Kasturi-fairytale:Fun-FF Pg 1,2,3,5

Hi Friends,

I don't really know what possessed me to write this. 😆But since a long time a lot of my friends have been yearning for just a simple nice love story. Aur badle mein, jaane kause janam ka badla this serial is taking of us. 😆So till the story sudharoes and RoKa meet, lets hark back to aur bachpan ka time .....to fairy tale land. This then, is a tale from Kasturiland.😳

Moderators: Since the text of this fiction is long have posted it in parts. Hope its ok. Thanks a ton.😊

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Once upon a time, in the prosperous kingdom of Sabharwali, a little prince was born to a gentle Queen Devi and a handsome and wise King Puru, in their palace called Sabhri Haveli. The gentle Queen Devi was wise and had no vice😳, the handsome king however drank to his hearts delight😆. But they loved each other spent their life in mirth; they were both delighted at their baby's birth. 🥳

The first words the baby prince uttered was "Ga Ma Ni Sa" ☺️and reminded the King and Queen of the early morning chirping of the bird, Robin (Robins are known for their cheery voice and are often one of the first birds to sing in the morning). Seeing the angelic face of the prince and hearing his chirpy voice, the King and Queen called him Robbie. 😳Prince Robbie grew up happy and contented. All the kingdom was quite sure he would grow up to be a great singer and a handsome young man. 😳

But alas, a wicked witch who lived in the woods near the kingdom was chanting away some verses over a boiling pot of muddy water. 😈The Witch wanted to control Kingdom Sabharwali. The Witch boiled the muddy water and chanted "BT, TRP, hosh hue goom, Mitti oh mitti, dikhado apni dhoom". And voila the muddy water said "What do you wish, oh Witch". "Kingdom Sabharwali oh muddy water", the Witch said. The Muddy Water replied "Kindgom Sabharwali can be prosperous and yours only if Prince Robbie is kept under control and made to sing. But for that you need to assume control over him and his parents". The witch asked "How do I do that Oh muddy water". "Here take this Mirror" , the muddy water said. A mirror emerged 😲and it spoke. "This is a magical mirror. Any good soul who looks into and speaks to it will hear abuses and will be possessed. Only a true Prince can bring them back to life by destroying the mirror. But, but, but. If the Mirror falls in the hands of a wicked person, the Mirror will change and speak only good things". The Witch was happy and could see her plan of capturing Kingdom Sabharwali meet with success. 😈Armed with the magical mirror the Witch assumed the form of a beautiful woman 😉and went to Sabhri Haveli. "My greetings your Majesty, I come from a far off land and wish to present a dance". The King and Queen graciously encouraged the Witch to dance. 👏The witch began singing "Maiyya Maiyya gulabi taare chunle tare chun, Maiyya Maiyya mere dil ke aaine mein ho jaa goom".

However, the Kingdom's general, Sir Ishitesh, got wind of some hanky panky and kept a close eye on the dancing Witch. 🤓 By the end of the dance, King Puru was constantly drinking was madly in love with the Witch🤪. The Witch took leave, winked at King Puru,😉 enamoured him and started walking to a soonsaan vacant outhouse😉. A smitten King Puru followed her😛. The General Ishitesh immediately told the Queen and they too followed King Puru and the Witch. Once in the soonsaan vacant outhouse the Witch assumed her true form "Ha Ha Ha Puru, har chehre ke peeche ek naqaab hota hai. Wines kya pi raha hai murkh, isse dimaag dheela hota hai. Ab tu bachke kahaan jaayega, mujhe tera rajya dede he he ha ha"😈. Just then General Ishitesh struck the Witch and in the ensuing fight both the Witch and General Ishitesh were killed🤢. The King and Queen wept at General Ishitesh?s demise 😭😭and then began to go back to Sabhri Haveli. But an object caught their attention. It was the Mirror. ........

The innocent King and Queen looked into it and true to its word, the Mirror spoke "Aina wahi rehta hai, chehre badal jaate hain. Aaj se bewakoofon, tumhaare iraade bure ho jaate hain. Karna padega Robbie to sing subah shaam, tabhi milegi tumhe daulat aish aur araam "...and as expected they were possessed🤢. And so the nice Queen Devi and nice King Puru turned wicked. They went back to Sabhri Haveli and since then, they were cruel to Prince Robbie. The poor prince wept in sadness,

"Main kabhi batlaata nahin, par tumhise dar lagta hain mom.

