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Posted: 19 years ago
thanx rajeev1
sooo nids plz continue Ateet ka saaya soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
hey rajeev1 kiran di is of 14 so y should i call her kiran di im of 13 so chalo kashish rox i will call u only kiran no di.
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Posted: 19 years ago
so i'am continuing zindagi ke silsilay.. hope u like it...... 😊


Zara apni nazar humare couple se hatakar dekhthe hain ki baki sab kya kar rahein…..
Sujal ,Rishi , Varun , Swayam, Akshat & Pratham are sitting & talking…..when rishi discl oses that he likes mehak..all the brothers are over – joyed….they encourage him to go & propose to mehak.. varun does not like the smallest inch of their conversation….
all others also express their feelings..{ I mean pratham says he likes gauri , swayam says he likes kripa & it is a known fact akshat likes charu }..
sujal is very happy….but he thinks that how would all these people react when they come to know about the fact…
suddenly akshat cell rings.. akshat sees that it is charu's number all the guys force him to put the phone on speaker..
akshat:- hey charu……
archie :- akiii main archie bol rahi hoon , charu nahi
{all the brother's look at swayam & he smiles}
akshat:- tho bolo kaise chal raha hain….
Archie :- kya khaak chal raha hain… hum sab ka time khathe khathe bura haal ho gaya hain.. tum plz humme Shimla dikhane le jaogee…
Akshat:- kyun bhai kash kahan hain….
Kripa:- kash diiiiiii , unke paas tho kisi ke liye time nahi hain.. wo tho jabse aayi hain tabse koi file dekh rahi hain..
Akshat:- theek hain hum kal afternoon lunch aur shopping pe zaroor jeyenge…..
Archie :- aki pukka na , nahi tho main high command se recommandation leke aauuu { she means charu }
Akshat & all others understand & all start giggling…except for varun he is least intrested …
Akshat:- nahi meri maa , hum kal chalenge.. {the call is over}
After talking for some more time all the guys disperse to their work…

Varun in his room { talking to himself aloud }:- main aisa
nahi hone doonga . main mehak se pyar kartha hoon . main use rishi ki hone nahi doonga . mujhe mehak chahiye by hook or by crook….[another villan in the making ]
Piyush is there passing by & he hears this { ye piyush ko na koi kaam nahi jab dekho doosro ki baatein suntha rehtha hain } & thinks :- chal bhai piyush ab tho is ghar ko barbad karne main aasani ho jayegi.. varun jo hain mera saath .
he laughs…….

In kashish's house all the sisters are sitting & gossiping . all the sisters are very happy to be with kashish after such a long time…all the sisters are very exicted that kashish is going to &nb sp;get married . kashish thinks :- mujhe maaf kar dena main inki umeedo ko thod rahi hoon…….
The sisters continue their talking..

Now it is next day morning…..
Sujal enters his cabin. He finds a sealed parcel addressed to him , he opens it & the contents of the parcel shocks him to the maximum extent . there are some pictures inside the cover . he barges into kashish's cabin & starts shouting at kashish…
Sujal:- tho miss . kashish oberoi tum apne app ko sama thi kya ho…
Kashish is very shocked & surprised as to why sujal is shouting like this..
Kashish:- sujal kya hua , koi problem….
Sujal:- tum kehthi ho na ki tum   ;meri dost ho , tum dost tho kya insaan kehne ke bhi layak nahi ho….
Kashish is very hurt she says :- bas sujal bohat ho gaya , jab maine kuch kiya hi nahi to phir tum aise kyun cheek rahe ho.. aur agar tumhe cheekna hain tho pehle ye &n bsp;batao ki maine aisa kya kar diya hain….
Sujal opens the parcel removes the photographs & throws them at kashish & leaves..
Kashish is shockedddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddd…


So here I end this part main umeed karthi hoon ki app sab ko ye part achcha laga hoga . main maafi chahthi hoon ki maine itni late se post kiya……

Agar app ko jaanna hain ki un photos mein kya   ; hain ki sujal itna badak gaya , piyush ke pass aisa kaunsa trumph card hain , piyush kisse baat&nb sp; kar raha hain , varun kya karega , sujal ko &nbs p; kashish ko & nbsp;lekar kya ghala tfaimi ho gayi hain , kya sujal kashish&nb sp; ke beech ki galatfaimi kabhi doorr hogi……………………….
i'll be waitin g for your&nbs p; reply………………..

