FF:by rainshine_11:pg 51 ENDING!!!!!!!!!!

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sam

@sam78

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Posted: 17 years ago

#141

it was cute.
kanya kissed ranbir and ran to door, it was kind different, but it was great. 😛 😉 😉
first i was scared that he would tell her that he did not remember what has happened, but after she leaves he says that he loves her.

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Fatemah

@KC294

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Posted: 17 years ago

#142

rainshine... it keeps getting better and better 👏 👏 👏 ... keep it up... pls do continue... i esp hate weekends coz they drag...

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aish

@aish-uk

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Posted: 17 years ago

#143

Rainshine my girrrrl!...u hav me addicted 2ur fanfic's...that was awesome.. 👏 ...its the weekend now and im going to bug u until u write another update, they are just really good!...uuufff luvd the bit wen ranbir touched his lips agen..hehehe like he did when kanya blew him a kiss in real lool..awww..thanks 4 doing such a great job on the ff'z!...luv it!

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payal

@payal_p

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#144

omg rainshine you are just so awsome. you should have been the story writer for this show. youre so good. thank u for entertaining us this week . please make up more.

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Pari

@cheeky_pari

Navigator

Posted: 17 years ago

#145

great part...

i loved it...

plz continue soon...!!!

TOOO GOOD!!! 👏

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Roshni

@dilkeroshni

Voyager

Posted: 17 years ago

#146

omg sooooooo gooooooooooood ❤️ they don't have a drooly smiley face or i would have put that. can't wait to read more

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Raina

@rainshine_11

Voyager

Posted: 17 years ago

#147

@Krishna100:thanz for commenting...and keep reading...glad ya like it

@miss5stars:glad ur actually gonna check out the 1s u have missed....read n tell me how it was...

@punjabi.princes:he totally realized his luv for kanya...n just keep readiing n commenting

@*rankan*:happy u started reading...n plz read n comment....n i luv their jodi jus like you(btw...figured that by ur username...lol..duh!)

@sam78:well he din really say he luved her...but u get the idea..lolz....n e wayz..ur one of them whos been commenting n reading 4eva...so thanz!!

@KC294:glad u think its getting betta n betta..btw i hate weekends as much as u do...but onlu cuz of KIT or else i love weekends cuz no skool..lol!

@aish-uk:lol..i jus read ur comment..n im glad ur addicted to my ff?..n e wayz im cont ing soon

@payal_p:hey...u no wat i jus luv the name payal..
n e ways..um..i think i should totally be a new KIT riter...wat if i was..dreams..lol...i wish...thanz for reading n commenting!

@cheeky_pari:um....ur the one thats encouraged me from ur last to last comment..n ill remember that thank u!!

@dilkiroshni:um...i made u drool??? glad to no..lol
thanz for reading n plz keep commenting!!

@baby_gurl#1:i totally luv ranbir as much as u!! n e wayz luv ya for reading and commenting!!