Kya hogaya hai tumko, meri mom, Kya Hogaya hai tumko, meri mom"

....Hmmn, the cruel King and Queen made Prince Robbie sing in the morning, afternoon, evening and night. 😭And at the end of each singing session, a pot of gold, silver, copper and diamond was delivered found at the doorstep of Sabhri Haveli. 😲😛

And so Prince Robbie became a puppet in the hands of the possessed Wicked Queen and Wicked King😭. Each day the King and Queen would stand in front of the mirror and ask ..Mirror Mirror on the wall, who has Robbie at their beck and call... and the Mirror would answer ..You my Devi, You my Puru... And then they would ask ..Mirror Mirror on the wall, who has Robbie's wealth and all..and the Mirror would answer ...You my Devi, You my Puru.

Cont'd.......Part 2😆

PART 2


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But Kehte haina ……truth prevails over false, and har paap ka end hota hai😊…..In the neighbouring village of Chand Chowki, a fair little girl was playing in the backyard of her cottage. 😳She was creating small colourful paper flowers and said "Ye hai kaagaz ke phool, lekin mehak hain inki cool, samjhon na inhe pairon ki dhool". 😆Thus, everytime the girl spoke, a few lines of wisdom could be heard in the background. Everywhere the girl went, alongwent the mahek of sachhai, dharm, insaaf and vishwaas. 👏She was called Kasturi, the hidden fragrance.

Kasturi grew up to be a very beautiful maiden. 😳She too was loved by one and all. But alas, Kasturi was an orphan and was living with her aunt. 😭The Aunt was an evil money hungry woman called Alkabai. 😭Poor Kasturi was made to work a lot by Alkabai, 😭but even then the gracious Kasturi did not complain.

One bright and sunny day, as usual King Puru and Queen Devi stood in front of the mirror and asked "Mirror Mirror on the wall, who has Robbie at their beck and call" and the Mirror answered "You my Kasturi, You my Kasturi". Shocked and stunned, they asked again "Mirror Mirror on the wall, who has Robbie's wealth and all" and the Mirror answered "You my Kasturi, You my Kasturi". King Puru and Queen Devi were furious and angry, 😡wild with jealousy😡, and began plotting to get rid of their rival😡. Calling one of their trusted servants Colonel Puchkoo 😉, they asked him to search for Kasturi, and put her to death. They asked him to kill her and bring them her heart as proof of her death😈.

Colonel Puchkoo, searched high and low, until one day he came about a path and heard a woman scream at a pretty young lady. The lady said, "Manhoos ladki, jabse tu aayi hai, ghar mein aayi hai kadki. Aa tujhe ek thappad ka dose deti hoon, aaj se naukrani nikal kar tujhe hi kapde dhone deti hoon". 😡The woman was none else but Alkabai and the pretty young lady was Kasturi. Colonel Puchkoo was delighted 😛at this discovery and bribed Alkabai with a rich reward to take Kasturi with him,😉 😉far away from Chand Chowki. He figured that unseen to the village folk, he could to put her to death. 😈The greedy Alkabai, took a lot of money and gave a weeping Kasturi away to Colonel Puchkoo. 😭He took her to forests of Kingdom Sabhriwali. When they came to the fatal spot, where she was to be killed, Colonel Puchkoo drew his sword. Realising with horror her predicament, Kasturi pleaded to Colonel Puchkoo "Please please Bhagwaan ke liye mujhe chod do, Tumhare ghar mein maa behan nahi hai kya, kahaan gaye tumhare sanskaar, tumhari insaaniyat, kya muh dikhoge tum uparwale ko, maanavtaa ka dharm hai jeevan dena lena nahi. In paapon ko tum kahaan dhoge". 😭😭And she pleaded and pleaded. Finally, Colonel Puchkoo, could not take it any longer and so could not bring himself to kill her. 😕Leaving Kasturi sitting beside a lake in the forest, he mumbled an excuse and ran off. And now Kasturi was all alone in the forest.........