Ye saare sawaalon ke jawaab ke liye padthe rehiye……………………………
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Posted: 19 years ago
farah lullu 😆 ........mogambo khush hua 😆 & AC bhi khush hui 😆 😆 magar m waitin 4 ur twists !!gande twists hue to........ samreenneee..........trp's chart plzz!! 😆

kiran(no di as well) 😳 u rocked like kashish!! lookin verry beautifull 👏 story's also cool.....keep it up!! 👏

ambarina welcome back nice story....
samrene.....in short mai to tumhari knowledge hi increase kar rahi hoon na 😆

cool_sk m da 1 who promotes genious to different posts (on the basis of her lateness in postin the story) 😆 😆 how can we larofy 😆 kyon genious 😉
and post ur story jaldi 😃

vivvooo......woooo...waise main akeli hi kaafi hoon sabhi ko kick off karne ke liye 😆 write moooreee!!gr8 goin' 👏 👏

kash_sujal & zunaria 👏 👏 👏 well done!!
manu sis.....harpy kuch nahi kar payegi hahhaahaha 😆 😆



Edited by rajeevAC - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
harpy....how can u bite me? wo to pure din Moaning Myrtle 😉 ke saath uski favourite place mein band thi 😉 😆 😆

& maine un dono ko mangu pandu 😆 ke sath jungle mein bhej diya...par mangu ko police le gayi aur piyushy & mansi ko jhingalalaaho people le gaye!! mansi ne to unhe pata liya aur story mein wapas aa gayi par piyush is 🤢 !!now he said dat he'll come back as a bhoot in da story w/double evil intensions......huhahahaha😈
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Posted: 19 years ago
DIL KA RISHTA
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Recap:kashish and sujal reach bombay.piyush was overjoyed.kashish tells sujal that mansi had called.,.
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"Piyush is here to tell u about a phone call which came in ur absence...", Kashish said in an icy cold voice...

"Phone call?...Kiska phone call?", Sujal demanded irritably looking at Piyush...

Piyush opened his mouth to speak but before he could do so, Kashish's voice interrupted again...

"It...was....Manasi...", said Kashish slowly and fixed her gaze on Sujal's face to observe his reaction...

"Manasi?...", repeated Sujal in a surprised voice and turned towards Piyush with his eyebrows raised..."Manasi called?...Kis liye?", he asked him enquiringly...

Piyush lowered his eyes for a brief instant and then looked straight at Sujal and spoke for the first time..."She called to say that she is in Shimla and wants to meet u urgently for something..."...

"Manasi is in Shimla?", Sujal burst out sounding totally astonished...Kashish caught the inflection of surprise in his tone, and mistaking it for excitement, suddenly felt a throbbing pain in her heart...

"Par last time jab baat hui thi, to usne kuch kaha nahi..."...Sujal continued frowning thoughtfully to himself....Kashish felt her face tighten and clenched her fists without realizing what she was doing...So Manasi and Sujal are in such close touch with each other still...she thought painfully...

"She has asked u to contact her on this number....", Piyush said and held out a scrap of paper towards Sujal...Sujal took the paper from him and whipped out his cell from his pocket..."I should call her up abhi...", he murmured more to himself than to anyone else and briskly pressing the buttons on the keypad of his cell, walked out of the room...

Kashish saw him go out of the room with a sinking heart..."Hullo?...Manasi?...is that u?"...she suddenly heard Sujal's voice drift across into her ears from the corridor as he made his way downstairs....Feeling suddenly weak in the knees, she sat down on the bed with a thud...Piyush looked at her for a moment as she sat there staring into space blankly...He opened his mouth to say something, but then changing his mind closed it again...Turning his back towards her, he walked out of the room, shutting the door behind him softly...

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Once outside the room, Piyush looked around to see if Sujal was there in the vicinity...but it seemed that he had walked out into the garden while talking on the phone as the side door was wide-open...Piyush quickly walked to his own room, and entering it fastened the lock from inside...He then eased himself on an easy chair and leaning back smiled broadly to himself...

