FF:by rainshine_11:pg 51 ENDING!!!!!!!!!!

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JK Dhillon

@Angelic_J

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Posted: 17 years ago

#121

Where's the update man?😡 sorry imma juss greedy for all good things😳

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Raina

@rainshine_11

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Posted: 17 years ago

#122

sry ill update soon
actually 2days valentines day
n i was buzy w/ my friends...
sry
but don wry ill make up for it
n thnz for aleast lettin me no ur waiting
JK_5

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Shazeen

@miss5stars

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Posted: 17 years ago

#123

rainshine-- um whts ur name it feels werid kallin u rainshine--- neways
IMMMM DEFFFFF WAITING FOR THE UPDATE--
i usually everyday at nite come n read ur fanficcccs 😳 😳 --- jus luv themmmmmm alot its rele gud 😳

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Raina

@rainshine_11

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Posted: 17 years ago

#124

thanz for the comments guyz
i really m VERY SRY
i cudnt update but now i will
n SRY again 😭 😭 😭
plzforgive me 😭

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Raina

@rainshine_11

Voyager

Posted: 17 years ago

#125

The evning arrives and everyone gets ready...
Kanya has a really pretty reb and black saree...with the straps snd blouse tied on the back...really cute and hot.....
Ranbir came out and looked at kanya who was putting on her jewellry
ranbir was in the bathroom changing and comes out ....
he doesnt notice hes staring at kanya with his mouth wide open
But then kanya sees him....
K:kese lag rahi hun?
R:tik
Shanta tai comes in
ST:tik nahi kya ramchic maal lag rahi hai....ek dum mast!!!!!
K:chalo....chale....
They arrive at the party.....
its a grand party...cause its also valentine day.....
Kanya is enjoying it to the fullest with everyone...
THen comes reva
Reva:aaj mere esa plan hai...ki yeh USA wali kanya...ranbir ki zindagi se bhi aur is ghar se bhi...humesha humesha ki liye chali jaye gi
Astha:ehsa kya karne wali ho?
Reva:aap bas dekho
Reva gives the waiter some money and mixs alchol to kanyas drink and tells the waiter to give it kanya....wheen nikil comes to the waiter...
N:waiter....yeh kis ke liye hai?
W:kanya maam ke liye
N:yeh ranbir ko de do
W:okay sir
Reva sees this and starts to panic
The glass is reaches to ranbir and he drinks it since its his fav juice
Music starts and everyone is on the dance floor...
Kanya is pulled in and dancing as best as she can w/ a saree on
...................
the music stops...
Ranbir's on stage
R:ladies and Gentleman(drunk)
mein aap sab ko yeh batana chaahata hun ki
mein apni biwi kanya se bohhot hi zyada..............pyaar karta hun
kanya i luv u
(he goes to kanya and holds her hands in his)
kanya......im sry maine ab tak jo bhi kiya....lekin
sah kahu toh mujhe pata nahi hai....lekin
i think i luv u

Kanya hearing this collected tears n one actually fell down...
then the music started again and everyone jumped but then got back to dancing
nikil came to kanya
N:kanya...shayad tum bhi ab tak gayi ho...tum aur ranbir ghar chale jao...tik hai
Kanya was kinda tired and ranbir cudnt hang around here so ..she agreed...
Kanya left with ranbir and nikkil thoughht to himself....kya idea tha yaar...acha hua tune reva ji ko kanya ke drink mein sharab mila te huve dekh liye.....ab toh kanya bhi janti hai ke ranbir use pyaar karta hai...aur kanya bhi use pyaar karti hai....i no kanya....ive known u froever and i can tell ranbirs the one for u....and hes also the one who kissed u ....(nikil had seen that)and hope u 2 find love in eachother)
Kanya drove ranbir n her home...
got him out of the car....and gave him shoulder support and took him inside
into their rromm...layed him done ....and got herself her book....and read....about half n hr later...she notices..ranbir isnt comfortable sleeping w/ his ponytail..n his shoe n coat...hes stuffed....she turn the AC on...and walkes over...n takes his rubberband out...and places his head so hes able to sleep....and takes his coat....and is sitting on the bed beside him with her back facing him and taking his shoes n socks off......
(FOR THE NEXT PRT UNTIL THE NIGHT ENDS THE SONG IS PAL>>>>SO MATCHES THIS TIME)
when suddenly ranbir opens his eyes.....and notices his at home in his room.....he look at kanya...whose back is showing from her saree...and he raises his hand and snakes down her back....she turns around n finds him awake...and get his coat to hang in his cupboard....she walks over and is walking to the door to go out to the kitchen...when ranbir comes in the way....and kanya moves to the other side n trys to get out and it at the door when ranbir comes in front and closes the door and locks it.....kanya just watches him do that.....and she walks to the windiw and stares at the park...wondering what ranbir is trying to do.......when she feels ranbirs hands find their way thru her back and around her waist and she feels this with her eyes closed...and he pullsher to him and trurns her aroound so she is facing him...still with her eyes closed... and he stares at her for what seemed like hours but then he moved his hands uper on her back to where her blouse it tied and was boutt to untie it when....kanya tried walking away....but ranbir pulled her to him real hard...and her chest and his chest banged to eachother...with this passion kanya found her way around ranbirs sided and was now holdinng him really tight
ranbir lowered his head to get a kiss like he did yesterday...except today w/ kanya willing as well....and so he almost has it when kanya moves her head n smiles......ranbir picks her up and drops her on the bed...
and he lays on the side....and finds his way around her neck and kisses her there....and soon up to her lips waiting for him...and they meet.....and they
kiss and they roll on top of eachother on the bbed...until they run outta breath and seperate......ranbir grabs the knot of her blouse on the back and unties it and kanya un buttones his shirt.....
and then the scence is faded away...and up pop hem after some hours... kanya and ranbir both wrapped with silk sheets...and ranbirs on top of kanya...when she moves off and gets some space...and ranbir just didnt no wat he was doin but wanted kanya so he pulled her real close and ....they both w/ all thhe passion ans affection...just snuggle into eachother and move their head along their faces n necks....loving how it felt
HAPPY V-DAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
IM SRY I CUDNT UPDATE N E SOONER IM REALLY SRYY
PLZ READ N COMMENT 😳

Edited by rainshine_11 - 17 years ago