Kasturi-fairytale:Fun-FF Pg 1,2,3,5 - Page 5

JW di: I'm could barely control my laughter reading parts 4&5 because your humour is so splendid. The useless Colonel Puckoo and Queen Devi saying 'Jo dar gaya samjho uska sar gaya' and Puru being confused about the board games are all just too good. This is really turning out to be a most fantabulous fairytale, complete with the morals- 'strangers are dangers'. And you made Poo's mom Shankuntala the rainbow coloured magician of sorts. This has got to be the best parody on a Kekta drama ever.

Then I read the next parts and was more charmed by the likening of Roka to Laila-Majnu, with the 14 jolts striking Robbie before any pain reached Kasturi, upon ingesting the last laddoo. It is so befitting that Robbie's connection with her soul is shown to be stronger than hers as she did not sense him in danger. Again the most ill-fated are Queen and King whose own tricks backfired as they underestimated Robbie's love, which is total justice to the love of Roka or rather just Robbie.

The seven dwarfs are seven fair maidens, except you kept Doc (Bhavya) and Sleepy (Mendy). None of them seem to be Grumpy huh. His bracelet is going to be their saviour as I'm sure it will bring them together when Javla's realise her actual link with the Monarchs.

All in all it is perfection in terms of writing, humour and creative plot twists. Once you are finished I actually want to bind this fairytale into a book to keep. I'm hoping it will be the first of many more amazing fiction to come from my now fav. author JW.👏

@ JW just now managed to read all the remaining parts since have been a bit busy... u r amazing 👏 .. the way u have mixed the fairy tales with roka is really extremely brilliant... robbz sahi kehti hay .. u shld charge us for this ... loved reading every bit 😳 ....
thank you for keeping us entertained ... loved it absolutely

Fari

sorry JW for the extremely late reply, simply put i luved your fanfic, the kids enjoyed readin the indian version of Sleeping beauty/ snow white, and now my kids are arguing which story is it really... its cute to see how kids look at stories totally different then us.. they dont have the analizing wit that elders to, its pure enjoyement when they keep asking did she post another part mom...? so i'll pm you the details of who luved what scenes later... for me i luved how devi and puru are still goin at it even in teh fanfic i died laughing at the bantre of these two.. fantastic......

and all the characters are original yet still have a hint of the original characters in the serial, astonishing piece of work JW, 👏👏👏 oh the kids never went down till i finished reading the very last line.... their hooked JW mausi......😳

luv robziiii

@Krishi
😆 😆 Am happy you liked it 😳 ....Abeer is modelled after Ariv 😉 ...the lovely Sindhoo has matched the names in her post 😊
Since Ariv had call centre aspirations and was always with a laptop,....Abeer is the head of communications and speaks almost everything in a communications-cum-technology monotone 😆 😆 😆
And Krishi ..yaar I am now getting withdrawal pangs on Robbie's lovy dovey scenes 😆 😆 ....Din, mahine ek pura saal lag raha hai usey khush and romantic dekhe hue.... 😭 😭


@wajiha.a
Thanks so much dear.....am happy you liked it 😳


@destinyz
Hey thanks so much 😳 ...am glad you enjoyed reading it...I too had fun visualising Puru and Devi in their paisa conversation 😆 😆


@Sindheshwari 🤗
As always your comments are so so so awaited ... 😳 🤗 🤗
Haan, I remember my "Khaike Paan" wala post which was "Peeke Jack Daniels ka pyaala" 😆 😆
You guessed it right "Kasto Mazza" is from the film Parineeta 😳 ....If I remember correctly, in the opening stanza, Saif Ali explains the meaning of those lines....let me browse through Youtube and find it for you 😳
And full marks for getting the names right 😃
Bigi is Biji (Kasturi's Dadi 😊 )...and Bendy is so funny 😆 😆 ...Raina is Naina (one Sabharwal kiddo that they spoke of but is yet to surface 😆 😆 )
Puru and Lali...nahi yaar usey enjoy karne dete hain 😆 😆
As regards your method of writing when the thoughts are fresh in your mind, sabka apna apna comfort zone hota hai...there are times when my thoughts flow so well 😳 ...and then there are days when I feel so bored that the humour just doesn't come through ...so do what is most comfortable 😊
Lastly...cant thank you enough for always being so so supportive....lots of love dearest 'cellelu' 🤗


@Fatima
Am so glad that you responded🤗 🤗 ....and have to honestly admit that your appreciation has been heady. Its very flattering to know that you thought of printing this and binding it into a book 😳 😳 ...Quite honestly, I think you are being too generous 😳.
Also much appreciated the subtle hint you picked up regarding Robbie and Kasturi . ...you read my mind there 😳 ...I have always felt, as you know through our interactions, that Robbie and Raunak loved Kasturi way too much than she in turn....Robbie's yearning and concern for her comes through much more strongly and it brings a lot of gravitas and emotional quotient to this pairing 😳 ...Kasturi too cares for him, no doubts there 😳 ...but maybe the creatives have not really articulated it well.
Lastly, fully understand and respect your wishes on our interaction regarding another fiction 😳 ...
If possible, please do read the remainder parts of this story, and would love to read your comments 😳


@Fariiiiiiiiiii🤗
Kahaan thi yaar 😭 😭 ...maine tujhe miss kiya...but am so happy you read it 😃 ...now promise to write in again ...even if it is to bash me up 😆 😆 😆


@Robzi
😆 😆 I thought your absence meant you did not like it.. 😆or maybe you were plain bored 😆 😆
Did you really read all of it to the little ones 😆 😆 ....oh dear...why did you torture mere family ke bachhe 😆 ...but thanks, its very flattering 😳 🤗 ...Do PM who liked what....🤗

wow!!!! that was fantabulous.... I agree with Sindhu.. where do you find the creativity & energy after work. You really are my idol...

Cant wait for the next part... But kya yaar Robbie king Arthur maafik so raha hai to hamari sleeping beauty ko kaun kiss karke uthayega?

JWw meri jaaannnn kya likha hai ...yaar hats off u 👏

i read all nine part bahut hi aache hai ..am spechless ...tum bahut hi aachi writter ho dear .....and tumne sab characters ka intro bahut hi aacha diya hai 👏😆

aur kasturi ka intoduction bhi bahut aacha diya hai and also my Robbie Prince 😳😳

You know dear robbie ki story inn parts meh kamm hai lekin shuru se last tak Read karte huye maine robbie ko hi har taraf paya aur mahsoos kiya ..u know why ??cos tumne shuru meh jiss tarah robbie ka intoduction karwaya hai ...just mindblowing ..koi usse bholna chahe toh bhi nahi bhool sakta 😳

I really like ur writing style 😳..for u needless to say cos u are just perfect 👏👏

aur ab jaldi se next part post karna ..am waiting 😳aur robbie ko jaldi se theek kar dena 😭

A bug hug from me 🤗

Sorry for late dear ..i hope u understand 😳

Manpreet.

Phewwww...........Thread mil gaya finally

JWWWWWWWWW.... 🤗.... the fairytale FF is back... u know when I saw the thread on the first page I rubbed my eyes to see whether it was a dream or reality..... way to go.... chal update kar juldi say .. am waiting with baited breath ... in the meantime 🤗 Fari

OMGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG what is this? 😲..what i am seeing right now is just a shock..😲..r u going to update it? OMg i am so excited..😃..chal jaldi se chek de..😆