SS Ek Pal part 10 pg 20 6/1 - Page 9

hey i love your ff. good job!

continue soon plzzz cant wait for more 😃

hey, i just caught up with your ff and i love it 😃 👏 😍
plz continue soon

Originally posted by: miss5stars

awwwwwwwwwww 😍
tht was jus rele rele rele CUTEEEEE 😳
i luvvvvveed ittt
u def shud continue soon 😃

aww i am so glad that u like that part.. thanks a lot for the comments..

Originally posted by: emerald_jule

thts was so sweet!! 😳 😳 😳 cont asap 😃

..aww thanks a lot.. emerald_gule.

Originally posted by: sam78

it was so much cute.
i love the last part about the hand and hand.
they were cute in the bedroom. i love that scene very much.

..aww thanks sam.. ya i liked that part too.. the hand in hand one..

Originally posted by: ~Unforgettable~

yeah, u totally not innocent niru!! no matter what u say bout mitu and my thin!! 😆 😆

very cute update!! next update better be about RK honeymoon 😳 continue soon, NO EXCUSES 😆

..Hey hin.. jaan.. stop making my rep. go down the drain.. and i am the most innocent baccha.. ok.. i am innocent than u guys are.. so stop talking.. all this about hehe lolzzz😳

hey.. and u were saying i am not innocent.. see u r the one.. who wants to read honeymoon.. part see see
hehe love u jaan
PS: change ur siggies.. hin.. atleast the first two.. do u want new ones.. if u do..let me.. know..

Originally posted by: punjabi.princes

aww really cute..specially picking out clothes for each other 😳 ...plz continue soon!

aww thanks a lot.. ya.. i liked that part too.. i thought wives pick out. clothes for their hubby's quiet often. so why not make.. them do that too hehe

Originally posted by: adventure_gurl

that was sweet!

awww thanks a lot..

Originally posted by: lil_desi_goddes

such a cute part.. awww.. you must continue!!

yaa thinking to update today.. as it has beeen a long time since i have updated.. but lets see. as not in the best mood right now

Originally posted by: Krishna100

very nice 😉

aww thanks..
PS: love ur siggie btw

Originally posted by: kvn1983

very nice and romantic one 👏

Nashili aankho se wo jab hamein dekhte hain,hum ghabraakar ankhen jhuka leite hain,kaun milaye unn ankhon se ankhen,suna hai wo ankho se apna bana leite hai.

well said.. kvn.. that was really good.. and thanks for liking my SS and also for commenting..

Originally posted by: nazeeei

love it nirali . great 😳 😃

thanks nazu..

Originally posted by: KC294

that was a great update... can't wait for ur next one

ya i will update.. today.. hopefull.. thanks

Originally posted by: janu_2006

hey
gr8 parts....
cont.sooon

will do that.. janu..

Originally posted by: phool527

lmao.. omg.. sorry jaan..anywayz great part.. yes yes yes.. u finally stopped that kabab mein hadda ST from bothering our love bords.. 😉 .. lol.. awwwnnnn ranbir stop bothering our kanya.. bechari.. heheh.. continue soon niru.. see this time i actually saved ur rep.. 😉 .. lol...

sorrie for what.. and.. ya.. i have to stop or it would have been an weird sitution and i wuld not have known.. how to write the next update hehe.. thank u so much for saving my rep hehe.. btw.. where r u.. geez.. no pm's no nothing..

Originally posted by: Kiran_1

I think u have a awesome ff
Please continue
Cant wait 2 read ure next update

thanks Kiran..
i will try to update today.. cant promise though

Originally posted by: bollyrockstar

hey i love your ff. good job!

continue soon plzzz cant wait for more 😃

thanks.. bollyrockstar.

Originally posted by: kspooja10

😆 😆
pls continue

will do pooja..

Originally posted by: *rankan*

hey, i just caught up with your ff and i love it 😃 👏 😍
plz continue soon

thanks.. a lot.. i am glad that u like my SS.. i will try to update today.. it self.. as i still have like.. 3 more hours.. till i go to sleep..
as is only 1:32 AM right now..


Everyone.. thank u so much for all this wonderfull comments they mean the world to me.. seriously i am sayin this from the bottom of my heart.. u guys are the one.. that makes me want to write the next update..

Hellooooo.. everyone i know u guys are going to be mad at me.. for not. writing the next update for so long.. but.. what can i do.. i had my birthday.. and than.. things i had to do.. so i am so sorrie about the delay.. i really am..



