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Posted: 17 years ago
aw... poor rannu 🤣 i hope he really does do something drastic to get back at her (thats a hint for u rain shine).... lol thats a brill update.. 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
lol dat was hilarious!... kanyaaaa!..heheheh...that was great...very funny...plz do carry on and rainshine...longer update plzzzzz....lol 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
Dayz go by and Kanya and Ranbir fight ALOT n give eachother weird glances... espicially Ranbir....after the painting incident he isnt really nice to kanya anymore..and Kanya is alwayz getting a bad day by ranbir....
Then one day the door bell rings...
DONG!!
"riya...kanya...where are u guyz?"
Riya comes runnning to the door hearing her name
R:OMG! tum yahaan
Riya gives a hug....
R:nikil tum...wat a pleasant suprise?....Kanya tumhe dekh ke paagal ho jaaye gi
N:i no...cant wait...were is she?
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Kanya is in her room...stichng a new design on her dress...
then she is blindfolded by hands
R:who is it kanya?
K:come on riya ...i no ur voice...
R:i no im speaking but there is someone else with me...
Kanya felt the hands
K:(still eyes closed)omg....it is nikil?
N:how did ya no?
K:AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH............its nikil
Kanya gives him a tight hug
,,,,,,,,,,,Ranbir sees this and without listening any farther...he leaves....
he walks in the park..that they decided they were getting married...the park where kanya saved ranbir from the dog.....and for the first time..he felt like he was jealous...but for what..??..kanya ??? nikil??? or mad at himself of thinking like this.....he sits on a bench...and the sun is setting and he takes his diary out from his coat.....and writes down his tthoughts of today...and the days at the farmhouse...and the painting incident and just keeps writing....and looks up at the sunset so beautiful...with orange and blue...and when he looks closely he finds kanyas face....and snaps out of it when his phone rings....
K:Ranbir kaha ho?
R:tumse matlab
K:chill...k....woh mummy pooch rahi thi...jaldi aa jao(from distance..nikil calls kanya)
Ranbir then hngs up
K:hello?! ranbir?...
and she hangs up as well...
N:kya hua?...ranbir ka phone tha ....i so wanna meet him...
K:woh ghar aate hi honge
N:woh?....wow kanya...yeh tumhe kya hua hai....vaise riya ne mujhe sab kuch bata diya hai...jis halato mein tumari shaadi hui...us se toh tumare aur WOH..ke bich pyaar nahi hai...rite?
Kanya looks down and doesnt answer
N:oh....so ur not sure?
K:chodo nikil...ab yeh batao woh kesi hai?
N:kon woh?
K:u no who im tlking bout!!!vaise...moma ne mujhe bhi bohot kuch bata diya hai
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Ranbir at the park
Thinking:
who is nikil?kanyas boyfriend?who she wanted to get married to?her best friend? the one whose always there for her?...who? who is he?
He gets disturbed by the driver..
Dr:sir...maam ne aapko ghar aane ke liye bula ya hai
R:kanya?
Dr:ji nahi..malika ji
R:tik hai..aata hun
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Ranbir arrivees home and kanya walks up to him...
K:ranbir yeh hai...
R:nikil?
K:ha...tumhe kese pata?
Ranbir ignores kanya
R:hey...im ranbir nanda(let his hand out)
N:nice to meet u (shakes his hand)....jij
R:jij????
N:yea...um...i no bout ur relation ship but ur still my jij
Ranbir looks confused...he thoght nikil was related to kanya in a diffrent way
Nikil sanps him out of his thoughts
N:by the way...im nikil...kanyas cousin..and im staying here for a few dayz hope u don mind.....
R:thinking:cousin.....omg cousin?!...im so retarded...just stupid...hmph
R:yea of course
N:vaise bhi meri yahaan kaafi girlfrinds ho chuki hai!!
R:girlfriends?
Nikil points to BD..malika..n aastha...and for reva she doesnt wnt anything related to kanya...
THATS ALL FOR NOW...
SRY GUYZ IT WAS KINDA LAME....BUT NIKIL IS GONNA HELP 😉
PLZ COMMENT
Edited by rainshine_11 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
yaaaay if nikhil gnna help them get 2gethaa then woohooo big up 2 nikhil...goood update, loved ranbir's jelousy... 😆 ...but yaar it was short lol...
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: aish-uk

yaaaay if nikhil gnna help them get 2gethaa then woohooo big up 2 nikhil...goood update, loved ranbir's jelousy... 😆 ...but yaar it was short lol...

k ill make it longer next time😉

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Posted: 17 years ago
aww soo cute..they really needed someone to make each other realize there love for each other...hopefully Nikhil and Ira and other kids will be able to do this...update soon!!! 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
it was great.
ranbir Jealous that was great.
Nikhil is going help them, i really want see how nikhil is going to help ranbir and kanya's Relationship.

