FF: Pyar Ki Presents/pg26 *FINAL WORDS - Page 9

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Posted: 17 years ago
#81
lol that was very funny plz update soon =)
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Posted: 17 years ago
#82
lol...that was a funny update! good job

cont soon plz
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Posted: 17 years ago
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thanx everyone.. will be coming with the Promo soon!😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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love wat u doing plz continue.
it briliant 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: dilkeroshni

@ kiran... yaar aakhir kar blackmail karna parta hai...varna log pas phar jate hai humme batana bhool jate hai ke unko kaisa laga ya phir unke feeling yea..

Pata hai tum kehna kya chati ho par tum log kuch zyada hi blackmail karte ho. Ab 20 comments mil gaye hain. Update karo na

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Posted: 17 years ago
#86
👏 👏 👏 that was gr8 plz cont soon! 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
#87
i know it is 2 l8...
but OMG it is soo much better than wat is happening in KIT rite now!!!!!!!!!!!
PLZ continue......
really cannot wait....!!!!!!!! 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hi, Our Lovely Readers!! So This story is going to be updated next by Sara.😃 So U guys can pressure her to update.😆 Because she is in charge for the next two updates!! 😛Enjoy this one. I get a break 4 a while & focus on my Fan-Fic. 😉 Not that I don't like typing this one. It was my idea! ENJOY!!😃😃


Chapter Five: Airport Dhamal😈

Kanya & Ranbir are packing their bags to leave to their island excursion. Both have 100 watt smiles on their faces. 😃 Excited, thrilled, and soo many other emotions going through their heads. Ranbir carries Kanya to the limo and ride to the airport.. 😳Flight time 4:00pm

3:00pm at Adita's House

All the kids are in Samita's (Adita and Suhaas's daughter) room playing with her new Playstation 3. Everyone is having lots of fun, sitting in front of the TV. When Dimple pulls out a Platinum Gold Shiny Card out of her pocket.

Aaash pulls the card from her hands: Yeh toh Dad ki business credit card hai? Tum ne chooraliya? Kyun?

Samita who is 13years old: Omg! Dimple, tum yeh badmaash kam kabhi nahin stop karogee. (she smiles and winks)😃😉 Ab plan kya hai?

Azura puts her controller down: Dimps, ab tum kya kargoe? Online ja kar kuch buy karna hai kya?😕

Dimple slaps Azura's head:😉 Idiot, hum sab log, ghumne jayege?

Akash astonished face:😲 Wat r u talking about? Wat about Adita Mausi and Suhass Mamoo.. hamare watt lagegi! (Shanta Tai Tapoori😆😆)

Dimple smacks Akash's head: Woh dono, bahar hai, Samita Di in charge mein hai.

Samita: I don't want to get into trouble….

Dimple: U won't, ab suno meri bath. Meri mummy ne honeymoon tickets leye hai. Let's crash it…. (she has an evil laugh) the honeymoon.. Muhahaha! (evil laugh)😈😈

Akash stands up and puts his hands on his hips: Hey Cruella!! How do we do that? I don't think we should.. Mama aur Papa akele hona chathe hai.

Dimple mimics her brother: Mama aur Papa akele hona chathe hai.. Mama ki chamche! O please I know Papa is expecting this. After all, Dimple doesn't like it if she doesn't get even (evil smirk)😈

Back in the Ranya Limo Ranbir is in serious thought..

Kanya looks at Ranbir: Kya hua Jaan?

Ranbir comes out of his thoughts: Dimple ne revenge nahin liya….. abhi tak?

Kanya gets mad but smiles: woh tumhari dushman thori hai? They want us to be alone too.

Ranbir puts his arms around Kanya: I guess soo.. (But he still doesn't believe what Kanya said)😕

Ranbir and Kanya reach the airport, Kanya looks at the sign of the name "Naina" International Airport of the airport and a tear trickles😭 down her cheek, Ranbir smiles and wipes it with his hand they both head inside and check in.

Outside Adita's House 3:25pm

A long limo pulls up and the kids jump in. Dimple talks to the limo driver (his name is Charles) The kids jump in the back and are drinking cold drinks which are in the small fridge in the limo.

Charles who is in the front seat driving: Dimple Madam, aaj tum hume Ranbir sir ki hatho se marwana chahte ho kya?🤢🤢

Dimple stops slurping her glass & giggles😆😆: Relax, Kuch bhi nahin hoga. Just Drive us to Naina International Airport.

In about 10 minutes the kids reach Naina International Airport. The all run out and Dimple tells Charles that this special trip is their little secret and winks. The kids run inside and head to the counter.

Dimple: Excuse I have reservations for a private section in the K&N Airlines.

The woman looks down and sees Dimple and all the kids and smirks. Woman's name Fatemah (I had to put someone I just got to know in here)

Fatemah smirks: Excuse, me, little girl…. Where are your parents? You must be joking!😆

Dimple mimics Fatemah: Well, excuse, me older lady.. But, I'm "THE" R-r-ranbir Nanda's only daughter. Dimple Naina Nanda, and if you check I have already made a reservation for a 10 seat section on the plane.

Fatemah checks on the computer, and has a guilty face:😕 I'm really sorry mam….. It says here you have requested to go on the plane 15 minutes early. You may head in, and sorry for the inconvenience again madam.

Dimple: Tik hai, whatever… (All the kids follow Dimple inside the terminal and head inside the back of the plane and sit in their seats)

Azura who is sitting next to Dimple: Hum 15 minutes plane mein early kyun hai?!

Dimple smacks Azura: Kyunki, agar meri mummy papa hum logo ko dekliya toh hume wapas ghar jane parega!

All the kids together: OOO! (And they start watching Finding Nemo on the big screen TV that's in their section)

Ranbir and Kanya get into the plane too. They are in the front section of the plane and do not know that the kids are in the back.

K: Ranbir, this is bad for the ozone layer, we should have gone on a public plane!

R seductively: Magar phir privacy romance nahin hoga na, Jaan!

K giggles: I love you Jaan (she is about to kiss him when)

Intercom: Attention Ladies and Gentlemen, please fasten your seat belts the plane is about to lift off.

R confused face:😕 Kanya, sirf hum dono hai plane mein, toh ladies and gentlemen kehne ki kya zarorat? Mr. aur Mrs. Ranbir Nanda kehne chaiye.

K giggles: I think it's in the rules to say Ladies and Gentlemen.

The plane lifts off and they have been in the air for 30 minutes. Ranbir's cell rings…

R: Hello?

Adita: Ranbir, bache tumhare paas hai?

R shocked: Nahin toh…

Adita: Ha! Hai.. Dimple ne…

Ranbir doesn't let her finish her sentence.. puts the phone down and gets up and takes Kanya and goes to the back of the plane and sees ………….

Want to know what happens then guess what??

Comment.. Comment .. Comment!

(25 comments)😈

!😉And pressure Sara a.k.a Dilkeroshni to update soon.

Picture of the Week:

Comment By SugaNain:

"Don't worry Ranbir, I will give you a kiss, Kanya does not deserve to touch your lips!"


And of course, comment on my photo comment!
Edited by suganain - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#89
me first.. what can i say except i am speechless its awesome as i said
before.. the pic is awesome yeah who needs kanya =] loll and thankx naina
😉 trying to make me break under the stress na??
Edited by dilkeroshni - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#90
Me second
That was awesome
But stop with the blackmailing plllzzzzzzzzzzzz 😡
Continue sooooooooooon

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