FF:by rainshine_11:pg 51 ENDING!!!!!!!!!!

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Niroo

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Posted: 17 years ago

#131

that was really..romantic..
please continue soon

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punjabi.princes

@punjabi.princes

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Posted: 17 years ago

#132

aww very romantic and hot...plzz do continue..especially cus its the weekend now 😆 we want a lot more updates now 😉

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Raina

@rainshine_11

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Posted: 17 years ago

#133

THanz SOOOOO MUCH FOR COMMENTING...
n plz for the 1s who read but don comment
pLZ COMMENT
cuz if u do...it makes me feel gud..that im riting this 😕 plz do...

and if u read a update from dayz ago n have a comment plz feel free to comment id luv it if u do😳

Edited by rainshine_11 - 17 years ago

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Pari

@cheeky_pari

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Posted: 17 years ago

#134

Originally posted by: rainshine_11
BEFORE READING ANY FARTHER ...THE STARTING IS BORING SO PLZ DONT GO ON THAT......READ THE LATEST UPDATES

~~**~~Updates~~**~~

1st-Entrys and RanKan first meeting

2nd-Kanya meets Ayaan

3rd-Pammi and Malika decide RanKan Wedding😕

4th-RanKan meet to decide YES/NO😕

5th-Kanya agrees for the wedding😊

6th-RanKan touch😳

7th-RanKan water spill,RanKan engagement😳

8th-RanKan engagement,Mehndi excuse of Kanya to Ranbir😳

9th-Sangeet,Ira's entry😊

10th-sangeet dance(after guests leave)& game(RanKan win)..dog after ranbir😆

11th-shaadi aur rasamey

12th-suhaag raat, kanya in ranbir's lap😆

13th-cleanup, RanKan on the same bed?!😆

14th-RanKan almost KISS😳

15th-BD b-dayParty,RanKan Scence in van(sleeping😳)

16th(2 parts)-portrait😆

17th-necklaces tangle,Ranbir gets hurt😆

18th-nikil

19th-RanKan kiss,surprise!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😆😳

20th-the night😳

This is another fanfic like everyone elses
Obviously a love story written by ME
But i have added something that might make it different from others about Kanya
And I hope you guyz like it
And even if you dont plz let me know
by giving comments or suggestions
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The plane landed on its wheels(DUH!)
Out stepped the family of Godbole's
The father Anand stepped out,...A man with principles and self esteem but the most..love for his little happy family. He walked out buttoned his suit and walked ahead to meet his clients.(btw....it was their private plane)
Side by him was his wife, Pammi.A women with pride for her husband and care for everyone......She was blocking the door looking around at her india she hasnt seen for---
"Eh Pammi...tujhe koi bimari hai.....chal chal nikal"
"Kya Shanta Tai abhi ek bar dekh toh lene do"
"Abhi yahaan hi rehna hai.....dekh le na...Abhi chal"
"Aap bhi naa..................Chalo Pooja, Harpal, Kanya--hum india pohch gaye hai"
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Harpal came out ..streching his arms yawning out the exhastion of the plane ride...............When he kicked by his sister.....
P"Harpal ab chal tujhe toh mein dekh lu gi"
she was going after him when his other sister came in he way
K"Ab aap log yahin se jagadd naa shuru kar dee ge......come di aap toh badi hai"
H"aacha hua tum aagayi Kanya ......di ka toh screw hi is saffar se dilaa ho gaya hai"
P"Ek du gi naa.......Kanya tu haat...tujhe paata hai naa isne mere chhare ki kya halat kardi thi.........meri hi purse mein se mera hi make up mujh par ..aur toh aur mere liye ek muuj bhi ---"
H"Ek na ek din toh honi hi hai toh aaj se hi practise"
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Kanya-20 yrs old..going for designing..loves her family more than anything in the world...apparel is always fancy dressings..like right now she has jeans and a sleeve less long top on.....she HATES people who think of others as low and disgusting.....and jugde people by looks or money. She aint one of them.

Pooja-21 yrs old..loves bollywood and sony tv...shes had experience as a writer in America and is planning on continuing in India..she doesnt have a grudge on clothes but she doesnt wear salwar kamez...instead right now shes wearing a tanktop with a sweater coming down to her chest(hope you know what i mean)

Harpal-20 yrs old. the middle one.Will soon handle his dad's business...normal guy with a decent mind.

