'Confess before its lost'(Part III)ending - Page 3

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: jyothi_cool

are yaar why did u end it so soon it was just amazing ab jaldise ek aur shuru kardo lekin is baar lambaaaaa sa .

ehhe its one of my shortest short story hehehe.. will surely post one more soon.. u enjoyed this one makes me really glad... lambaaa hmmm lets se.e..😉

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: monikaseth

👏 wow awesome but its end soo soon . i hope you start new one soon.

Hi monika thanks dear for all the apprecaition... i will start a new one soon... 😃

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Posted: 17 years ago
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glad that u found it lovely..😃

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: sanightingale

hey dii....m good too... 😊
wow...very good story 👏...short n sweet...😃
thankgod they confessed their feelings😊...n their parents agreed....and that their freinds were safe too!! 😊
i'll be there fr the wedding😃...u cuming too naa😉
yeah the title ws perfect...👍🏼
post the nxt story soon.... 😃
take care....Allah hafiz...
Luv ya, Nida...🤗

Hi Nida dear.... u weremissng me..?? hehe sorry for such a late reply..yup thats the part of it na.. confess nahi karte to u feel u didnt express feelings who knows what u want may happen.... u comign for theri wedding hehe... the time i wrote may 19th was like sujal last scene and that why the date was written in that way.. chalo ab tak to baccha bhi hoga hoga..😆

will post my next story soon dear..

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Posted: 17 years ago
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plzzzzz tell me who is naina n shikhar i mean who r playing the charac of naina n shikhar plz tell me i only wanted rajeev priyanka fics so i asked is it of them or not
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: coolhotkash

plzzzzz tell me who is naina n shikhar i mean who r playing the charac of naina n shikhar plz tell me i only wanted rajeev priyanka fics so i asked is it of them or not

HI .. this story is non serial based.. so which ever actors u can imagine and put it in ur thoughts while u read it... 😃

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Posted: 15 years ago
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hi Bhoomi, this one was short and sweet. But there r still thousands of Nainas and Shikhars in this world who r unable to express themselves and go on with their life without their love .
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: ssh57

hi Bhoomi, this one was short and sweet. But there r still thousands of Nainas and Shikhars in this world who r unable to express themselves and go on with their life without their love .



Hi,

yes , this is short .. I am glad u felt it was sweet as well... Surely there are thousand of NAina and Shikhars in the world and its not their fault its just that things r so complicated by themselvesthat they cant get the courage nor the will to stand up and express confess ... hope people find their love sooner... its such a beautiful thign to have ur loved one along side.. 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey bhoomi.
ya i am in process of reading stories..so will comment on all at once..
as they will take some time..
thanks for understanding..
and yes u r writings have a lot of meaning,emotions in them so i never get bored though it needs a correct frame of mind to read...
and yes till now i liked u r story themes,name and names of characters which have a hidden reason ,,great!!!
good wishes..
sri:-)
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey bhoomi..
Another great one!!!
Naina – a girl with lots of dreams and Shikar – a guy with lots of goals,
wanting to confess their love to eachother....but never got a chance,,and today on last day of their college..n cue to strike / protest.they got a chance to tell their feelings….
The bomb scene was quite scary but it fitted well ..naina n shikar now knowed that if they didn't confess now they cannot do it ever again..
Their confession was so sweet ..they have been with eachother..they didn't elope but convinced their parents!!and waited for correct time..n also r trying to achieve their dreams,,hope they achieve it soon..
It's a simple story,the way we see in real life.,,many people love but never confess…
may be that what makes it different..loved it!!!
Great work!!
Good wishes,,
Sri :-)

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