R laughed at that comment to himself

R: ya kanya what is wrong with ur hand.. why r u eating with the wrong hand

K: umm.. um... giving R angry looks

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K didnt know what to tell her sasu ma....

K: maaa wooo..

But before K can say anything

ST: eee saaand.. i mean ranbir.. agar tu kanya ka haath chodiga tab wo us haath se khaana khaye gi na..

M: what???

ST: ya , ST goes towards ranyu and shows that ranbir was holding kanya's hand..

Ira and Era: awwww chachu u r so cute..

S: aww look at chachi.. she is blushing like anything

M: umm.. not only that.. look at what ranbir is wearing..

Everyone notices that ranbir is in casual rather than formal..

BD: what is with all this change chote..

R: umm.. BD i was justtt

BD: i was just waht

R: kya yaar ab sab bhi na.. cant u be happy.. that i am trying to change here.. and u guys are making fun of me..

M: aww mera beta.. it is nice to see that u r trying to make kanya feel at home..

R: see my mom is the only one that understands me..

M: accha.. before.. she can do anything

K grabs his ears...

K: accha..

R: baby what r u doing??? that hurts u know that. right

K: accha.. mujhe to pata hi nahi tha..

M: nice kanya.. pull his ear..

R: mom... aap bhi

M: ya thats what u get for buttering ur mom like that

R: areey mom i was just kidding

M: so does that mean i am not a good mom now and i dont care for u..

R: areey mom when did i say that..

K: mom lets go from here..

R: but.... why??/

K: because we both dont care for u at all..

R: lekin.. sweetheart i was just...

Before ranbir could say anything.. K and M left from there..

R: BD waht did i do???

BD: chote.. u r so dumb. and slow.. i mean being india's top bussiness men.. u dont have a sense what to say to ur mom and ur wife..

R: areey par mein kya ..

BD left too..

and she left everyone else left too...

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M and K went to the garden.. they both were sitting on the swing.. and laughing at ranbir..

K: mom, thanks for supporting me

M: areey beta.. it is nice to know that he is trying to change.. and he always needs to know.. waht to say.. and when to say..???

K: umm..

M: kanya beta

K: ji mom..

M: u r happy rnt u???

K: yes i am mom

M: i m glad because i have let ur parents down one time i dont wnt to do that again..

K: areey mom how many times have i told u.. stop thinking about that..

M: lekin

K: lekin vekin kuch nahi...

R was coming outside.. and looking at the sa bahu jodi talking and smiling.. away

R comes to wehre they both were sitting..

puts his head in his mom's lap..

R: ma i am sorrie..

M: areey kanya is this really my son

K: giggles

M: nahi seriously kanya is this really ranbir.. as he never says sorrie to anyone..

R: mom.. if u going to make fun of me than i am leaving..

M: nahi nahi i was just making sure.. but anyways u r forgiven..

R: thank u..

M: hey not that easy.. u have to say sorrie.. to ur wife right here.. too

R: mom.. can i say sorrie.. to her.. in a different way..

K hearing that comment turned every shade of red..

M: ranbir..

R: what mom??? i have just gotten married.. and i want to be with my wife..

M: so u will go to honeymoon.. right??

R: ya mom..i dont mind going right now...

M: theek hai.. where do u want to goo.. i will book the tickets right now..

R: um..

R looked at k. but k was thinking something else

R: um.. i dont know..

K: can we go somewhere in india??

R: umm thinking why did kanya say that

K: mom i mean because of the whole natasha thing.. and than.. my parents. and stuff.. its just

R getting the point

K: i hope u dont mind ranbir..

M was going to say someting

R: areeyy kanya.. baby i told ur parents i will not let anything happen to u or them.. and i am playing to fulfill that promise..

R: mom we will like to go somewhere in india.. than of course that would mean that we both can go on honey moon.. again.. winks at k.. and k blushs.. like anything..

OK guys that is it.. for today.. i hope u liked it...
please do leave ur comments..
good or bad..

first to comment yay!
it was great and very cute, plaz. continue soon

2nd to comment that was soo cute
nir_jaanu Plzzzzzzzzzzzz continue that was was awesome

tat was rilli gud, n pls cont soooooon!! 😛

awesome story! 👏 loved it sooooooo much hope you update it soon!

hey great update...plz continue soon 😊