Fan fiction for the week 12th-19th sep - Page 149

hey where have ateet ka saya and arman disappeared. dying 2 read it

beta yahan bahut se writers ghayab ho gae hain

hiya people riting after 5 days since returned...sorry bt waz reading all da fab storiezzz....abhi commentz shuroo karti hoon...

FARAH extremelyy marvoulous story ur riting...had a heartattack wen u mentioned sujal's goonna die...thank god u changed da script...romance 22222222gd 😳 😳 👏


AMNA i think wait is gonna last forever

KIRAN thoda sa rokin...gr88 story....bt plzz kya akeli mein idhar pyaar ki kashish pyaar ki parh rahi hoon....plzz continue karo 😭 😭

soory i dont remember da name of da riter of EHSAAS N DIL KA RISHTA...bohat hi achi story hai plzz cont.fast..

keep it goin ....rokin!!!!

sooo sorry if i 4got any1...

hold on...riter of mere dharkano..1....fab. story...jaldi likho plzzz....

EVERY STORYY IS GOIN REALLY GR88!!

nida thx 4 cont kdzk on my behalf...

nids

amna di,natz,rameena post ur stories yaar and plzzzzzzz any1 continue keep it going

Kahani Sujal aur Kashish kiiii..........(Part 11)

Recap:Sujal tells Kashish tat Veena wants 2 meet her ............

They reach sujal's house..

Kashish: Sujal I m very nervous yaar.. agar kuch gadbad ho gayi toh?

Sujal: Kuch nahi hoga main hoon na!!

Sujal gives a smile to himself seeing Kashish scared..

Sujal: Chale Kashish

Kashish: Hmmmm Chalo

They both go in..

Sujal: Mumma

Veena: Haan to ruk main abhi aayi

Veena brings aarti

Veena: Sujal wohi ruk jaa ..... Kahan hai Kashish?

Sujal: Kashishhhhh......

Kashish: Namaste Aunty!!

Sujal (isharon se): Mumma ke pair chuho Kashish

Kashish (isharon se): Oh sorry

Kashish veena ke pair chuti hai

Veena: hamesha khush raho beta

Kashish smiles..

Veena: Andar aao beta

Kashish: Jii aunty

Kashish (to Sujal): tumne to kaha tha ki ......

Sujal smiles and go in

Kashish realizes tat alll this time he was pulling her leg

Kashish(to herself):uff yeh bhii aajeeb hi case hai

Veena: Kashish andar aao beta

Kashish: Jee aunty!!

Veena: Sujal tumhari pasand ki to daat deni padegi... Kashish beta tum bahut khubsurat hoo!

Kashish (blushes): thanks aunty

Sujal is looking at Kashish...

Veena: Sujal ab Kashish ko dekhta hi rahega ya kuch kahega bhi..

Sujal: Mumma woh!!!!!!!!!

Veena: Kashish beta ye sujal hai na thoda sa pagal hai isliye iski kissi bhi baat ka bura mat manna theek hai?

Kashish(in a teaseing tone):mujay pata hai aunty

Veena:haan abb tum to ise samjhti hii hogai aut kahan mein tumhein...........

Kashish: nahi aunty aisi baat nahi hai

Veena: Are kashish main to mazak kar rahi thi.. achcha Kashish kya logi tum?

Kashish: Aunty main kuch kuch nahi..

Veena: Beta ab to ye tumhara bhi ghar hai ... kaho kya logi

Kashish: Nahi aunty wo mujhe jaana hai.........

Veena: arre aise kaise abhi abhi to aayi ho.. Sujal bol na isse

Sujal: Haan Kashish abhi to aayi hai

Kashish (stares at Sujal): Nahi aunty wo aaj ghar par kuch guests aane waala hai .. dad ne mujhe ghar jaldi bulaya hai

Veena: Ohhh agar aisi baat hai to main nahi rokoongi par ek promise karo ki tum waapas milne zaroor aaogi

Kashish: Aunty ye bhi koi kehne ki baat hai ye mera bhi to ghar hai na

Veena and Sujal smiles..

Kashish: Achcha Aunty to main chalti hoon

BYE SUJAL...

Sujal: Bye

Veena: Sujal bahar tak chodkar aa Kashish ko

Sujal: Jee mumma

Veena: Pagal ................

Sujal holds Kashish's hand

Sujal: Hey jaan!! Tum kuch bhool rahi hoo!!!!!!

Kashish: Kya?

Sujal: Say you love me

Kashish: OFCOURSE I LOVE YOU

Sujal(disappointed):kya poput kar diya naaa

Kashish: What?

Sujal: arre thoda sa naatak karna tha na ki main nahi boloongi mujhe sharam aati hai wagharia waghaira

Kashish: Sujal isme sharmane waali kya baat hai

Sujal: Anyways bye

Kashish (smiles): Bye

Kashish kisses Sujal on his cheeks n leaves

Sujal gives a sweet smile a very sweet one..

Soo here this part end lets see wat happend next
Will this happiness in SK life remain like this.......

..yes yes yes...i hope the happiniess remains the same...infact aur bar jaye.... 😉 ...great Kash_sujal!!!!

kiran aur kitni tarref karni paregi....logon yeh waqi mein kiran hai..kya yeh kahin se 14 years ki lagti hai???????????????? 😆 😆 😆 ...great part though! 😉
and thanx samrene tum nahoti to mera kya hota 😃 yeh ac kahan gayab hai?? 😕 😉 😛

nids welcome back!.....der se ayi par durasat ayi 😉

Who was posting ateet ka saaya where has he disappeared 😕

nids was.....but now she is back..... 😃