FF: Pyar Ki Presents/pg26 *FINAL WORDS - Page 7

Are u guyz gonna ask for more than 20 comments after the next update?

Originally posted by: Kiran_1

Are u guyz gonna ask for more than 20 comments after the next update?

Of Course... 😆😉

guys..it's called bluff! They won't update till they are ready but more comments do make people want to write more.

what's up my 2 favorite gundas?? 😆 😆 (shanta tai/pappu pager/mobile tapori gundas!!) (I am the high class blackmailing gunda just like my rannu!! 😃 )

Originally posted by: Perfangel5655

guys..it's called bluff! They won't update till they are ready but more comments do make people want to write more.

what's up my 2 favorite gundas?? 😆 😆 (shanta tai/pappu pager/mobile tapori gundas!!) (I am the high class blackmailing gunda just like my rannu!! 😃 )

Oye! Chori! Hum Hai High Class Donnas! 😃 Samaja Kya! And thats my Rannu!😉

it was great update.

i loved it.

ranbir's daughter is just like ranbir.

poor ranbir, not getting alone time with his wife.

heya
i luv dis ff
u've olready had more dan 20 comments so wheres da next part yaar ???
update it soon ..
salz...x

should be up in a couple of minutes.. hope you guys enjoy and comment and comment and comment

Sorry, took a long time to update.. But, hey I was sick, school, and I'm a Senior in high school. So, I'm a busy woman..
Give Me a Break. But, on the other hand. I want to say that You will enjoy the update after this... So Enjoy This One!😉

Chapter Four: Bachon Se Kabhi Nahi Chutkara!

Ranbir Opens the door and there is the other Two parents of the house.. (or really the other bacha party) A crying Shanaya and an upset Aayan. They just barge into the room and sit down on the bed. Not even noticing a shirtless Ranbir and an annoyed Kanya.

Shanaya sit right next to Kanya: OO! I miss my cute Vishu and Azura. !! Kisne bacho ko bhejne ki plan karle?… Ranbir bhaiya was it u? I miss Azura's giggles…

R annoyed thinks: Damn, y can't they just be romantic and happy.. like me and Kanya were…. Just doing.. Err..!

Aayan puts his head on Shanaya's shoulder and Shanaya puts her head on Kanya's shoulder. Aayan says: Kanya.. don't you miss Dimple's giggles.. and Akash's random information about the climate in Kazakhstan?

Kanya looks at Ranbir.. tells him with her eyes to think of a way to get them happy. Ranbir nods his head.

Ranbir: Tum log tension kyun kareheo? Ab toh tum log romance karsakteho.. Who

bache to kebab mein hadi hain.

Ayan looks up at Ranbir: Kebab… (and becomes sad) Chicken Kebab Azura ka favorite dish hain.

Kanya and Ranbir look at each other.. they are fed up of Ayan & Shanaya's sadness.

K- Sirf kuch hafte toh hain.. Ab tum log jao aur masti karlo…

Shanaya sniffles: Bache ke bina? (she looks at Ranbir) Bhaiya apne shirt kyun nahi pehena?

Ranbir thinks O now she notices!: Duh! Kyun key mein meri biwi ki sath romance kareha tha!

Aayan: Zaroor Kanya ne AC band kare hogi!

Kanya extremely fed up by now yells: NAHIN! Mein aur Ranbir romance karehe the! Tum log apne sad faces kyun banereho? Ab tum log bhi second honeymoon manow!

Aayan & Shanaya shocked.. so is Ranbir

A and Shanaya stand up, Aayan says: Sorry Kanya, hume nahin patha kit um log.. um… you know..

Kanya realized what she said.. gets a little embarrassed but brushes it off, after all she hasn't had sum alone time with her hubby for a while: Thank you for understandng you two.. Don't be sad.. Bache kuch dino mein wapas aayega.. Tab tak tum log bhi eik dosre ke sath waqt bithao.

Aayan and Shanaya wave at them and leave.. but still having the sulking face. A&S lock the door as they leave. They leave and our very hungry Ranbir jumps on his equally starving Kanya. He starts to nuzzle Kanya's neck, and kisses her lips passionately deepening it having a tongue of war in their mouths, he starts to tickle her, she is laughing extremely loud… When the couple suddenly hears another disturbing knock on the door.

R: Ab yeh kaun hai?

This time Kanya is ignoring the door knock.. And starts to nuzzle Ranbir's neck, Ranbir gives her a sexy smile.. and both continue to nuzzle each other.. Kanya still laughing loudly.. The knock gets louder!

Ranbir annoyed: Uff! Kanya lagta hai ki hume darwaza kholna chaiye.

Kanya annoyed: Ok, jaanu!

Kanya fixes herself up, and Ranbir goes and opens the door.. Guess who it is?

R: Shanta Tai tum? Yaha hamare ghar par?

Shanta Tai just barges in.. – Kanya dekho main agaya.. Mein jante ho bache Adita ke ha hai.. Isliye maine socha tumse milne ao!

Kanya is happy yet upset and murmurs to herself: Abhi he aana tha kya?!

Shanta Tai keeps talking and talking…

Ranbir annoyed: Shanta Tai…..

ST: Oye, Ranbir tum.. Shirt kyun nahin pehene? AC nahin on kiya kya?

Ranbir puts is hand on his head and stomps his feet. Kanya giggles… It reminded her of Dimple..

ST: Anways.. Dekh Kanya aaj tum aur mein 123 dekne chalte hain..

K: Kyun?

ST: Usme, ek heroine hai joe meri humshacle hai! Or Saand ko bhi laker ao! Lekin seats itni bari nahin hai! (ST laughs)

Kanya: ST aap Pooja di ko lekar chalo.. mein aur Ranbir … Trinidad & Tobago jarehe

Ranbir shocked and thinks: When did we plan a trip to T&T?

ST doesn't understand what they are saying, thinking: Yeh T&T kya hai?

ST leaves and says she will go with Pooja.

Ranbir locks the door and goes to Kanya to continue with their romance… Kanya stops him.

K: We can continue this at our honeymoon!

Ranbir smiles and sits up and puts her on his lap: Tum ne yeh sab plan kab kiya?

Kanya puts her head on R's shoulder: It has been one week since I have planned this.. Big D aur Malika Mom ko patha hai…

He gives a sexy grin too Kanya.. and the radio alarm goes off "Zara Zara Touch Me Remix!"

Pic I love This Week:

Comment: "He looks so Hot with his eyebrow flaring up!"😉

Will the honeymoon go smoothly? 😕

Or will the little devils interfere in some way?😡

Please Leave Comments! 20 Comments!😃😃

And Promise I will continue!! With a Promo, after 15 comments!😊

enjoy guys... naina what are you gonna do next year.. believe me it gets more hectic =p

Originally posted by: dilkeroshni

enjoy guys... naina what are you gonna do next year.. believe me it gets more hectic =p

Sara, after the next update, that I will do.. It will be two updates you will have too do. 😉 So, I'm still thinking.. And I hope everyone likes it! I'm also going to start another new Fan-Fic. Please Comment! on this Poem Everyone! I didn't get as much comments! I want people's opinions. And make sure you read my Fan-Fic Pyar Kiya Toh Darna Kya (Just Updated)😃