Shanta tai-? yrs old(almost in her50's)Used to work for them when they used to live in India but now is part of the Godbole family. LOOKS THE SAME WITH THE FLOWERS AND STUFF

Anand-Head of the family..although not the oldest. Rising in business of hotels and has been leaving in the States with his family for more than 10 yrs...left India with nothing worth living on and is returning as a business man.(HE ISNT A REALLY BIG KNOWN BUSINESS MAN BUT IS WEALTHY)

Pammi-Anand's wife. leads the family through problems....has just too much pride of being an indian and is quiet an exciting character. SHE LOOKS THE SAME AS WELL
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They arrive at their bunglow.........
Everyone is sooooooo tired they arent able to speak
P"Kitna lamba safer tha....meri toh jaan hi nikal gayi"
ST"haa...........ab hum bharat mein aah gaye hai ab yahaan Pammi, tuhje koi problem nahi ho gi"

They are talking when a girl arrives

Ri"pammi aunty ....kesi hai aap?"
Pammi looks around with a question mark on her face
P:"tum kon maine tumhe pechana nahi"
Ri:"mein....riya?! ....yaad aya?"
K:"omg riya......tum yahaan------(she runs over and hugs riya)mom maine ise kaha tha hum india aane wale hai"
P"are riya...kitni badi ho gayi hai"
Paami kisses her on the fore head
And riya takes her blessings
P:jiti raho putar
Po:"wow riya...long time no see---vese tum bhi kafi-"
ST"mein bata ti hun....woh kete hena .....JAKAS"
R:thank you shanta tai
ST:vese mein bhi tujhe bhuli nahi hun.....tu aur kanya meri hi gohd mein kele ho

Everyone says bye and leaves for a bath in their room
Riya takes kanya to the door

Ri:ek kamm karte hai....mein yahi do gali badd hi mera bungla hai.....mein tujhe kal legavu gi hum shopping ke liye jaye ge
K:tik hai
Ri:chalti hun.....kal subhah mein tujhe phone karu gi
K:bye

[sunshine....lovely morning ....birds chirping]
Kanya wakes up
and goes out for breakfast
She sees evryone at their own work
She goes up to pammi
K"mom..mein aaj riya ke sath jaa rahi hun...woh mujhe gumane le jaarahi hai...mein jao naa?
P"sure putar lekin...sabhal ke tu bohot dino baat yahaan ayi hai"

Kanya's getting ready when her phone rings
Ri"mein tujhe lene avu?"
K"hai mein tayar hun"

She sets her phone on the table grabs a pair of jeans with a decent looking t-shirt. She places her phone in her tote(purse)
and puts on flipflops
and heads out the door

Riya picks her up on a scooty
K"omg i havent seen one of these for ever....btw tumari maa ne toh mana kiya--"
Ri"haa mom ko mera yeh scooty par travel karna aacha nahi lagta...lekin maine apni gadi ki tire ko panchar kar diya aur baki sab gadi toh sab le gaye the"
K"esa kyun kiya."
Ri"are tumhe bomay gumana hai.....toh tumhe uska traffic aur gali ya nahi dekho gi toh maza kese aaye ga?"
K"tik hai ab chale"
Kanya sits behind Riya and they take off ...1st to the mall

Ri"this is the bay mall"
K"aacha ab mujhe sab ke liye gifts buy karni hai..tumhe yaad hai sab....Kaajal,phir um......Sanju .....aur-"
Ri"ha ha sab yaad hai..mein tumhe milvau gi lekin ab toh ender chale"

They had bought gifts for everyone and were heading out with milkshkes
When.......
Someone bumped into kanya and resulted to drpping all her bags and spilling her milkshake on herself
Ri"dekh ke nahi chal sakte"
THe guy turns and walks up to kanya
He looks at her from head to toe and laughs
Guy:ek toh tum itni patli hoke itna sab kuch utha ti ho aur jab girti ho toh mujh par ghuzaa?
K:listen dude...its ok just chill
Guy:kya kaha...its ok....maine sorry kahi aur maine kiya hi kya hai ke mujhe tumse maafi maang ni pade?
That was it Kanya was hot red with temper
K:listen watever your name is...i dont wtf ur name is...you mind your self ok?
R:my name is Ranbir Nanda
Hearing this riya knew not to say anymore
Kanya kept on talking
K: Ranbir nanda ...tumari galti yeh hai ke tum itne bade ho...
R:kya? kya kaha?
K:you are huuuuuuuuuge!!!! ek toh tumm ek ek.....(she din no how to say buff. in hindi so....) buffulo ki size ho aur dekh ke bina chalte ho
R:wat .....buffalo?........tumne mujhe buffalo kaha?
K: aur nahi toh kya.....ek aandhe ki tara chalte ho aur..
Riiya pulls Kanya away
Ri:come on knya....lets go
K:dekh lu gi tujhe
R:chal chal ......jaa

THis incident ruins both Kanya and Ranbirs mood=(

stay tuned and I promise it will get better

Hi,

First of all Sorry for reading your ff late...!!!

U know what...this ff is very different from other ff i read!

Keep it up buddy... You doing a great job!!!

kis ne kaha ke starting is boring.... friend its perfect!!! its much better than the actual stroy line!!!!!

I liked ur 1st part... esp the ending of it....

Priya

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Shazeen

@miss5stars

Rocker

Posted: 17 years ago

#135

CONTINUE!!!!! 😳 😳
i jus started readin ur fanfic a week or 2 ago nd i LUB ITT--- r u going to continuee todayyyyy 😳 ?? 😆

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Raina

@rainshine_11

Voyager

Posted: 17 years ago

#136

@emerald_jule:thanz so much for reading..n yea u were the 1st one to comment my valentine update😊

@sam78:thanz for the comment...n i wanna thank u for alwayz reading my ff and commenting....glad u like it!

