'Confess before its lost'(Part III)ending

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Hi friends,

"Confess Before its lost" is very short story with few parts and it has simple story line. Its just a casual attempt to make it look like a story hope u enjoy..

I have to say thanks to my wonderful set of frieds who were the support when i wrote these stories.. My dear friends Bini, Sara, San & Tannu.... I luv u all.

My very special and dear friends who have made this process of posting my stories her in I F a sweet memory moments, have encouarged and appreicated my effort. Thanks to my lovely friends Golu, Vandana, Jyothi, Monika, Rabia, Juvz, Khubu,Nida,zengirl....luv u all..

Will post the first part soon... hope u enjoy reading....😃

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Jaldi se post the 1st part yaar! 😛
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Originally posted by: togepe30

Jaldi se post the 1st part yaar! 😛

hehehhe Vandu... wow!! u r the first one to reply adn jaldi post karun..keh rhai ho..ab itni pyaar meri khaas dost ko kaise intezaar karva sakti hoon.. theek hai..post karti hun...😃

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"Confess before its lost"
Part I
The sun is setting & Naina is looking at it from the terrace. She sits at the nearby bench, smiles fondly remembering how she would participate in exhibitions with her friend; she would have a great time chatting with him whole day. She was intelligent & confident and he was smart & active. She recollected how many times she was embarrassed by her parent's behavior. He was made to stand out of the gate even to collect notes. Her parents were too protective. Naina felt sad & said, "Mom & Dad never had faith in me or were they too protective." She felt sad, because such instances at childhood had made her away from a large circle of friends & especially him. Naina felt, "Oh, he is so special to me! We studied in the same college, but I could never confess. He has so much talent, honesty & so much sincerity. Best Personality award winner of the college." Naina smiled and with a deep breathe sighed, "I wish u get all that u want & may the best always come to u. I will miss u." Her Parents called and she looked at the sky one more time, closed her eyes asking for her wishes to be fulfilled and went downstairs.
Its going to be midnight Shikar is standing near the Balcony. He looks at the street outside & said, " All come in our life's and go, we meet so many people, who have such a great impact in our lives, but with time, new people join and old fade away, but few special always stay in our hearts. Naina u r more than special." Shikar recollects her innocent, straightforward talk. Her behavior & her looks which had no artificial feelings. She was always happy with anyone's success and sad with their failures. She wasn't egoistic but friendly & warm natured. The days when he would come to her house & was made to stand outside the gate. It was Naina who had tears filled in her eyes; embarrassed with the way her parents were treating him & other male friends. He knew many for that certain reasons had started moving away from her. Shikar said, "We were in the same college as well, God she had changed so much. Never gave me a chance to become her close friend. It had become more difficult to tell her that she was the special & most dear friend to me. The whole college would try to talk to me & I could see u going more far from me." Shikhar looked up at the stars, "I wish I could be with u forever, but I could never confess. Wish u all the happiness Naina. I will miss u a lot." His mother knocked at the door, & asked if all was fine. He said yes! She lovingly hugged him & wished Good night! Shikhar closed the door and went to sleep.
Naina enters the college. It's the day of taking their Leaving Certificates, two days back they had got their graduation results. Shikhar came with his group of friends. They were standing in a long queue. There were around 8-9 students in between them in the queue, they felt they couldn't even stand alongside for this last time. As soon as Naina reached the office to collect the LC, Shikhar felt a certain sadness, to see her going away from him. Naina took her LC and came out of the office she looked at him, his eyes were glued to her, she smiled and he smiled back. As she left the place, he had a grin on his face. Naina face was also tensed. They both were emotionally shattered inside; their hearts were broken n on verge of crying.
Naina walked along with her friends to the near by railway station to boad train to her home. After a while she saw Shikhar coming. Shikhar use to also take the train to reach home daily. Those secret glances, all those memories started coming back to both of them. Suddenly there was commotion on the station; it seemed a riot had taken place. There seemed a chaos, everyone was afraid as the railways authorities told them to sit inside the station as this was safe. There was no auto or cab nearby. People started calling up their homes but the network was busy. Naina & Shikhar were also tensed. All friends started standing together & discussing. Naina & Shikhar stood near each other. This time they didn't speak up. It was around a couple of hours that People started taking a nap. Naina was silently thinking, their friends were listening to radio. Shikhar was looking at her, Naina smiled, & Shikhar asked her,
Shikhar: Naina, what r u deeply thinking? Want to inform ur parents?
Naina: I just got the line. I did inform them.
Shikhar: That's good.
Naina: Have u informed ur parents?
Shikhar: Ya….
Both looked down thinking what next to speak up. They couldn't find any thing to start conversation over again.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey nice part......Aww they r soo cute 😳
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👏 wow one more thx , great part. 👏 👏
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Originally posted by: togepe30

Hey nice part......Aww they r soo cute 😳

am glad u liked it... they r cute..haha kehte hi nahi na.. areee😉

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Originally posted by: monikaseth

👏 wow one more thx , great part. 👏 👏

hi monika dotn sya thanx looks so formal na..here.. am glad u liked the story so far..