Night came, but Colonel Puchkoo did not return. Kasturi, alone in the dark forest, began to cry bitterly. 😭😭😭She thought she could feel terrible eyes of animals looking at her and she heard strange sounds and rustlings that made her heart thump. And door kahi se a song could be heard

"Yeh raat , yeh raat, jali ki chipkali raat, yeh raat
Kadi aur kombdi ki Raat, yeh raat
Na ugli jaye na nigli jaye, Yeh kali zehrili Raat
Pal Pal Balkhaati Pal Pal Uljaati, Palke Jhapakti Yeh Raat
Sannate ki Sej pe soyi, saap Si Sarakti Raat, Yeh Raat Yeh Raat "
At last, scared and overcome by tiredness, she fell asleep curled under a tree. She did not have an easy sleep, wakening from time to time with a start and staring into the darkness round her. Several times, she thought she felt something🤢, or somebody touch her 🤢as she slept.

At last, dawn woke the forest to the song of the birds, 😃and Kasturi woke up too. She was glad to see the sunshine and the glimmering lake. 😃As she tried to find out where she was, she came upon a path. She walked along it, hopefully. "Ek raasta hai zindagi, joh tham gaye to ruk gaye", she thought. On she walked till she came to a clearing. There stood a beautiful cottage, with a lovely ornamental doors and windows. 😳It also had a quaint little chimney pot. 😳Everything about the cottage was so much beautiful and lovely. 😍Kasturi pushed the door open. "Kaun, Kaun hain yahaan?", she asked. A table was laid with the most delicious food. A hungry Kasturi was drawn towards it and began to eat the food. Suddenly, the cheerfulness of the day was changed to gloom, black clouds appeared on the sky and it began raining.

The cottage was in fact controlled by the horrible dacoit Gauravhattie. 😈😈😈He had gone out to loot people who crossed the forest. He had now returned home. .....Today he was not very successful and he had managed to only scare and loot a poor shepard. The only prized possession the shepard had was a monkey cap. 😆But Dacait Gauravhattie true to the "hattie" part in his name, was a cap lover. He of course took the monkey cap by force. 😡

Gauravhattie, roared when he saw Kasturi, "Who are you, you cheeky creature. Mere hi ghar mein, mujhse puche bagair, muft ka khaana kha rahi hai. Ab teri khair nahi"😡. Petrified and scared, Kasturi ran with all her might. She ran for her life.😭

Cont'd ........Part 3😆

sorry all.. miss post in between beautiful write ups..i apolise for inconvinience 😃 😃

PART 3............


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Bhaagte, bhaagte Kasturi reached a bridge over a stream. Dacait Gauravhattie was in close pursuit. As Kasturi began to cross the bridge, he aimed his bow and arrow to kill her. He roared "Ab tujhe kaun bachayega". Kasturi cried and pleaded "Bhagwaan ke liye mujhe chod do, Tumhare ghar mein maa behan nahi hai kya, kahaan gaye tumhare sanskaar, maanavtaa ka dharm hai jeevan dena lena nahi. In paapon ko tum kahaan dhoge"😭😭. But Gauravhattie did not relent. He said "Shut up, tumhaarein is bakbak ka mujhpe koi asar nahi padega". And he aimed the arrow. Just then another arrow came whooping by😲 and killed Gauravhattie on the spot. 👏👏Incredulously, Kasturi turned around……..aur kya dekhti hai…..Safed horse pe sawaar ek Raajkumar. 😲Haila, kahin ye sapnaa to nahi. 😳

The Raajkumar rode towards her concerned about her. A tearful Kasturi thanked him and the raajkumaar asked "Who are you lady, and what brings you here". "I am Kasturi" and Kasturi told him all that happened. The Raajkumar heard her patiently and slowly felt drawn towards her😳. He was enchanted with her simplicity and beauty. He felt like singing

"Mere mann ye bata de tu, kis or chala hai tu, kya paya nahi tune, kya dhundh raha hai tu
jo hai ankahee jo hai ansuni, woh baat kya hai bata
mitwa kahe dhadkan hain tujhse kya🤗
mitwa yeh khudse toh na tu chhupa

jeevan dagar mein prem nagar mein, aaya nazar mein jab se koi hain
tu sochta hain tu puchata hain, jiski kami thi kya yeh wohi hain
haan yeh wohi hain, haan yeh wohi hain, tu ek pyasa aur yeh nadi hain
kaahe nahi isko tu khulke bataye
jo hai ankahee jo hai ansuni, woh baat kya hai bata
mitwa kahe dhadkan hai tujhse kya😳
mitwa yeh khudse toh na tu chhupa"