@aish-uk:i totally agree w/ ya bout nikil....n u have alwayz been commenting since u started reading..really glad...thanz!

@adventure_gurl:ranbir confessed his luv...n u commented and made my day..like everyone else who commented...thank u !

@nir_jaanu:thanz for commenting...btw i luv ur ff
n i have been reading...real cute!!

@punjabi.princes:thanz....um...don wry i will update soon....and plz keep reading n commenting!

@cheeky_pari:glad u find my ff different from everyone elses...n thanz for the encouragement...and plz read n comment!!

@miss5stars:don wry ill cont rite away...n m happy ur reading...der sahi pasand toh aya....hope u understand...i don rite hindi well😕

@eklavya/kt4ever:it will keep being hot..n don eva think of urself low...idk u but u sound really kool..so um...wahida?...thanz for commenting!

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Raina

@rainshine_11

Voyager

Posted: 17 years ago

#137

the morning arrives and the sun shines in to kanyas room....
and her eyes open...n she sees ranbir on top of her....and she blushes and smiles...by the tought of yesterdays nite....and slowly moves him to the side...by ranbir pulls her toward him(they have silk sheets wrapped down think dirty...lol...jk)and holds her by both hands and digs his head into her neck....still sleeping...kanya trys to break thru .....and while she is she remember all the times....
~when they first met(pg 1)
~they agreed to marry eachother(pg 2)
~how their hands touched (pg 3)
~when she was doing art and got mad and poured water all over ranbir(pg 3)
~She steps on ranbir with her heels(pg4)
~Ranbir did her hair gave her water....cuz she had mehndi on her hands(pg 4)
~how she called him "ranbir nanda..gali ka kuta" and winked(pg 4)
~dance in front of everyone at sangeet n their fght(pg 5)
~ranbir gazed at her dancing....and in a game..how ranbir held onto her when she lost balance(pg6)
~how she saved him from the dog in the park(pg6)
~how ranbir feed her on their marriage day(pg8)
~kanya falls in ranbirs lap...while goin to the farmhouse(pg8)
~ranbir sleeping on the same bed as kanya and holding onto her real tight...not noticeing(pg9)
~kanya hugs rabir cuz she sees a cockroch and ALMOST😔kisses him!!(pg11)
~kanya trips while dancing and ranbir catches her..and the have the pose(pg12)
~on their way back from the farmhouse kanya is sleeping holding onto ranbir...and he lets her and ranbir then falls asleep with his head on kanyas(pg13)
~kanya says she has a portrait of ranbir and its of a buffalo..and ranbir gets mad and chases kanya around the house..when ira blocks kanya and ranbir pulls her(kanya) towards him and ira moves...and they are chest to chest...and ira pushes kanya and they fall onto a sofa...looking at eachother...and their necklaces get tangled...(pg15-16)
~kanya accidentally hits ranbir in the spot and leavs(LOL)(Pg16)
~RANBIR KISSES KANYA(pg18)..if u havent read it plz read it...for me!!!!
~ranbir confesses his love...when hes drunk...(pg20)...and the have the nite of their lives...awwwwwwwww~!!!!!!!!!!!!
and back to her present....she then found ranbirs chest on her bare shoulders and it made her chill....and ranbir was just so close and loving her in his sleep...she just make herself move away from this moment....as ranbir made his hands feel kanyas waist and his chest rubbed her back....but then kanya opened her and looked and was shocked to see it was 8;30 am.....and she was suppose to meet riya at breakfast at 9....so she broke thru ranbir and ranbir opened his eyes...and looked at kanya still sleepy...held onto her hand..
K:ranbir look at the time...chodo mujhe..
and she broke free and went to the bathroom..
during then ranbir found his way off the bed and put his robe on and waited for kanya tto come out.....and
kanya came out all dressed....and walked to the door...when ranbir called her
R;kannya...suno...subha itni jaldi se kaha jaa rahi ho?
K:woh riya ke saat simran ke saat shopping karne jaana hai
R:simran...(he said as he found his way to her back bumping to her chest..and he put his hand around her waist and rested his head on her shoulder)
K:nikil ki hone wali biwi(kanya said turning to face ranbir)
R:ohh....suno kal raat....
KNOCK KNOCK.........
riya:kanya?chalo ab...
Kanya set free got her purse
and went to ranbir made her lips touch his....and left...
R:kanya wait
But kanyaa was gone...
ranbir tought of her moments w/ him...
and he put his right hand on his lips..where kanya has kissed him now
and smiles and makes his hands run thru his hair
R:(thinking) ranbir......tuhje kya ho gaya?
kanya?u luv her?i guess i do....omg i do....
Ranbir blushes and grabs his towel and goes for a bath

Edited by rainshine_11 - 17 years ago

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Shazeen

@miss5stars

Rocker

Posted: 17 years ago

#138

aweeeesummmmmmm updateee 😳 😳 haha u gav us a lil breif update of wht happned-- i think i missed a couple frm the begining im gunna go check them out 😆 but yahhhh i luveeeeed itt 😳 😳 😃