Things were going his way even more rapidly than he had expected...It had been evident from Sujal's attitude today that he had started feeling insecure regarding Kashish...Obviously then even their trip to Bombay had not led to the removal of all barriers between them...His planning with Mudita and his phone call to Kashish seemed to have worked beautifully...

Piyush rubbed his hands in glee and gave a short laugh to himself...It was all so easy...Especially because he knew Sujal and his nature so well... He was well-aware of how possessive Sujal always was of all his things...and this was something more important...his wife and his love...So even the smallest things would be enuf to make him jealous and angry...Not only this, he knew only too well, that Sujal was not one to ask or give any explanations...his ego would prevent him from even confessing his feelings towards Kashish unless he was assured that she felt the same towards him...So in case of any misunderstanding, he would be angry with Kashish, but would be unable to express it in the right way...

Oh Sujal! Ab tumhe samajh aayega ki haarna kya hota hai...Apna hak khona kya hota hai...Saari zindagi main tumse haarta aaya hoon...Har pal...har jagah...har makam par...tum jeette rahe aur main haarta raha...but now no more...I am going to take ur Kashish from u...and make her mine...

And now god also seems to be helping me out...Manasi's sudden and unexpected arrival in Shimla is nothing short of god-sent...Its a golden opportunity and I am going to make full use of it to widen the distance between Kashish and Sujal...Piyush gave a leering grin again and feeling a deep contentment inside, slowly shut his eyes close...

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Sujal came back to his room after having finished his conversation with Manasi, only to find it in total darkness and Kashish already in bed...He was surprised momentarily to find that Kashish had gone to sleep so early and then attributed it to the long tiring day they had had...He decided not to switch on the light as it would disturb her and went out quietly to stand on an adjoining balcony...

Sujal looked outside at the moonlit garden and stood there drinking in the night sounds...the sounds of insects trilling...the occasional crackle of a leaf...and the hooting of owls...Hel turned his mind once again to the talk he had had with Manasi...He had felt really worried about her, the minute he had heard about her unexpected arrival from Piyush...He and Manasi had been good friends ever since college...For a while, the friendship had cooled a little, mainly at his initiative, when Manasi had expressed a desire that they become something more than friends...He had been irritated and had shown it to her rather bluntly....She had been hurt and had left for the States...But there, she had met and married a well-settled NRI...and soon afterwards, their friendship had been resumed...Somehow, once she had gotten married,all the earlier constraints had gone away, and Sujal had been able to feel free with her again...He genuinely cared for her now as a friend and she too had made him her confidante on a number of occasions...

Lately, he knew that she had been having some problems with her husband...and this was what had caused him to get concerned about her sudden arrival...His first thought had been that she had finally ended her marriage and had come back home...But thankfully, he had been wrong...Manasi had just confirmed that she had come mainly on some property-related matter...What was more, her husband had accompanied her on the trip, all their problems having been sorted out...She had only wanted Sujal's help in her business dealings while in Shimla....

His talk with Manasi had done one good thing though...it had served to bring about a pause in the mental tumult which had afflicted him since afternoon...Their conversation though brief had broken his chain of thought with regard to Piyush and Kashish, and had left him feeling calmer and in a more reasonable frame of mind...The sharp pangs of jealousy and insecurity had ceased at least for the while , and he was even able to wonder at the intensity of his emotions in the preceding hours....

Its indeed been a long long day...Sujal thought....Emotionally as well as physically...Guess i should turn in too now....In any case, tomorrow, i have to go to office...I bet, things have gotten pretty messed up in my absence...Thus thinking, he turned his back to the starry night and went back to his room...

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ambarinaaltaf thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
rajeev ac yeh piyush ko maar dalo na 🤢 jab dekho har story mein sujal aur kashish ke beech mein aajata hai 😕 agar iss piyush ko nahi maaroge na tho tho ..... mein tumhare story mein guss ke ek new entry maar ke iss ka murdur kardongi 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
ambarina u r welcome....mai khud isse bahut pareshaan hoon 😆 😆 !!
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Posted: 19 years ago
Yaar iss piyush kaa tuu kuch karna hii paray kaa in every story us koo sk koo alag karnay k elwa koi kaam nahiii 😡 n rajeevac da story Dil ka Rishta rocks par piyush kaa kuh karroooo aa jaldi
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Posted: 19 years ago
Kash_Sujal nice story 👏

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