At the end of her tale Kasturi asked the Raajkumar. "Aap kaun hai, jisne mujhe maut se bachaya". He said, "I am Robbie, Prince of Sabhawali and this is my fathers kingdom. I was out on a horse riding expedition and her your screams. Where will you go now? Do you have any relatives here". Kasturi said "No I don't , Hai re meri kismet. Isse accha to main mar jaati"😭. Prince Robbie consoled her and said "One should never say that. Come let me leave you at our farm-house and you can live there till you figure out what to do". And he extended his hand. 😳And voila while taking his help and giving him her hand, Kasturi instead unexplicably fell into his arms😆😆. Prince Robbie of course caught her and they were both mesmerised looking at each other 😍. Kasturi asked him "Aap kitni baar meri jaan bachaoge?"😳. Prince Robbie replied "Tumhari jaan ya meri jaan😉"

"Tu tu hai wohi dil ne jise apna kahan, tu hai jahaan main hoon vahaan
Ab to yeh jeena, tere bin hain sazaa
Ho mil jaaye is tarah ... do leharen jis tarah ...
Phir ho na judaa, haan yeh vaada raha"😍

By the end of their journey, from the forest to the palace farm house Prince Robbie and Kasturi were hopelessly in love❤️. They spent some lovely time at the farm house 😳and then Prince Robbie set out to return to the palace. Kasturi bid him a tearful bye bye and Prince Robbie warned Kasturi to not open the door to strangers. 😳

Meanwhile, Colonel Puchkoo, was on his way to Sabhri Haveli. He remembered that Queen Devi and King Puru had asked him to kill Kasturi and get her heart. So petrified that they will be very angry to know that he didn't kill Kasturi, Colonel Puchkoo killed a deer and returned to Sabhri Haveli, with the heart of the deer. "Greetings your majesty", he said. King Puru said "Aao Puchkoo, kya khabar laye ho". Colonel Puchkoo replied, "Sarkaar, Kasturi ka dil layaa hoon". "Sachhhhhhhhh", Queen Devi said and laughed victoriously. Highly pleased, King Puru and Queen Devi gave Colonel Puchkoo a huge reward and took the heart with them and fed it to the Sabhri Haveli ke kutte.

Cont'd ........Part 4

Hellosky madam jwmrak jiiiiiiii🤗....kaise ho jiiiiiiiiiiiii..see i am here again ..i delayed my afternoon meal to read ur unresustable post..😉😆😆..ok's coming to the point..first i wanted to edit my post above ..but u know in the middle of ur beautiful writeups..my post will feel a little embarse..that's the fact..😊

this is so so so poetical composition of great FF by JWMRK man..kuddos to u.👏.👏i never even entered in FF threads..but first time i felt why not learn some creative people great minds a little..lol this is just just awesome feeling just now i am facing...very lovely one..👏..i ask all people took some time from ur hectic shedules and spend some time to read and get relax all..

this is really superb ..the wordings the sentence formation..mostly the fiction which u choosed is simply fentabulous👏..

ok my favs in the whole parts are..

"Main kabhi batlaata nahin, par tumhise dar lagta hain mom.

Kya hogaya hai tumko, meri mom, Kya Hogaya hai tumko, meri mom'

this is first one jw--..actually i was about to send this lyrics to u which i copied from a website..but u know no need to send u lol..u r the one who picks the things in minutes..hats off👏

and next

The Witch boiled the muddy water and chanted "BT, TRP, hosh hue goom, Mitti oh mitti, dikhado apni dhoom

this was very very funny😆😆😆

Dacait Gauravhattie

Colonel Puchkoo..

the names are superb and hillarious man😆😆😆

and the way puru asks puchkoo at last about news.." haa puchkoo kya kabar laaye hooo" hahahah🤣..

ok's raa will catch u with more beautiful write ups of u..love u..take a hug 🤗and flowers..