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Originally posted by: jyothi_cool

wow a lovely stat cont soon

ta will contiue soon..waise this is my shortest short story..😉wont say kitne parts...😆

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Part II

After few minutes Naina got up to have water, but the water in the store inside the station was over. She was coming back, when Shikhar too came up to fetch water.
Naina: Shikhar there is no water, its over.
Shikhar: Oh! Now what?
Naina: What else, we will have to wait till the place calms up. These rioters don't even think about the people unnecessarily suffering.
Shikhar: Ya, & I just heard on the radio about 4 people have died and 16 r injured. These people… (He was about to continue…that he realized by his words Naina was a bit scared.)
Shikhar: but this station has police patrolling, their r large number of police round here.
Naina: Why? Is this station in the sensitive zone too.. They can come here as well.. Oh god, that's why I was not listening to the radio.
Shikhar: Naina, don't worry, nothing like that. See this gives an opportunity for us to spend some time together.
Naina looked at him……Shikhar looked back..realising what he said. He had said in a light tone, but in reality it meant a lot to be able to spend some more time with her.
Naina: Yes, true. After this day we may not be able to meet!( she said with a smile but her heart was hurt )
Shikhar: Yes, u r going to Dhaarpur to work for an NGO right?
Naina: Yes! And u r going to Newyork to do ur acting course?
Shikhar: No, I am going to Delhi, to take charge of Dads factory there.
Naina: but…. U had got the scholarship for acting course in Newyork 's esteemed college. Why didn't u give that a try? Once u had said ur dream is to go to USA.
Shikhar smiled: U still remember, I said it in 4th class. That was my dream then to go to USA..
Naina: Yes, & meet ur then favourite WWF champs.. (Laughing)
Shikhar: Oh ya…(smiling )
Naina: So what happen? I shouldn't ask, but u r star of our college, u deserve a higher praise world over. U have the talent.
Shikhar looked into Naina eyes; she had so much confidence while saying those lines. He was touched, he knew she said with her heart and she was so much concerned for him. He knew no one knows him well like Naina.
Shikhar: Dad has said I should work for his business. I shouldn't venture into acting which he calls nautanki. I got the scholarship, but I have to pay for the flight & Visa. Dad isn't approving. I thought to go against like but then few days later I had realized in practicality it's difficult. So decided to earn a descent amount then only on my will & money move to other avenues, which I want. Atleast let me not use dad's money for doing something that he discards.
Naina: Shikhar that's sad, I wish u could, I wish, u can later. I Know u will make it anyhow. If not sooner than later.
Shikhar was very glad by her words. He looked into her eyes with love and could see her a bit shy.
Shikhar: Naina, u r joining NGO that's great. I know u always wanted to work for people in need. I am happy u can do it. I remember u would give chocolates to street children on ur birthdays and when u would get results. Remember how u would cry endlessly if got less marks …and u would always forget to bring ur handkerchief that day.
Naina: Yes, stupid me, and u would carry that flower print handkerchief & everyone would make fun of u. It was in 6th or 7th. (Both laughing)Yes, I wanted to work in an NGO but ….(she was a bit upset)
Shikhar: what happen? U don't like the work place, or don't want to leave ur parents & go far away?
Naina: My parents' u know them very well. They r sending me to Dhaarpur to work in their friends NGO. My parents want me to meet their son later who works in Canada. They want me to marry him.
Shikhar was stunned, but he knew, she would have being married off by her parents soon.(He smiling listened with his eyes denoting his pain )
Naina: That damn NGO…..what it is god knows, my cousin was telling me, women in groups work & earn money. They r poor & the only earning member for their families. But the work they do is something I may not find working well with it. Dad is not listening, he tells me to work, as it's just accounting & managing the administration.
Shikhar: NGO, needy women working group, administrative work, whats wrong?
Naina: These women earn their livelihood by making Bidhis. (Desi Cigrattes)(she had an anguish on her face.) Shikhar couldn't say anything.
Shikhar:So u will get married soon…(he saidwith much disapoointment)
Naina had straight face, in her heart she felt like any filmy scene Shikhar could come & hold her hand & take her away. She wanted something to happen where like in films her father would say in the end, Naina, Shikhar is the best for u. In reality she knew, nothing could be done. Her nature was such that whatever happens she would never go against her parents, even at the cost of her life. Shikhar on the other hand wanted to tell her to be with him and make him as her life partner, he had the guts & will to go face to face ask her hand from her father. Like any filmy hero he was ready to fight all odds for her, go against family and run away with her. In reality he knew such things aren't that simple. He would never want Naina or her family to be embarrassed or humiliated by the society. He himself was in a situation where he didn't have a good equation with his father. It had being difficult to sacrifice his dreams and work to be able to serve financial to his father which he demanded in return. He knew life isn't a bed of roses, he knew Love has no end but marriage has an endless responsibility. Both Naina & Shikhar silently thought about their lives, they were not happy in their respective future their parents had in mind & what they wanted was not as simple. They were feeling a lot of emotions for each other, looking at each other, but not confessing their hidden love inside.

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