it very very great.
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Posted: 17 years ago
aww pooor ranbir.
nikil.. gave him a heart attack hehe
continue soon please
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Posted: 17 years ago
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all u guyz thanz for commenting and reading it...
and if i din write ur name n u read it plz comment so i no if u like it or not 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago

that night ranbir and all are happy....for nikil has spread happiness...
and so that night they play true or dare...only the kids(including ranbir kanya n ayaan n riya)
The botle is spinned and is landed on kanya...
Eva:ture yah dare?
K:true
Ira:mein puchu gi.....kanya....kya tum ranbir bhaiyaa se pehle kisi aur se pyaar karti thi?
Kanya looks at ranbir who is looking back at her and then says NO
Ranbir was staring at the ground and then looks up...smiling...
The bottle is spinned and lands on riya....
Eva:dare?
Riya:yea
Eva:propse to ayaan in front of everyone...
Riya:wat?!
K:come on u cud do it
riya walks up to ayan...looking around and bends down on her knees and sarcastically and with confidence...
R:ayaan will u marry me?
Ayaan gave his hand out and riya kissed it and with that everyone was laughing real hard
The bottle is spinned again....RANBIR
Era:chachu....k truth or dare.?
R:obviously dare...im not a darpok..like someone(looking at kanya cuz she picked truth)
N:ohhhhh i so got a gud one.....k...
Nikil comes to ranbir and whispers something in his ears
R:wat?
N:she hates it soo so so much...
R:mare gi
N:come on be a man(nikil pats him on the shoulder real hard)
N:k.....ranbir get ready
Ranbir looked at kanya and got up
Eva: wats chachu gonna do????
Era:idk

Audience-----any guess?????

Nikil then yell real fast
N:kanya ranbirs cumin after to tickle u RUN!!!GO RANBIR!!
K:wat?!
Kanya got up real quick...and was panicing
and ranbir went running after her...
K:ranbir stop plz....stop.....
Kanya and Ranbir circled around everyone...
K:nikil.....im gonna kill u....plz ranbir stop cumin after me!!!!!
Ranbir ignored her and followed her...
Kanya ran up the stairs and in and out from one room to the other...throwing pillows after ranbir
K:ranbir plzzzzzz stop it....i hate tickling...im serious...
Ranbir didnt stop
Kanya started screaming and her scream was the most annoying thing on earth..
everyone watched as they ran from eachother thro the hall they cud see from below....and then kanya ran into a room....and tried locking it...but ranbir came in before she could...and ranbir followed her around...as she thru pillows...she screamed as loud as she cud.......and ranbir cudnt take it anymore
R:kanya plz stop screaming
Kanya din listen..and kept throwing pillows....soon ranbir caught her hand and pulled her towards him.....kanya still screaming....and he din no wat to do to stop him so...
...............
...............
so he held onto her shoulders lowered his head and made his lips touch hers and mate....
kanyas eyes wide open was sssssssssoooooooo shocked and din no wat to do...
and ranbir kissed her and let go....
(LOL)
Kanya was happy and sad and with these emotions a tear fell from her eye
and ranbir thought she was sad and din no wat to say.....kanya turned around making her back face ranbir.....she put her fingers on her lips.....and cudnt believe...ranbirs lips had been there.....that too by ranbirs will.....she smiled blushed and ran to her room
.....
she came in and jumped onto the bed...and pulled the pillow towards her....and started blushing and smiling...
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On the other side ranbir is going after kanya when nikil comes in ..
N:wat happened?did u finish ur dare?
R:yea....lekin woh shayad naraz ho gayi hai
N:isnt her scream the most annoying thing in the world?
R;yea....i just hate it!(looks where kanya went) mein abhi aata hun
N:(thinking)...and for her annoying yell u had to stop her by kissing her...thats what i wanted..and soon u and kanya will be one...
Ranbir leaves and finds kanya in their room
R:kanya ...listen im really sry ....pata nahi yeh sab kese hua...aur mein..
JUST THEN THERE IS A KNOCK ON THE DOOR..
Ranbir opens it and finds nikil....
Nikil calls him outside and tells him ....
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Kanya is thinking of ranbir when she falls asleep and wakes up and finds ranbir not in the room..its bout 5 am...she wonders where he is...
suddenly there s a knock on the door..
kanya opens it and finds no one
then she hears noises and follows them...
suddenly she sees a shadow....
its a person with a black hood and coat following her...
its darkk.....
she stumbles over tables and drops vases....
she screams for help...
no one seems to be around....
then far way she sees ranbir staning there...
she runs to him and screams...
K:ranbir...koi mera picha kar raha hai!!!!!!!mujhe bohot daar lag raha hai...
shes sweating and is getting teary...
then the lights come on ...
kanya is buried in ranbirs arms ...
HAPPY B-DAY 2 U!!!!!!!
everyone claps and wishes her a very speacial b-day...
shes so surprised and so shocked....
shes embarresed..still holdin onto ranbir...covers her mouth w/ her left arm
K:OMG!...aap log...aap....yeh sab...
R:happy bday kanya
Ranbir wishes her and kisses her on the forehead....they both stare at eachother...
then the guy with the black hood and coat snaps..
N:happy bday
K:nikil?...mujhe pata hona chahiye
Kanya hugs nikil....
and everyone gives her gifts and then go back to sleep
M:kanya beta ...so jao...shaam ko maine ek party rekhi hai....ranbir beta ise le jao
Ranbir and kanya go to their room....
R:listen kanya...im sry bout what happened but....friendz?
K:friendz...
they both shook hands on that and went to sleep peacefully
PLZ COMMENT 😭 plz

n tom on feb 14 will be the best updat eva😉

Edited by rainshine_11 - 17 years ago

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