..will waite for ur nonsence fic too😉

love

sindhu❤️

[quote]Hi Friends,

I don't really know what possessed me to write this. 😆

Cos' u r the one of the fabulous writer we have here at IF👏

But since a long time a lot of my friends have been yearning for just a simple nice love story.

True😳

Aur badle mein, jaane kause janam ka badla this serial is taking of us. 😆

Aur kisi janam ka nahin, isi janam ka for watching K-serials in the hope that we might get something meaningful, sensible and entertaining

So till the story sudharoes and RoKa meet, lets hark back to aur bachpan ka time ………..to fairy tale land. This then, is a tale from Kasturiland.😳

This ought to be fun😃
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The gentle Queen Devi was wise and had no vice😳,

🤣 (Sorry robina, just imagined devika as wise and no vice😉)

She was creating small colourful paper flowers and said "Ye hai kaagaz ke phool, lekin mehak hain inki cool, samjhon na inhe pairon ki dhool". (Agar samjo to tum ho Fool😆- Sorry pj😉)
And she pleaded and pleaded. Finally, Colonel Puchkoo, could not take it any longer and so could not bring himself to kill her. 😕(Cos he went temporarily deaf, dumb, mute with her bhasahans and for the sake of his sanity & life he let her go😆)
Yeh raat , yeh raat, jali ki chipkali raat(Is that the real wording or did u improvise cos the line is 🤣)
A hungry Kasturi was drawn towards it and began to eat the food. (And the glorious trend of muftgiri continues 😆

The cottage was in fact controlled by the horrible dacoit Gauravhattie. 😈😈😈He had gone out to loot people who crossed the forest. He had now returned home. .....Today he was not very successful and he had managed to only scare and loot a poor shepard. The only prized possession the shepard had was a monkey cap. 😆But Dacait Gauravhattie true to the "hattie" part in his name, was a cap lover. He of course took the monkey cap by force. 😡

(This has to be the best 👏)
Gauravhattie did not relent. He said "Shut up, tumhaarein is bakbak ka mujhpe koi asar nahi padega". (Must say, smart guy😉) And he aimed the arrow. Just then another arrow came whooping by😲 and killed Gauravhattie on the spot. 👏👏(Sooooooooo sad, i wanted to see him create more hell for kasturi, kya yaar robbie serial mein aur tumhare story mein bhi kasturi ko har punishment se bacha leta hai)
And voila while taking his help and giving him her hand, Kasturi instead unexplicably fell into his arms😆😆(Greatest mysteries of all time😕, how does she manage to do that all the time😳).
Colonel Puchkoo killed a deer and returned to Sabhri Haveli, with the heart of the deer.(So the innocent have already started taking the fall for kasturi) [/quote]
Jw: Okay had to tod marodfy ur post😆 This has to be one of ur best one till date (This is for u raising the bar every single time with ur writing👏)
Now waiting eagerly for the remaining parts, cant wait to tod marodfy them too😃

Shwetha

That was an awesome piece of writing JW!👏

How come you better yourself!😆...everything right from dialogues...names ...were perfect! Now I understood why our rockstar was named Robbie😆😆😆...but poor baby crying was so sad!😭

wow kasturis bhashans...it was hilarious man.! and you brought the inspy into the story very fast!😆....my the monkey cap was 🤣🤣🤣

and puchkoo🤣....he must have gone bonkers by KC bhashan!🤣

This is the most hilarious ff.....yesh I suddenly remembered one sonia had written about basement scenes..man that was funny...BTW where is sonia!😕

Mindblowing JW...so looking forward for your next part...now you have shown the taste...kya kare dil maange more!😉

Wow 👏 👏 👏 ! It's too good! Thx for having entertained us with this piece of fairy tale. It would have been nice if Kasturi's story was like this 😊

JWWWWWWWWW..... this is one fairy tale that I have fallen in love with .. 😳 ... hats off to u... u shld def be a writer... loved it absolutely.. am waiting for the next instalment 😳
👏

Fari

👏 👏 👏 You are so good at creative writing!!! hats off to you!! 👏 I can imagine all the scenes perfectly...the names are fantastic!! 👍🏼 I can also imagine our handsome Prince Robbie 😳 😳 😉

Loved all the parts cant wait for the rest of the fairy tale!! 😃

Kay