'Confess before its lost'(Part III)ending - Page 4

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Posted: 15 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: sri_4

Hey bhoomi..
Another great one!!!

Hi Sri,
This is a very short story and tried to make it real and simple.. good to knwo u liked reading this one too...😃

Naina ? a girl with lots of dreams and Shikar ? a guy with lots of goals,
wanting to confess their love to eachother....but never got a chance,,and today on last day of their college..n cue to strike / protest.they got a chance to tell their feelings?.
Yup and I guess in college in real we may have seen or heard so many wanting but never having said their feelings...and late rin life regret or wonder what would happen if they had.

The bomb scene was quite scary but it fitted well ..naina n shikar now knowed that if they didn't confess now they cannot do it ever again..
Their confession was so sweet ..they have been with eachother..they didn't elope but convinced their parents!!and waited for correct time..n also r trying to achieve their dreams,,hope they achieve it soon..
Yes, I didnt want filmy thing.. but natural circumstances..how each one perceives atleast people who r serious abotu lfie , love and family.... abotu not been crazy but responsible.. and such individual how they would react.. i am happy u liked the way it proceeded....

It's a simple story,the way we see in real life.,,many people love but never confess?
may be that what makes it different..loved it!!!
Yes u said it rightely dear...glad that u felt it toched a chord with real world..

Great work!!
Good wishes,,
Sri :-)

Thanks Sri, for commentign and for explaingin the ascpect u loved in the story.. thanks for ur wishes too..tc
Bhoomi
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Posted: 15 years ago
#32
heyy bhoomi
this was a really amazing and simply awsome short story
i just loved the way their efforts made their parents realise their love
ur short stories are really amazing
count me in ur fan list
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Posted: 15 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: seema.mittal2

heyy bhoomi

this was a really amazing and simply awsome short story
i just loved the way their efforts made their parents realise their love
ur short stories are really amazing
count me in ur fan list

HI Seema,
SO read this one..its very short right.. but u seem to have liked this story a lot... yes i felt to make this loev story a bit realistic for all my readers to belive it can ahppen and a bit more real close to real..or else too much dramatic takes away the charm of a simple realistic love story... feels good that the concept of this story is soemthign touched u... thanks for replying... hey but i dotn want any fan.. as i feel blessed to have friends around .. friends are close to heart..fans are mere outsiders.. so lets stay as friends... not fan van ...šŸ˜†.. Seem enjoy reading..hope it made u smile more n more... thansk for commenting..tc
Bhoomi
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Posted: 15 years ago
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heyyy bhoomi
it was a really amazing short story
u showed practicality in it
i really liked it that they never thought of running as a option
nd they stick to their love n finally their parents understand them
it was really awsome
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: seema.mittal2

heyyy bhoomi
it was a really amazing short story
u showed practicality in it
i really liked it that they never thought of running as a option
nd they stick to their love n finally their parents understand them
it was really awsome

Hi Seema,
Yes this story was initented at situation to be real and readers feel connected.. am glad that thoguh the story was very short u felt that and liked the concept. thanks for ur comments.. i felt really wodnerful readign allur comments on each one of my work.. u r so so sweet to read each one and take ur tiem out to comment on each one as well.. thanks for that.. tc
Bhoomi
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Posted: 15 years ago
#36
sorry for double commenting
i didnt knew i had commented before
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Posted: 15 years ago
#37
Hey Bhoomi
I just read this story!
it was really awesome!
Very well written!
x x
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Posted: 15 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: Ansh_Arti

Hey Bhoomi

I just read this story!
it was really awesome!
Very well written!
x x

Hi,
U read this story..its short but tried to make it as real in nature as it could be..and not very filmy... U liked it ..I am very happy... to know that... thanks for enjoying reading my stories..makes me to know i shodul conintue sharing my work..
tc
Bhoomi
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Posted: 15 years ago
#39
thank god ths topic is nt closed.......

hey it was so sweet n pure.. loved it really!! very well written....
Edited by charming.angel - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: charming.angel

thank god ths topic is nt closed.......

hey it was so sweet n pure.. loved it really!! very well written....

Hi fatima,
heheh yup this isnt closed yet.. this short story many feel they can relate to it.. its too simple too short yet u all enjoyed makes me feel wonderful.. sweet and pure those words feel sooooo awesome..aww thansk for such compliments.. makes me feel like writing more of these ..thanks for ur lovely comments..tc
bhoomi

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