumhey lagee toh nahin"

Riddhima : "Nahin , it's ok Armaan.Ab utho bhi!"

Armaan : Haaan..

Riddhima gets up but was about to fall again.

Armaan : "Dehaan sey!"

Riddhima : "Yeah..Im ok"

Divya : Cmon get up you guys!warna yeh ball tum logon ke sar par parey gaa!



Next Day:

At Prestige College:

Armaan opens a book in his locker.It had notes written by Riddhima.He touches her notes and smiles.

Anjali comes from the back : "Hey hero!Kaisey ho? I thought tum aaj college nahin aaogey after that hectic session of soccer.Tumhara per (leg) kaisa hai?

Riddhima joins them both : "Haan Armaan , bandron ki tarah uchalney ke baad kya haal hai?"

Armaan : Sings "Ab toh aadat see hai mujhko aisey jeeney mein!"

Anjali : "Yeah , right!"

In the Maths Class:

Mr.Gulati is explaining the math sums.Armaan yawns and goes to sleep!

Mr. Gulati announces a small surprise test at that very moment.Everyone had their mouths opened wide while Armaan was still sleeping.

Divya : "Oh damn , now what?"

Amey : "CHEAT CHEAT CHEAT! , looks at Riddhima"

Sunaina: "Haan Riddhima , tum toh sun rahi thi naa , cmon help us!!"

Mr.Gulati is giving out the blank sheets.

Riddhima : "Cheat?! Aree , agar uss takley ney pakar liya toh , u know naa!"

Anjali : "Ridz , I know you hate cheating magar just for this time , please! , ill do your homework today!"

Riddhima : "Nahiiin dii , welll pata nahin , dekhti hoon "

Mr.Gulati comes near to Armaan: "ARMAAN! Beta mein tumharey liyey ek gift laya hoon!"

Armaan Rubs his eyes : "Huhh!?"

Mr.Gulati : Yeh lo tumhara test paper , answer all the questions CORRECTLY! , he says in a loud voice.

Riddhima is looking at Armaan as he his still rubbing his eyes not knowing what just happened!

Everyone is *trying* to answer the given questions.

Riddhima solved almost half of the questions.She looks at Armaan , he is still sleepy and staring at the paper not writing anything.

Riddhima feels pity for him and whispers to him : "Armaan , yeh lo dekhlo , idhar sey copy karlo"

Armaan : stares at Riddhima

Riddhima : Puts the paper in a position so Armaan can see.

Armaan copies most of the answers.

Riddhima puts the paper down as Mr.Gulati passes by.She then finishes almost all answers in the paper and the bell rings.

Mr.Gulati collects all the papers and while collecting Armaan's paper he gives an angry look to him and Armaan inturn gives him a funny look!

Divya : "It sucked , It sucked!!"

Amey : "It was ok for me , Ridz kaha tha na dikhatee!The takla wasn't even looking!"

Anjali : Choro naa , you know she doesn't likes to copy neither lets anyone copy , yeh koi nayee baat nahin hai!"

Riddhima : "Sorry guys , it's just I hate being caught , so I never do that"

Sunaina : "We know sweetie , don't worry! , waisey bhi kal toh sahi waat lagey gee!Im going to faill! She laughs!

Armaan comes near to Riddhima's desk

Armaan : "Ridz , aa , thanks" gives a really cute smile.

Riddhima : "Sshh..kisi ko mat batana, warna sab mujhey maar dalein gey! "

Riddhima : "I know tum sab questions copy nahin sakey , but I'm sure that you will pass naa"

Armaan : "I love you"

Riddhima : "huh? , kya?"

Armaan : Jiggles his head " Aaaa , I mean , I mean I love you for this!"

Riddhima smiles.

During the break time :

Riddhima and Divya are making fun of their Geography teacher.

Amey : "Ridz u totally rock at this yaar!"

Riddhima : laughs " I love doing thiss too!"

Everyone laughs

Armaan cant take his eyes off Riddhima laughing.

David too eyes Divya and smiles.


Should I continue?...../criticsm welcome😃
Edited by ~@$hm@~ - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#12
Hey is very nice pls continue soon and pm me

love payal... 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
#13
very well writen dear
plz cont soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#14
Thank you choo muchh 😃

If more people are willing to read my fan-fic , please comment so I can continue.😃

At least 3 yes's to get the next part posted 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
#15
wooow
very nce
awwwwwww ridz let armi copy
hw cute
updte soon👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
#16


Clues for the third part :

I know that there is something about you..Is it time to let you know what I feel?

Find Out!: )

I'm going a bit slow with the scenes to let you guys an idea on the characters and concept..I'll be concentrating on the main concept as stated on page 1 during part 4.It is ajourney of lasting love , who's up for it? 😃
Edited by ~@$hm@~ - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: sweet-niz

wooow
very nce
awwwwwww ridz let armi copy
hw cute
updte soon👏



thankuu: )
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Posted: 17 years ago
#18
hey ihv jst caught up nd wow yaar it ws wonderful concept yaar truly lvd it nd AR to toooooooooooo gooooooood hai ji nd whn surprisd tst goi on omggggggg ridz only show 2 armaan nd armaan ws sleepng nd sir said yelo tumhara surprise gft it ws dammmmmmmmmmmm fnny yaar cnt wait 2 read more plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
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cont soooooooooooon
luv yachu.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#19
aww..thankuuu , will post the next part tonighttt : ) 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
#20
hey
jus read ur ff 😃
its cho cho swweeeetttttttttttttt n cuteeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee yaar 👏
cont super soooooooooooonnnnnnnn
n if u can plz send me a pm wen u update
luv ya n tak care
mahru

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