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Arziya

@Arziya

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+ 11

Posted: 17 years ago

#148

it was awesome. 👏 .continue soon

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Raina

@rainshine_11

Voyager

Posted: 17 years ago

#149

thanz alot guyz
umm.....i hope u like this update n plz comment..
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They come home....and ranbirs at work....
kanya goes to their room and just stares at her self in the mirror...
just thinking....how her life will change or already has changed
and then riya and simran come in...(simran=nikil ki hone wali patni)
Ri:kanya....tum toh subha se badi khush lag rahi ho...kya hua?
Kanya blushes :kuch bhi toh nahi
S:aacha...toh phir why bhlushing?....huh?
K:come on guyz...leave me alone...ok come on...hum log barah chalte hai...
they go outside.....
and everyone from wwrk comes on..including ranbir....
he goes to his rm and is looking for his most comfortable pair of jeans n kant find it....so he yells "kanya!"
Kanya s outside with riya and simran n M n BD...
"mein abhi ayi"
She leaves for the room and finds everything on the floor
K:RANBIR!!yeh tumne kya kiya?
R:meri jeans ki pair kaha hai?
K:yahi toh thi
Kanya opens his cupborad and looks at the botton shelve
K:see! here it is........
R:ooh!!!(he makes n innocent face)
Kanya isi leaving when he pulls her to him..
R:kaha jaa rahi ho?
K:Ranbir...koi dekh le ga...
Ranbir starts naughty and clossing in on her waist n pulling her real close and closes his eyes bout to kiss.....
but kanya grabs her teddybear gifted by riya and puts it in the middle of him n her....n he gets the teddybear...kanya breaks free and starts running out into the hall when she bumps into aastha...
Aastha:dekh ke chalo...ye india hai...USA nahi
Kanya collects herself and ranbir goes back to change
they get fresh n then its dinner time...
Simran leaves and everyone gathers for dinner....
kanya and riya serve(cuz theyre jus 2 gud)
and kanya is by ranbbir standing and serving everyone around while riya is handling the other side...
ranbir looks up at kanya and stares...until..malika asks riya n kanya to sit n eat now...
kanya sits beside ranbir...and starts eating w/o even looking towards ranbir...
suddenly..ranbir grabs kanyas left hand with his left cuz he eats w/ his right
and kanya looks at ranbir and now he acts as tho nothing has happened....kanya trys to pulls her hand away b4 n e one sees.........
Riya asks kanya to pass her the salad so she can serve BD...kanya cudnt lift that w/o 2 hands and she got her left arm by kicking ranbir on the leg that he squeaked
Ayaan:kya hua chachu...aap tik toh hai naa?
R:mein tik hun(he said looking at kanya...with a sign of revenge)
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Dinner is finshed and everyone heads for their rooms to sleep....
Kanya has changed into her nighty...when ranbir enters..
he ignores kanya and goes staright to the bed to sleep...
Kanya thinks hes tired so sshe goes to sleep next to him...
she trys to hug him but he moves
K:tum naraz ho?...vaise galti tumari thi...
R:meri galti???...maine kya kiya?
K:wahan mera haat pakad ne sarurat kya thi?
R:kyun meine kya galat kiya?
K:tumhe.uff...forget it.......ok....(clears her thoart)im sry
Ranbir stays upset...
K:fine
Now kanya gets up and grabs a book and goes sits on thhe rocking chair....she gets really deep into the book....but then remembers shes reading....n remembers ranbir...so she peaks out and looks over and finds ranbir not there...
she gets up looks around..when suddenly someone from behind grabs her round the waist and swings her around...then sets her back on the ground...
K:ranbir?!...mujhe toh laga tum mujhse baat nahi kar rahe the?...
R:ha...lekin mein meri is chachundar si pyaari biwi ke bin so nahi sakta..
K:do dino mein itna pyaar....aur tumne mujhe chachundar kaha....how dare u?(points her finger at ranbir)
Ranbir goes for bitin it when she freaks out squeaks and moves her hands back
R:hahahahha
K:listen...now im mad at u....n it is me who shuold b mad not ya...aur ab chodo mujhe..(says while moving herself away)
and as much as she trys to move away he makes her come closer....
but then kanya bites his hand he was gng touch kanya on the face with and sets frree....
R:OUCH!!!!!!!kesi jangli ho tum....owwwwwww
K:jangli aur mein....pehli apni shakal toh ayine(mirror) mein dekho....phir pata chale ga jangli kon hai....
R:two times...1st u kicked me ....nnow u bite...wonder wats gng happen next
((((((((((((((((((next few mins go fighting n ranbir pampers his hand))))))))))
R:fine...suno...im sry...happy?
K:nahi...
R:kya?....hello... i said sry..
K:im still mad
Ranbir holds his ears and does situps
R:there u happy?
K:fine....ur forgiven...
Ranbir gets happy hearing this and jumps onto the bed on kanya
and they roll off the bed onto the floor with eachother in their arms...
K:ranbir...(on him) r u ok?
Ranbirs eyes were closed...and kanya thought he got hurt on the head
K:ranbir(moving his head)tum tik hona?...ranbir....
She was scared and she hugged ranbir
R:HHHHHHHHHAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Kanya slapped him
K:ranbir...tumne mujhe toh dara hi diya
R:kyun(he said moving closer)
and he held onto kanya and this time she let him...
and they both bumped their foreheads together and laughed...
R:pata nahi....mein itna khush kyun hun
K:mere saat raho ge toh ese hi khush raho ge
R:aacha? aur tumare bina
K:woh pehle ki tara...kese??um....ha..kuchh is tara(she said pointing at his photo of him w/ no expresions)
R:wateva...aacha yeh batao..tum jab ek bachi thi tab bhi ehsi chipkali ki tara thi ya...?
K:nahi..mein (headed towards the bed) toh ab hun vesi hi thi..pyaari si nanni si pari jesi
R:abhi nahi ho toh tab kesi ho gi**COFF COFF**...(sits down beside her..rsting their baacks on the backboard)
K:excuse me...mein bohot hi pyaari hun tumari jesi nahi...(whispers)saandh....
....(normal voice)..aacha yeh batao tum jab chhote the tab tum kese the....
R:well(grabs a holds of kanyas hand) mein apne bare me kese tariff karu?
K:oh really?...don wry ...im sure..u wont have to b shy..cuz u prob were a very badmash kid
R:aacha jesi tum toh badi pari thi?
K:han..vesi hi thi mein....(grips tighter onto his hand...trying to prove herself as right that she was a gud child)
R:toh badal kyun gayi?
K:mein nahi badli tum kyun badle?...
R:mein nahi badla...
K:toh yeh jo mere samne hai woh-
Ranbir pulls himself towards her and b4 she cud say n e thing else he kissed her....letting her no how much he luvs her...how much he will alwayz remember of these fights...how important she is in his life...... 😳

Edited by rainshine_11 - 17 years ago